merchat7 wrote:

Look like it's done

[General]
- 2 .osb files? Delete both. mk~
- Background image feels a little low quality. Use a better one if possible. fixed
- spinner-spin.png doesn't have the same resolution as the template skin (325x147), but not really sure if this is a problem. I'll ask around~

[Easy]
00:44:105 (1.2.3) 3 hit circles like this feel too hard for a easy and I'm not really sure if this is following anything. Try replacing it with one slider.
http://puu.sh/4uYf
00:45:477 (1,2) This seems better http://puu.sh/4uYq. Adjust the whole combo a bit so that it look better.
00:50:962 (1,2) Make symmetrical like at 00:23:534
00:55:077 (1,2,3) One slider feels better.
00:56:448 (1.2) Try to point your sliders to the next note. Looks better and plays better. Do something similar to what i suggest at 00:45:477.
01:03:305 (1.2.3.4) Seems too hard for an Easy. Try a repeating slider (one repeat) at 01:03:305 or 01:03:648 (this follow music much better, but leave a big space between (1) and this note and may be too close to slider at 01:04:677. Your choice.).
01:11:534 (1,2,3,4,5) Definitely too hard for Easy. Try http://puu.sh/4uZp. May still be a little too hard, but better.
01:16:334 (3,4) Repeating slider instead (repeat at 01:16:677 and add whistle here)
01:21:134 (1,2,3) Why not repeating slider? http://puu.sh/4uZQ. Also adjust the slider at 01:18:391 & 01:19:762 so that they point to the next note so perhaps remap this section a little.
01:26:620 (1,2) Make them symmetrical to each other.
01:31:420 (1,2,3) Repeating slider, three hit circle next to each other this is quite difficult for beginner.
01:33:477 (1,2) Again, place them symmetrically
01:40:334 (1,2) Put a spinner and end it at 01:42:391 instead.
Not bad, some places where you should have just use a slider or repeating slider instead and try to point your slider to the next note. When you do this, it will play much better and look a lot better as well. Also some sliders pointed out in my mod which should have been symmetrically placed. Feel a bit ugly when it is put non symmetrically.
all fix~ Sorry I never made an Easy diff before.. ^^

[Normal]
00:05:705 (3) Point this to the next note. (Ctrl+H perhaps)
00:23:534 (9) Put a anchor point at the center of this slider and readjust the slider.
00:26:277 (11) ^
00:31:762 (1) Rotate 90 degree anti clockwise. Point your slider to the next note for easier difficulties.
00:33:134 (2,3) Curve these two slider so that it look better and play better http://puu.sh/4v1p.
00:34:505 (1) Rotate 90 degree clockwise
00:38:620 (2) Ctrl+H and make symmetrical with (1). Adjust the following section accordingly.
00:41:362 (4) Adjust this slider to that it point to the next note.
00:45:820 (1,2,3,4) I'm sure you can do something more interesting than a box pattern.
00:49:591 (,2,3,4,5) ^ haha.. the box pattern is simple and predictable. So I'll leave that
01:05:191 (2) Remap this part a little so that (2) points to (3)
01:07:934 (5) ^ point to (6)
01:10:162 (7) I prefer a kick slider (2 repeats) for this part rather than two sliders. I don't think it's a problem since there is two white ticks before the next note.
Not bad, same thing as [Easy]. Point your slider to the next note, this will make this difficulty a whole lot better.
everything else all fix~

[Insane]
00:20:962 (2.3.4) Like this http://puu.sh/4v5t
00:30:391 (x) I prefer it like this http://puu.sh/4v5T 0.8x distant snapping may look nicer. changed to full stream
01:04:248 (3,4) Stack it, and reduce the clap volume in this section, too loud for me.
01:10:162 (1.2.3.4) Like this http://puu.sh/4v6t or zig zag pattern. mm.. this way is harder I think
01:11:191 (1,2,3,4,5) Anti jump, but you can keep it since it readable
01:39:991 (1,2,3,4,5) Compressed stream please (use lower distant snapping for this) mm.. not here because it's moving pretty fast still when the chorus is coming to an end.
01:45:820 (7,8,9) Like this http://puu.sh/4v6U
As mention before, good Insane. You're pretty good at mapping one.
thanks~! everything else fix~

Need more work on [Easy] and [Normal]. Play through those diffs and self mod a bit. [Lunet] is mainly changing all the kick sliders, other than this it's good. I think this will be ready after more modding. All in all solid map.

