merchat7 wrote:

Look like it's done

[General]
- 2 .osb files? Delete both. mk~
- Background image feels a little low quality. Use a better one if possible. fixed
- spinner-spin.png doesn't have the same resolution as the template skin (325x147), but not really sure if this is a problem. I'll ask around~

[Easy]
00:44:105 (1.2.3) 3 hit circles like this feel too hard for a easy and I'm not really sure if this is following anything. Try replacing it with one slider.
http://puu.sh/4uYf
00:45:477 (1,2) This seems better http://puu.sh/4uYq. Adjust the whole combo a bit so that it look better.
00:50:962 (1,2) Make symmetrical like at 00:23:534
00:55:077 (1,2,3) One slider feels better.
00:56:448 (1.2) Try to point your sliders to the next note. Looks better and plays better. Do something similar to what i suggest at 00:45:477.
01:03:305 (1.2.3.4) Seems too hard for an Easy. Try a repeating slider (one repeat) at 01:03:305 or 01:03:648 (this follow music much better, but leave a big space between (1) and this note and may be too close to slider at 01:04:677. Your choice.).
01:11:534 (1,2,3,4,5) Definitely too hard for Easy. Try http://puu.sh/4uZp. May still be a little too hard, but better.
01:16:334 (3,4) Repeating slider instead (repeat at 01:16:677 and add whistle here)
01:21:134 (1,2,3) Why not repeating slider? http://puu.sh/4uZQ. Also adjust the slider at 01:18:391 & 01:19:762 so that they point to the next note so perhaps remap this section a little.
01:26:620 (1,2) Make them symmetrical to each other.
01:31:420 (1,2,3) Repeating slider, three hit circle next to each other this is quite difficult for beginner.
01:33:477 (1,2) Again, place them symmetrically
01:40:334 (1,2) Put a spinner and end it at 01:42:391 instead.
Not bad, some places where you should have just use a slider or repeating slider instead and try to point your slider to the next note. When you do this, it will play much better and look a lot better as well. Also some sliders pointed out in my mod which should have been symmetrically placed. Feel a bit ugly when it is put non symmetrically.
all fix~ Sorry I never made an Easy diff before.. ^^

[Normal]
00:05:705 (3) Point this to the next note. (Ctrl+H perhaps)
00:23:534 (9) Put a anchor point at the center of this slider and readjust the slider.
00:26:277 (11) ^
00:31:762 (1) Rotate 90 degree anti clockwise. Point your slider to the next note for easier difficulties.
00:33:134 (2,3) Curve these two slider so that it look better and play better http://puu.sh/4v1p.
00:34:505 (1) Rotate 90 degree clockwise
00:38:620 (2) Ctrl+H and make symmetrical with (1). Adjust the following section accordingly.
00:41:362 (4) Adjust this slider to that it point to the next note.
00:45:820 (1,2,3,4) I'm sure you can do something more interesting than a box pattern.
00:49:591 (,2,3,4,5) ^ haha.. the box pattern is simple and predictable. So I'll leave that
01:05:191 (2) Remap this part a little so that (2) points to (3)
01:07:934 (5) ^ point to (6)
01:10:162 (7) I prefer a kick slider (2 repeats) for this part rather than two sliders. I don't think it's a problem since there is two white ticks before the next note.
Not bad, same thing as [Easy]. Point your slider to the next note, this will make this difficulty a whole lot better.
everything else all fix~

[Insane]
00:20:962 (2.3.4) Like this http://puu.sh/4v5t
00:30:391 (x) I prefer it like this http://puu.sh/4v5T 0.8x distant snapping may look nicer. changed to full stream
01:04:248 (3,4) Stack it, and reduce the clap volume in this section, too loud for me.
01:10:162 (1.2.3.4) Like this http://puu.sh/4v6t or zig zag pattern. mm.. this way is harder I think
01:11:191 (1,2,3,4,5) Anti jump, but you can keep it since it readable
01:39:991 (1,2,3,4,5) Compressed stream please (use lower distant snapping for this) mm.. not here because it's moving pretty fast still when the chorus is coming to an end.
01:45:820 (7,8,9) Like this http://puu.sh/4v6U
As mention before, good Insane. You're pretty good at mapping one.
thanks~! everything else fix~

Need more work on [Easy] and [Normal]. Play through those diffs and self mod a bit. [Lunet] is mainly changing all the kick sliders, other than this it's good. I think this will be ready after more modding. All in all solid map.

