• 
  Offset +4~6.
  
  うーん、少しclap音が浮いてる気がします(特にSoftパートで)。別の音に変えてみては。
  デフォルトのclapでも十分合っていると思いますよ。

• 
  OD+1.
  パターンの量が・・・また昔に戻っている・・・。

1. 00:50:041 (2) - 始端はfinishよりはclap。
2. 00:53:098 (2) - ^
3. 00:56:156 (2) - ^
   ↑サビ後半も同様に。
   
   サビ以降。
   いくつかのノートが、ベルの音に合わせる形で赤線に乗っていますが、ここまで白線に乗る音取りで来ているのでそちらで統一した方がいいと思います。
   プレイヤーとしてもベルの音よりはドラムの音の方がずっと聞き取りやすいです。

• 
  OD+1.

1. 00:00:360 (1) - スナップのときにズレたのか、スライダーが青線で終わっているので直してください。
2. 00:09:149 (1) - ^
   
   前奏部分の音が寂しいので、もう少しwhistleを加えた方がいいと思います。たとえば以下のノートに。
   00:01:506 (2) -
   00:03:035 (4) -
   00:04:563 (2) -
   00:06:092 (4) -
   00:07:621 (2) -
   00:09:149 (1) -
   
   
3. 00:09:149 (1,2,3) - あまりこの部分で、スライダーの終端を音楽の区切りに合わせる音取りは避けた方がいいと思います。そのために(3)のリズムにもやや違和感が残ります。
4. 00:13:735 (4) - (5)と重ねた方がノーマルのプレイヤー層にとっては読みやすいと思います。
5. 00:18:321 (5) - clap.
6. 00:18:703 (1,2,3) - こういう音取りの方が易しいと思います。
   
7. 00:20:614 (4,5) - 上と同様。これでここの部分にもclapを入れやすくなったのでは。
   
8. 00:23:672 (1,2) - スライダーの後に１拍置いての２つ重ねは、ノーマルの低ARでは読みづらく、この層のプレイヤーにとっても難しいです。また、このパターンならnew comboは要りません。
9. 00:27:493 (1,2) - finishは(2)の方。
10. 00:46:602 (1,2) - この部分なら音取りに関してはこれでも問題ないのですが、clapは両方の始端、finishは(2)の終端です。
11. 00:48:130 (1) - 00:47:939から開始した方が合っていると思います。
12. 01:24:627 (1,2) - 前のパターンと同様に。ここなら素直に離した方がいいかもしれません。
13. 01:29:404 (x) - ノート追加？
    
    サビはclapのパターンが結構ランダムなのでもう少し整えた方がいいかもです。
    
    つまるところ、ボーカルに合わせて音を取ると、ひなくるさん譜面のような一定拍子で置くタイプのclapは使いづらいです(・ω・)

• 
  Difficulty setting is too low as Hard diff.
  OD +2or3. HP +1. AR +1?
  Yea, you can change AR or not by your own mind. It's enough easy to read notes with current one.

1. 00:03:799 (1) - Oh...new combo error after the spinner. Add new combo.
2. 00:24:245 (3,4,5) - Looks like crowded imo. Move them further from (2)?
3. 00:36:283 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:36:665 (2) - Add new combo.
5. 01:04:563 (4) - Put whistle at the end of slider instead of start.
6. 01:05:137 (5) - Remove whistle at the start of slider.
7. 01:22:716 (3) - Add new combo.
8. 01:22:907 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 01:31:888 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle?
10. 01:34:945 (2) - ^
11. 01:38:194 (1) - ^
12. 01:43:926 (1) - It's kinda hard to read this note which is near from (5). If you would set AR7, that is easy imo. You can choose that move it further or change AR.

1. 01:07:238 (10,1,2,3) - (2,3)でスペーシングが変わってるのがスッキリしないので(1)のnew comboを削除して(2)に追加してはどうでしょうか。

Nymph_ wrote:

Hi Nymph here and req from: Kanon's Mod queue

General:
....why tag have" favorite hentai game"..... lol, I am confused...

And the custom clap is too loud for me to hear when it is with soft hitsounds imo.

Easy:
01:26:729 (2) - the hitsounds changed to soft after here, but actually Normal is better imo.

Normal:
nothing to complain about

Hard:
Fine

Insane:
Also good too~

Didn't find issues to say no kuds plz
And again have my star~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

star wwwwwww

irc mod

Your message is too short.

