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Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
Hinacle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月5日 at 19:55:04

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.)
Source: Hoshizora no Memoria -Eternal Heart-
Tags: favorite hentai game eroge ryafuka Kanpakyin net45291
BPM: 157
Filesize: 14452kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.47 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 362 notes)
  3. Kanpakyin's Taiko (4.89 stars, 554 notes)
  4. Net's Hard (4.6 stars, 216 notes)
  5. Ryafuka's Normal (4.04 stars, 161 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 12th Beatmap.
PC Game 『星空のメモリア Eternal Heart』

Mapset:
[Easy]-Done. me
[Ryafuka's Normal]-Done. (Mapped by Ryafuka)
[Kanpakyin's Taiko]-Done. (Mapped by kanpakyin)
[net45291's Hard]-Done. (Mapped by net45291)
[Insane]-Done. me
PeaChick
Hinacle is ChickeN's Fan
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kanpakyin
Can I map a Taiko diff for this?

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Topic Starter
Hinacle

ChickeN wrote:

Hinacle is ChickeN's Fan
IRC moded
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Thank you IRC mod + Test Play~wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

kanpakyin wrote:

Can I map a Taiko diff for this?

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ok wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Taiko diff plz wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Suzully

Hinacle wrote:

まだなんにもつくってませーんヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ
星投げちゃいまーすヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ
Z a_old
star
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Nymph
Hoshizora no Memoria :P



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Akemi_Homura
Nice song~!
I love this song~~!
star~! 8-)

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S o r d a
hisabisa no hinacle san no map!!!!!!
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net45291
Hinacle hentai (´ = ω = `) < joke

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What's wrong with this ! Can't give a star • .. •"
Topic Starter
Hinacle

net45291 wrote:

Hinacle hentai (´ = ω = `) < joke

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What's wrong with this ! Can't give a star • .. •"
net chan hentai (´ = ω = `) < baka

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Ryafuka
nice song and map~! :)

star agerenai no kanashii... :(                       
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Ryafuka wrote:

nice song and map~! :)

star agerenai no kanashii... :(                       
Thank you Guest!!>w<b
kanpakyin
Done!!!
Oni Lv 7~8*
and Taiko BG here.
Also your bg is too large :2.25MB,if a bg which it's bigger then 1MB is unrankable!
I also wondering why a jpg file have a large capacitance.

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu

Topic Starter
Hinacle

kanpakyin wrote:

Done!!!
Oni Lv 7~8*
and Taiko BG here.
Also your bg is too large :2.25MB,if a bg which it's bigger then 1MB is unrankable!
I also wondering why a jpg file have a large capacitance.
Thank you guest~!!
BG change=w=
kanpakyin
Also I did some timing help for you.
I think offset:360 is much better then 370.
Use or not are depend on you.

and no kuds plz..
Topic Starter
Hinacle

kanpakyin wrote:

Also I did some timing help for you.
I think offset:360 is much better then 370.
Use or not are depend on you.

and no kuds plz..
Thank you Timing help~>w</

Done=w=
net45291
SPOILER
Hina chan >w< !!

SPOILER
Finished ~~!

SPOILER
Your message is too short.

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Net's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Hinacle

net45291 wrote:

SPOILER
Hina chan >w< !!

SPOILER
Finished ~~!

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
Thank you guest!! net chan~>w</
Cirno
0.0

[General]
You probably don't have to use a re-encoded mp3, since the Audio track in the OP video is already 192kbps. You'll probably want to rip the audio from the video and use that directly for better sound quality. (CBR 192kbps over CBR 192kbps sounds just orz. I could also do this for you if you would like 0.0
[Easy], [Normal] and [Insane] have Tick rate 0.5, which is now unrankable. You have to use at least Tick rate 1. (I know this rule is silly we shouldn't even have ticks to begin with

[Easy]
fine for me...

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:18:703 (1) - maybe end this at 00:19:086 and place a circle at 00:19:277 ? following the vocal for the most part of the map, this can be sort of misleading
00:31:506 (3) - start 1/2 earlier sounds better for me o.o
00:39:531 - add note?
00:41:633 (4) - the clap at the slider end sounded out of place. maybe end 1/2 earlier and place a circle at 00:42:207 ?
00:55:009 - a circle with custom clap here?
01:01:697 (2) - with the normal hitsounds, 01:01:697 - got over-emphasized and sounded strange. either start this 1/2 later, or preferably replace this with a circle at 01:01:888 -...?

