spboxer3 wrote:
[SamiPale]
後頭的whistle調小聲些!!
玩的时候因为注意力问题音量在脑部会自动降低20%也算调小了Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
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玩的时候因为注意力问题音量在脑部会自动降低20%也算调小了Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
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nice song.
and have a star here.
will mod if i'm free
Like [Karen] diff.
and have a star here.
will mod if i'm free
Like [Karen] diff.
[General]
This difficulty spread doesn't seem so good. If you would add another easier difficulty then it might help, or if you don't want to do that, remove one harder difficulty.
[Easy]
00:24:264 (3) - New combo.
00:45:057 (1) - You should start this spinner 1/4 later like you did with the others, with keeping the same end.
01:09:885 (1) - ^ But since this one is not so long, you can skip it.
[Hard]
This difficulty totally look like Insane, not Hard.
01:24:264 (x) - I totally think that you should add a note here.
[Karen]
01:23:644 (1) - Remove new combo.
[SamiPale]
00:28:402 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 back, with the same end of now.
01:23:851 (1) - This single combo looks weird to me.
01:24:471 (1) - Don't end this spinner on a different place compared to the other difficulties. Make it the same and silence it.
Not bad, have a star.
This difficulty spread doesn't seem so good. If you would add another easier difficulty then it might help, or if you don't want to do that, remove one harder difficulty.
[Easy]
00:24:264 (3) - New combo.
00:45:057 (1) - You should start this spinner 1/4 later like you did with the others, with keeping the same end.
01:09:885 (1) - ^ But since this one is not so long, you can skip it.
[Hard]
This difficulty totally look like Insane, not Hard.
01:24:264 (x) - I totally think that you should add a note here.
[Karen]
01:23:644 (1) - Remove new combo.
[SamiPale]
00:28:402 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 back, with the same end of now.
01:23:851 (1) - This single combo looks weird to me.
01:24:471 (1) - Don't end this spinner on a different place compared to the other difficulties. Make it the same and silence it.
Not bad, have a star.
When I say to put a slider start or circle somewhere, it's because that note is very important in the rhythm of the song. By mapping it using a slider end or a slider tick, or not mapping it at all, it makes the rhythm awkward. It's not imperative that you fix them, but if you don't particularly care about the rhythm there, or it doesn't make a difference to you, please change it. It makes a huge difference to me.
There's a LOT of 1/2 offbeat sliders (start on red tick, end on white tick) in the map, which already make it terribly awkward to play.
[easy]
I really think these spinners have notes after them far too early:
http://puu.sh/3R3z 1/3rd the recommended time is just a bit too little.
00:45:005 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
01:09:833 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
These are just bad form. move the spinner earlier, and remove the note that is in the way.
[normal]
00:07:506 - put a circle or slider start here
00:08:540 - ^
00:14:747 - ^
00:18:471 (3) - shorten to 1/1
00:25:920 - put a circle or slider start here
00:27:161 - ^
00:37:299 - ^
00:41:230 - ^
00:41:644 - ^
00:44:540 - ^
[hard]
AR 8 on hard? IMO hard should never go beyond AR 7. If you need to go beyond that, it's not a hard.
00:40:609 (7) - make 1/2 longer
00:56:333 (6,7,8) - make 7 and 8 start on a white tick.
[karen]
01:06:471 - put a circle or slider start here
01:19:713 - ^
[sami]
well that was perfect...
[kiai]
Kiai times are inconsistent. Double check that they are correct.
There's a LOT of 1/2 offbeat sliders (start on red tick, end on white tick) in the map, which already make it terribly awkward to play.
[easy]
I really think these spinners have notes after them far too early:
http://puu.sh/3R3z 1/3rd the recommended time is just a bit too little.
00:45:005 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
01:09:833 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
These are just bad form. move the spinner earlier, and remove the note that is in the way.
[normal]
00:07:506 - put a circle or slider start here
00:08:540 - ^
00:14:747 - ^
00:18:471 (3) - shorten to 1/1
00:25:920 - put a circle or slider start here
00:27:161 - ^
00:37:299 - ^
00:41:230 - ^
00:41:644 - ^
00:44:540 - ^
[hard]
AR 8 on hard? IMO hard should never go beyond AR 7. If you need to go beyond that, it's not a hard.
