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Roddie
Hi.

  1. 00:37:894-Remove new combo??
  2. 00:39:323-Put a new combo here?
  3. 01:05:751 (3)-Fix the spacing on this a little bit by using the distance snap and move it one grid to the right.
  1. This Normal might be a bit hard but nothing crucial about it. :p
  2. 02:11:466 (5)-This slider is kind of overlapping itself... Well, it's sort of close to being it. ^^' But it might be a good idea to redesign that slider to something different. If don't that's fine, I guess.
  3. 02:11:823-The volume on this timing point is too low... It would be great if you set the volume to 10%.
  1. 00:15:930 (81, 82, 83)-kdk is better, I believe.
  2. 00:18:251 (95)-Remove this note. I don't think it's fitting here.
  1. 00:05:394-The volume on this timing point is too low... set it to 10%. (:
  2. 02:11:823-^
  1. 00:05:305-The volume is set too low. Set it to 10%.
  2. 00:56:823-^
  3. 02:11:823-^

And that's it. Here's a star~
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

eldnl wrote:

[Rin]

00:11:466 (3) This slider is wrong, basically the rhythm that are you following sound here 00:11:287 to here 00:11:466. Make something like this?: http://puu.sh/40yF I guess you misunderstand my meaning here. (3) is just one beat (the slider's end is muted), the fast slider is for the feeling of that hitsounds (a blast or something about it). So it's nothing wrong there.
00:32:537 (2,1,2,3,1) Weird spacing, please make a more readable pattern? If you noticed, all combos "from left to right" is 1/2, and all "from right to left" is 1/1
01:05:394 (5) Wrong place, the star looks bad :Padjust a bit.


[Normal]

01:13:609 (4) Considering the previous spacing this note is too far to the previous note. changed the previous note a bit.
01:22:180 (4,5,6) Inconsistent spacing. people could read it easily even for first time players, no change.

That's all, the other diffs looks really nice.

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

  1. 00:37:894-Remove new combo?? no. new combo per 2 long white line there.
  2. 00:39:323-Put a new combo here? ^
  3. 01:05:751 (3)-Fix the spacing on this a little bit by using the distance snap and move it one grid to the right. fixed.
  1. This Normal might be a bit hard but nothing crucial about it. :p Mainly because of spacing, i think if i have to stack some notes it would be ugly for this song, but i tried my best not to use that much 1/2 notes.
  2. 02:11:466 (5)-This slider is kind of overlapping itself... Well, it's sort of close to being it. ^^' But it might be a good idea to redesign that slider to something different. If don't that's fine, I guess. no. I asked a MAT and a BAT to made sure it's fine already.
  3. 02:11:823-The volume on this timing point is too low... It would be great if you set the volume to 10%. Any difference? in fact the slider is all for the last sound, the path should be really in a silence.[/*:m:df788]
  1. 00:15:930 (81, 82, 83)-kdk is better, I believe.
  2. 00:18:251 (95)-Remove this note. I don't think it's fitting here.
  1. 00:05:394-The volume on this timing point is too low... set it to 10%. (: no really difference there of 5% and 10%...
  2. 02:11:823-^ ^
  1. 00:05:305-The volume is set too low. Set it to 10%. no really difference there of 5% and 10%...
  2. 00:56:823-^ ^
  3. 02:11:823-^ ^

And that's it. Here's a star~
Komeiji Yuki

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
我不知道png们留透明边会不会被吐槽
others fine
圖片保留透明邊主要是為了防止效果溢出(像光暈效果那些)

不過濕漉漉這skin確實有點瑕疵. _ .

像是hitcircle >>
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
哦草...感谢图片帝们...

我去问下犀利撸愿不愿意修,如果不愿意的话大概就这么保留.
EnakoRin
class StarThisMap : public CObject
{
 public :
 void Star()
 {
  cout<< "StarThisMap" <<endl;
 }
}
kanpakyin
大部分都是意見而已.不同意的話可無視之

[General]
  1. 沒什麼..


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:466 (1) - 個人感覺這裏加個Finish會比較好.畢竟是第一個重音..
  2. 00:54:323 (3) - Whistle?感覺和後面的一樣會好一點...因為這裏用了斷音的效果,聲效一樣會比較好..
  3. 01:20:751 (1) - 這個可以換一個位置嗎?Spinner的OSU和(1)-的hitburst有一點cover掉了...有點怕新手跟不來..
  4. 01:40:037 (4) - 加上whistle?感覺會好聽一點..
  5. 02:06:555 (x) - 個人覺得這個spinner的開始點有點急,考慮把它移到02:06:644 - 這裏?結束點不變


[Normal]
  1. 00:22:180 (3) - 考慮用1/1代替這個?
  2. 00:50:037 (2) - 這樣?在slider後部分多加一個折點...感覺好看多 \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126105
  3. 00:52:894 (2) - ^液...一樣.
  4. 01:02:180 (4) - 這裏可以換成1/2 slider+5個reverse..
  5. 01:27:180 (2) - 其實我覺得把這個Slider依到01:27:001 - 會比較舒服...但礙於現在的排版,不容易修改..麻,你決定,如果改了還要在01:27:537 - 多加個note


[Kana's Taiko Oni]
  1. Volume -10%?
  2. 00:00:751 (1-17) - 其實這裡有很多配搭都可以的,我自己比較喜歡的是:dkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkk
  3. 00:18:430 (96) - change it to k?
  4. 00:18:787 (97,98) - 換成Big kat?這樣可以更強調這2個clap喔..
  5. 00:20:216 (103,104) - ^Same!
  6. 00:42:001 - 感覺這裏加個note會好一點...
  7. 00:57:359,00:57:537,00:57:716 - 各加一個note,而且都是kat.
  8. 00:57:894 (342) - 這個d會比較好聽..
  9. 01:50:216 - 加note?
  10. 01:51:823 (620,621) - 換成k?
  11. 02:08:698 (749) - 換成d?
  12. 02:11:644 (x) - 移走Spinner?然後在02:12:894 - 和02:13:013 - (1/3) 加note.


