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Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver

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Tonairu
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Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Tonairu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 10 mei 2017 at 16:48:04

Artist: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP
Title: Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
Source: けものフレンズ
Tags: Oishi Masayoshi 大石昌良 オーイシマサヨシ iyasine opening KEMONO FRIENDS サーバル Serval Cat フェネック Fennec アライグマ common raccoon 尾崎由香 Yuka Ozaki 本宮佳奈 Kana Motomiya 小野早稀 Saki Ono ペパプ PENGUINS Performance Project. Royal Emperor Gentoo Rockhopper Humboldt penguin 佐々木未来 Mikoi Sasaki 根本流風 Nemoto Ruka 田村響華 Tamura Kyouka 相羽あいな Aina Aiba 築田行子 Chikuta Ikuko
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3585kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rain (4,4 stars, 327 notes)
  2. Salad (2,43 stars, 85 notes)
  3. Welcome to Japari park~! (4,4 stars, 327 notes)
  4. Welcome to PP Park (5,33 stars, 342 notes)
Download: Doubutsu Biscuits x PPP - Youkoso JAPARI PARK e (TV size ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Looking for GD!
For rank!
Cup:
Salad: WIP
Platter:
Rain: Me
Overdose: Emiru
Last edited by Tonairu , edited 1 time in total.
LiousPL
231 posts
Joined February 2015
LiousPL

  • General
  1. Add some Custom Colours to map, for better playing
  2. Don't use Widescreen Support option when you don't have any SB on map.
  3. Add Emiru name to tags!

    Salad

  4. General check, few tips:
    - don't overuse circles (in this diff you throw too many circles ;-;)
    - don't use patterns for Rain in Salad (your patterns looks pretty hard lmao)
    - don't overuse a dashes, jumps must to be only on characteristic sounds
    - CS 4 is too small for Salad (I prefer CS 3)
    - AR/OD 4 is too low for Salad (For Salad I recommend to use 6 or 6,5)
    - Too big sv for Salad (too fast sliders)

    Rain

  5. 00:03:964 (2,3) - Make here Hdash to a vocal sound
  6. 00:04:670 (4,5) - ^
  7. 00:05:906 (8,1) - ^
  8. 00:06:435 (1,1) - This NCs is looks bad
  9. 00:07:670 (3,4) - Make Hdash?
  10. 00:08:729 (1,2,3,4) - Hdashes stream looks like from overdose, don't overspam with this pattern in Rains, and here isn't any sounds for this jumps ;-;
  11. 00:09:259 (1) - Ctrl+H for add movement (and you can take it little closer to next triplet~)
  12. 00:09:259 (1,1) - And yup, again, this NCs is looks bad here
  13. 00:10:670 (7,8) - You miss here some blue tics, add here triplets, not sliders
  14. 00:12:082 (1) - ^
  15. 00:12:788 (3,4,5) - Hard jump, delete this hdashes, there isn't any good sounds for use this pattern
  16. 00:18:435 (3,4,5,6) - Don't looking good, maybe add here some statistic movement?
    ^^^
  17. 00:27:788 (6) - Ctrl+G
  18. 00:28:141 (7,8,9) - Don't looking good, add here some space between this notes
  19. 00:29:729 (4,1) - Too close to each one
  20. 00:41:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Looking so bad, add here more movement, this is entry to future Hdashes~
  21. 00:51:435 (9) - More movement
  22. 00:52:141 (2) - ^
  23. 00:54:259 (3) - ^
  24. 00:59:376 (5,6,7,8) - Not too hard?
  25. 01:03:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change the shape of this stream for more readable
  26. 01:04:847 (1,2) - Add some ds, for better Hdash jump here
  27. 01:28:670 (3,4) - Make here hdash for good end

    Ok, that's all, Im not mod PP diff becouse you are write me *Only 1 diff!*, but I do testplay of overdose, and I like this ;3
    About Rain^ you must to check NC in this diff

    GL~
-Ken
208 posts
Joined May 2014
-Ken
why not ar9 cs4 for the rain diff ?


Overdose:

00:22:229 (1,2) - you shouldn't use 1/6 here

00:40:670 (2) - maybe you should have a Hdash here (try this 00:40:847 (3) - x:40 , 00:41:200 (4) - x:288 , 00:41:376 (5) - x:32)

Rain :

00:09:523 - add note here (I guess you should follow the other sound ) (well you mapped that part better here 01:01:494 - )

00:09:876 - ^

00:10:141 (5) - make this closer like x: 208 and you can move this as well 00:10:406 (6) - x:384

00:13:053 (4) - I don't like this one :c

00:21:435 (5) - make the distance lower here (x:176)

00:28:317 - add note here ( try making a reverse slider http://image.prntscr.com/image/da81524a ... ec1948.jpg)

00:31:670 (2,3) - less distance here (move 00:31:670 (2) - to x:192)

00:39:788 (5) - add a Hdash here ( you can make this 00:40:141 (6) - a vertical slider ,it works)

00:41:641 (6) - dash here ?

00:48:435 (9,1) - this one is disturbing , you need to fix the spacing

00:54:876 (5,6) - same here

00:58:053 - no sound here , make the slider start from red tick

01:15:788 (8) - make this closer like x: 336
Emiru
251 posts
Joined September 2013
Emiru
Overdose:

00:22:229 (1,2) - you shouldn't use 1/6 here : it's 1/8 but yeah it's kinda ugly and play weird fixed !

00:40:670 (2) - maybe you should have a Hdash here (try this 00:40:847 (3) - x:40 , 00:41:200 (4) - x:288 , 00:41:376 (5) - x:32) : wow ! it's way better thanks :D


Done with minor fix from myself : https://puu.sh/vKO2c/aadac56a58.txt
sunui
75 posts
Joined August 2013
sunui
welcome to youkoso japari park
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