Longest mod i've done yet. ^^ I wish i could give you 2 kd :<

1. last spinner is too long imo. (end= 01:58:162)

1. 01:06:048 (5) - remove finish at beginning
2. 01:07:420 (1) - add finish at beginning
3. 01:39:991 (3) - remove (b/c I think this note is needless)
4. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

1. 00:28:677 (1) - start= 00:28:848
2. 01:18:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this combo is too long
3. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

1. 00:20:105 (5) - 終点にclapを追加して、00:20:791 (6)のclapを削除
2. 00:26:962 (2) - 終点にclap追加
3. 00:55:420 (4) - clap追加
4. 00:57:476 (1) - clapを削除してwhistleを入れてみてはどうでしょう
5. 01:03:648 (2,3,4) - ここだけsoftではなくNormalを使ってみてはどうでしょう
6. 01:10:162 (1) - プレイしてみてヒットサウンドが少しうるさく感じました
   　　　　　　　　ついているヒットサウンド全て外すとちょうどいいと感じになると思います
7. 01:14:620 (4) - 始点にclap追加
8. 01:42:391 (3) - 折り返しを1つ手前の赤線にしたほうがいいように思います
9. 01:46:505 (2) - 初見でミスを出す人がいそうなので
   　　　　　　　　スライダー２つに再配置してみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/4wRk

• チャットで話した続きからで勘弁！
  （書くのが面倒...）
  
  少し連打が多めの印象がありました

1. 00:13:934 (3,5) - 終点ではなく、始点と棒部分にwhistleをつけてみてはどうでしょう
2. 00:28:677 (2) - 叩くタイミングで混乱するかも（前後のスペーシングが主な理由）
3. 01:06:048 (6) - 返しを1つ減らして、01:07:248 (1)を01:07:077に移動させてみてはどうでしょう
   　　　　　　　　個人的にはこっちのほうが曲調に合うかな？と思いました
   　　　　　　　　※配置の移動はナシです
4. 01:08:791 (6) - 上に同じく こちらは単発を追加する必要があります
5. 01:51:305 (3,4) - Hardにしては少し離れすぎているように思います

1. 00:30:477 (2,4,12) - remove these? (I felt these dont fit with drum(?) )
2. 00:08:105 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:29:877 (3) - move to 00:29:705
4. 01:01:248 (1) - plz try this --> http://puu.sh/4wTX
   stack 01:00:905 (4) with note(2)
5. 01:10:677 (4) - 1grid right
6. 01:41:962 (2) - remove this note

KSHR wrote:

modding
(requested by Hinacle)
hihi!

General

1. last spinner is too long imo. (end= 01:58:162)

haha... I really like long spiners at the end

Easy

1. 01:06:048 (5) - remove finish at beginning
2. 01:07:420 (1) - add finish at beginning
3. 01:39:991 (3) - remove (b/c I think this note is needless)
4. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

all fix

Normal

1. 00:28:677 (1) - start= 00:28:848
2. 01:18:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this combo is too long
3. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

all fix~
Insane

1. 00:30:477 (2,4,12) - remove these? (I felt these dont fit with drum(?) ) mm no then it'd be too hard to hit D:
2. 00:08:105 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:29:877 (3) - move to 00:29:705
4. 01:01:248 (1) - plz try this --> http://puu.sh/4wTX
   stack 01:00:905 (4) with note(2) mm.. no I think this flows better
5. 01:10:677 (4) - 1grid right
6. 01:41:962 (2) - remove this note mm no then the stream would be too hard

Everything else fixed~
fight~

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there hoLysoup!
Green = nazi and minor stuff, so ignore that if you wish, red = critical stuff which needs fixing.
hihi!!