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:55:200 (1) - too far from (4)
00:56:156 (2) - too far from (1) (I only noticed because there's a followpoint in between, if you think it's close enough just keep it~)
01:25:200 (1) - I think the end should use soft hitsounds...

Ryafuka's Normal:

00:27:493 (1) - add clap?
00:30:551 (1,2) - switch NCs?
01:04:563 (3) - new combo?
01:25:391 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier to match vocal
01:31:315 (4) - add whistle
01:34:945 (6,1) - switch NCs?
01:34:945 (6) - remove whistle on end
01:35:901 (1) - add whistle
01:36:283 (2) - remove whistle
01:36:665 (3) - add a whistle on both ends, and remove the whistle from the repeat
01:37:812 (4) - finish on end?

Net's Hard:

00:09:340 (1) - start it 1/2 later
00:43:162 (3) - given the pattern you are following, new combo here

Kanpakyin's Taiko:

01:44:500 - maybe add a spinner here?

Insane:

Fine

Nice map~

pieguy1372 wrote:

Kanpakyin's Taiko:

01:44:500 - maybe add a spinner here? //no,sorry.

Muya wrote:

- Kanpakyin's Taiko:
make other diff's same spinner? //Please don't mention this again and again,I would always say no.

Muya wrote:

- Ryafuka's Normal:
00:08:003 (3) - remove finish
00:52:143 (2) - add finish to 1st note
00:55:200 (2) - ^
00:57:493 (1) - add clap to 2nd note
00:59:213 (3) - ^
00:59:977 (4) - I think finish is dont match. remove finish and add whistle?
01:01:124 (1) - add finish to 3rd note
01:01:124 (1,2,3,4) - I like this rhythm.
01:10:487 (1) - remove clap from 1st note and add finish
01:13:544 (1) - add finish to 1st note
01:25:200 (1) - start at 01:25:774? (music restart here)
01:16:410 (1) - remove finish
01:39:723 (3) - add finish to 1st note
01:41:251 (5) - ^
01:43:162 (3) - remove finish

Normalにしては難しいので、もう少し簡単にしてください　hinacleさんにこのままでも問題はないと思いますと言われたので難易度の修正はしませんでした、ごめんなさい。

IceBeam wrote:

Hello Hinacle!

Sorry for really huge delays..

Set Audio Lead-In to 1000 in all diffs for consistency.

Otherwise it's fine in general

[Easy]
00:33:990 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:36:092? As I hear cymbals here.But as it's silenced,probably it's fine as it is now.
00:47:748 (3) - Finish?
00:48:512 (4) - Use normal hitsound for this one?
01:03:035 (3) - Finish?
01:25:200 (1) - There's no beats in music,so use soft hitsounds for this slider.
01:42:971 - Add a circle stacked with 01:43:162 slider?

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:21:761 - Finish?
00:22:143 (1) - Clap?
00:22:907 (2) - ^
00:23:672 (3) - ^
00:24:818 (2) - Finish?
00:33:990 - ^
00:35:137 - Change to clap.
00:46:219 - Finish?
00:58:449 (2,3) - Sounds weird..remove (3)-rd slider and simple add a reverse to the (2)-nd slider instead?
01:21:379 (4) - Finish?
01:38:576 (1) - This stack is unexpected and a bit confusing,it makes hard to read red tick after it.Unstack it?

[Net's Hard]
00:11:347 (1,2) - Ah,reading blue tick right after the spinner is too hard,if you play the map first time ,especially when the notes are stacked.If you want to keep this spinner,then maybe at least make a slider instead of 2 stacked circles? It'd be easier to read.
01:39:723 - Missing finish?

I noticed some jumps that doesn't fit so good,there were only 3 of them in the whole map,so maybe remove them and use constant spacing?

00:20:805 (1) - This.
00:27:302 (5) - ^
00:46:028 (1) - And this.

Also,you wasn't using Finish hitsounds in chorus part.Is in intentional?
Cause,personally,I'd add to:
00:52:143 (2) - Here.
00:55:200 (1) - ^
01:01:506 (1) - ^
01:03:035 (2) - ^
01:04:563 (4) - ^
01:06:092 - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:13:544 (1) - ^
01:19:850 (1) - ^
01:21:379 (1) - ^
01:22:907 (2) - ^

[Insane]
It's perfect again!
The only suggestion is too stack 01:24:627 (5,6),just plays/looks better to me~

Good luck

IceBeam wrote:

[Net's Hard]
00:11:347 (1,2) - Ah,reading blue tick right after the spinner is too hard,if you play the map first time ,especially when the notes are stacked.If you want to keep this spinner,then maybe at least make a slider instead of 2 stacked circles? It'd be easier to read. k
01:39:723 - Missing finish? k

I noticed some jumps that doesn't fit so good,there were only 3 of them in the whole map,so maybe remove them and use constant spacing?

