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Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line

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Topic Starter
Suzully
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月4日 at 2:19:53

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
Source: Chrno Crusade
Tags: KSHR
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6725kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.99 stars, 604 notes)
  2. KSHR (4.87 stars, 503 notes)
  3. Normal (2.97 stars, 253 notes)
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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クロノクルセイド OP
翼はPleasure Line


Normal - 100%
Hard - 100% by KSHR
Insane - 100%

My 16th beatmap.
Please advise me.
Naichatta
いちーばん
KanaRin
Nice song<3
buz the new systerm,
so many people can't star=_=
YaMaO04
good song~!! :) :)

頑張って~!!

応援してます!
nimba_old
ふぁいてぃいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいいん
loli_milk
starstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstar<3
KSHR

Suzully wrote:

ゲストにはいつもどおりKSHRニーソ野郎をお迎えするつもり。
こら! ""が抜けてる! :x
S o r d a
starstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstar
Hinacle
KSHRニーソ野郎wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Topic Starter
Suzully
@ALL
Thank you<3
Hehe, what a inconvenience rule is this. :lol:

黒追加。
Magicphoenix
I like the new system !
It is very fun to see how everyone fills up their posts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PS : I like Minami >w<
zsr123
like this song.......................................................................................................................................
may I make a taiko diff ? :)
Topic Starter
Suzully

Magicphoenix wrote:

I like the new system !
It is very fun to see how everyone fills up their posts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




PS : I like Minami >w<
Pettanko :D

zsr123 wrote:

like this song.......................................................................................................................................
may I make a taiko diff ? :)
Yup, but please wait till move to pending.
No taiko for now.


Thanks star :)
zsr123
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

:D
Arlien_old
Waiting for easier diffs, such a wonderful song deserves them)
banvi


kioukiou
One of my fav song.
期待. :)
Topic Starter
Suzully
@Arlien
I know qinche also makes this song and it's bubbled now.
It maybe takes long time to finish mine, so i recommend you to play hers :D

@banvi, kioukiou
Thank you very much for star~! :)
Topic Starter
Suzully
Moved to pending!
Jupiter
All suggestions. >:(
[Normal]
none.
[KSHR]
SPOILER
00:19:133 (1) - Remove circle.
00:19:299 (2) - NC.
01:36:466 (2) - Remove circle.
[Insane]
SPOILER
00:47:633 - 1grid under.
01:11:299 - 1grid left.
01:18:466 - 1grid under.
03:54:133 - 1grid up.
03:57:966 - 1grif up.

Nice Map!!

Kitai!! :)
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:16:633(4) - NC
00:45:299(4) - ^
00:54:466(4) - ^
01:09:299(4) - ^
01:09:966(1) - Remove NC
01:17:799(5) - NC if u ignore this make the previous note a NC
01:44:633(3) - ^
02:01:133(4) - ^
02:24:466(5) - same as 01:17:799
03:47:966(3,4) - Aline (3) to (2) and (4) to (1)
03:51:299(3) - NC
04:06:633(4) - ^

KSHR:
00:17:799(5) - NC
00:20:466(5) - ^
00:25:966(4) - ^
00:36:633(4) - ^
00:39:299(4) - ^
00:43:299(4) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
00:48:633(4) - NC
00:52:633(6) - ^
01:05:799(4) - ^
01:09:966(4) - ^
01:12:633(5) - ^
01:16:466(4) - ^
01:18:966(1) - Take out a repeat. sounds better imo
01:43:299(4) - NC
01:45:966(4) - ^
01:49:966(4) - ^
01:55:299(4) - ^
02:02:133(4) - ^
02:12:466(4) - ^
02:16:633(4) - ^
02:19:299(5) - ^
02:25:633(1) - same as 01:18:996
03:10:633(5) - NC
03:13:799(5) - ^
03:33:799(4) - ^
03:37:966(4) - ^
03:40:633(5) - ^
03:44:466(4) - ^
03:51:299(4) - ^
03:55:133(4) - ^
04:01:966(5) - ^

