ICE - L

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MujouSekai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July 3, 2017 at 8:10:46 PM

Artist: ICE
Title: L
Source: Cytus
Tags: cytus loom chapter 7 marathon stream lost liberation
BPM: 155
Filesize: 10890kb
Play Time: 07:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Life (6.49 stars, 2398 notes)


Download: ICE - L
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First Part complete.
Second Part complete.
Third Part complete.
Hitsounding...
vrnl
mod

general:

make the preview point somewhere the music is interesting or starting to pick up, like around 04:53:295 - or something, u get what I mean (I hope)

theres no kiai time either, make the kiais the biggest sections of the music

also id made the OD higher, maybe 8.5 8.7 9?? I can already feel the notelocking on this if its a low OD

dif:

00:31:949 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is this necessary, feels a little random to me
00:35:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - are these supposed to be a little curved like this? if not then make them straight, otherwise its fine
also 00:36:497 (8,1) - spacing off
00:39:981 - a note could go here, stacked on the head of 00:40:078 (5) - would feel nice
00:41:239 (1,1,1,1) - I wouldn't stack these directly on top of each other. its confusing at a player the first time u play it
01:06:788 (7,8,9,10) - ^^
01:19:175 (5,6,7,8) - ^^
01:36:594 (1) - why nc??
01:52:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - probably just me, but I feel the music doesn't go with this. its not really big or fancy so maybe nerf this a little
01:59:046 (1,1) - this jump is too big, rather keep it and buffer the kickslider a little or move them closer
02:00:594 (1,1) - ^^
02:01:755 (1,1,1) - ^^ especially this one, a sliderbreak is going to happen
03:36:712 (2,1) - ^
03:43:028 (2,1) - ^
03:49:344 (2,1) - ^
not gonna name the rest of those, u get it now

03:54:805 (24,1) - weird spacing/overlap??
04:35:433 (2) - sv feels a little high
04:57:243 (1,2,3,4) - direct stack
05:02:769 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
05:05:532 (1,1) - buffer the kickslider pls
06:05:137 (1,1) - random nc's?
06:20:137 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that's pretty frickin hard
06:50:137 (1,1,1,1) - snap these
06:54:874 (1,3,1,3) - ^^ (I think u got a green line wrong)
-AsrieLx-
To be honest I agree with the person named Cute Boy. Especially some of the streams. IDK if any human can tap with two fingers that fast, unless your talking about mouse users, they might be fine. Separating streams can lead to chokes, so be careful of that.

Everything else is fine. Good Luck! :)

This was suppose to be a mod, but it really doesn't seem like it to me.
Finshie
[General]
you dont need to put cytus at tags since its already the source of the map.

[Life]
00:05:433 (1,1) - remove nc since u didnt even nc at 00:11:820 (2) -
00:15:691 (2) - remove nc. the part is so calm and really less objects so i dont think u need to put that much nc
00:25:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should be 1/6 not 1/4
00:30:014 (1) - remove nc. its kinda random
00:36:594 (1,2,1) - this doesnt feel like this suits here. if u wanna keep it consider decreasing the sv .same with 00:37:368 (1,1) -
00:38:143 (1,2,3) - 1/6
00:39:110 - 00:39:304 - 1/6
00:39:497 - 00:39:691 - ^
00:39:691 (3,4,1) - so many sounds that you missed here because of this long sliders. i dont know why you decide to put sliders when theres not that much change in music.
00:41:239 (1,1,1,1) - idont think that much nc is necessary. same 00:44:336 (1,1,1) -
03:18:158 - missed a sound here. note+slider would work. same 03:19:606 (1) -
03:49:344 (2) - insta fail. too far, move this closer to the stream. 03:55:661 (1,3) - 04:08:687 (2) - 04:21:715 (1,1) - same
05:05:532 (1,1) - ds
05:43:032 (7,1) - yea. check aimod btw.
06:00:598 (2,4) - could copy paste 06:00:401 (1,3) - and flip horizontaly for better visuals
06:01:782 (3) - both sliderend at head are strong so u might wanna change this to 2 notes
06:23:295 (7) - i feel like sliders like this ruines the song since the song is constant 1/4 and 1/6 nonstop. suggestion https://puu.sh/wcLFO/617bd3d629.png
06:26:453 (4,1,2) - same reason above. happens too at the beginning of the song
06:28:953 (1) - could remove this since this isnt really where 1/6 start and make 06:28:821 (5) - a 1/4 sllider so it doesnt feel awkward playing
06:31:848 (3) - should be at blue tick like 06:30:302 (3) -
06:44:611 (3) - might wanna change this to 3/4 https://puu.sh/wcLW7/7b4d4d1a46.png slider since having pauses here is kinda awkward. same with 06:45:401 (2,2) -
06:45:006 (1,1) - since the map is really high sr , you might also wanna change this to 1/3 streams since this kinda easy and boring to play
06:46:979 (1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think it is reasonable to map this on 1/4 since it has that 1/4 sound but not before 06:46:979 -
07:01:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you missed where the sound actually is . https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8280743 . this 07:03:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is correct
07:24:874 (1,1,1,1) - would be nice to make sv changes here making it faster and faster.

i like the map after 04:53:295 - but everything before that especially at the beginning feels really weird because of your choices of rhythm. theres 1/4 that should be 1/6 and vise versa. You put some 1/2 and 1/1 sliders at intense part too which kinda kills the momentum though it worked on some part of the song at the end which is nice.
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