[General]:

1. Offset 232 (+12). Currently it's really early.

fixed

[Insane]:

1. 00:04:334 (5) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:04:677 (1). Or you can just remove it cause it doesn't matter that much anyway.
2. 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - I'll try not to nazi much, but I will just point out stuff as I go. This isn't a proper square btw, but you can ignore this if you wish, the pattern is fine. I hope it is now..? I'm not really good at making perfect geometric shapes :<
3. 00:11:020 (4,5,6) - You could fix the spacing I suppose.
4. 00:16:677 (4,1) - This is extremely confusing. Finishing it on a blue tick just like that messed up everything and doesn't sound nice at all. Best would be if you finish it 00:17:191 instead, and just delete the upcoming circle and have this slider's end start the vocal line. Don't finish it on the white tick before because there is nothing in the music there.
5. 00:30:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well I suppose if you really want a stream here, sure I guess, but I don't recommend it. There is nothing in the music for the whole stream. 00:30:905 - 00:31:248 - This is a good spot for a stream, not the whole thing. Up to you I guess... I like the stream like this because well it follows that little background sound that sounds like a quiet tick at 1/4 speed. just delete the beats and hopefully you'll know what i'm talking about it's cute
6. 01:03:991 (2,3) - This jump is very confusing and unexpected. Move 2 closer to 3 so they use the same distance snap like 1-2 do.
7. 01:04:334 (4,5) - This is much more readable than the above, but I recommend to use distance snap for them as well, because there is no real reason not to.
8. 01:41:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Pretty much same as the above, half of this stream follows nothing in the music. Good stream spot: 01:42:220 - 01:42:734. ^
9. 01:45:820 (7) - Make this a new combo instead of 01:46:505 (1). It's better.
10. 01:55:591 (1) - I recommend to remove this spinner. The spot where 1/8 slider finishes sounds like a good ending spot. Alternative is to end the spinner at 01:58:162 since there is the last note playing in the music, and then reducing the volume of the whole spinner to 5%.

everything else all fixed~
[Normal]:

1. 00:15:220 - Any reason for this timing section to change the volume so suddenly, and change back to 00:15:477? It's during a spinner as well. If not, just remove them. oops sorry
2. 00:15:134 (1) - I suggest that you end this spinner at 00:17:191. This way it would end where the voice starts, because as it is currently, it's debatable that the slider 00:18:048 (1) comes too soon after this spinner for a normal diff.
3. 00:22:848 (1) - Place this new combo on 00:23:534 (2) instead. Fits better.
4. 00:31:762 (1) - I would say this comes too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. I see no alternative though, so I think you could keep this as it is, but if you do get an idea how to solve this, you should probably do that.
5. 01:05:191 (2) - This slider sounds off because the arrow is on a blue tick. The voice starts on white, and the melody too, so you should probably think of something else instead of this. You could just make a normal slider that ends at 01:05:705 and make a circle at 01:06:048. yea I realized.. but I didn't know what to do at the time but now I got it!
6. 01:07:934 (5) - ^ same thing.
7. 01:15:648 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:17:534? It would end just as the voice starts. This would also make it more consistent because you had a similar situation before. (look at 00:15:134 (1))
8. 01:40:591 - This and the next timing section, just as at the first spinner, you don't need them and remove them, they mess up the volume.
9. 01:55:420 (1) - End this spinner at 01:58:162 instead. Same reason like in other diffs I suggested.

everything else all fixed~
[Easy]:

1. 00:11:191 (3) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:12:562 (1). Fits much better.
2. 00:15:305 (1) - Start the spinner at 00:15:134? You could end it at 00:16:677 as well, sounds better, or if you think it's too short and it's not too hard ending it on a red tick, end it at 00:17:191. Currently sounds bad like it is.
3. 00:43:420 (3) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:44:105 (1).
4. 00:48:220 (3) - New combo?
5. 00:53:705 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:55:077 (1).
6. 01:04:677 (4) - New combo.
7. 01:29:362 (3) - ^
8. 01:31:420 (1) - Remove this new combo.
9. 01:55:420 (1) - Same thing like in other diffs, end it at 01:58:162.

all fixed~
Guess that's it. I really dislike overmapping, so I didn't really like Hinacle diff that much, but it did play okay and had almost no problems.
Solid mapsets, but could use more polishing.

Good luck. thank you~~

marshall_racer wrote:

as requested

[Folder]
fine

[Easy]
hitsounds are quite quiet, but besides that everything's fine

[Normal]
00:09:489 - i'd put a note with whistle here, to keep the flow

[Lunet+]
01:05:717 (2,3) - this overlapping doesn't look nice

[i_k's Taiko]
I'd recommend to make the hitsounds louder, maybe 75% instead of 40% and 100% instead of 50%

[Hinacle]
good, i like it

[Insane]
00:27:660 (3) - new combo


sorry that i couldn't find much, still not good at modding ._.
but i like this mapset, skin elements look quite nice
*gives imaginary star*

-Sekai- wrote:

