Rechecking.
[Salad]
[Salad]
- 00:20:035 (4,5) - I think this dash is a bit overdone, as the sounds don't hint such strength. I'd reduce the distance a bit by moving (5)'s head a bit to the right, around x:392.
- 00:25:944 (3,1) - This movement is still a bit harsh after the dash IMO. Maybe you can move 00:26:398 (1,2) - around 2-3 gridspaces to the left.
- 00:01:171 (3,4) - The dash isn't fitting here; yes, the pitch on (4) is higher than the previous note, but it's not really a strong sound. It deserves a larger distance than (2,3), however, so I'd put (4) on x:152.
- 00:03:217 (3,1) - This distance should be walkable; the sound on (1) isn't that strong to require the dash it currently has.
- 00:05:944 (5,1) - Dash feels a bit large for what the sounds suggest; I'd reduce the distance a bit.
- 00:07:307 (2,3) - and 00:09:126 (3,4) - Try to avoid having HDashes right into the wall. The RC recommends having the 2nd object at least at x:16.
- 00:15:717 (3,4) - Similar stuff as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - .
- 00:16:626 (1,2,3) - Having two dashes of different snap is really confusing; pick one and make it walkable instead.
- 00:18:898 (1,2) - Try to reduce this distance to add some leniency after the HDash. I recommend moving 00:19:353 (2,3) - together to the right a bit.
- 00:24:580 (1,2) - Suddenly the distance between this objects is large, when for the previous patterns you've used a much smaller one. Maybe you can make (1) more vertical or moving it a bit to the right, or a combination of both.
- 00:27:535 (2,3) - Same issue as mentioned for 00:01:171 (3,4) - . Moving (3) to the right should also fix 00:27:989 (3,1) - being barely walkable.
- 00:29:580 (3,1) - I'd make this walkable, to add leniency after the HDash. For 00:31:398 (4,1) - the pattern is clearly walkable and the sounds are the same.
- 00:33:735 (1,2) - This should have a smaller distance, sounds aren't THAT strong.
- 00:33:973 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Reduce the distances between these patterns a bit, some feel really tight to walk and the song is slowing down, so dashes aren't really fitting.