Haruna Luna - Stella Breeze (TV Size) · forum

Venix

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Venix 2017-04-29T12:06:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 października 2017 at 19:37:35

Artist: Haruna Luna
Title: Stella Breeze (TV Size)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた♭
Tags: Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata Curi [C_u_r_i] Alphabet Bara- Bara Hazu- Hazu Chalwa -Nitrous Nitrous Left opening light novel Krfawy
BPM: 148
Filesize: 16395kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Alphabet's Stella Insane (4,13 stars, 340 notes)
Bara's Advanced (2,36 stars, 158 notes)
Chalwa's Normal (1,84 stars, 155 notes)
Curi's Insane (3,95 stars, 275 notes)
Flat (4,44 stars, 306 notes)
Hard (3,24 stars, 261 notes)
Hazu's Light Insane (3,69 stars, 251 notes)
Left's Insane (4,01 stars, 328 notes)
Nitrous' Easy (1,36 stars, 104 notes)

Download: Haruna Luna - Stella Breeze (TV Size)
Download: Haruna Luna - Stella Breeze (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - -Nitrous / Hitsounds - Krfawy

Normal - Chalwa / Hitsounds - Krfawy

Advanced - Bara- / Hitsounds - Bara-

Hard - Venix / Hitsounds - Krfawy

Light Insane - Hazu- / Hitsounds - Krfawy

Insane - Curi, Left, Alphabet / Hitsounds - Krfawy

Flat - Venix / Hitsounds - Krfawy

27/07/2017 - sahuang

2/10/2017 - Gero

Last edited by Venix 2017-10-03T21:34:25+00:00, edited 58 times in total.

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2017-05-03T18:14:18+00:00

A bit hard ~~and a bit late...~~ so if you want me to nerf it just tell me

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Artist:Luna Haruna
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Source:Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata ♭
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Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2017-05-04T13:16:16+00:00

[general]

日本語のSource better
default colours a bit bored

[Flat]

00:08:242 (6) - maybe you forget NC, and 00:07:431 (5) - stack a bit uncomfortable because it's not particularly …… as you see curi never stack 1/2 note, i suggest you try it too, because you only stack 1/2 note twice. like two Chemical problem in Math exam
00:40:066 (4,5,6,7) - ~~喵喵喵？~~ i think player can't stop here https://puu.sh/vFiv1/63c006b17f.jpg
00:40:674 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 00:41:080 - you ignore voice here and ignore 00:43:310 - drum here, mix it up then none can understand what are you follow …… you can reference curi follow voice or left follow drum, i think curi better because~~lfj follow voice too~~ consistent rhythm more comfortable, but most mapper follow drum
00:50:404 (1,2,3,4) - stream plz
00:52:634 (3,4) - jump follow dot rhythm better, as you see other insane gd all jump here
01:09:052 (6) - NC

Asuka_-

1,459 posts

Joined February 2016

Asuka_- 2017-05-04T15:45:29+00:00

i try

Title: ステラブリーズ (TV Size)
Artist: 春奈るな
Romanised Artist: Haruna Luna
reference http://www.harunaluna.jp/artist/Lunahar ... /VVCL-1017

plz custom combo color

bara
01:11:687 (3,3) - you can avoid overlap here

curi
00: 45: 134 - Would you follow the sound of drum?
I understand 3/4 reverse is following vocals.
but you are following a weaker drum than this (e.g.00:33:377 - 00:46:857 (3,4) - ...)
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/6715aa68df9eaf6b6a7 ... a89de2.png

Left
cute BG
00:27:701 - remove green line.
01:24:255 (2) - nc here?
because you put nc 01:21:012 (1) - of same sound

Flat
uncheck countdown

00:08:242 (6) - nc
00:27:701 - remove green line. no need
00:40:066 (4,5,6,7) - This confuses players
00:40:370 - sound here
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/03efa62460e1efaa3bc ... 248570.png
00:40:674 (1) - If you put nc here, I think that it is 00:42:296 (4) - next nc.
01:06:518 - soundhere
it is followed in Alphabet Left Curi's diff, so you follow too?
01:25:876 (1) - remove nc?