Mod requested~ >~<

[Easy]
AR -1?
00:20:803 (1) - 1 grip right
00:34:517 (3) - 1 small grip up
00:40:689 (1) - ^
00:43:431 (1) - 1 grip down~
00:44:803 (3) - ^
00:50:974 (1) - this slider sounds weird a bit o.o
01:44:460 (2) - 1 grip left
01:47:203 (2) - 2 grip right
fixed most~ some of them didn't because I don't quite agree with. Mainly because they're all distance snapped already don't wanna shift them.
[Normal]
00:05:717 (3) - new combo
00:07:431 (1) - remove the new combo
00:20:803 (1) - ^
00:21:489 (2) - new combo and (nazi)
01:26:289 (2) - 1 grip down~
01:48:574 (3) - finish at the start of the slider~
same thing as before
[Insane]
i wont say about new combos because they're is to many errors on them xD
nice ~ just if you make the CZ bigger to +1 it will be better xD
mmm.. I guess other people can point them out to me. and circle size +1 would be too easy then
nice map really relaxing song lol i know<3 I love Chata

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:460 (1) - 1 grid down 1 grid left
00:22:860 (4) - spacing?
01:51:317 (5) - the middle point 4 grid right 1 grid down
all fixed~
[Insane]
00:12:917 (4) - spacing? fixed
-------------------------------------------------
So nice~
Good song! thank you!

Sandpig wrote:

Insane

this map goes with a low volume from start to end. you should increase it for some parts like kiai time.
mm I made the kiai all 50% because I think above that is too loud :< not a big fan of really loud hitsounds. especially for this song it's not that loud, it's more of a relaxing song.
00:11:032 (4,5,6) - not even
00:11:203 - 40-50%
00:18:060 - 50-60% for this kiai time
00:22:174 - add finish sorry I didnt' add the finish sounds because it's weird sounding to me
00:22:860 - add finish ^
00:23:546 - add finish ^
00:26:289 - use soft here and add finish
00:28:860 - remove whistle
00:31:774 - 50%
00:41:374 (5) - reduce a repeat and add a circle on 00:42:746
01:00:231 (7,1,2) - the distance increases too suddenly. it doesn't fit the music and has a bad effect on your flow. mmm how should I fix this.. it's a star pattern
01:04:689 - 40%
01:11:203 (1,2) - stack these two circles(keep others) lol I guess this could work... but I'll leave this because it's more simple the way I have it right now
01:12:917 - 40%
01:18:746 - 50-60% for kiai time
01:28:003 - add finish again, sorry no finishes
01:28:689 (3) - add finish ^
01:36:746 (4) - add finish ^
01:37:260 - add finish ^
01:37:603 - add finish ^
01:48:574 - 40-50%
Everything else is fixed~

Hinacle

nice \:D/

Normal

01:55:432 (1) - 10% for this spinner
sure

Easy

seem fine

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Overall
At some points, I found that there's a lack of hitsounds so the mapset is a little bit dry. Try to spice up the beatmap more with different hitsounds~

Normal
00:15:146 (1) - End spinner at 00:16:689?
00:35:889 (2) - You can use red points to make the slider look more beautful~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143814 (Double click a point to make it into a red one)
01:15:660 (1) - Add a Whistle or Finish?
01:38:632 (4,5) - Move these 2 together to avoid touching of (3) and (4)
all fixed~
Insane
00:11:203 (6) - 1 grid to the left
00:35:203 (2) - Last point: 1 grid to the left (To snap with the previous (5))
all fixed~
Awww, Lovely map~ <3 thank you!

Zelos wrote:

Nice to see you again ^_^
Hi! you too!
Folder:
All clean in here.

Easy:
00:05:717 (3,4) - make these vertically parallel? the ends sort of dont match location wise.
01:55:432 (1) - this ending spinner sort of doesnt fit in my opinion. keep if you like,
Overall I saw nothing wrong but you seem to focus a lot of your mapping to the right side. Maybe try spreading out more next time?
oh sorry never noticed haha. I'll watch out next time. except spinner everything else all fixed~
Normal:
01:25:260 (1) - grab the 2nd slider point and move it to the left 2 grid points and and up 1 grid point to give the slider a more curvy feeling.
01:26:631 (3) - grab the 2nd slider point and move it to the right 2 grid points and and up 1 grid point to give the slider a more curvy feeling.
01:29:374 (1,2) - there isnt really much wrong but its an ugly overlap, change this?
01:55:432 (1) - this ending spinner sort of doesnt fit in my opinion. keep if you like.
all fixed except spinner~
Insane:
00:12:917 (4,5) - they are just a tiny bit unstacked. fix this please.
00:30:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream is just overmap. change this please?
01:23:546 (1,2) - this is also slightly unstacked.
01:41:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream is also overmapped.
01:50:289 (6,7) - another couple of objects that are slightly unstacked.
01:55:089 (5) - this does not fit in my opinion. do something else here?
01:55:603 (1) - end this spinner at the same the last spinner ends on the normal and easy difficulty.
tried my best to stack it properly and everything fixed besides spinner~
And that would be it!
You get a star. THank you!