00:40:609 (7) - make 1/2 longer
00:56:333 (6,7,8) - make 7 and 8 start on a white tick.
[karen]
01:06:471 - put a circle or slider start here
01:19:713 - ^
[sami]
well that was perfect...
[kiai]
Kiai times are inconsistent. Double check that they are correct.
Topic Starter
osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
This difficulty spread doesn't seem so good. If you would add another easier difficulty then it might help, or if you don't want to do that, remove one harder difficulty.
Will make the hard easier.
[Easy]
00:24:264 (3) - New combo.
00:45:057 (1) - You should start this spinner 1/4 later like you did with the others, with keeping the same end.
01:09:885 (1) - ^ But since this one is not so long, you can skip it.
All fixed.
[Hard]
This difficulty totally look like Insane, not Hard.
01:24:264 (x) - I totally think that you should add a note here.
X,sorry disagreed.
[Karen]
01:23:644 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed!
[SamiPale]
00:28:402 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 back, with the same end of now.
01:23:851 (1) - This single combo looks weird to me.
01:24:471 (1) - Don't end this spinner on a different place compared to the other difficulties. Make it the same and silence it.
Leave to Sami.
ziin wrote:
When I say to put a slider start or circle somewhere, it's because that note is very important in the rhythm of the song. By mapping it using a slider end or a slider tick, or not mapping it at all, it makes the rhythm awkward. It's not imperative that you fix them, but if you don't particularly care about the rhythm there, or it doesn't make a difference to you, please change it. It makes a huge difference to me.
There's a LOT of 1/2 offbeat sliders (start on red tick, end on white tick) in the map, which already make it terribly awkward to play.
No!I don't think a slider start from red tick is a terrible stuff.Everyone have their rhythm taste.I just wanna to say don't play it if you don't kije this style or rhythm.Mostly I'm follow the vocal.
[easy]
I really think these spinners have notes after them far too early:
http://puu.sh/3R3z 1/3rd the recommended time is just a bit too little.
00:45:005 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
01:09:833 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
These are just bad form. move the spinner earlier, and remove the note that is in the way.
Already fixed.
[normal]
00:07:506 - put a circle or slider start here
00:08:540 - ^
00:14:747 - ^
00:18:471 (3) - shorten to 1/1
00:25:920 - put a circle or slider start here
00:27:161 - ^
00:37:299 - ^
00:41:230 - ^
00:41:644 - ^
00:44:540 - ^
Sorry all reject.
[hard]
AR 8 on hard? IMO hard should never go beyond AR 7. If you need to go beyond that, it's not a hard. Well,fixed
00:40:609 (7) - make 1/2 longer X.
00:56:333 (6,7,8) - make 7 and 8 start on a white tick. Fixed!
[karen]
01:06:471 - put a circle or slider start here
01:19:713 - ^ Karen said he won't change it.
[kiai]
Kiai times are inconsistent. Double check that they are correct.
X,Sami is a guest diff.Due to respect to mapper's style,I won't change it for now.
Thanks for modding![Shalon] wrote:
Long time no see, kanpakyin.
Easy
01:01:506 (1,2) - make like this?
X.
Normal
00:07:092 (2) - down 1 grid in tiny grid level?
00:19:506 (1) - down 1 grid? X,I was mapping this without grid snap.
Taiko
Map seems small overmapped for me, but that's ok.
Hard
01:19:713 (1,2) - make it a slider? Fixed in other way~
[Easy]
First of all, I love your beat's placements and sliders' shapes. Good work for this
I'd say that you should increase your Approach Rate of 2 ticks; your value is a bit low, considering also that you're not using a Large Circle's size. Plus, at the end of the spinners, a new play may confuse it with the next circle's approach rate. (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123288)
Finally, I'd complain those spinners [00:28:402 (1) - 00:45:161 (1) - 00:51:575 (1) - 01:09:988 (1) -] , because their recovery time with the next hitobject is really short and I don't really reccomend it for an easier difficulty. So..please reduce them or replace them with some hitobjects.
[Normal]
01:12:471 (3,4) - Oh well this stack in this part of the song is quite confusing. I suggest you to add a new combo on (4) in order to make it more readable.
[Taiko Oni]
Wow, I had a lot of fun by playing it xD. There are just two problems... there is no BG and you didn't add the video here.