sry bad mod
gl

Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Venix 2017-05-04T18:37:12+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[general]
日本語のSource better hmm?
default colours a bit bored Will do it when I'll have all diffs
[Flat]
00:08:242 (6) - maybe you forget NC, and 00:07:431 (5) - stack a bit uncomfortable because it's not particularly …… as you see curi never stack 1/2 note, i suggest you try it too, because you only stack 1/2 note twice. like two Chemical problem in Math exam I think it's ok now
00:40:066 (4,5,6,7) - ~~喵喵喵？~~ i think player can't stop here https://puu.sh/vFiv1/63c006b17f.jpg Ooops, sorry, this was a mistake
00:40:674 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 00:41:080 - you ignore voice here and ignore 00:43:310 - drum here, mix it up then none can understand what are you follow …… you can reference curi follow voice or left follow drum, i think curi better because~~lfj follow voice too~~ consistent rhythm more comfortable, but most mapper follow drum I think this is fine
00:50:404 (1,2,3,4) - stream plz it's fine for me
00:52:634 (3,4) - jump follow dot rhythm better, as you see other insane gd all jump here This stack fits change from 3/4 to 1/2
01:09:052 (6) - NC ok

Asuka_- wrote:
i try

Title: ステラブリーズ (TV Size)
Artist: 春奈るな
Romanised Artist: Haruna Luna
reference http://www.harunaluna.jp/artist/Lunahar ... /VVCL-1017 Will do it when I'll have entire of mapset lol

plz custom combo color ^

Flat
uncheck countdown

00:08:242 (6) - nc fixed before
00:27:701 - remove green line. no need I think hitsounds change will be here
00:40:066 (4,5,6,7) - This confuses players Fixed before, it was a mistake
00:40:370 - sound here
maybe https://i.gyazo.com/03efa62460e1efaa3bc ... 248570.png why not
00:40:674 (1) - If you put nc here, I think that it is 00:42:296 (4) - next nc. sure
01:06:518 - soundhere
it is followed in Alphabet Left Curi's diff, so you follow too? I don't have to focus on all rythms
01:25:876 (1) - remove nc? That's strong sound here

sry bad mod
gl

Thanks for mods guys!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,257 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2017-05-07T12:19:16+00:00

m4m thing

[general]

pls
add combocolours
add tags
why is hazu's LIGHT insane harder than vinxis's INSANE
add hs

[flat]

00:04:188 (5) - i suggest to replace this circle with 1/4 slider to emphasis this sound 00:04:289 -
00:39:053 (1) - i suggest to replace it with 1/4 slider with 2 repeats
00:46:755 (4) - replace with a stream
01:17:971 (3,4,5,6) - it's really overdone. please do not overuse DS

[hard]

00:01:756 (2) - ur last diff has nc here so you should place it here too
00:04:188 (3) - replace with 1/4 repeat slider
nice this diff isn't finished

[normal]

00:01:350 - put a circle here, it is much better
pls make ds more and avoid all these the WORST overlaps
00:50:404 (1) - wtf in the middle of this slider, are you crazy?

[vinxis]

00:15:133 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is what I call overmapping. too much 1/4 repeat sliders, they are just useless

weird song and map, nogl

Skubi

856 posts

Joined December 2013

Skubi 2017-05-07T14:33:47+00:00

[Last Diff]

00:10:674 (6,1) - it breaks the flow imo, i would Ctrl+G (1), then Ctrl+G (2), then Ctrl+G (3). It will have more flow than it has now

00:16:350 (1,2,3,4) - that's a crooked trapeze, I would make it more nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8026265
00:19:188 (4,5,1) - spacing?
00:20:810 (4,2,1) - stack
00:28:715 (4) - one tiny grid pixel higher for a blanket
00:29:323 (1) - sliderend one tiny grid pixel to the left for a blanket then stack 00:30:742 (4) -
00:34:796 (2) - You can blanket it more nicely https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8026304
00:40:472 (8) - rotate it a bit downwards
00:44:728 (5,3) - i dont get that, why not use the same slider, or at least shape (3) the same as (5)..
00:47:566 (2,6) - blanket?
00:48:174 (4,5) - stack?