Longest mod i've done yet. ^^ I wish i could give you 2 kd :<

1. last spinner is too long imo. (end= 01:58:162)

1. 01:06:048 (5) - remove finish at beginning
2. 01:07:420 (1) - add finish at beginning
3. 01:39:991 (3) - remove (b/c I think this note is needless)
4. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

1. 00:28:677 (1) - start= 00:28:848
2. 01:18:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this combo is too long
3. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

1. 00:20:105 (5) - 終点にclapを追加して、00:20:791 (6)のclapを削除
2. 00:26:962 (2) - 終点にclap追加
3. 00:55:420 (4) - clap追加
4. 00:57:476 (1) - clapを削除してwhistleを入れてみてはどうでしょう
5. 01:03:648 (2,3,4) - ここだけsoftではなくNormalを使ってみてはどうでしょう
6. 01:10:162 (1) - プレイしてみてヒットサウンドが少しうるさく感じました
   　　　　　　　　ついているヒットサウンド全て外すとちょうどいいと感じになると思います
7. 01:14:620 (4) - 始点にclap追加
8. 01:42:391 (3) - 折り返しを1つ手前の赤線にしたほうがいいように思います
9. 01:46:505 (2) - 初見でミスを出す人がいそうなので
   　　　　　　　　スライダー２つに再配置してみてはどうでしょうか http://puu.sh/4wRk

• チャットで話した続きからで勘弁！
  （書くのが面倒...）
  
  少し連打が多めの印象がありました

1. 00:13:934 (3,5) - 終点ではなく、始点と棒部分にwhistleをつけてみてはどうでしょう
2. 00:28:677 (2) - 叩くタイミングで混乱するかも（前後のスペーシングが主な理由）
3. 01:06:048 (6) - 返しを1つ減らして、01:07:248 (1)を01:07:077に移動させてみてはどうでしょう
   　　　　　　　　個人的にはこっちのほうが曲調に合うかな？と思いました
   　　　　　　　　※配置の移動はナシです
4. 01:08:791 (6) - 上に同じく こちらは単発を追加する必要があります
5. 01:51:305 (3,4) - Hardにしては少し離れすぎているように思います

1. 00:30:477 (2,4,12) - remove these? (I felt these dont fit with drum(?) )
2. 00:08:105 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:29:877 (3) - move to 00:29:705
4. 01:01:248 (1) - plz try this --> http://puu.sh/4wTX
   stack 01:00:905 (4) with note(2)
5. 01:10:677 (4) - 1grid right
6. 01:41:962 (2) - remove this note

KSHR wrote:

modding
(requested by Hinacle)
hihi!

General

1. last spinner is too long imo. (end= 01:58:162)

haha... I really like long spiners at the end

Easy

1. 01:06:048 (5) - remove finish at beginning
2. 01:07:420 (1) - add finish at beginning
3. 01:39:991 (3) - remove (b/c I think this note is needless)
4. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

all fix

Normal

1. 00:28:677 (1) - start= 00:28:848
2. 01:18:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this combo is too long
3. 01:40:334 (1) - start= 01:40:162

all fix~
Insane

1. 00:30:477 (2,4,12) - remove these? (I felt these dont fit with drum(?) ) mm no then it'd be too hard to hit D:
2. 00:08:105 (4) - add whistle
3. 00:29:877 (3) - move to 00:29:705
4. 01:01:248 (1) - plz try this --> http://puu.sh/4wTX
   stack 01:00:905 (4) with note(2) mm.. no I think this flows better
5. 01:10:677 (4) - 1grid right
6. 01:41:962 (2) - remove this note mm no then the stream would be too hard

Everything else fixed~
fight~

lolcubes wrote:

Hey there hoLysoup!
Green = nazi and minor stuff, so ignore that if you wish, red = critical stuff which needs fixing.
hihi!!