Insane:
00:18:299(4) - NC
00:25:966(4) - ^
00:36:633(5) - ^
00:39:299(6) - ^
00:41:966(5) - ^
00:49:799(5) - ^
01:35:299(4) - ^
01:43:299(4) - ^
01:45:966(4) - ^
01:48:633(5) - ^
01:56:466(5) - ^
02:23:133(4) - ^
03:49:799(4) - ^
03:58:633(5) - ^

This is the best i can do. star from me and GL :D
Topic Starter
Suzully

Jupiter wrote:

All suggestions. >:(
[Normal]
none.
[KSHR]
SPOILER
00:19:133 (1) - Remove circle.
00:19:299 (2) - NC.
01:36:466 (2) - Remove circle.
[Insane]
SPOILER
00:47:633 - 1grid under. Nah.
01:11:299 - 1grid left. ^
01:18:466 - 1grid under. ^
03:54:133 - 1grid up. ^
03:57:966 - 1grif up. ^
Nice Map!!

Kitai!! :)
スライダーの点を指摘するときはその旨を書き添えた方がいいです。どの点かわからなくなってしまうので。
ノートを選択してCtrl+Cすれば01:11:133 (1) - のようにコピーされるのでmodを書くのが楽になると思います。
また、それをエディターでペーストすればそのノートへ飛べるので便利です。
kdsはKSHRさんの返事待ちで。

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:16:633(4) - NC Fixed.
00:45:299(4) - ^ Nah.
00:54:466(4) - ^ ^
01:09:299(4) - ^ This combo follows the music, not the vocal. Sorry.
01:09:966(1) - Remove NC ^
01:17:799(5) - NC if u ignore this make the previous note a NC Nah.
01:44:633(3) - ^ Fixed.
02:01:133(4) - ^ Nah.
02:24:466(5) - same as 01:17:799 ^
03:47:966(3,4) - Aline (3) to (2) and (4) to (1) Not symmetry formation fits here imo.
03:51:299(3) - NC Nah.
04:06:633(4) - ^ ^

Insane:
00:18:299(4) - NC Nah.
00:25:966(4) - ^ ^
00:36:633(5) - ^ ^
00:39:299(6) - ^ ^
00:41:966(5) - ^ ^
00:49:799(5) - ^ ^
01:35:299(4) - ^ ^
01:43:299(4) - ^ ^
01:45:966(4) - ^ ^
01:48:633(5) - ^ ^
01:56:466(5) - ^ ^
02:23:133(4) - ^ ^
03:49:799(4) - ^ ^
03:58:633(5) - ^ ^
Current combo length is fine imo.

This is the best i can do. star from me and GL :D
Thanks for mod and star :)
Jupiter

Suzully wrote:

スライダーの点を指摘するときはその旨を書き添えた方がいいです。どの点かわからなくなってしまうので。
ノートを選択してCtrl+Cすれば01:11:133 (1) - のようにコピーされるのでmodを書くのが楽になると思います。
また、それをエディターでペーストすればそのノートへ飛べるので便利です。
ご指摘有難う御座います!
今後の参考にさせて頂きます。
Ranked 頑張ってください~
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue~ :)

全て提案程度ですので気に入らないものがあったら無視してください~。

SPOILER
[General]
fine :) (強いて言うなら、全ての難易度のLetterBoxのチェックを外してください)

[Insane]
01:42:466 (2) - waypointを移動 (x:272 y:152)
01:43:299 (4) - ^ (x:136 y:248)
01:52:966 (1) - new combo追加
02:00:466 (1) - waypointを移動 (x:466 y:192)
02:01:133 (3) - ^ (x:51 y:192)
02:01:799 (5) - ^ (x:256 y:393)
02:02:466 (7) - ^ (x:256 y:-14)
 * waypointを修正した場合、noteのstackがずれてしまうのでそちらも一緒に修正してください。
02:11:299 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
02:19:299 (1) - ^
02:37:633 (6) - 終点にfinish追加
03:27:799 - noteを追加してclap追加
03:34:466 (4) - endpointを移動 (x:152 y:104)
04:05:966 (3) - 始点のfinishを削除 (なんだか違和感がある気がします)


[カサカサKSHR]
00:19:133 (9,1) - new comboを入れ替え
00:21:966 (1) - finishを追加
00:57:966 (1) - finishを削除してclapを追加
00:58:133 (2) - finishを追加
01:30:966 - 緑線を削除
02:04:633 (1) - finishを削除してclapを追加
02:04:799 (2) - finishを追加
02:42:799 - 緑線を削除
03:51:300 (7) - new comboを追加