[Net's Hard]
00:09:340 (1) - this one is quite confusing... players aren't going to time spinner ends, so using them to begin such a rhythm is kinda weird and would cause players to react slower = =. Maybe you could remove the spinner and map it through, as in other diffs?
00:47:366 (3,4) - being followed by a spinner, it would flow better if those were spread with a relatively large spacing (or at least DS
00:55:774 (2) - the control point in the middle is redundant, remove that point please.

[Insane]
00:04:945 (1,2,3) - the slider/circle pattern here is inconsistent with the rest of your map, and it caused de-emphasize on beats like 00:04:945 as well. Maybe try: move 00:05:137 (2,3) - to 00:04:945, and move 00:04:945 (1) - to 00:05:710. (btw it makes a nice jump if you don't move them on the screen as well
00:41:442 (3) - add whistle on this?
others fine for me

Decent map~ good luck
net45291

Cirno wrote:

0.0 O . O

[Net's Hard]
00:09:340 (1) - this one is quite confusing... players aren't going to time spinner ends, so using them to begin such a rhythm is kinda weird and would cause players to react slower = =. Maybe you could remove the spinner and map it through, as in other diffs?
Naww
00:47:366 (3,4) - being followed by a spinner, it would flow better if those were spread with a relatively large spacing (or at least DS
Okay
00:55:774 (2) - the control point in the middle is redundant, remove that point please.
Nawwww
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Net's Hard].osu
DeadAlready
my message is not too short so can give a nice map star \:D/(?)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Cirno wrote:

0.0

[General]
You probably don't have to use a re-encoded mp3, since the Audio track in the OP video is already 192kbps. You'll probably want to rip the audio from the video and use that directly for better sound quality. (CBR 192kbps over CBR 192kbps sounds just orz. I could also do this for you if you would like 0.0
[Easy], [Normal] and [Insane] have Tick rate 0.5, which is now unrankable. You have to use at least Tick rate 1. (I know this rule is silly we shouldn't even have ticks to begin with

[Easy]
fine for me...

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:18:703 (1) - maybe end this at 00:19:086 and place a circle at 00:19:277 ? following the vocal for the most part of the map, this can be sort of misleading
00:31:506 (3) - start 1/2 earlier sounds better for me o.o
00:39:531 - add note?
00:41:633 (4) - the clap at the slider end sounded out of place. maybe end 1/2 earlier and place a circle at 00:42:207 ?
00:55:009 - a circle with custom clap here?
01:01:697 (2) - with the normal hitsounds, 01:01:697 - got over-emphasized and sounded strange. either start this 1/2 later, or preferably replace this with a circle at 01:01:888 -...?

[Net's Hard]
00:09:340 (1) - this one is quite confusing... players aren't going to time spinner ends, so using them to begin such a rhythm is kinda weird and would cause players to react slower = =. Maybe you could remove the spinner and map it through, as in other diffs?
00:47:366 (3,4) - being followed by a spinner, it would flow better if those were spread with a relatively large spacing (or at least DS
00:55:774 (2) - the control point in the middle is redundant, remove that point please.

[Insane]
00:04:945 (1,2,3) - the slider/circle pattern here is inconsistent with the rest of your map, and it caused de-emphasize on beats like 00:04:945 as well. Maybe try: move 00:05:137 (2,3) - to 00:04:945, and move 00:04:945 (1) - to 00:05:710. (btw it makes a nice jump if you don't move them on the screen as well
00:41:442 (3) - add whistle on this?
others fine for me

Decent map~ good luck
Thank you mod~!!
Ryafuka

Cirno wrote:

0.0

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:18:703 (1) - maybe end this at 00:19:086 and place a circle at 00:19:277 ? following the vocal for the most part of the map, this can be sort of misleading
00:31:506 (3) - start 1/2 earlier sounds better for me o.o
00:39:531 - add note?
00:41:633 (4) - the clap at the slider end sounded out of place. maybe end 1/2 earlier and place a circle at 00:42:207 ?
00:55:009 - a circle with custom clap here?
01:01:697 (2) - with the normal hitsounds, 01:01:697 - got over-emphasized and sounded strange. either start this 1/2 later, or preferably replace this with a circle at 01:01:888 -...?
thank you MOD~

all done.

