00:09:435 (9435|3,9580|3,9725|3) - Why the random jack?
Why not? This is not jack purposely, I just did small stream between 00:09:435 (9435|0,9435|3,9435|2) - and 00:09:725 (9725|3,9725|1) - . I don't think that is a problem, you're so picky.00:16:102 (16102|3,16102|2,16247|2,16392|2,16392|3,16537|3,16537|2,16682|3) - Incredibly awkward on the right hand for no real reason.
No reason? I testplayed many times, at the first, 00:16:102 (16102|2,16102|3,16102|0,16247|2) - is same as 00:15:233 (15233|3,15233|2,15233|0,15377|2) - it is just kick with bass stuffs, and then 00:16:392 (16392|1,16392|2,16392|3,16537|2,16537|1,16537|3) - for 2 same kick. any problem here? You're still picky for jack stuff as above. Then if I move 00:16:392 (16392|2,16537|2) - to 1, no matter how I change 00:16:682 (16682|1,16682|3,16682|0) - , you'll still mention on this part, right?00:20:305 (20305|2) - There is clearly a sound here.
Yes then? Mapping is not only a way to map all sound you heard in the song. I can choose follow it or not.00:23:928 (23928|1,23928|2,23928|3,24073|1,24146|2,24218|1,24218|3,24291|2) - ??? Awkward minitrill + random jack on column 2 + awkward minitrill on 2/3. Please re-pattern this.
You know, your point makes no sense here. As I said above, you're so picky about jacks. Even if I rearrange this part here, it will got same jack issues as you mentioned, it is 4K, not 7K or 8K that I can move those notes to other columns. Besides, they don't obviously give an uncomfortable feel while playing.00:27:986 (27986|1,28059|2,28131|1,28204|2,28276|1) - Why map these like awkward trills when you could make interesting jumpstreams out of it?
Oh please, so what do you want here? You don't want jacks, then you don't want jumpstreams, then minitrill..blabla, I have a big problem to map if I follow your ideas. Anyway, I don't think that is a big problem here.00:45:088 (45088|0,45667|0) - Column 1 just forgotten about for no reason.
Sorry but I don't get what you mean, forgotten what? And what is the problem with these 2 notes? I didn't see something wrong here.00:45:522 (45522|1,45595|2,45667|1) - refer to my point at 00:27:986
Refer to my response above.00:50:160 (50160|2,50305|2,50450|2) - Whats with the random jack?
How about move 00:50:160 (50160|2) - to column 2? then 00:50:160 (50160|1,50377|1,50522|1) - they are random jacks again? Come on. Please. 00:50:305 (50305|2,50377|1,50450|2,50522|1) - And the awkward trill?
How could this be awkward for you? only 4 notes here, I don't think it is a problem.00:50:595 (50595|0,51175|0) - Completely forgetting about column 1 when you could move one of the notes (00:50:885 (50885|1)) into column 1 and (00:50:885 (50885|3)) to column 2 and also flipping (00:51:030 (51030|2,51102|3,51175|2)) so that its 4,3,4 so that you retain a jack but also keep an even spread throughout the columns.
Nope, the gap is bigger than previous parts you mentioned, why should I still have to follow similar stuffs?00:51:175 (51175|0,51247|1,51319|0,51392|1,51537|1) - Another minitrill into unfun jack.
Oh please, I don't know how many times you pointed similar parts for same reasons. I have been explained many times for, they are not jacks purposely, and only 4 notes, how can that be awkward minitrill for you?00:52:262 (52262|3,52262|2,52334|0,52334|3,52334|1) - No. Remove these minijacks. -- you can just delete 00:52:262 (52262|3) and this pattern would be fun and still fit the song. there is no reason to sacrifice playability to follow this drumroll.