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]

1. when you use blank image for spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin, you should use 1x1 images (spinner-clear is 800x900 now and is unrankable)

oop sry fixed.. I didn't know ~

[Easy]

1. 01:10:174 (3,1) - imo switch new combo
2. 01:31:432 (3) - while 01:21:146 (1) has soft whistle, add one for this slider too?
3. 01:48:574 (3,1) - switch new combo

all fixed~
[Normal]

1. 01:15:403 (T) - useless green line
2. 01:30:746 (3) - bad blanket, move 1st node some grids down

all fixed~
[Insane]

1. 00:14:632 (2) - ugly blanket, fix 3rd/4th nodes some grids down to make it looks better?
2. 00:56:117 (1) - endpoint snap to nothing
3. 01:24:060 (2) - add whistle

all fixed~

karenying wrote:

原來你會中文啊
sorry for too late
哈哈會阿:D
General
Chata<3
Delete .osb file if you want
The size of comboburst should be 500*700,I don't sure of this,but I think it is right
I suggest set the lead-in to 500(without taiko diff),it look more good
all fixed~ and for the comboburst, I think it's fine when I asked around people told me it's 500x767 :>
Easy
00:18:060 (1) - add finish~?
↓I suggest you add whistle of those time↓
00:16:689 - change soft and add whistle?
00:20:803 (1) - slider end
00:22:860 (2) -
00:23:546 (3) - slider end
00:24:917 (1) - slider head
00:26:974 (2) -
00:27:660 (3) - slider head
01:55:432 (1) -
all fixed~
Normal
00:05:717 (1) - finish head?
00:11:203 (1) - ^
00:10:517 (4) - spacing?
00:22:860 (4) - clap slider end
00:31:774 (1,2,3,1) - why don't add any clap._.?
00:31:774 (1) - finish head
00:53:717 (1) - clap slider repeat?
01:01:260 (1) - clap slider end
01:02:974 (3) - clap slider head
01:10:174 (1) - use normal hitsound of this slider?
01:51:317 (5) - NC maybe
01:55:432 (1) - whistle
all fixed~
Insane
哇 進步了呢 哈哈~不好好做的話會對不起茶太的:p
00:15:146 (3) - finish of slider head
00:12:403 (3) - make it more beautiful,like this : http://puu.sh/5z4n
00:23:546 - the default sliderslide is noisy,use Normal c1 here
00:31:774 (1) - finish slider head
01:21:146 - again, Normal c1
01:26:632 - ^
01:29:032 (5) - remove clap...
01:33:489 (2,4) - make them symmetrical.use copy&paste,Ctrl+J,Ctrl+H
01:37:603 - again, Normal c1
01:48:403 (4,5,6) - don't overlap.And NC of(4),remove NC of (1)
01:54:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - umm..不會用英文表達,不要這樣排,排得'曲'點'曲'點是這個意思嗎?
all fixed~
nice map

-Gamu- wrote:

ok.

[General]

●Tags:"hoshi furu" remove? mm no it's ok

[Easy]

●00:27:660 (3,1) - try this!

SPOILER

mm it's ok right now is easier~
●00:29:203 (1) - Move to the start 00:29:032. Move to the end 00:31:774
●00:44:117 (2) - 1 grid left
●01:12:574 (3) - ^
●01:30:746 (2) - ^
everything else fixed~
[Normal]

●HP+1
●00:51:660 (4) - 1 grid left
●00:52:346 (5) - ^
●00:54:746 (2) - 1 grid up
●00:56:460 (4) - 1 grid down
●00:56:803 (5) - ^
everything fixed~
[Insane]

●00:13:432 (4) - tightly stacked
●01:50:289 (4) - try this!