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Ryafuka's Normal].osu
EnakoRin
Star.
I like this game especially Kosame and Komomo :lol:
My ass is too short.
Topic Starter
Hinacle
>quintitem,Weiren

Thank you for star~T-T

:) :) :) :) :)
Suzully
遅くなって申し訳ない(・ω・)

[General]

  • Offset +4~6.

    うーん、少しclap音が浮いてる気がします(特にSoftパートで)。別の音に変えてみては。
    デフォルトのclapでも十分合っていると思いますよ。
[Easy]

  • OD+1.
    パターンの量が・・・また昔に戻っている・・・。
  1. 00:50:041 (2) - 始端はfinishよりはclap。
  2. 00:53:098 (2) - ^
  3. 00:56:156 (2) - ^
    ↑サビ後半も同様に。

    サビ以降。
    いくつかのノートが、ベルの音に合わせる形で赤線に乗っていますが、ここまで白線に乗る音取りで来ているのでそちらで統一した方がいいと思います。
    プレイヤーとしてもベルの音よりはドラムの音の方がずっと聞き取りやすいです。
[Ryafuka's Normal]

  • OD+1.
  1. 00:00:360 (1) - スナップのときにズレたのか、スライダーが青線で終わっているので直してください。
  2. 00:09:149 (1) - ^

    前奏部分の音が寂しいので、もう少しwhistleを加えた方がいいと思います。たとえば以下のノートに。
    00:01:506 (2) -
    00:03:035 (4) -
    00:04:563 (2) -
    00:06:092 (4) -
    00:07:621 (2) -
    00:09:149 (1) -

  3. 00:09:149 (1,2,3) - あまりこの部分で、スライダーの終端を音楽の区切りに合わせる音取りは避けた方がいいと思います。そのために(3)のリズムにもやや違和感が残ります。
  4. 00:13:735 (4) - (5)と重ねた方がノーマルのプレイヤー層にとっては読みやすいと思います。
  5. 00:18:321 (5) - clap.
  6. 00:18:703 (1,2,3) - こういう音取りの方が易しいと思います。
  7. 00:20:614 (4,5) - 上と同様。これでここの部分にもclapを入れやすくなったのでは。
  8. 00:23:672 (1,2) - スライダーの後に1拍置いての2つ重ねは、ノーマルの低ARでは読みづらく、この層のプレイヤーにとっても難しいです。また、このパターンならnew comboは要りません。
  9. 00:27:493 (1,2) - finishは(2)の方。
  10. 00:46:602 (1,2) - この部分なら音取りに関してはこれでも問題ないのですが、clapは両方の始端、finishは(2)の終端です。
  11. 00:48:130 (1) - 00:47:939から開始した方が合っていると思います。
  12. 01:24:627 (1,2) - 前のパターンと同様に。ここなら素直に離した方がいいかもしれません。
  13. 01:29:404 (x) - ノート追加?

    サビはclapのパターンが結構ランダムなのでもう少し整えた方がいいかもです。

    つまるところ、ボーカルに合わせて音を取ると、ひなくるさん譜面のような一定拍子で置くタイプのclapは使いづらいです(・ω・)
[Net's Hard]

  • Difficulty setting is too low as Hard diff.
    OD +2or3. HP +1. AR +1?
    Yea, you can change AR or not by your own mind. It's enough easy to read notes with current one.
  1. 00:03:799 (1) - Oh...new combo error after the spinner. Add new combo.
  2. 00:24:245 (3,4,5) - Looks like crowded imo. Move them further from (2)?
  3. 00:36:283 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 00:36:665 (2) - Add new combo.
  5. 01:04:563 (4) - Put whistle at the end of slider instead of start.
  6. 01:05:137 (5) - Remove whistle at the start of slider.
  7. 01:22:716 (3) - Add new combo.
  8. 01:22:907 (1) - Remove new combo.
  9. 01:31:888 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle?
  10. 01:34:945 (2) - ^
  11. 01:38:194 (1) - ^
  12. 01:43:926 (1) - It's kinda hard to read this note which is near from (5). If you would set AR7, that is easy imo. You can choose that move it further or change AR.
[Insane]
  1. 01:07:238 (10,1,2,3) - (2,3)でスペーシングが変わってるのがスッキリしないので(1)のnew comboを削除して(2)に追加してはどうでしょうか。
むにむに(ノ)・ω・(ヾ)