................. I have nothing to say if you're so picky for this part. Also I have no idea why nobody mentioned same stuffs when it appeared in other maps, but only this map. 00:52:624 (52624|0,52769|1,52914|3,53059|2) - Repattern this so that it ends on the 1; this will mean that the 1st column will be empty for a much shorter period of time and overall even out hand-balance. I should note that I have no problem with the up-coming jacks and i recommend not changing these.
Nope, that makes no sense for me. Only single notes here and I still have to rearrange patterns for balance?00:57:551 (57551|3,57624|2,57696|3,57769|2,57841|3) - If you're going to throw in a burst mid-jack; Do NOT make it a onehanded trill. This is such a spike in awkwardness.
I think I have repeat many times in previous responses.01:01:754 (61754|0,61827|1,61899|0,61972|1,62117|1) - Another awkward trill into jack.
.................Please. It is same case above.01:02:044 (62044|3,62189|3) - Why make the stream start on the same hand as the double when there is an empty column 1 during most of this burst. you could make the stream start on column 1 and not only would it be more comfortable but it would also even out hand balance since this is a predominantly right-handed map.
If I reverse 01:02:189 (62189|3,62262|2,62334|1) - and then you'll say awkward minijacks right?01:11:464 (71464|3,71754|3,71899|2,72044|3,72189|2,72334|3) - Re-pattern this; It's very unfun to play.
Unfun/Not fun is not a reason that I should change them.01:12:914 (72914|1,73204|1,73493|1) - Columnstacking for no reason, column 3 is left empty for a while in this section, why not move 01:13:493 (73493|1) - to column 3, this would also even out hand density.
Because I'm trying to make only column 4 is for clap sound. For this effect, I make column 3 empty. Is that a problem?01:14:798 (74798|2,75088|2,75377|2) - Another column stack which isn't following the music.
I don't think that is a serious issue here.01:16:392 (76392|3,76537|2,76682|3,76827|2,76972|3) - This is still not particularly nice to play, please re-pattern this.
I think I've said many times for same point enough.01:17:551 (77551|1,77841|1,78131|1) - You copied and pasted this from 01:12:914 (72914|1,73204|1,73493|1) so edit out the same problems I pointed in it beforehand.
So what? They are same melody, I did small copied and paste for same melody. I don't think it is a problem and I don't want to make it different for looking like messy.01:22:189 (82189|1,82479|1,82769|1,82769|3) - You also copied and pasted this from 01:12:914 (72914|1,73204|1,73493|1). Fix the same problem.
I don't want to repeat same sentence again.01:25:812 (85812|2,85885|1,85957|2) - Please don't put random minitrills in this section; its just awkward and unfun to play and makes it feel like you squished a 7k map into 4k to make it.
I said, unfun is not a reason that I should change them.01:26:102 (86102|1,86175|0,86247|1) - ^
^01:26:392 (86392|2,86464|1,86537|2) - ^
^01:27:262 (87262|2,87334|1,87406|2) - ^
^01:27:551 (87551|1,87624|0,87696|1) - ^
^01:27:841 (87841|2,87914|3,87986|2) - ^
^01:29:363 (89363|0,89363|1,89435|2,89435|0,89435|3) - Remove minijack patterns like this. They're extremely un-fun. (once again, you can just delete 01:29:363 (89363|0) and it would be fun and playable with minimal changing to your mapping style.)
Please check my response at 00:52:262 - .01:34:508 (94508|1,94508|3,94580|2,94653|1,94653|3,94725|2) - If you're going to put bursts in your jacks; Don't make them one handed trills LET ALONE trills on 2-3 and 3-4!! This is just completely unbearable to play.
I don't think so. You have pointed many I said I'm not making minijacks purposely, if you still want to count it in, then I think if follow your idea, this part will be more awkward than original version.01:34:798 (94798|0,94870|1,94943|0) - Another awkward one-handed trill.
Just stop being picky for such parts.01:39:291 (99291|0,99363|1,99435|0) - ^
^01:39:580 (99580|1,99653|2,99725|1) - I don't feel like these are
as bad when they use both hands, they are still an un-fun pattern in my opinion and I would remove them.