[Normal]
00:29:633 (1,2) - new comboを入れ替え
00:37:966 (1) - waypointを(x:296 y:380)に、endpointを(x:376 y:328)に移動
00:39:299 (3) - waypointを(x:392 y:84)に、endpointを(x:308 y:136)に移動
02:08:299 (4,1) - new comboを入れ替え

nice song and mapset~ ></
go go rank!
KSHR
SPOILER

Jupiter wrote:

[KSHR]
00:19:133 (1) - Remove circle.
00:19:299 (2) - NC.
01:36:466 (2) - Remove circle.
sry.. not fixed


Byakugan249 wrote:

KSHR:
00:17:799(5) - NC nah
00:20:466(5) - ^ ^
00:25:966(4) - ^ ^
00:36:633(4) - ^ ^
00:39:299(4) - ^ ^
00:43:299(4) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC ^
00:48:633(4) - NC ^
00:52:633(6) - ^ ^
01:05:799(4) - ^ ^
01:09:966(4) - ^ ^
01:12:633(5) - ^ ^
01:16:466(4) - ^ ^
01:18:966(1) - Take out a repeat. sounds better imo ^
01:43:299(4) - NC ^
01:45:966(4) - ^ ^
01:49:966(4) - ^ ^
01:55:299(4) - ^ ^
02:02:133(4) - ^ ^
02:12:466(4) - ^ ^
02:16:633(4) - ^ ^
02:19:299(5) - ^ ^
02:25:633(1) - same as 01:18:996 ^
03:10:633(5) - NC ^
03:13:799(5) - ^ ^
03:33:799(4) - ^ ^
03:37:966(4) - ^ ^
03:40:633(5) - ^ ^
03:44:466(4) - ^ ^
03:51:299(4) - ^ fixed
03:55:133(4) - ^ nah
04:01:966(5) - ^ ^

Ryafuka wrote:

[カサカサKSHR] モザイクで見えません
00:19:133 (9,1) - new comboを入れ替え nah
00:21:966 (1) - finishを追加
>次のスライダーの頭にfinishが入っているので、ここにもfinishを入れるとうるさくなってしまうと思ったため修正しませんでした
00:57:966 (1) - finishを削除してclapを追加 nah
00:58:133 (2) - finishを追加 ^
01:30:966 - 緑線を削除 fixed
02:04:633 (1) - finishを削除してclapを追加 nah
02:04:799 (2) - finishを追加 ^
02:42:799 - 緑線を削除 fixed
03:51:300 (7) - new comboを追加 ^
thank you for modding :)


>Suzullyさん
今回は早目に気付けて良かった・・w

Download: Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (Suzully) [KSHR].osu
Topic Starter
Suzully

Ryafuka wrote:

hi~ ></
from my modding queue~ :)

全て提案程度ですので気に入らないものがあったら無視してください~。

SPOILER
[General]
fine :) (強いて言うなら、全ての難易度のLetterBoxのチェックを外してください) Fixed. 割とLetterBoxの演出は好きだけどBGの文字が隠れてしまうね・・・。

[Insane]
01:42:466 (2) - waypointを移動 (x:272 y:152) Nah.
01:43:299 (4) - ^ (x:136 y:248) ^
01:52:966 (1) - new combo追加 (4)に追加しました。
02:00:466 (1) - waypointを移動 (x:466 y:192) 4つとも似た感じに修正しました。
02:01:133 (3) - ^ (x:51 y:192) ^
02:01:799 (5) - ^ (x:256 y:393) ^
02:02:466 (7) - ^ (x:256 y:-14) ^
 * waypointを修正した場合、noteのstackがずれてしまうのでそちらも一緒に修正してください。
02:11:299 (1) - 始点にfinish追加 Nah.
02:19:299 (1) - ^ Nah.
02:37:633 (6) - 終点にfinish追加 Fixed.
03:27:799 - noteを追加してclap追加 Nah.
03:34:466 (4) - endpointを移動 (x:152 y:104) Nah.
04:05:966 (3) - 始点のfinishを削除 (なんだか違和感がある気がします) Fixed.