net45291
Ryafuka
>Suzully

thank you MOD~
all done~

最後の提案も少し修正してみましたが、もしかしたらあんまり改善されていないかもしれません(。≖ˇェˇ≖。)

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Ryafuka's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Suzully wrote:

遅くなって申し訳ない(・ω・)

[General]

  • Offset +4~6.

    うーん、少しclap音が浮いてる気がします(特にSoftパートで)。別の音に変えてみては。
    デフォルトのclapでも十分合っていると思いますよ。
[Easy]

  • OD+1.
    パターンの量が・・・また昔に戻っている・・・。
  1. 00:50:041 (2) - 始端はfinishよりはclap。
  2. 00:53:098 (2) - ^
  3. 00:56:156 (2) - ^
    ↑サビ後半も同様に。

    サビ以降。
    いくつかのノートが、ベルの音に合わせる形で赤線に乗っていますが、ここまで白線に乗る音取りで来ているのでそちらで統一した方がいいと思います。
    プレイヤーとしてもベルの音よりはドラムの音の方がずっと聞き取りやすいです。
[Ryafuka's Normal]

  • OD+1.
  1. 00:00:360 (1) - スナップのときにズレたのか、スライダーが青線で終わっているので直してください。
  2. 00:09:149 (1) - ^

    前奏部分の音が寂しいので、もう少しwhistleを加えた方がいいと思います。たとえば以下のノートに。
    00:01:506 (2) -
    00:03:035 (4) -
    00:04:563 (2) -
    00:06:092 (4) -
    00:07:621 (2) -
    00:09:149 (1) -

  3. 00:09:149 (1,2,3) - あまりこの部分で、スライダーの終端を音楽の区切りに合わせる音取りは避けた方がいいと思います。そのために(3)のリズムにもやや違和感が残ります。
  4. 00:13:735 (4) - (5)と重ねた方がノーマルのプレイヤー層にとっては読みやすいと思います。
  5. 00:18:321 (5) - clap.
  6. 00:18:703 (1,2,3) - こういう音取りの方が易しいと思います。
    [attachment=1:6aa08]96277e255a317dafe673aede3158d7ee.png[/attachment:6aa08]
  7. 00:20:614 (4,5) - 上と同様。これでここの部分にもclapを入れやすくなったのでは。
    [attachment=0:6aa08]b5139aa2aafb49ab8df3b74a35bb5507.png[/attachment:6aa08]
  8. 00:23:672 (1,2) - スライダーの後に1拍置いての2つ重ねは、ノーマルの低ARでは読みづらく、この層のプレイヤーにとっても難しいです。また、このパターンならnew comboは要りません。
  9. 00:27:493 (1,2) - finishは(2)の方。
  10. 00:46:602 (1,2) - この部分なら音取りに関してはこれでも問題ないのですが、clapは両方の始端、finishは(2)の終端です。
  11. 00:48:130 (1) - 00:47:939から開始した方が合っていると思います。
  12. 01:24:627 (1,2) - 前のパターンと同様に。ここなら素直に離した方がいいかもしれません。
  13. 01:29:404 (x) - ノート追加?