I checked the file osu and I found:
so I guess you add the BG but you didn't upload it. >_< Also, set the Stack Leniency to the deafult one.
[Hard]
00:10:195 (1) - What is this following? Previous rhythm was ok but this is just weird. I expected its start 00:09:988 here ><
00:28:402 (1) - I suggest you to make this end on a white tick, which will make the next stuff more intuitive. (in other words, reduce it of 1/2)
00:47:437 (3) - I'd remove a repeat here, ending a slider on a blue tick is not really good.
01:23:851 (3) - Aww, vocal voice is prevalent here. Please make it 1/2 longer? Or add some 1/2 bpm distant hitcircles
[Karen]
really good, I can just complain this: 01:23:851 (7) That repeat sounds a bit odd considering the previous rhythm. I suggest you to remove it and to make the slider end on the with tick. Then, add a hitcircle on the next red tick.
[SamiPale]
Just a little suggestion for this 00:28:402 (1,1) - Change their duration and position as in the timeline? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123307
First of all, I love your beat's placements and sliders' shapes. Good work for this
I'd say that you should increase your Approach Rate of 2 ticks; your value is a bit low, considering also that you're not using a Large Circle's size. Plus, at the end of the spinners, a new play may confuse it with the next circle's approach rate. (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123288)
Finally, I'd complain those spinners [00:28:402 (1) - 00:45:161 (1) - 00:51:575 (1) - 01:09:988 (1) -] , because their recovery time with the next hitobject is really short and I don't really reccomend it for an easier difficulty. So..please reduce them or replace them with some hitobjects.
[Normal]
01:12:471 (3,4) - Oh well this stack in this part of the song is quite confusing. I suggest you to add a new combo on (4) in order to make it more readable.
[Taiko Oni]
Wow, I had a lot of fun by playing it xD. There are just two problems... there is no BG and you didn't add the video here.
I checked the file osu and I found:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Taiko BG 800x600.jpg"
so I guess you add the BG but you didn't upload it. >_< Also, set the Stack Leniency to the deafult one.
[Hard]
00:10:195 (1) - What is this following? Previous rhythm was ok but this is just weird. I expected its start 00:09:988 here ><
00:28:402 (1) - I suggest you to make this end on a white tick, which will make the next stuff more intuitive. (in other words, reduce it of 1/2)
00:47:437 (3) - I'd remove a repeat here, ending a slider on a blue tick is not really good.
01:23:851 (3) - Aww, vocal voice is prevalent here. Please make it 1/2 longer? Or add some 1/2 bpm distant hitcircles
[Karen]
really good, I can just complain this: 01:23:851 (7) That repeat sounds a bit odd considering the previous rhythm. I suggest you to remove it and to make the slider end on the with tick. Then, add a hitcircle on the next red tick.
[SamiPale]
Just a little suggestion for this 00:28:402 (1,1) - Change their duration and position as in the timeline? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123307
Fixed spinner's issue like Armin said and others like Andrea said, thx
Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
Topic Starter
Thanks a lots!Armin wrote:
[Easy]
First of all, I love your beat's placements and sliders' shapes. Good work for this
I'd say that you should increase your Approach Rate of 2 ticks; your value is a bit low, considering also that you're not using a Large Circle's size. Plus, at the end of the spinners, a new play may confuse it with the next circle's approach rate. (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123288)
Finally, I'd complain those spinners [00:28:402 (1) - 00:45:161 (1) - 00:51:575 (1) - 01:09:988 (1) -] , because their recovery time with the next hitobject is really short and I don't really reccomend it for an easier difficulty. So..please reduce them or replace them with some hitobjects. Fixed something here.
[Normal]
01:12:471 (3,4) - Oh well this stack in this part of the song is quite confusing. I suggest you to add a new combo on (4) in order to make it more readable. Fixed!
[Taiko Oni]
Wow, I had a lot of fun by playing it xD. There are just two problems... there is no BG and you didn't add the video here.
I checked the file osu and I found:[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Taiko BG 800x600.jpg"
so I guess you add the BG but you didn't upload it. >_< Also, set the Stack Leniency to the deafult one.
D: I have already done a full submission D: what it is happen T_T I will do it again later.