00:20:805 (1) - This. nooooo
00:27:302 (5) - ^ nawwww
00:46:028 (1) - And this. nawwww
I want to keep it

Also,you wasn't using Finish hitsounds in chorus part.Is in intentional?
Cause,personally,I'd add to: Oh , I forget it XD
00:52:143 (2) - Here.
00:55:200 (1) - ^
01:01:506 (1) - ^
01:03:035 (2) - ^
01:04:563 (4) - ^
01:06:092 - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:13:544 (1) - ^
01:19:850 (1) - ^
01:21:379 (1) - ^
01:22:907 (2) - ^

Good luck
Good luck Hinacle ~~!

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
For the Kiai time - I'm sorry, but it sounds wired with the normal hitsounds. Mainly because of the the custom normal claps are too.."in your face". I think the soft with normal hitsounds as clap sounds much better.

[Normal]
00:38:576 (4) - This kick slider really got me. I think it would be extra tricky for Normal players
00:34:372 (3) - Add a clap on the start of this slider here?
01:22:716 (1) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics.
01:23:481 (1) - Remove new combo (Same reason as above)

[Hard]
00:20:232 (4,1) - I don't think this jump is fitting. It confused me the first time I played.

Other than those I can't find anything wrong with this map...
Also the things I found are minor.
Excellent map you got here. Had fun playing Insane~. Have a star!
♪

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Normal]
00:38:576 (4) - This kick slider really got me. I think it would be extra tricky for Normal players fixed.
00:34:372 (3) - Add a clap on the start of this slider here? no,sorry ;_;
01:22:716 (1) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics. fixed.
01:23:481 (1) - Remove new combo (Same reason as above) fixed.

IceBeam wrote:

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:10:296 (4) - add a whistle? fixed.　
00:12:589 (2) - move new combo mark to this note instead of 00:12:207 (1) - ,cause there's a downbeat/start of vocal part/new rhytm,also I'd unstack 00:12:971 (3),it breaks a flow a little now :< fixed.
00:33:417 (2) - maybe shorten this slider to 00:33:799 and start a new slider from 00:33:990 to 00:35:137? it fits the lyrics/rhytm a bit more no. by this suggestion, a slider will be too long ;_; but,the rhythm was changed as your nice suggestion
01:03:035 (1) - finish is missing? fixed.
01:04:563 (1) - ^ fixed.
01:06:092 (4) - could you set normal hitsound set for this note? also add a finish fixed.
01:09:149 (4) - it ends up a bit late,shorten to 01:09:531? fixed.
01:22:907 - finish? fixed.
01:29:404 (1) - it's the only note using normal hitsounds here..change to soft please fixed.

IceBeam wrote:

hello once again~

you didn't set audio lead-in to 1000,fix it please =\ sorry I'm forget T-T Done~!!

fine otherwise

[Easy]
00:36:092 - I don't think silencing this note is neccessary,maybe use 40% volume and add a whistle?
01:47:366 - I'd rather silence (5 % volume) this note,cause there's no beat

[Insane]
00:26:538 (2) - remove whistle? sounds a bit better without it
01:25:200 (7) - use soft hitsounds here?
01:33:417 (5) - I think you should remove this slider and use 1/2 rhytm here (with adding a note to 01:33:608) - it'd be more consistent in case or previous rhytm/patterns

that's it!
fix audio-lead in please and call me back if you changed anything

IceBeam wrote:

recheck time~

[Easy]
01:41:824 (1) - seems like I missed this
I hear another note at 01:42:971,so as you made a slider,add another reverse then?

SPOILER

I don't think it will be hard to read/hit even for beginners,but it will imporve the rhytm much more

and could you set hitsounds' volume to 50% in Kiai chorus parts please? they're a bit noisy atm

otherwise,there's no reason to keep it in pendings then,it's flawless to me

don't give kudosu for this post!

Edit:
bubbled

Sakura Hana wrote:

Pretty nice kawaii map

Ranked!

Faust wrote:

Ultimate eroge mapper.

Congratulations!