    サビはclapのパターンが結構ランダムなのでもう少し整えた方がいいかもです。

    つまるところ、ボーカルに合わせて音を取ると、ひなくるさん譜面のような一定拍子で置くタイプのclapは使いづらいです(・ω・)
[Net's Hard]

  • Difficulty setting is too low as Hard diff.
    OD +2or3. HP +1. AR +1?
    Yea, you can change AR or not by your own mind. It's enough easy to read notes with current one.
  1. 00:03:799 (1) - Oh...new combo error after the spinner. Add new combo.
  2. 00:24:245 (3,4,5) - Looks like crowded imo. Move them further from (2)?
  3. 00:36:283 (1) - Remove new combo.
  4. 00:36:665 (2) - Add new combo.
  5. 01:04:563 (4) - Put whistle at the end of slider instead of start.
  6. 01:05:137 (5) - Remove whistle at the start of slider.
  7. 01:22:716 (3) - Add new combo.
  8. 01:22:907 (1) - Remove new combo.
  9. 01:31:888 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle?
  10. 01:34:945 (2) - ^
  11. 01:38:194 (1) - ^
  12. 01:43:926 (1) - It's kinda hard to read this note which is near from (5). If you would set AR7, that is easy imo. You can choose that move it further or change AR.
[Insane]
  1. 01:07:238 (10,1,2,3) - (2,3)でスペーシングが変わってるのがスッキリしないので(1)のnew comboを削除して(2)に追加してはどうでしょうか。
むにむに(ノ)・ω・(ヾ)

Thank you mod~!!
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Kanpakyin's Taiko]

The diff seems nice, so I'll focus on patterns only~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:27:684 - ( 91 ~ 92 ) o o ?

00:49:086 - ( 1 ) Add finish ?

00:52:238 - ( 20 ) Blue note ?

01:07:430 - ( 1 ) Add finish ?

01:09:914 - ( 15 ~ 20 ) ooooo o ?

01:28:831 - ( 121 ) Blue note ?

01:31:888 - ( 140 ) ^

The map is nice ~

GJ at Patterns and note placements www

Rating : 9/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
kanpakyin
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and req from: Kanon's Mod queue

General:
....why tag have" favorite hentai game"..... lol, I am confused...

And the custom clap is too loud for me to hear when it is with soft hitsounds imo.

Easy:
01:26:729 (2) - the hitsounds changed to soft after here, but actually Normal is better imo.

Normal:
nothing to complain about

Hard:
Fine

Insane:
Also good too~

Didn't find issues to say :P no kuds plz
And again have my star~ 8-)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and req from: Kanon's Mod queue

General:
....why tag have" favorite hentai game"..... lol, I am confused...

And the custom clap is too loud for me to hear when it is with soft hitsounds imo.

Easy:
01:26:729 (2) - the hitsounds changed to soft after here, but actually Normal is better imo.

Normal:
nothing to complain about

Hard:
Fine

Insane:
Also good too~

Didn't find issues to say :P no kuds plz
And again have my star~ 8-)
Thank you mod~!!
Vergence

Hello~

Easy
01:44:309 (1) - Maybe add a note here and put the spinner at 01:44:404

Ryafuka's Normal
00:08:803 (3) - Make it a mirror (1)
00:23:672 (1) - Remove new combo

Net's Hard
Hp Drain +1 ?
00:36:188 - Add a normal section here for the slider (6) and end it at 00:36:674 sounds better

Insane
I really don't know how to mod this >_<"
Sorry :(
_________________________________________________
Done~
Nice map ~
Good luck~
Errr....
Yep
Good Luck~
Apricot
[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:21:761 (1) - RNC.
00:58:449 (1,2,3) - 始点のWhistleを削除し、終点にWhistleを追加(clapはそのまま)
01:00:742 (4) - 終点のclapを削除し、WhistleとFinishを追加

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:09:149 (1) - Add whistle.
01:24:627 (1) - RNC.
01:31:697 (1) - ^
01:31:888 (2) - NC

[Net's Hard]
00:00:360 (1) - Remove the spinner or Drag the ending of the break at 00:03:035 then add circle/slider at 00:03:417. It will be more fit to music.
00:13:926 (4) - Shouldn't stack to the previous slider. nazi
00:20:232 (4) - NC.
00:20:805 (1) - RNC.
00:23:098 (1) - ^
00:23:672 (2) - NC.
00:26:729 (4) - Try to do not stack this slider. nazi
00:32:079 (4) - NC.
00:32:844 (1) - RNC.
00:34:181 (*) - Add circle ?
00:36:665 (1) - RNC.
00:37:238 (2) - NC.
00:38:003 (1) - RNC.
00:42:207 (2) - don't stack. nazi
00:44:691 (1) - RNC.
00:58:067 (1) - ^
00:58:831 (2) - NC.
00:59:977 (1) - RNC.
01:01:124 (4) - NC.
01:01:506 (1) - RNC.
01:02:844 (1) - RNC.
01:25:582 (1) - ^
01:25:774 (2) - NC.
01:34:754 (1) - RNC.
01:34:945 (2) - NC.
01:41:251 (4) - ^
01:41:633 (1) - RNC.

