00:08:070 (1,2) - If you're trying to emphasize the gun cocking, I suggest that you make it a 3/4 slider instead. It is spaced similarly to 00:05:670 (1,2), making it seem like another half beat jump. The sounds aren't 3/4 beat though
00:23:670 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are the same as 00:21:270 (1,2,3,4) but 00:23:670 (1,2,3,4) are landing on smaller sounds. The jumps should be different in some way. Same with 00:30:870 (1,2,3,4), but I think that's a different case since the small sounds came first. I think its fine to map these two the same way. Even if they're not the identical sounds, they are pretty similar. Also even if the 4 notes are the same, the sliders afterwards can designate it being different.
That's all my small mapping mind can help you.
Thank you and your welcome.