[Normal]
00:29:633 (1,2) - new comboを入れ替え Nah.
00:37:966 (1) - waypointを(x:296 y:380)に、endpointを(x:376 y:328)に移動 Nah.
00:39:299 (3) - waypointを(x:392 y:84)に、endpointを(x:308 y:136)に移動 Nah.
02:08:299 (4,1) - new comboを入れ替え Nah.

nice song and mapset~ ></
go go rank!
modどうもですー! :)


@カサカサ
修正は時間のあるときでいいのよ :3
JoJo
:) Ganbatte >w</
Topic Starter
Suzully

JoJo wrote:

:) Ganbatte >w</
Arigatou >w</~
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Nice song
In general
With high BPM,your BG isn't fit with colour.Too brilliant

Insane
00:18:966(7) slider's end one grid down
01:07:113(5) set in X:60 Y:144 in order to parallel slider(3)'s end?
04:03:216(6) two gird up parallel(2)

KSHR
00:55:133(5) finish in head
03:22:966(2)~(3) add finish

Normal
00:54:466(4) one grid up or 00:55:799(6) one grid down
03:19:133(3) one grid up

I can't find seriously problems,so take in advance.Thank you.Today,I star your map.
S h i o n
Hi. Suzully <3 (As you have requested in my modding queue.)


General
- Make all diff start at the same period(except the guest diff) ?


Normal
01:17:300 (4) - New combo


KSHR
00:46:300 (4) - Confusing now. Move it stack on 00:46:633 (1) ?
01:13:966 (1,2) - Should be 1/3 sliders.
02:20:633 (1,2) - ^
03:41:966 (1,2) - ^
04:03:300 (1,2) - ^


Insane
00:38:299 (2,3,4) - Try not being line with (1) to have a better flow ?
01:05:550 (3,4,5) - Kinda noisy and they don't quite fit the music . Consider deleting (3) and (5) ?
01:19:299 (5) - Map something between this note and the spinner followed ? Now it is kinda strange because you should 'wait' some time and then have a spinner.
---> 02:25:966 (8) - Such pause is nice I think because there is no spinner followed but a note and music itself turns into something likea rest.
01:20:633 (1) - It should end on 01:23:299 IMO.
01:41:133 (x) - This is a heavy beat as the violin can be heard clearly. How about add one note stacked on the end of (2) ?
02:04:633 (9) - New combo
02:09:383 (4) - Delete this note and then stack (5) on (3) ?
02:12:216 (3,4,5) - The same as 01:05:550 (3,4,5)
03:07:800 (2) - This silence is completely confusing and meanless. Make them at least 25% and that can do the same thing as you wished.
03:20:466 (1,2) - Oh, this 2 notes is overmapped I think.
03:29:133 (1,2) - To be not so confused, you'd better remove this two notes because background music here is so hard to have a accurate control.Furethermore, you have a big stream here.
04:02:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Oh , this pattern will kill most people by mistaking them nto a 1/4 stream.
04:05:799 (1,2,3) - This does not fit the musci at all. Remove (1) (2) and make slider (3) 1/2 sonner. If you agree, you may remap this part.

:)
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Suzully

kissfly wrote:

Nice song
In general
With high BPM,your BG isn't fit with colour.Too brilliant Not so brilliant imo, and there aren't other good BGs because this anime is really old. :cry:

Insane
00:18:966(7) slider's end one grid down Fixed.
01:07:113(5) set in X:60 Y:144 in order to parallel slider(3)'s end? Nah.
04:03:216(6) two gird up parallel(2) Oops, fixed.

Normal
00:54:466(4) one grid up or 00:55:799(6) one grid down Fixed.
03:19:133(3) one grid up Fixed.

I can't find seriously problems,so take in advance.Thank you.Today,I star your map.

S h i o n wrote:

Hi. Suzully <3 (As you have requested in my modding queue.) Hi S h i o n~


General
- Make all diff start at the same period(except the guest diff) ? The start of this song sounds like stream, but in easiest diff it doesn't fit so I put spinner instead.


Normal
01:17:300 (4) - New combo Nah.