[Insane]
OD +1.
00:04:945 (1) - RNC.
00:05:137 (2) - NC.
01:30:742 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - RNCs ?
Topic Starter
Hinacle

DragonSparta wrote:


Hello~

Easy
01:44:309 (1) - Maybe add a note here and put the spinner at 01:44:404

Ryafuka's Normal
00:08:803 (3) - Make it a mirror (1)
00:23:672 (1) - Remove new combo

Net's Hard
Hp Drain +1 ?
00:36:188 - Add a normal section here for the slider (6) and end it at 00:36:674 sounds better

Insane
I really don't know how to mod this >_<"
Sorry :(
_________________________________________________
Done~
Nice map ~
Good luck~
Errr....
Yep
Good Luck~

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:21:761 (1) - RNC.
00:58:449 (1,2,3) - 始点のWhistleを削除し、終点にWhistleを追加(clapはそのまま)
01:00:742 (4) - 終点のclapを削除し、WhistleとFinishを追加

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:09:149 (1) - Add whistle.
01:24:627 (1) - RNC.
01:31:697 (1) - ^
01:31:888 (2) - NC

[Net's Hard]
00:00:360 (1) - Remove the spinner or Drag the ending of the break at 00:03:035 then add circle/slider at 00:03:417. It will be more fit to music.
00:13:926 (4) - Shouldn't stack to the previous slider. nazi
00:20:232 (4) - NC.
00:20:805 (1) - RNC.
00:23:098 (1) - ^
00:23:672 (2) - NC.
00:26:729 (4) - Try to do not stack this slider. nazi
00:32:079 (4) - NC.
00:32:844 (1) - RNC.
00:34:181 (*) - Add circle ?
00:36:665 (1) - RNC.
00:37:238 (2) - NC.
00:38:003 (1) - RNC.
00:42:207 (2) - don't stack. nazi
00:44:691 (1) - RNC.
00:58:067 (1) - ^
00:58:831 (2) - NC.
00:59:977 (1) - RNC.
01:01:124 (4) - NC.
01:01:506 (1) - RNC.
01:02:844 (1) - RNC.
01:25:582 (1) - ^
01:25:774 (2) - NC.
01:34:754 (1) - RNC.
01:34:945 (2) - NC.
01:41:251 (4) - ^
01:41:633 (1) - RNC.

[Insane]
OD +1.
00:04:945 (1) - RNC.
00:05:137 (2) - NC.
01:30:742 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - RNCs ?

Thank you mod~!!
cRyo[iceeicee]
star wwwwwww :)

irc mod

Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
Hinacle

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

star wwwwwww :)

irc mod

Your message is too short.
Thank you hit sound mod~!!
pieguyn
Easy:

00:55:200 (1) - too far from (4)
00:56:156 (2) - too far from (1) (I only noticed because there's a followpoint in between, if you think it's close enough just keep it~)
01:25:200 (1) - I think the end should use soft hitsounds...

Ryafuka's Normal:

00:27:493 (1) - add clap?
00:30:551 (1,2) - switch NCs?
01:04:563 (3) - new combo?
01:25:391 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier to match vocal
01:31:315 (4) - add whistle
01:34:945 (6,1) - switch NCs?
01:34:945 (6) - remove whistle on end
01:35:901 (1) - add whistle
01:36:283 (2) - remove whistle
01:36:665 (3) - add a whistle on both ends, and remove the whistle from the repeat
01:37:812 (4) - finish on end?

Net's Hard:

00:09:340 (1) - start it 1/2 later
00:43:162 (3) - given the pattern you are following, new combo here

Kanpakyin's Taiko:

01:44:500 - maybe add a spinner here?