[General]:

1. Offset 232 (+12). Currently it's really early.

fixed

[Insane]:

1. 00:04:334 (5) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:04:677 (1). Or you can just remove it cause it doesn't matter that much anyway.
2. 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - I'll try not to nazi much, but I will just point out stuff as I go. This isn't a proper square btw, but you can ignore this if you wish, the pattern is fine. I hope it is now..? I'm not really good at making perfect geometric shapes :<
3. 00:11:020 (4,5,6) - You could fix the spacing I suppose.
4. 00:16:677 (4,1) - This is extremely confusing. Finishing it on a blue tick just like that messed up everything and doesn't sound nice at all. Best would be if you finish it 00:17:191 instead, and just delete the upcoming circle and have this slider's end start the vocal line. Don't finish it on the white tick before because there is nothing in the music there.
5. 00:30:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well I suppose if you really want a stream here, sure I guess, but I don't recommend it. There is nothing in the music for the whole stream. 00:30:905 - 00:31:248 - This is a good spot for a stream, not the whole thing. Up to you I guess... I like the stream like this because well it follows that little background sound that sounds like a quiet tick at 1/4 speed. just delete the beats and hopefully you'll know what i'm talking about it's cute
6. 01:03:991 (2,3) - This jump is very confusing and unexpected. Move 2 closer to 3 so they use the same distance snap like 1-2 do.
7. 01:04:334 (4,5) - This is much more readable than the above, but I recommend to use distance snap for them as well, because there is no real reason not to.
8. 01:41:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Pretty much same as the above, half of this stream follows nothing in the music. Good stream spot: 01:42:220 - 01:42:734. ^
9. 01:45:820 (7) - Make this a new combo instead of 01:46:505 (1). It's better.
10. 01:55:591 (1) - I recommend to remove this spinner. The spot where 1/8 slider finishes sounds like a good ending spot. Alternative is to end the spinner at 01:58:162 since there is the last note playing in the music, and then reducing the volume of the whole spinner to 5%.

everything else all fixed~
[Normal]:

1. 00:15:220 - Any reason for this timing section to change the volume so suddenly, and change back to 00:15:477? It's during a spinner as well. If not, just remove them. oops sorry
2. 00:15:134 (1) - I suggest that you end this spinner at 00:17:191. This way it would end where the voice starts, because as it is currently, it's debatable that the slider 00:18:048 (1) comes too soon after this spinner for a normal diff.
3. 00:22:848 (1) - Place this new combo on 00:23:534 (2) instead. Fits better.
4. 00:31:762 (1) - I would say this comes too soon after a spinner for a normal diff. I see no alternative though, so I think you could keep this as it is, but if you do get an idea how to solve this, you should probably do that.
5. 01:05:191 (2) - This slider sounds off because the arrow is on a blue tick. The voice starts on white, and the melody too, so you should probably think of something else instead of this. You could just make a normal slider that ends at 01:05:705 and make a circle at 01:06:048. yea I realized.. but I didn't know what to do at the time but now I got it!
6. 01:07:934 (5) - ^ same thing.
7. 01:15:648 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:17:534? It would end just as the voice starts. This would also make it more consistent because you had a similar situation before. (look at 00:15:134 (1))
8. 01:40:591 - This and the next timing section, just as at the first spinner, you don't need them and remove them, they mess up the volume.
9. 01:55:420 (1) - End this spinner at 01:58:162 instead. Same reason like in other diffs I suggested.