[Hard]
00:10:195 (1) - What is this following? Previous rhythm was ok but this is just weird. I expected its start 00:09:988 here >< I guess a triplet is not really weird here..
00:28:402 (1) - I suggest you to make this end on a white tick, which will make the next stuff more intuitive. (in other words, reduce it of 1/2) Fixed!
00:47:437 (3) - I'd remove a repeat here, ending a slider on a blue tick is not really good. Fixed!
01:23:851 (3) - Aww, vocal voice is prevalent here. Please make it 1/2 longer? Or add some 1/2 bpm distant hitcircles Fixed!
[attachment=0:25083]FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [Karen].osu[/attachment:25083][Taiko]
00:10:609 - kkddd
00:16:609 - ddd K
00:20:333 - K ddk d
01:13:092 - ddkdk
01:13:920 - kk dk k
01:24:768 - a long sound without drum sound so I don't prefer slider, try K (spinner~~~~~~~~)
Quite nice for me. 7.5/10
[SamiPale]
nice!
[Bakaying]
00:17:851 (4) - I prefer a more curved slider to fit (4).
[Hard]
00:02:747 (3) - it looks more symmetrical when it goes left a bit.
00:03:368 (1,3) - stack
00:20:954 (2) - down ~10 pixel
00:#6:885 (4,5,6,1) - try to make a square =d
00:44:540 (4) - spacing
01:19:506 (1,2,3) - ^
[Normal]
00:38:126 (7) - if you map without grid snap it would be better to fix this spacing
00:45:782 (3) - try this
overall nice, star.
GOLDEN FALLING BIRDDDDDDD : D
00:10:609 - kkddd
00:16:609 - ddd K
00:20:333 - K ddk d
01:13:092 - ddkdk
01:13:920 - kk dk k
01:24:768 - a long sound without drum sound so I don't prefer slider, try K (spinner~~~~~~~~)
Quite nice for me. 7.5/10
[SamiPale]
nice!
[Bakaying]
00:17:851 (4) - I prefer a more curved slider to fit (4).
208,68,17851,2,0,B|160:112|204:164,1,100,0|8
[Hard]
00:02:747 (3) - it looks more symmetrical when it goes left a bit.
00:03:368 (1,3) - stack
00:20:954 (2) - down ~10 pixel
00:#6:885 (4,5,6,1) - try to make a square =d
00:44:540 (4) - spacing
01:19:506 (1,2,3) - ^
[Normal]
00:38:126 (7) - if you map without grid snap it would be better to fix this spacing
00:45:782 (3) - try this
92,168,45782,2,0,B|92:219|92:219|56:248|62:298,1,120,2|8
overall nice, star.
GOLDEN FALLING BIRDDDDDDD : D
from my que
[General]
max video size is 800x600 (not sure
others fine
[Easy]
00:15:368 (1,1) - too far
00:53:851 (1,2,3,4) - confusing
[Normal]
00:06:678 (1,2) - to a slider
00:36:885 (5) - kinda hard to read when it end
[Hard]
00:28:195 (6) - try to make this in the middle of the screen ?
00:35:437 (2) - http://puu.sh/3X0n
00:49:506 - circle
01:03:988 (8) - hidden back arrow
01:18:885 (3) - http://puu.sh/3X0E
01:23:851 (3,4,5) - more jump ?
[Karen]
fine
[SamiPale]
00:29:851 (1,1) - too far
01:24:471 (1) - circle then spinner from 01:24:575 ?
nice map
[General]
max video size is 800x600 (not sure
others fine
[Easy]
00:15:368 (1,1) - too far
00:53:851 (1,2,3,4) - confusing
[Normal]
00:06:678 (1,2) - to a slider
00:36:885 (5) - kinda hard to read when it end
[Hard]
00:28:195 (6) - try to make this in the middle of the screen ?
00:35:437 (2) - http://puu.sh/3X0n
00:49:506 - circle
01:03:988 (8) - hidden back arrow
01:18:885 (3) - http://puu.sh/3X0E
01:23:851 (3,4,5) - more jump ?