Insane:

Fine

Nice map~ :)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:55:200 (1) - too far from (4)
00:56:156 (2) - too far from (1) (I only noticed because there's a followpoint in between, if you think it's close enough just keep it~)
01:25:200 (1) - I think the end should use soft hitsounds...

Ryafuka's Normal:

00:27:493 (1) - add clap?
00:30:551 (1,2) - switch NCs?
01:04:563 (3) - new combo?
01:25:391 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier to match vocal
01:31:315 (4) - add whistle
01:34:945 (6,1) - switch NCs?
01:34:945 (6) - remove whistle on end
01:35:901 (1) - add whistle
01:36:283 (2) - remove whistle
01:36:665 (3) - add a whistle on both ends, and remove the whistle from the repeat
01:37:812 (4) - finish on end?

Net's Hard:

00:09:340 (1) - start it 1/2 later
00:43:162 (3) - given the pattern you are following, new combo here

Kanpakyin's Taiko:

01:44:500 - maybe add a spinner here?

Insane:

Fine

Nice map~ :)

Thank you mod~!!
kanpakyin

pieguy1372 wrote:

Kanpakyin's Taiko:

01:44:500 - maybe add a spinner here? //no,sorry.
Here's the latest version,I did some adjust on volume.

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Kanpakyin's Taiko].osu
net45291
Fixed something =w=

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Net's Hard].osu
Ryafuka
thank you modding~ >w</                                            

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Ryafuka's Normal].osu
Muya
sorry for late

- Ryafuka's Normal:
00:08:003 (3) - remove finish
00:52:143 (2) - add finish to 1st note
00:55:200 (2) - ^
00:57:493 (1) - add clap to 2nd note
00:59:213 (3) - ^
00:59:977 (4) - I think finish is dont match. remove finish and add whistle?
01:01:124 (1) - add finish to 3rd note
01:01:124 (1,2,3,4) - I like this rhythm.
01:10:487 (1) - remove clap from 1st note and add finish
01:13:544 (1) - add finish to 1st note
01:25:200 (1) - start at 01:25:774? (music restart here)
01:16:410 (1) - remove finish
01:39:723 (3) - add finish to 1st note
01:41:251 (5) - ^
01:43:162 (3) - remove finish

Normalにしては難しいので、もう少し簡単にしてください

- Net's Hard:
Slider Velocity is really low. should be higher
00:43:162 (1) - why hiding on 00:42:207 (2) - ?

- Kanpakyin's Taiko:
make other diff's same spinner?


other diff was can't find a problem ;_;
kanpakyin

Muya wrote:

- Kanpakyin's Taiko:
make other diff's same spinner? //Please don't mention this again and again,I would always say no.
Ryafuka

Muya wrote:

- Ryafuka's Normal:
00:08:003 (3) - remove finish
00:52:143 (2) - add finish to 1st note
00:55:200 (2) - ^
00:57:493 (1) - add clap to 2nd note
00:59:213 (3) - ^
00:59:977 (4) - I think finish is dont match. remove finish and add whistle?
01:01:124 (1) - add finish to 3rd note
01:01:124 (1,2,3,4) - I like this rhythm.
01:10:487 (1) - remove clap from 1st note and add finish
01:13:544 (1) - add finish to 1st note
01:25:200 (1) - start at 01:25:774? (music restart here)
01:16:410 (1) - remove finish
01:39:723 (3) - add finish to 1st note
01:41:251 (5) - ^
01:43:162 (3) - remove finish

Normalにしては難しいので、もう少し簡単にしてください hinacleさんにこのままでも問題はないと思いますと言われたので難易度の修正はしませんでした、ごめんなさい。
done~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Ryafuka's Normal].osu
net45291
Fixed something =w=

short short short short short massage >:3

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kaleidoscope (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Net's Hard].osu
IceBeam
Hello Hinacle!

Sorry for really huge delays..

Set Audio Lead-In to 1000 in all diffs for consistency.