everything else all fixed~
[Easy]:

1. 00:11:191 (3) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:12:562 (1). Fits much better.
2. 00:15:305 (1) - Start the spinner at 00:15:134? You could end it at 00:16:677 as well, sounds better, or if you think it's too short and it's not too hard ending it on a red tick, end it at 00:17:191. Currently sounds bad like it is.
3. 00:43:420 (3) - This should be a new combo instead of 00:44:105 (1).
4. 00:48:220 (3) - New combo?
5. 00:53:705 (3) - New combo here instead of 00:55:077 (1).
6. 01:04:677 (4) - New combo.
7. 01:29:362 (3) - ^
8. 01:31:420 (1) - Remove this new combo.
9. 01:55:420 (1) - Same thing like in other diffs, end it at 01:58:162.

all fixed~
Guess that's it. I really dislike overmapping, so I didn't really like Hinacle diff that much, but it did play okay and had almost no problems.
Solid mapsets, but could use more polishing.

Good luck. thank you~~

marshall_racer wrote:

as requested

[Folder]
fine

[Easy]
hitsounds are quite quiet, but besides that everything's fine

[Normal]
00:09:489 - i'd put a note with whistle here, to keep the flow

[Lunet+]
01:05:717 (2,3) - this overlapping doesn't look nice

[i_k's Taiko]
I'd recommend to make the hitsounds louder, maybe 75% instead of 40% and 100% instead of 50%

[Hinacle]
good, i like it

[Insane]
00:27:660 (3) - new combo


sorry that i couldn't find much, still not good at modding ._.
but i like this mapset, skin elements look quite nice
*gives imaginary star*

-Sekai- wrote:

Mod requested~ >~<

[Easy]
AR -1?
00:20:803 (1) - 1 grip right
00:34:517 (3) - 1 small grip up
00:40:689 (1) - ^
00:43:431 (1) - 1 grip down~
00:44:803 (3) - ^
00:50:974 (1) - this slider sounds weird a bit o.o
01:44:460 (2) - 1 grip left
01:47:203 (2) - 2 grip right
fixed most~ some of them didn't because I don't quite agree with. Mainly because they're all distance snapped already don't wanna shift them.
[Normal]
00:05:717 (3) - new combo
00:07:431 (1) - remove the new combo
00:20:803 (1) - ^
00:21:489 (2) - new combo and (nazi)
01:26:289 (2) - 1 grip down~
01:48:574 (3) - finish at the start of the slider~
same thing as before
[Insane]
i wont say about new combos because they're is to many errors on them xD
nice ~ just if you make the CZ bigger to +1 it will be better xD
mmm.. I guess other people can point them out to me. and circle size +1 would be too easy then
nice map really relaxing song lol i know<3 I love Chata

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Normal]
00:08:460 (1) - 1 grid down 1 grid left
00:22:860 (4) - spacing?
01:51:317 (5) - the middle point 4 grid right 1 grid down
all fixed~
[Insane]
00:12:917 (4) - spacing? fixed
-------------------------------------------------
So nice~
Good song! thank you!

Sandpig wrote:

Insane

this map goes with a low volume from start to end. you should increase it for some parts like kiai time.
mm I made the kiai all 50% because I think above that is too loud :< not a big fan of really loud hitsounds. especially for this song it's not that loud, it's more of a relaxing song.
00:11:032 (4,5,6) - not even
00:11:203 - 40-50%
00:18:060 - 50-60% for this kiai time
00:22:174 - add finish sorry I didnt' add the finish sounds because it's weird sounding to me
00:22:860 - add finish ^
00:23:546 - add finish ^
00:26:289 - use soft here and add finish
00:28:860 - remove whistle
00:31:774 - 50%
00:41:374 (5) - reduce a repeat and add a circle on 00:42:746
01:00:231 (7,1,2) - the distance increases too suddenly. it doesn't fit the music and has a bad effect on your flow. mmm how should I fix this.. it's a star pattern
01:04:689 - 40%
01:11:203 (1,2) - stack these two circles(keep others) lol I guess this could work... but I'll leave this because it's more simple the way I have it right now
01:12:917 - 40%
01:18:746 - 50-60% for kiai time
01:28:003 - add finish again, sorry no finishes
01:28:689 (3) - add finish ^
01:36:746 (4) - add finish ^
01:37:260 - add finish ^
01:37:603 - add finish ^
01:48:574 - 40-50%
Everything else is fixed~