[Karen]
fine
[SamiPale]
00:29:851 (1,1) - too far
01:24:471 (1) - circle then spinner from 01:24:575 ?
nice map
石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍
石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍
石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍
(無誤
石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍
石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍石頭凍
(無誤
Topic Starter
wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]
max video size is 800x600 (not sure Fixed!
others fine
[Easy]
00:15:368 (1,1) - too far reduce the spinner lenght
00:53:851 (1,2,3,4) - confusing X,3 reverse won't make confused
[Normal]
00:06:678 (1,2) - to a slider X
00:36:885 (5) - kinda hard to read when it end X
[Hard]
00:28:195 (6) - try to make this in the middle of the screen ? It's fine now.
00:35:437 (2) - http://puu.sh/3X0n k.
00:49:506 - circle X
01:03:988 (8) - hidden back arrow X,Please use Default skin during modding!
01:18:885 (3) - http://puu.sh/3X0E X
01:23:851 (3,4,5) - more jump ? X
JOJO告诉我
KPY是鬼畜MAPPER
KPY是鬼畜MAPPER
thx~wcx19911123 wrote:
[SamiPale]
00:29:851 (1,1) - too faroh...far?how to far with two spinnerCan't find another way to place notes so I want to keep it for now
01:24:471 (1) - circle then spinner from 01:24:575 ? that's a good way, but I want to keep my style
nice map!! 
I like this song~
Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)
実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません
star~
I like this song~
Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)
実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません
star~
se-sukeEila wrote:
nice map!!
I like this song~
Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)
実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません
Sorry,for my very poor English
star~
It made a mistake.
Double contribution
sorry
KayeSara
hihi~
一些建議:
[General]
fine.
[Easy]
00:53:851(1,2) - 把(1)變成一個note, (2)折返2次并移至00:54:264
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適
[Normal]
all fine.
[Hard]
01:07:402(7) - 還不如在紅線放個note...
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適
[Karen]
00:27:368(4) - 我覺得用00:25:920(5)的開頭完全遮住會顯得比較工整
00:28:816(3) - 加個折返?
00:29:644(3) - ^
這個是我覺得這里最好的diff了
[SamiPale]
00:28:402(1,1) - 有任何必要要用2個spinner嗎...
00:57:885(x) - 加個note比較好
01:10:816(1) - whistle.
01:11:437(T) - 跟另外幾個diff統一一下,這里加個kiai burst吧
01:24:471(1) - 這里扔個note,把spinner開頭放后邊藍線比較好
that's all
so
star~
一些建議:
[General]
fine.
[Easy]
00:53:851(1,2) - 把(1)變成一個note, (2)折返2次并移至00:54:264
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適
[Normal]
all fine.
[Hard]
01:07:402(7) - 還不如在紅線放個note...
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適
[Karen]
00:27:368(4) - 我覺得用00:25:920(5)的開頭完全遮住會顯得比較工整
00:28:816(3) - 加個折返?
00:29:644(3) - ^
這個是我覺得這里最好的diff了
[SamiPale]
00:28:402(1,1) - 有任何必要要用2個spinner嗎...
00:57:885(x) - 加個note比較好
01:10:816(1) - whistle.
01:11:437(T) - 跟另外幾個diff統一一下,這里加個kiai burst吧
01:24:471(1) - 這里扔個note,把spinner開頭放后邊藍線比較好
that's all
so
star~
3q~JauiPlaY wrote:
[SamiPale]
00:28:402(1,1) - 有任何必要要用2個spinner嗎... 好
00:57:885(x) - 加個note比較好 不好
01:10:816(1) - whistle. 不好
01:11:437(T) - 跟另外幾個diff統一一下,這里加個kiai burst吧 好
01:24:471(1) - 這里扔個note,把spinner開頭放后邊藍線比較好 不好
Download: FictionJunction - Stone Cold (TV Size) (kanpakyin) [SamiPale].osu
Topic Starter
Sorry for reject most of them :/JauiPlaY wrote:
[Easy]
00:53:851(1,2) - 把(1)變成一個note, (2)折返2次并移至00:54:264 Fixed in other way!
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適 Will consider it later,keep this for now.
[Hard]
01:07:402(7) - 還不如在紅線放個note... 明顯這裏是2連比較合適.
01:24:678(1) - 這個spinner和normal一樣在01:24:575開始比較合適 Same as easy!
thanks 鴨鴨JauiPlaY wrote:
[Karen]
00:27:368(4) - 我覺得用00:25:920(5)的開頭完全遮住會顯得比較工整kpy help me fix this
00:28:816(3) - 加個折返?no
00:29:644(3) - ^no
這個是我覺得這里最好的diff了 thx基片鴨><
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[General]
I can't find any issue.