Insane
00:38:299 (2,3,4) - Try not being line with (1) to have a better flow ? Nah.
01:05:550 (3,4,5) - Kinda noisy and they don't quite fit the music . Consider deleting (3) and (5) ? Nah.
01:19:299 (5) - Map something between this note and the spinner followed ? Now it is kinda strange because you should 'wait' some time and then have a spinner. Nah.
---> 02:25:966 (8) - Such pause is nice I think because there is no spinner followed but a note and music itself turns into something likea rest.
01:20:633 (1) - It should end on 01:23:299 IMO. It following the vocal.
01:41:133 (x) - This is a heavy beat as the violin can be heard clearly. How about add one note stacked on the end of (2) ? You are right and that makes the flow good. Changed pattern.
02:04:633 (9) - New combo Nah.
02:09:383 (4) - Delete this note and then stack (5) on (3) ? Nah.
02:12:216 (3,4,5) - The same as 01:05:550 (3,4,5) Nah.
03:07:800 (2) - This silence is completely confusing and meanless. Make them at least 25% and that can do the same thing as you wished. Fixed.
03:20:466 (1,2) - Oh, this 2 notes is overmapped I think. Changed pattern.
03:29:133 (1,2) - To be not so confused, you'd better remove this two notes because background music here is so hard to have a accurate control.Furethermore, you have a big stream here. The notes should follow the music imo so not fixed.
04:02:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Oh , this pattern will kill most people by mistaking them nto a 1/4 stream. This 1/3 stream is shown by DS. Not so hard to read them.
04:05:799 (1,2,3) - This does not fit the musci at all. Remove (1) (2) and make slider (3) 1/2 sonner. If you agree, you may remap this part. Fixed.

:)
Good luck ~
Thanks for mod and star~ :)
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:58:133 - add a note ?
01:32:799 (2) - I suggest start at 01:32:633 or add note there , it is hard to read when the slider start now..
02:04:799 - add a note ? fit the song better
02:43:133 - break start here ?
03:49:966 (1) - start at 03:49:799 ? I think it is good to follow vocal here
03:55:300 (3) - start at 03:55:133 ? sound better but kinda too hard to play..
04:09:966 (1) - end at 04:13:799 and add finish ?

[KSHR]
00:21:633 - add a note ? here sound a drum
00:56:633 (1,2,3,4) - kinda hard to play.. make it like 00:51:300 (2,3,4,5) ?
02:43:133 - break start here ?
03:28:966 - add a note here plz , or many people may click (5) too early
03:41:300 (7,8) - this is too noisy.. remove some clap or volume down plz..
03:49:466 - add note here , to follow the vocal , and easier to play
04:02:633 (7,8) - noisy..
04:09:966 (1) - end at 04:13:799 and add finish ?

[Insane]
00:28:466 - add note
01:13:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is very confusing , make some slider first to let player know the rhyme first plz
02:20:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:43:133 - break start here ?
04:09:966 (1) - end at 04:13:799 and add finish ?

that's all
good luck
KSHR

kissfly wrote:

KSHR
00:55:133(5) finish in head fixed
03:22:966(2)~(3) add finish nah

S h i o n wrote:

KSHR
00:46:300 (4) - Confusing now. Move it stack on 00:46:633 (1) ? hm.. I'll change other modders say this...
01:13:966 (1,2) - Should be 1/3 sliders. ok, changed
02:20:633 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:41:966 (1,2) - ^ ^
04:03:300 (1,2) - ^ ^

wcx19911123 wrote:

[KSHR]
00:21:633 - add a note ? here sound a drum fixed
00:56:633 (1,2,3,4) - kinda hard to play.. make it like 00:51:300 (2,3,4,5) ? chaned
02:43:133 - break start here ? I depend on the judging of Suzully
03:28:966 - add a note here plz , or many people may click (5) too early fixed
03:41:300 (7,8) - this is too noisy.. remove some clap or volume down plz.. ok, removed claps of head
03:49:466 - add note here , to follow the vocal , and easier to play fixed
04:02:633 (7,8) - noisy.. fixed
04:09:966 (1) - end at 04:13:799 and add finish ? I depend on the judging of Suzully
Download: Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (Suzully) [KSHR].osu
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