01:09:457 (2,3,4) - the rotation went wrong here: https://puu.sh/vIuUi/b027b210f6.jpg (as far as i know, 360/3=120)
01:22:633 (3) - sliderend one tiny grid pixel lower

also fix this: https://puu.sh/vIv3q/f3d19d2010.png

[αβ Insane]

00:04:999 (1,3,1) - (3) circle is off (that's what i mean), move it like this (x:284 y:284) and then rotate the (1) slider to match the cursor movement (if you know what i mean)

also fix this: https://puu.sh/vIv3q/f3d19d2010.png

[← Insane]

00:13:715 (4,5,6) - (6) slider looks not far enough in this triple if you look closely. (the snapping numbers are ok, but i can see its a little bit too close)
00:28:107 (3,4) - blanket it more nicely please
00:55:066 (2,3,4) - i would ctrl+G this, then 00:55:674 (6,7) - ctrl+G these, and next, rotate (1) slider to match cursor movement for better flow
01:10:066 (4,5,6) - what with that sudden jump? I can't hear anything like that in the music

also fix this: https://puu.sh/vIv3q/f3d19d2010.png

Good luck!

Aistre

632 posts

Joined September 2014

Aistre 2017-05-07T20:04:23+00:00

CptSqBany wrote:
[αβ Insane]

00:04:999 (1,3,1) - (3) circle is off (that's what i mean), move it like this (x:284 y:284) and then rotate the (1) slider to match the cursor movement (if you know what i mean)

also fix this: https://puu.sh/vIv3q/f3d19d2010.png

Thanks, fixed both things

a

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
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@CptSqBany Also I'll get around to modding Title theme soon

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-05-21T09:19:06+00:00

@asuka green line fixed thx, NC dont have to cuz different pattern
thx for mod~

@Cpt
1. that's ok
2. don't have to
3. that's not what i intended
4. acceptable considering whole map i think
thx for mod!

Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Venix 2017-05-24T14:39:13+00:00

ddddd
dddd
I have read the rules in Kibbleru's queue

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-05-25T15:44:09+00:00

SPOILER

00:33 Sonnyc: guess I had some rhythm complains on some partts
00:34 Sonnyc: 00:43:918 (3) - 01:00:133 (3) - 
00:34 Venix: what's wrong here? Dx
00:35 Sonnyc: I can hear vocals being in 1/4 lines, but the rhythm being a generic 1/1 felt a bit less effective to express the song x,x
00:35 Sonnyc: 01:12:093 (7,1) - and I'm not really sure what made the slider start at the white line while there wasn't any prominent musical element existing. It kinda made the strong beat of (7) weak imo
00:35 Venix: on second one i can hear
00:36 Venix: but on first I can't hear any 1/4
00:36 Venix: LUL
00:36 Sonnyc: 00:44:222 - 
00:36 Sonnyc: doesn't the vocal land here?
00:36 Sonnyc: well if you don't think so, it would be fine
00:37 Venix: 1. Offset: 1 756ms	BPM: 148,00
00:37 Venix: wtf
00:37 Venix: 01:12:295 -
00:37 Venix: here I wasn't focused on vocal
00:37 Sonnyc: also the 3/4 rhythm of 00:52:026 (1,2,3) - was a little less intuitive because the spacing was similar with the 1/2 of 00:51:620 (5,6,1) - 
00:38 Venix: but you're right
00:38 Sonnyc: making 00:51:620 (5,6,1) - closer would work better imo
00:38 Venix: sure
00:39 Sonnyc: well those were what bothered me while playing

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-07-05T09:24:04+00:00

Tags are inconsistent
Maybe toggle widescreen cuz you hav vid?