No kds please.
Good luck~
[General]
Combo color looks too similar with each other for me.
Chenge them more dark one?
Nothing to say.
I think that newbie will be confused by the pattern like as 00:02:954 (2,3)...
However it's maybe not big issue because there is other easiest diff.
- 00:36:885 (5) - It's hard to read for newbie imo. Reduce repeat like this?
- 01:21:161 (2,3) - I feel something strange rhythm. How about...change (2) to circle, and move (3) to 01:21:368, and then add a note at 01:21:988 stacking with 01:22:195 (5)?
Nice mapset!
What I can suggest is only one thing.
- 00:04:609 (4) - Add a new combo?
This is also nice mapset!
Haha I can't mod well cuz both are perfect
- 00:28:402 (1) - Start it at 00:28:195?
I can't find any issue.
No kds please.
Good luck~
ThanksSuzully wrote:
[Karen]
Nice mapset!
What I can suggest is only one thing.
- 00:04:609 (4) - Add a new combo?
kpy help me fixed this orz
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!Suzully wrote:
[General][Normal]
Combo color looks too similar with each other for me.
Chenge them more dark one? Will consider it if someone mention this again but not now.
I think that newbie will be confused by the pattern like as 00:02:954 (2,3)...
However it's maybe not big issue because there is other easiest diff. I assume normal is for some player between Newbie and middle,so yeah~[Hard]
- 00:36:885 (5) - It's hard to read for newbie imo. Reduce repeat like this? ^ You know it xD
- 01:21:161 (2,3) - I feel something strange rhythm. How about...change (2) to circle, and move (3) to 01:21:368, and then add a note at 01:21:988 stacking with 01:22:195 (5)? X.
I l~ove this song.
But, you should add "Sacred Seven" to tags.
But, you should add "Sacred Seven" to tags.
Topic Starter
That's unnecessary because I have already put it in source.UnderminE wrote:
I l~ove this song.
But, you should add "Sacred Seven" to tags.
ThanksSuzully wrote:
[SamiPale]
This is also nice mapset!
Haha I can't mod well cuz both are perfect
- 00:28:402 (1) - Start it at 00:28:195?
kpy help me fixed this orz
FictionJunction <3
我來射星的
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After some recheck,it's good enough for me.
Keep it up,bubbled.
Keep it up,bubbled.
nice
Just mattered about Taiko Oni's Kiai end point but whatever :3
Keep going >_>
Keep going >_>
sorry gonna have to Design mod
Normal
00:36:673 (4,5,6) - this pattern felt wrong, i think its because of the repeating slider, it repeats even when the vocals are on a break, even though all the other times you have used a specific pattern of timing to help follow the vocals, that made this play really bad a feel odd
same comment for next time the vocals do the same pattern too, it just really dont suit the song having constant 1/2s.
00:56:121 - might flow better to have a note here, when playing i auto wanted to play one because i could feel the song building up.
Hard
00:05:225 (1,2) - having these as 1/4 sliders played really bad, it would play much better if you made it flow with your other patterns by giving it 1/2 silders
00:10:811 (2,3,4) - this triple pattern felt forced, i cant find a reason why you used it?
tbh i cant find a reason for quite a lot of the 1/4 triples?
00:56:121 (5) - this small spacing in the middle if a jump pattern really got me, infact i didnt even notice the note when playing, maybe give this more space so it follows your jump pattern
Karen
00:09:259 (3,4,5,6) - the spacing of the (3,4) compared to (4,5,6) i see no reason to see the different spacing?
(suggestion) 00:26:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stacked notes in this became rather hard to read due to the timing imo, maybe take a look at this part again
00:35:742 (3,4,5,6) - same comment again over the spacing
00:42:363 (3,4,5,6) - again.....yea you get what i mean over these, the spacing makes it look like its 1/2 onto a 1/4 pattern, but its all 1/4
them are the things what REALLY stood out to me
Normal
00:36:673 (4,5,6) - this pattern felt wrong, i think its because of the repeating slider, it repeats even when the vocals are on a break, even though all the other times you have used a specific pattern of timing to help follow the vocals, that made this play really bad a feel odd
same comment for next time the vocals do the same pattern too, it just really dont suit the song having constant 1/2s.
