Amazing shit, man!
Some general stuff:
— First minute is empty. It would be good if you fill it with something.
— Use these timing settings:
— Delete Pendulum - Blood Sugar (Zapy).osb from song's folder; you don't have storyboard!
— What about another BG? There are lot of black colour, little blood and no sugar :[
You may reject whatever you want.
Hard
01:28:570 — end spinner here?
02:03:344 (5,6,7,8) - you better change this to something else.
02:05:730 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:34:367 (1) - insert break after this
02:36:753 (1) - move this to 02:36:923 (next red tick)
02:37:094 (2) - break after this
02:39:651 (1) - move this to next red tick
02:39:822 (2) - break after this
02:42:378 (1) - move this to next red tick
02:56:185 — make break begin from this time
03:18:175 (2,4,2,2) - Insert break after these notes
03:26:186 (3) - remove new combo
03:50:732 (1) - change another sliders like this. Try to make them more beautiful.
03:52:777 (3) - you better delete it, then copy 03:52:096 (1) - , flip it vetrically and place instead of it.
04:00:278 (5) - new combo
04:01:641 (9) - remove it. Then make two sliders (04:01:641~ 04:01:982 and 04:02:323 ~ 04:02:664 to fill the break.
04:09:823 (1) - and others — change it.
Map until the end.
Insane
Hm. Why did you change grid level to 4 and beat snap divisor to 1/3? Anyway, doesn't matter.
01:07:090 (1) - make it more symmetrical
01:36:921 (11) - don't hide beats under sliders.
02:12:205 (8) - either map after it or insert break
03:18:170 (2,2,2,2) - insert breaks after these
03:38:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - you better place it closer to previous stream
04:05:645 (1) - remove it?
04:22:094 (1,2,3) - make another pattern?
05:03:000 — At this time BPM of the song slowly goes doooooooooooooooown. You need either have some fun with timing or just start spinner from that moment until the end. But if somebody who knows better about all these timing things will say it's fine, then it's fine, hah.
That's all for now, I'll come back later and will fix some hitsounds.
I would like to see this map in Approved. Good luck!
Some general stuff:
— First minute is empty. It would be good if you fill it with something.
— Use these timing settings:
- BPM = 176 (not 175.997, he-he)
Offset = 61638
— Delete Pendulum - Blood Sugar (Zapy).osb from song's folder; you don't have storyboard!
— What about another BG? There are lot of black colour, little blood and no sugar :[
You may reject whatever you want.
Hard
01:28:570 — end spinner here?
02:03:344 (5,6,7,8) - you better change this to something else.
02:05:730 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:34:367 (1) - insert break after this
02:36:753 (1) - move this to 02:36:923 (next red tick)
02:37:094 (2) - break after this
02:39:651 (1) - move this to next red tick
02:39:822 (2) - break after this
02:42:378 (1) - move this to next red tick
02:56:185 — make break begin from this time
03:18:175 (2,4,2,2) - Insert break after these notes
03:26:186 (3) - remove new combo
03:50:732 (1) - change another sliders like this. Try to make them more beautiful.
03:52:777 (3) - you better delete it, then copy 03:52:096 (1) - , flip it vetrically and place instead of it.
04:00:278 (5) - new combo
04:01:641 (9) - remove it. Then make two sliders (04:01:641~ 04:01:982 and 04:02:323 ~ 04:02:664 to fill the break.
04:09:823 (1) - and others — change it.
Map until the end.
Insane
Hm. Why did you change grid level to 4 and beat snap divisor to 1/3? Anyway, doesn't matter.
01:07:090 (1) - make it more symmetrical
01:36:921 (11) - don't hide beats under sliders.
02:12:205 (8) - either map after it or insert break
03:18:170 (2,2,2,2) - insert breaks after these
03:38:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - you better place it closer to previous stream
04:05:645 (1) - remove it?
04:22:094 (1,2,3) - make another pattern?
05:03:000 — At this time BPM of the song slowly goes doooooooooooooooown. You need either have some fun with timing or just start spinner from that moment until the end. But if somebody who knows better about all these timing things will say it's fine, then it's fine, hah.
That's all for now, I'll come back later and will fix some hitsounds.
I would like to see this map in Approved. Good luck!