Easy
00:48:377 (2,4,1) - overlap is a bit messy

Normal
wtf is this distance...00:01:756 (1,2,3) - 00:03:985 (4,5,1,2,3) - etc all the distance in this map is terrible, you should use a smaller ds so they can overlap more. The almost separated spacing is very confusing and looks bad. A DS of 0.9x would work.
Also id say stuff like 00:18:377 (1,2,3) - in normal is too hard compared with Easy. You could try to reduce difficulty a bit.
00:24:053 (6,1) - intolerable overlap and placement
I strongly recommend you remap this diff, it looks really bad and id say this is far from ranking

Advanced
Increase your od and hp to be consistent with other diffs
00:38:242 (3,1) - slider head missing hs
00:53:242 - maybe add a 1/1 reverse slider to represent the vocal? You dont need to worry about gap rule here
00:54:458 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - as you can see you didnt put any break in between, the rhythm is way too dense for advanced. At least add a few gaps so it wont be too hard to play.
00:57:093 (3) - i think you should delete this.

Hard
00:16:958 (2,3,4,5) - aesthetics
00:26:080 (5) - NC
01:11:079 (3) - idk why you use red tick for slider

Curi
00:13:816 (3) - wtf no
00:39:864 (5) - 01:06:620 (6) - nc?

left
00:51:215 (9) - nc aaa
god map

alphabet
set combo colours
i dont think cs5 is a good idea for this mapping style lol there's many random jumps and it's not a cs5 typical style.
00:55:066 (3,1) - dont stack them? emphasis sslider head
nice map

flat
00:03:377 (1) - ctrl+g to keep a better flow?
00:34:796 (2,4) - separate a bit
01:25:876 (1) - no need to nc

I dont really feel like nominating this, and make sure Normal is reworked.
Good luck!

Aistre

632 posts

Joined September 2014

Aistre 2017-07-07T18:30:14+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
alphabet
set combo colours Fixed
i dont think cs5 is a good idea for this mapping style lol there's many random jumps and it's not a cs5 typical style. Because it's not a typical CS5 map it shouldn't be CS5? ok lol
00:55:066 (3,1) - dont stack them? emphasis sslider head It's a repeating thing throughout the kiai 01:08:039 (3,1) - 01:12:093 (5,1) - 01:16:957 (3,1) - 01:17:768 (3,1) - to emphasize both the vocals and the background music at the same time
nice map

Thanks

update

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Reillia

1,164 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2017-07-07T21:21:22+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Curi
00:13:816 (3) - wtf no wtf why =w=
00:39:864 (5) - 01:06:620 (6) - nc? oK

thx for mod

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-07-08T02:23:34+00:00

@alphabet I'm saying this because cs5 maps have fundamental differences compared to cs4 maps. Random jumps are okay in maps with cs around [3.5,4.5], but cs5 should be handled carefully. When circle is smaller the aim requirement gets higher, and the map will look worse with random jumps. Take a look at the cs5 maps these years and you may get an idea how those are constructed.

Im not saying you can't use cs5, go ahead with it, its only my suggestion that in this song and this map you misused cs5. It's more like you mapped with cs4 or sth and later raised cs to 5.

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-07-08T12:43:41+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Easy
00:48:377 (2,4,1) - overlap is a bit messy | Fixed
Good luck!

update

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Thanks for modding!

Left

2,162 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-07-08T15:51:43+00:00

@sahuang that NC makes stream looks bad i think ;w;

thx for mod!

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Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2017-07-11T15:32:06+00:00

Basically fixed everything other than the kiai. It's only 148 BPM and it;s Advanced, not Normal (and I have a ranked normal which is even denser so this is advanced should be fine)
Thanks!

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Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Venix 2017-07-11T16:26:10+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Tags are inconsistent
Maybe toggle widescreen cuz you hav vid?