Hinacle

nice \:D/

Normal

01:55:432 (1) - 10% for this spinner
sure

Easy

seem fine

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Overall
At some points, I found that there's a lack of hitsounds so the mapset is a little bit dry. Try to spice up the beatmap more with different hitsounds~

Normal
00:15:146 (1) - End spinner at 00:16:689?
00:35:889 (2) - You can use red points to make the slider look more beautful~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143814 (Double click a point to make it into a red one)
01:15:660 (1) - Add a Whistle or Finish?
01:38:632 (4,5) - Move these 2 together to avoid touching of (3) and (4)
all fixed~
Insane
00:11:203 (6) - 1 grid to the left
00:35:203 (2) - Last point: 1 grid to the left (To snap with the previous (5))
all fixed~
Awww, Lovely map~ <3 thank you!

Zelos wrote:

Nice to see you again ^_^
Hi! you too!
Folder:
All clean in here.

Easy:
00:05:717 (3,4) - make these vertically parallel? the ends sort of dont match location wise.
01:55:432 (1) - this ending spinner sort of doesnt fit in my opinion. keep if you like,
Overall I saw nothing wrong but you seem to focus a lot of your mapping to the right side. Maybe try spreading out more next time?
oh sorry never noticed haha. I'll watch out next time. except spinner everything else all fixed~
Normal:
01:25:260 (1) - grab the 2nd slider point and move it to the left 2 grid points and and up 1 grid point to give the slider a more curvy feeling.
01:26:631 (3) - grab the 2nd slider point and move it to the right 2 grid points and and up 1 grid point to give the slider a more curvy feeling.
01:29:374 (1,2) - there isnt really much wrong but its an ugly overlap, change this?
01:55:432 (1) - this ending spinner sort of doesnt fit in my opinion. keep if you like.
all fixed except spinner~
Insane:
00:12:917 (4,5) - they are just a tiny bit unstacked. fix this please.
00:30:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream is just overmap. change this please?
01:23:546 (1,2) - this is also slightly unstacked.
01:41:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream is also overmapped.
01:50:289 (6,7) - another couple of objects that are slightly unstacked.
01:55:089 (5) - this does not fit in my opinion. do something else here?
01:55:603 (1) - end this spinner at the same the last spinner ends on the normal and easy difficulty.
tried my best to stack it properly and everything fixed besides spinner~
And that would be it!
You get a star. THank you!

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]

1. when you use blank image for spinner-clear, spinner-osu and spinner-spin, you should use 1x1 images (spinner-clear is 800x900 now and is unrankable)

oop sry fixed.. I didn't know ~

[Easy]

1. 01:10:174 (3,1) - imo switch new combo
2. 01:31:432 (3) - while 01:21:146 (1) has soft whistle, add one for this slider too?
3. 01:48:574 (3,1) - switch new combo

all fixed~
[Normal]

1. 01:15:403 (T) - useless green line
2. 01:30:746 (3) - bad blanket, move 1st node some grids down

all fixed~
[Insane]

1. 00:14:632 (2) - ugly blanket, fix 3rd/4th nodes some grids down to make it looks better?
2. 00:56:117 (1) - endpoint snap to nothing
3. 01:24:060 (2) - add whistle

all fixed~