●01:55:603 (1) - whistle add
fixed all~

Good map!!!!!

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Sorry for late modding~~!
it's ok!
[Easy]

00:44:803(3) - 1 grid left~
01:03:317(1) - add whistle reverse of slider and delete clap.(whistle)
add whistle end of slider.(whistle,clap)
01:04:346(2) - add finish~!
01:07:432(1) - add finish start of slider~
01:13:603(1) - ^
01:19:089(1) - add finish end of slider~
01:19:774(2) - add whistle end of slider~
01:23:889(1) - add finish end of slider~!
01:25:946(3) - whistle end of slider~
01:26:632(1) - finish start of slider~~!
01:37:603(1) - ^
only added some~

[Insane]

01:07:089(7) - finish start of slider~ ok
01:09:832(8) - add finish~(whstle,finish) mm it's ok

Lovely chata's song~ I know right?:3and good nice map~!
I love This map~~! Good luck~ thank you so much!!
I want this map ranked~~!!! [/color]

Byakugan249 wrote:

Hello im modding this song because of the request.
hi, thanks!^^
Easy:
00:44:803(3) - x:228 y:224 im suggesting to make it like a triangle pattern.
00:46:860(2) - Slider should be faced vertically. if u follow this suggestion follow the next 4 suggestions below. if u ignore this suggestion ignore the next 4 suggestions below.
00:48:232(1) - x:232 y:248
00:49:603(2) - x:416 y:120
00:50:974(1) - x:256 y:260
00:52:346(2) - x:116 y:140
01:14:974(2) - 1 grid left for the end point
mm only fixed last one~
Normal:
00:08:460(1) - 2 grids right for the 2nd point. in other words try to make that slider the same as (3) at 00:09:660
00:33:660(3) - 1 grid up
01:01:260(1,2) - aline it with (5) if u follow this do the next 4 suggestions below.
01:02:974(3) - x:112 y:68
01:03:660(4) - x:102 y:56
01:04:003(5) - x:260 y:96
01:04:346(6) - x:316 y:152
01:04:689(1) - line up the end slider with (2)
01:07:946(2) - 2 grids up at the end point
01:33:489(2) - ^
01:34:860(4) - 1 grid down for the end point
only fixed some here
Insane:
00:13:432(4) - try to stack the note with the slider perfectly. i noticed that circle is sticking out a bit.
00:33:146(3) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:45:489(3) - 1 grid down for the 2nd point
00:46:174(5) - 1 grid up for the 2nd point
00:57:317(3,4) - 1 grid right for both circles.
00:57:660(5,1) - keep it the same just fix the spacing if u follow my last suggestion.
01:48:403(1,2,3) - Stack it perfectly.
01:50:803(5) - here too but keep the distance of at least 0.01
only fixed some of them~
there this is the best i can do. GL

Verdisphena wrote:

Remove Chata - Mirai no Monogatari (Short Ver.) (hoLysoup).osb and do a full submit
Insane: check this post please~

00:15:146 (1) - New combo due the change of the speed ok
00:30:917 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move this stream to 00:31:089 - and add a note in 00:31:689 -no..
01:11:032 (x) - Add a note here no..
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This is so confusing, this have a bad influence when I play, change this please.lol influence? it's intentional anti-jump so no.. sorry
01:42:232 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:30:917 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
mm
Normal:

00:23:546 (1,3) - Ugly sliders
fixed~
This is more like an a Easy


Easy is fine.

Good map =3

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request
hi!
I love Chata <3 me too<3
If this mod not helpful , Don't KUDOS this]
General

Set Audio Lead-in to 1.00 in all Diff pls I think .5 seconds is enough ww

Easy

AR -1 ?

00:05:717 (3) - New Combo
00:34:517 (3) - ^
00:35:889 (1) - Delete New Combo
00:37:260 (3) - New Combo
00:38:631 (2) - Move right 3 grid ? x:360 y:292
01:18:403 (1) - Finish ?
01:52:517 (1) - End here 01:54:060 ?
fixed most~~

Normal

00:26:289 (3) - New Combo
00:31:774 (1) - Move ? , When finish spin Text after spin will show and can't see a note ; w ;
00:41:374 (4) - New Combo
00:43:431 (1) - Remove New combo
00:45:831 (1) - ^
00:46:517 (5) - New Combo
00:49:603 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:50:974 (1) - New Combo
01:11:203 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:23:889 (1) - New Combo
01:25:260 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:26:631 (5) - New Combo
01:36:232 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:37:603 (8) - New Combo
01:52:517 (1) - Orz :3?
fixed most~
Insane

CS +1 ?