00:56:121 - might flow better to have a note here, when playing i auto wanted to play one because i could feel the song building up.
Hard
00:05:225 (1,2) - having these as 1/4 sliders played really bad, it would play much better if you made it flow with your other patterns by giving it 1/2 silders
00:10:811 (2,3,4) - this triple pattern felt forced, i cant find a reason why you used it?
tbh i cant find a reason for quite a lot of the 1/4 triples?
00:56:121 (5) - this small spacing in the middle if a jump pattern really got me, infact i didnt even notice the note when playing, maybe give this more space so it follows your jump pattern
Karen
00:09:259 (3,4,5,6) - the spacing of the (3,4) compared to (4,5,6) i see no reason to see the different spacing?
(suggestion) 00:26:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stacked notes in this became rather hard to read due to the timing imo, maybe take a look at this part again
00:35:742 (3,4,5,6) - same comment again over the spacing
00:42:363 (3,4,5,6) - again.....yea you get what i mean over these, the spacing makes it look like its 1/2 onto a 1/4 pattern, but its all 1/4
them are the things what REALLY stood out to me
Topic Starter
Whee~Thanksjericho2442 wrote:
sorry gonna have to Design mod
Normal
00:36:673 (4,5,6) - this pattern felt wrong, i think its because of the repeating slider, it repeats even when the vocals are on a break, even though all the other times you have used a specific pattern of timing to help follow the vocals, that made this play really bad a feel odd
same comment for next time the vocals do the same pattern too, it just really dont suit the song having constant 1/2s.Fixed in another way :O
00:56:121 - might flow better to have a note here, when playing i auto wanted to play one because i could feel the song building up.
k
Hard
00:05:225 (1,2) - having these as 1/4 sliders played really bad, it would play much better if you made it flow with your other patterns by giving it 1/2 silders k.
00:10:811 (2,3,4) - this triple pattern felt forced, i cant find a reason why you used it? Back to 1/2
tbh i cant find a reason for quite a lot of the 1/4 triples?
00:56:121 (5) - this small spacing in the middle if a jump pattern really got me, infact i didnt even notice the note when playing, maybe give this more space so it follows your jump pattern hum,ok
no,some player tell me it is not hard to read,also I can read thisjericho2442 wrote:
Karen
(suggestion) 00:26:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the stacked notes in this became rather hard to read due to the timing imo, maybe take a look at this e
other fixed
Topic Starter
>Karenying
Upload!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Upload!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Hard]
01:14:535 (5,2) - The two is a little unreadable due to the 5's hitburst, you don't have to fix it as it can kinda be seen, but it threw me for a loop when I sightread it.
[Taiko Oni]
I just have to say I really liked how this was hitsounded, sounded really good imo.
[Karen]
01:08:121 (1,3,5) - When I saw this, I literately said, "nice blanket"
Overall, I found the maps to be enjoyable and well mapped, the only issue I had was that one that was in hard. You get a star good sir. And if you call me back after deciding what to do with that thing in hard, there may be a bubble for you.
Edit: I'm just gonna leave this here.
01:14:535 (5,2) - The two is a little unreadable due to the 5's hitburst, you don't have to fix it as it can kinda be seen, but it threw me for a loop when I sightread it.
[Taiko Oni]
I just have to say I really liked how this was hitsounded, sounded really good imo.
[Karen]
01:08:121 (1,3,5) - When I saw this, I literately said, "nice blanket"
Overall, I found the maps to be enjoyable and well mapped, the only issue I had was that one that was in hard. You get a star good sir. And if you call me back after deciding what to do with that thing in hard, there may be a bubble for you.
Edit: I'm just gonna leave this here.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!rust45 wrote:
[Hard]
01:14:535 (5,2) - The two is a little unreadable due to the 5's hitburst, you don't have to fix it as it can kinda be seen, but it threw me for a loop when I sightread it. k,fixed!
Good enough to go to me.
Ranked~
Ranked~
Congratulations
Topic Starter
Thanks Andrea and Hinacle <3
Oh I'm late.
Congrats for your perfect collab map<3
Congrats for your perfect collab map<3