1. Easy (2.18 stars, 79 notes)
2. Hard (4.94 stars, 212 notes)
3. Karen (5 stars, 268 notes)
4. Normal (4.33 stars, 151 notes)
5. SamiPale (5 stars, 267 notes)
6. Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 461 notes)

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
需要Lead in 我覺得進入的太快了! X

[Easy]
00:17:437 (1) - lol這已經變成你每首歌必備的阿~
00:35:851 (2,3) - ^ 恩...
00:47:230 (1,2) - 恩...我覺得沒有放到重音上耶 在放弱拍 ..

[Normal]
00:26:540 (1,2,3) - spacing有差距! Fixed

[Hard]
00:32:540 (3,4) - 接近最底部了 建議少用些接近底部的位置:) X.暫時不改
01:21:575 (3,4,6) - lol感覺是NTR裡面的梗阿 嗯!!

[Taiko Oni]
01:00:368 - 加個note? X.不打算加3連
01:22:506 (68,69) - 換成ox ? Fixed!

good map 打你的圖感覺都有一種很舒服的感覺! 一種不會太快但是不會沒有難度的感覺!!

spboxer3 wrote:

[SamiPale]
後頭的whistle調小聲些!!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

This difficulty spread doesn't seem so good. If you would add another easier difficulty then it might help, or if you don't want to do that, remove one harder difficulty.
Will make the hard easier.

[Easy]

00:24:264 (3) - New combo.
00:45:057 (1) - You should start this spinner 1/4 later like you did with the others, with keeping the same end.
01:09:885 (1) - ^ But since this one is not so long, you can skip it.
All fixed.

[Hard]

This difficulty totally look like Insane, not Hard.

01:24:264 (x) - I totally think that you should add a note here.
X,sorry disagreed.
[Karen]

01:23:644 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed!

[SamiPale]

00:28:402 (1) - This spinner should start 1/2 back, with the same end of now.
01:23:851 (1) - This single combo looks weird to me.
01:24:471 (1) - Don't end this spinner on a different place compared to the other difficulties. Make it the same and silence it.
Leave to Sami.

ziin wrote:

When I say to put a slider start or circle somewhere, it's because that note is very important in the rhythm of the song. By mapping it using a slider end or a slider tick, or not mapping it at all, it makes the rhythm awkward. It's not imperative that you fix them, but if you don't particularly care about the rhythm there, or it doesn't make a difference to you, please change it. It makes a huge difference to me.

There's a LOT of 1/2 offbeat sliders (start on red tick, end on white tick) in the map, which already make it terribly awkward to play.
No!I don't think a slider start from red tick is a terrible stuff.Everyone have their rhythm taste.I just wanna to say don't play it if you don't kije this style or rhythm.Mostly I'm follow the vocal.

[easy]
I really think these spinners have notes after them far too early:
http://puu.sh/3R3z 1/3rd the recommended time is just a bit too little.

00:45:005 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
01:09:833 Hard criteria: Two objects exist 104ms apart (less than 140ms).
These are just bad form. move the spinner earlier, and remove the note that is in the way.
Already fixed.

[normal]
00:07:506 - put a circle or slider start here
00:08:540 - ^
00:14:747 - ^
00:18:471 (3) - shorten to 1/1
00:25:920 - put a circle or slider start here
00:27:161 - ^
00:37:299 - ^
00:41:230 - ^
00:41:644 - ^
00:44:540 - ^
Sorry all reject.

[hard]
AR 8 on hard? IMO hard should never go beyond AR 7. If you need to go beyond that, it's not a hard. Well,fixed
00:40:609 (7) - make 1/2 longer X.
00:56:333 (6,7,8) - make 7 and 8 start on a white tick. Fixed!

[karen]
01:06:471 - put a circle or slider start here
01:19:713 - ^ Karen said he won't change it.

[kiai]
Kiai times are inconsistent. Double check that they are correct.
X,Sami is a guest diff.Due to respect to mapper's style,I won't change it for now.

[Shalon] wrote:

Long time no see, kanpakyin.

Easy
01:01:506 (1,2) - make like this?

X.

Normal
00:07:092 (2) - down 1 grid in tiny grid level?
00:19:506 (1) - down 1 grid? X,I was mapping this without grid snap.

Taiko
Map seems small overmapped for me, but that's ok.

Hard
01:19:713 (1,2) - make it a slider? Fixed in other way~

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Taiko BG 800x600.jpg"

Armin wrote:

[Easy]

First of all, I love your beat's placements and sliders' shapes. Good work for this
I'd say that you should increase your Approach Rate of 2 ticks; your value is a bit low, considering also that you're not using a Large Circle's size. Plus, at the end of the spinners, a new play may confuse it with the next circle's approach rate. (Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/123288)
Finally, I'd complain those spinners [00:28:402 (1) - 00:45:161 (1) - 00:51:575 (1) - 01:09:988 (1) -] , because their recovery time with the next hitobject is really short and I don't really reccomend it for an easier difficulty. So..please reduce them or replace them with some hitobjects. Fixed something here.

[Normal]

01:12:471 (3,4) - Oh well this stack in this part of the song is quite confusing. I suggest you to add a new combo on (4) in order to make it more readable. Fixed!

[Taiko Oni]

Wow, I had a lot of fun by playing it xD. There are just two problems... there is no BG and you didn't add the video here.
I checked the file osu and I found:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Taiko BG 800x600.jpg"

so I guess you add the BG but you didn't upload it. >_< Also, set the Stack Leniency to the deafult one.
D: I have already done a full submission D: what it is happen T_T I will do it again later.

[Hard]

00:10:195 (1) - What is this following? Previous rhythm was ok but this is just weird. I expected its start 00:09:988 here >< I guess a triplet is not really weird here..
00:28:402 (1) - I suggest you to make this end on a white tick, which will make the next stuff more intuitive. (in other words, reduce it of 1/2) Fixed!
00:47:437 (3) - I'd remove a repeat here, ending a slider on a blue tick is not really good. Fixed!
01:23:851 (3) - Aww, vocal voice is prevalent here. Please make it 1/2 longer? Or add some 1/2 bpm distant hitcircles Fixed!

208,68,17851,2,0,B|160:112|204:164,1,100,0|8

92,168,45782,2,0,B|92:219|92:219|56:248|62:298,1,120,2|8

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
max video size is 800x600 (not sure Fixed!
others fine

[Easy]
00:15:368 (1,1) - too far reduce the spinner lenght
00:53:851 (1,2,3,4) - confusing X,3 reverse won't make confused

[Normal]
00:06:678 (1,2) - to a slider X
00:36:885 (5) - kinda hard to read when it end X

[Hard]
00:28:195 (6) - try to make this in the middle of the screen ? It's fine now.
00:35:437 (2) - http://puu.sh/3X0n k.
00:49:506 - circle X
01:03:988 (8) - hidden back arrow X,Please use Default skin during modding!
01:18:885 (3) - http://puu.sh/3X0E X
01:23:851 (3,4,5) - more jump ? X

wcx19911123 wrote:

[SamiPale]
00:29:851 (1,1) - too far oh...far?how to far with two spinner Can't find another way to place notes so I want to keep it for now
01:24:471 (1) - circle then spinner from 01:24:575 ? that's a good way, but I want to keep my style

se-sukeEila wrote:

nice map!!
I like this song~

Please correct the title.
Stone Cold (TV Size) → stone cold (TV Size)

実際の曲名では大文字は使用されていません
Sorry,for my very poor English

star~