Otherwise it's fine in general ;)

[Easy]
00:33:990 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:36:092? As I hear cymbals here.But as it's silenced,probably it's fine as it is now.
00:47:748 (3) - Finish?
00:48:512 (4) - Use normal hitsound for this one?
01:03:035 (3) - Finish?
01:25:200 (1) - There's no beats in music,so use soft hitsounds for this slider.
01:42:971 - Add a circle stacked with 01:43:162 slider?

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:21:761 - Finish?
00:22:143 (1) - Clap?
00:22:907 (2) - ^
00:23:672 (3) - ^
00:24:818 (2) - Finish?
00:33:990 - ^
00:35:137 - Change to clap.
00:46:219 - Finish?
00:58:449 (2,3) - Sounds weird..remove (3)-rd slider and simple add a reverse to the (2)-nd slider instead?
01:21:379 (4) - Finish?
01:38:576 (1) - This stack is unexpected and a bit confusing,it makes hard to read red tick after it.Unstack it?

[Net's Hard]
00:11:347 (1,2) - Ah,reading blue tick right after the spinner is too hard,if you play the map first time ,especially when the notes are stacked.If you want to keep this spinner,then maybe at least make a slider instead of 2 stacked circles? It'd be easier to read.
01:39:723 - Missing finish?

I noticed some jumps that doesn't fit so good,there were only 3 of them in the whole map,so maybe remove them and use constant spacing?

00:20:805 (1) - This.
00:27:302 (5) - ^
00:46:028 (1) - And this.

Also,you wasn't using Finish hitsounds in chorus part.Is in intentional?
Cause,personally,I'd add to:
00:52:143 (2) - Here.
00:55:200 (1) - ^
01:01:506 (1) - ^
01:03:035 (2) - ^
01:04:563 (4) - ^
01:06:092 - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:13:544 (1) - ^
01:19:850 (1) - ^
01:21:379 (1) - ^
01:22:907 (2) - ^

[Insane]
It's perfect again! :D
The only suggestion is too stack 01:24:627 (5,6),just plays/looks better to me~

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Hinacle

IceBeam wrote:

Hello Hinacle!

Sorry for really huge delays..

Set Audio Lead-In to 1000 in all diffs for consistency.

Otherwise it's fine in general ;)

[Easy]
00:33:990 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:36:092? As I hear cymbals here.But as it's silenced,probably it's fine as it is now.
00:47:748 (3) - Finish?
00:48:512 (4) - Use normal hitsound for this one?
01:03:035 (3) - Finish?
01:25:200 (1) - There's no beats in music,so use soft hitsounds for this slider.
01:42:971 - Add a circle stacked with 01:43:162 slider?

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:21:761 - Finish?
00:22:143 (1) - Clap?
00:22:907 (2) - ^
00:23:672 (3) - ^
00:24:818 (2) - Finish?
00:33:990 - ^
00:35:137 - Change to clap.
00:46:219 - Finish?
00:58:449 (2,3) - Sounds weird..remove (3)-rd slider and simple add a reverse to the (2)-nd slider instead?
01:21:379 (4) - Finish?
01:38:576 (1) - This stack is unexpected and a bit confusing,it makes hard to read red tick after it.Unstack it?

[Net's Hard]
00:11:347 (1,2) - Ah,reading blue tick right after the spinner is too hard,if you play the map first time ,especially when the notes are stacked.If you want to keep this spinner,then maybe at least make a slider instead of 2 stacked circles? It'd be easier to read.
01:39:723 - Missing finish?

I noticed some jumps that doesn't fit so good,there were only 3 of them in the whole map,so maybe remove them and use constant spacing?

00:20:805 (1) - This.
00:27:302 (5) - ^
00:46:028 (1) - And this.

Also,you wasn't using Finish hitsounds in chorus part.Is in intentional?
Cause,personally,I'd add to:
00:52:143 (2) - Here.
00:55:200 (1) - ^
01:01:506 (1) - ^
01:03:035 (2) - ^
01:04:563 (4) - ^
01:06:092 - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:13:544 (1) - ^
01:19:850 (1) - ^
01:21:379 (1) - ^
01:22:907 (2) - ^

[Insane]
It's perfect again! :D
The only suggestion is too stack 01:24:627 (5,6),just plays/looks better to me~

Good luck :)
Hello!! IceBeam!! :)

Thank you mod~!!>w</
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