You know it is not a reason for me that I should change them, right?01:40:160 (100160|2) - ??? why an LN here? you didn't do this before and it doesn't seem to fit anything in the song.
Vocal.01:42:334 (102334|2,102406|1,102479|2,102624|1,102624|2,102769|2,102841|1,102914|2) - This is not particularly nice to play; please re-pattern.
At least they are fine for me.01:43:059 (103059|1,103131|2,103204|1,103348|2,103493|1,103566|2,103638|1,103711|2,103856|1,103928|2) - Oh my god it continues. Just redesign these bursts so that they're not awkward trills. Like I said above; It feels like you've squished a 7k map into 4k -- which is not particularly good
01:46:972 (106972|2,107044|3,107117|2) - Please stop these one-handed trills; they're not fun and can be patterned so much smoother.
Stop mentioning unfiun in your mod for a reason to ask me to change, please.01:47:624 (107624|1,107696|0,107769|1) - ^
^01:48:856 (108856|2) - Move to 2; the column is empty for a long period of time here -- you're not following pitch relevancy or any form of layering so there's no reason for columns to randomly fall empty.
I prefer 3 anyway, it is obvious better than put in column 2.01:53:059 (113059|2,113204|2,113348|2,113493|2,113638|2) - Awkward 5 note jack; remove this as it's just bad. Also it merges with trills which just makes it awful -- you should re-pattern this.
No, I won't. I did many changes for this part, and this is the best pattern for me to use them here.01:57:841 (117841|1,117914|2,117986|1) - I'll give this one a pass since it fits the music.
But I will not.02:02:479 (122479|0,122479|3,122479|1,122551|2,122624|3,122696|0,122696|2,122769|3,122769|1) - Copied and pasted from 00:57:551 (57551|3,57624|2,57696|3,57769|2,57841|3) (infact this entire map is copy-pasted patterns lol); Fix the same mistakes I pointed out there.
Same melody should be same patterns, or have a small changes, is that a problem? Even if it is copy pasted, but so what? I don't like to make stuff being messy.02:02:914 (122914|3,122914|0,122914|2) - The sound here is much lighter than the clap-smashes, why not make this a double instead? you could remove the note on column 4 and that would also ease the anchor on there which is currently extremely long.
Originally I use 3 notes for such sound, I just used 2 notes for 02:02:696 (122696|2,122696|0,122769|3,122769|1) - because of they are 1/4, if I keep using 3 notes, then that will be so bad.02:05:377 (125377|3,125377|2,125377|0,125450|1,125522|2,125595|1,125595|0,125595|3,125667|2,125740|1,125812|3,125812|0,125812|2,125885|1,125957|2,126030|3,126030|0,126030|1,126102|2,126175|0,126247|3,126247|1,126247|2,126319|0,126392|2,126464|1,126537|3,126537|2,126537|0) - Why?? With all due respect; this plays like complete trash. It has trills on every column and intense anchors on 2-3 -- This NEEDS a re-pattern.
I don't think so, this is a part that I discussed with BN, and we both think it is fine.02:06:175 (126175|0,126247|1,126319|0,126392|2,126464|1,126537|2) - The trills here are just as bad.
If I just make some changes here, I guess you will still say bad trill here, so I have no idea how you want it be.02:06:682 (126682|2) - Why on earth is this on column 3? It should be on column 2 for so many reasons (Hand balance, column density, columnstacking, pitch relevancy, layering -- wait, that's every reason.)
No, I think put in column 3 is much better.02:07:117 (127117|2,127117|0,127189|1,127262|3,127334|0,127406|2,127479|1,127551|3,127624|2,127696|1,127696|0,127696|3) - There is a decent drop in quality towards the end of this map. You should re-pattern this so that it's comfier; which will make it more fun and less likely to just kill FC/AAA runs at the end of songs.
I have no words to say. https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/c554A5B.jpg