Hard
00:16:958 (2,3,4,5) - aesthetics ? XD
00:26:080 (5) - NC
01:11:079 (3) - idk why you use red tick for slider lol it's white tick?

flat
00:03:377 (1) - ctrl+g to keep a better flow?
00:34:796 (2,4) - separate a bit
01:25:876 (1) - no need to nc

I dont really feel like nominating this, and make sure Normal is reworked.
Good luck!

no reply = fixed

Also, normal is now remapped
updated all diffs btw

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2017-07-19T16:47:34+00:00

nirtous' easy
consider adding a slidertick sound at 00:02:161 - and othe places? your clap sound is abit loud from my side, 24clap should both be pointed out
00:22:634 (3) - imo following beats are better than vocal, end at 00:23:242 - and 00:23:850 (4) - start at 00:23:647 - ?
00:56:079 (1) - remove nc
00:57:701 (4,1) - swap nc

chalwa's normal
combo color?
00:03:174 (4) - whistle on head, the sound is too little
00:03:985 (5) - imo you should map a 1/2 slider start at 00:03:783 - , this beat should not be ignored
00:07:026 - ^
00:04:188 (6,1) - why 2.0x ds?
00:07:431 (6) - the end is a bit outside of the screen
00:19:593 (5) - that normal whistle sound is quite inappropriate
00:26:485 - 70% volume should begin at here i think
01:20:403 - green line should snap on 403 but not 405
emmmmm i checked bara's diff at first part and i found your rhythm too crowded, give more space to new players not all 1/2 mapped.

bara's advanced
00:12:904 - add a note or let 00:13:107 (3) - begin here?
00:19:593 (1,2,3) - do we really need so many finishes??? duang daung duang???
01:25:877 (1) - unnecessay nc imo
just feel that too many finishes are used at the first part, it's a quite quite part, vocals should be emphasized not the finishes.

hard
00:07:431 (3) - i found it not blanket even 00:06:620 (1) - or 00:08:242 (1) - well
00:09:864 (1) - finish? as 00:08:242 (1) -
00:10:674 (3) - out screen
00:11:485 (1) - finish
00:26:891 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just recommend not to map continous tripets in just a hard diff, also advanced diff doesnt include any tripets
00:29:931 (4,1) - rip stack?
01:05:606 (6) - why stack, it's a strong beat finishhhh
01:06:214 (2) - the rhythm should be http://puu.sh/wLWkm/8c2ccb614e.jpg
01:12:093 (6,1) - since you map vocals more, why not make a long slider start at 01:12:093 - as new combo?

hazu's light insane
fine

curi's insane
00:13:816 (3) - it doesnt include 1/8 sound imo, the beat is near to 1/12 or other, so why not extend this to a 1/4 tick?

left's insane
00:57:701 (1,2,3,4,5) - this plays a bit bad imo, i'd like to move it as http://puu.sh/wNH42/37c43477f0.jpg or http://puu.sh/wNH5y/95bee9ed34.jpg
01:16:755 (7,8) - this 1/4 is quite confusing because most of your 1/2 ds notes are also like this way, make 01:17:059 (8,1) - with 0.5x ds as other tripets? http://puu.sh/wNH9j/624968b627.jpg

alphabet's stella insane
honestly saying, cs5 doesnt fit your mapping style at all, i totally agree with what my angel azusa said on 15th floor, i testplayed and found the connections of objects in your map are irregular and random, and it looks worse because the use of NC is too often . the notes in cs5 map should be compacter and structured, sry i cant find it.
00:09:053 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:674 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm are same, but you didnt show them,
01:20:403 - green line should snap on 403 but not 405
if it's a cs3.5 to 4 map, i may give more sufferance

flat
00:10:472 (4,5,6) - rip stack?
00:12:296 (3,4) - i think you can map more this part (00:12:397 - )
00:26:080 (1,2) - swap nc looks better here
00:42:904 (1) - no need to nc, as 00:41:283 (2) - , but you can nc here 00:43:918 (3) -

good luck~

Venix

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Topic Starter

Venix 2017-07-19T17:46:58+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
hard
00:07:431 (3) - i found it not blanket even 00:06:620 (1) - or 00:08:242 (1) - well
00:09:864 (1) - finish? as 00:08:242 (1) -
00:10:674 (3) - out screen
00:11:485 (1) - finish
00:26:891 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just recommend not to map continous tripets in just a hard diff, also advanced diff doesnt include any tripets
00:29:931 (4,1) - rip stack?
01:05:606 (6) - why stack, it's a strong beat finishhhh
01:06:214 (2) - the rhythm should be http://puu.sh/wLWkm/8c2ccb614e.jpg
01:12:093 (6,1) - since you map vocals more, why not make a long slider start at 01:12:093 - as new combo?