00:13:774 (4) - New Combo
01:26:631 (4) - ^
01:38:974 (5) - ^fixed~So tired = w ="
thanks!
I like this map , Star ~~!

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
hihi!
[General]
fine

[Easy]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
01:55:432 (1) - remove whistle ?
oK~
[Normal]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
00:12:574 (2) - delete , add slider from 00:12:403 to 00:12:746 and 00:12:917 to 00:13:260 ?
00:32:803 - add note
00:35:546 - ^
01:06:746 (3) - delete , add slider from 01:06:746 to 01:07:089
01:38:974 (5) - 1 more repeat ?
01:51:317 (1) - 1 more repeat , spinner start at 01:52:689 ?
01:55:432 (1) - remove whistle ?
fixed~

[Insane]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
01:00:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard.. I'll make a smaller star??
01:04:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - kinda confusing , but I don't know how to do ..
01:50:803 (5,1) - spacing kinda confusing here
fixed the last part~

that's all
good luck ThankS!

Ekaru wrote:

Note: I spent all day on this modpost (on and off of course), so you may have fixed some of this already. Anyways...

General:

20-30% Soft hitsounds are, like, impossible to hear, so I have to rely on my mouse's clicks for feedback. Can you please turn them up just a *tad*?
I think hitsounds are fine. Mainly because I'm not a big fan of loud hitsounds, especially on this song where it's not especially loud anywhere besides the accented beats which I've turned up already. Of course this is referring to insane only. I've turned up hitsounds for normal and easy because well, you really need them on lower difficulties. But for Insane, I'm quite satisfied with the hitsound volume right now.
Insane:

00:06:403 (1,2,3,4) - I would tilt this just a few degrees more; right now it looks too close to horizontal to look good and intentional, but rotating it by just a few more degrees will fix it. sure
00:10:174 (1,2,3) - Add hit circles in between (1) and (2) and between (2) and (3). Right now, the jump to the (4,5,6) stack is a bit sudden rhythm-wise; you want a smoother, more gradual increase in the rhythm's speed so it doesn't feel awkward. mmm no, nothing really happening in the music to map that much.
00:17:203 (1,2,3,4) - Make these hit circles jumps. The vocals here stand out a lot, so there should be jumps to fit with that. no, because it's too fast and the song is just starting. I don't want that many jumps.
01:04:260 (3,4) - This goes against the flow; the flow is to the left, but here you suddenly disrupt the flow by going abruptly down before going left again. Either stack these, or put (4) to the left of (3), not below it. Well, with the triangular jump you go left AND down so it's actually alright. And plus if you only go left, you wouldn't miss the beat anyway.
01:07:603 (1,2,3) - You have jumps in a very quiet part of the music. Jumps should be in "loud" parts of the music. So, put (2) a lot closer to (1,3), because right now it's awkward. sure, lowered the distance in between.
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be a series of jumps where the spacing gradually decreases, not anti-jumps. This is simply because this part starts off with a high amount of emphasis, and then gradually decreases with each one. It's true they should be jumps, but I'd like them to stay as anti-jumps because the next part is the chorus and it picks up speed so I don't want that many jumps.
01:17:546 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are too small for my tastes, but worse players might find them challenging, so eh.
01:26:460 (3) - This would look better if it was moved up just one grid. /nazi'ing sure
01:40:860 (3) - This sounds weird because it misses the loud "boop"; the "boop" has more emphasis than the vocals at this point, actually, so it's important to hit that "boop" so it doesn't feel weird. not quite sure what you mean but I guess I've added a normal hitsound green line?

Normal:

Up until the first spinner (~15 seconds in): The red ticks feel out of place and awkward. It's not too bad once you get used to it, but going with the beat for this entire section would probably feel much better.
00:45:831 (1,2,3,4) – This just feels weird to me; you're skipping the downbeat and stuff. Try deleting 4, moving 2 and 3 one beat back, and adding a hit circle one beat after 1. fixed~
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,1) – I would put some small jumps here. Small jumps are allowed on a Normal and would fit perfectly here (just don't go overboard!).nah, I want this to be relaxing difficulty

Have a star. ~thanks a lot!