flat
00:10:472 (4,5,6) - rip stack?
00:12:296 (3,4) - i think you can map more this part (00:12:397 - ) ?
00:26:080 (1,2) - swap nc looks better here I placed nc on every big tick
00:42:904 (1) - no need to nc, as 00:41:283 (2) - , but you can nc here 00:43:918 (3) -

good luck~

no reply = fixed

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2017-07-19T22:04:46+00:00

Koiyuki wrote:
nirtous' easy
consider adding a slidertick sound at 00:02:161 - and othe places? your clap sound is abit loud from my side, 24clap should both be pointed out
| I'll leave this to the discretion of the creator. He after all hitsounded my diff. I did minor alterations to suit for the diff.
00:22:634 (3) - imo following beats are better than vocal, end at 00:23:242 - and 00:23:850 (4) - start at 00:23:647 - ?
| ✔
00:56:079 (1) - remove nc
| ✔
00:57:701 (4,1) - swap nc
| ✔

Thanks!

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sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-07-20T12:27:21+00:00

Normal
00:07:228 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - this is too long. It makes a big gap with easy. I think you can remove a circle or sth
00:19:593 (5) - wrong hs
00:21:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - this is toooo long as well, please nerf it. Take a look at your kiai, its much better in terms of breaks

Advanced
00:53:242 (1) - how about adding soft whistle?

Hard
01:11:079 (3) - i mean you should prob use a circular slider rather than this one, it looks weird here

Lets see how it goes, you still need to reply a mod

Venix

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Venix 2017-07-20T13:22:32+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
Hard
01:11:079 (3) - i mean you should prob use a circular slider rather than this one, it looks weird here

Lets see how it goes, you still need to reply a mod

fixed

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Left 2017-07-20T13:30:03+00:00

@Koiyuki all fixed, thx for mod!

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Reillia 2017-07-20T13:32:12+00:00

@Koiyuki fix that issue

thx for mod

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Venix 2017-07-20T13:33:00+00:00

updated Curi's and Left's diffs

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Chalwa 2017-07-20T13:39:03+00:00

Thanks Koiyuki and sahuang, everything fixed!
https://chalwa.s-ul.eu/jPI6Ktaa

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Venix 2017-07-20T13:54:55+00:00

updated
edit: also updated Nitrous' diff because I forgot ;w;

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Venix 2017-07-21T15:52:33+00:00

Alphabet allowed me to do changes on his diff then

Koiyuki wrote:
alphabet's stella insane
honestly saying, cs5 doesnt fit your mapping style at all, i totally agree with what my angel azusa said on 15th floor, i testplayed and found the connections of objects in your map are irregular and random, and it looks worse because the use of NC is too often . the notes in cs5 map should be compacter and structured, sry i cant find it.
00:09:053 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:674 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm are same, but you didnt show them,
01:20:403 - green line should snap on 403 but not 405
if it's a cs3.5 to 4 map, i may give more sufferance

good luck~

fixed everything and changed CS to 4
edit: Bara- too ;w; Fixed everything.

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sahuang 2017-07-24T04:38:34+00:00

have you even updated normal because its still the same

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Venix 2017-07-24T10:30:11+00:00

ehh Chalwa gave me wrong file, I'll poke him

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sahuang 2017-07-27T12:07:42+00:00

bubbled

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Venix 2017-07-27T12:08:23+00:00

thank you!!

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Gero 2017-10-02T05:30:54+00:00

Hello.

Alphabet's Stella Insane

00:09:053 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacing is so different than the other one when the rhythm is basically the same? I'd rather to 00:10:674 (1,2,3) - increase the spacing between these objetcs. Otherwise using another kind or rhythm like this one.
00:52:634 (3) - NC to make it clear that this one changed to 1/2 instead.

Call me back.

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Venix 2017-10-02T17:38:39+00:00

fixed both issues tbh

with alphabet's agree ofc

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Gero 2017-10-03T03:31:06+00:00

~ Qualified ~