[Hard]
  1. 00:11:109 (2) - 這裏不要跳?雖然不太難,但是感覺有點怪.說不出的感覺= =可能是我叒 看看這個?
  2. 00:18:787 (1,2) - 這裏為甚麼不和後面的(1.2)-一樣?感覺Spacing可以在大一點..
  3. 00:55:037 ~ 00:56:466 - 可以考慮x xxx xxx xxx x x的節奏?(x為1/2拍) 如果改的話,個人建議用slider-note-slider-note的擺法,這樣不會太難..

沒什麼可跳的..

[Rin]
  1. 招牌難度 :O
  2. 00:15:751 (3,4,5,6,2) - 這個5邊形咁覺放的有一點不好..00:16:823 (2) -感覺要放下一點.如果改了(3)- 可能需要移動來配合(2)-
  3. 00:32:180 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 這堆有一點難度,出來得效果不太好,換一下new combo的位置會好一點,我覺得:00:32:716 (1) - new combo 00:33:251 (1) - new combo.
  4. 00:56:466 (1) - Slider略醜..
  5. 00:58:966 (1) - 考慮把這個(1)- 疊在(4)- 的上面00:59:681 (5) - 疊在前面combo的(5)- 上面
  6. 01:18:609 (x) - 這個加條綠線增加音量,做一個crescendo的效果..
  7. 01:42:359 (x) - 考慮這裏加個break?因為HP setting的關係,不加break的話這裡會扣掉1/4良的HP,如果之前有miss的話這裡就等著悲劇..


好了..
lolcubes
Hey Rin, here's some stuff.
As I can't read what the above post says, I will just mod it at my own pace, hopefully I caught stuff kanpakyin didn't, and vice versa.

[General]:
  1. 01:57:894 - From this point onward you can hear a large drum being hit in the music. Strongly advising using a custom1 normal finish on the following notes:
    01:57:894
    01:58:609
    01:59:323
    02:00:037
    02:00:751
    02:01:466
    02:02:180
    etc, you can hear in the background
  2. Just a suggestion, but if you could colorize the slider border using a custom code to something darker than white (light gray would be okay I think, slightly reddish, so 232 224 224 color would be okay I think). I think this would look a little better.


[Rin]:
  1. 00:11:466 (3) - Maybe new combo? As far as I know changing slider speeds within a same combo without seeing a tick on it isn't allowed, so this is just for clarity.
  2. 00:20:751 (1,2,3,4) - You should probably reverse this combo so (1) is where (4) is currently, (2) is where (3) is currently ,etc. Main reason is questionable readability of the current (2), because it's almost completely hidden behind the hitburst of a previous combo. If there was only a static background this could be seen nicely, however with video it's certainly very hard to notice. Reversing it would give you an extra 1/2 of time for the hitburst to vanish and it would improve the readability. Other patterns look fine because you expect such shapes, here you can't expect a star if you see only one note.
  3. 00:56:287 (11,12) - Is there a reason why you changed the spacing? I think it looks better if you used same spacing like in the streams before that. Might have to curve the slider that comes after a little bit then.
  4. 00:56:466 (1) - This slider is fine, however there are other stuff in the background which are better (if you ask me) if you map. 00:57:359, 00:57:448, 00:57:537, 00:57:716 are the locations of said notes, and sliding over them (in silence) is something I don't really like. Since the slider itself isn't that wrong, this is only a suggestions and do as you wish.
  5. 01:42:180 - While the HP drain is actually quite low, why not place a break here? When playing unless I either see letters of a rank in top right, or I see the HP drain standing still, I am still anticipating a note to come, which kinda defeats a purpose of such emptiness (and having a break). You should place a break here.
  6. 02:07:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - If possible, I suggest that you place the combo colors yourself. First the red, then a color which you want, then red again, etc. It doesn't break anything and makes this so much easier to read (i am actually almost colorblind to some colors ;-; )
  7. No spinners on the map. I guess that's okay if you really want it that way, but OD7 is low enough to allow quite some SS ranks, and without a spinner there wouldn't be any score variation between those.


[Hard]:
  1. 00:11:466 (3) - Just like in Rin difficulty, would be nice to place a new combo here.
  2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here, same reasons like in Rin diff.
  3. Just like in Rin difficulty, you don't have a spinner. Same reasons apply here.


[Normal]:
  1. 01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really want to nazi, but this star shape doesn't look properly made (the left side is too close to the middle). It's kinda obvious while playing as well, maybe try to fix it?
  2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here.


[Easy]:
  1. 01:19:859 (1,2) - I suggest that instead of these 2 circles you map a slider (it would fit because you could blanket it right next to the upcoming one as well). I don't think a new player would really notice they are 1/3 (not the tick, but the note style I mean). Up to you though, because this is not really wrong and it's only a suggestion.
  2. 01:42:180 - Place a break here.


The folder looks clean.
I am not really a fan of completely replacing default hitnormal sound though, but I guess other people are and your hitsounds are placed correctly more or less(that I could hear).
Hopefully this was of some help to you, star and good luck.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
@kanpakyin:

kanpakyin wrote:

大部分都是意見而已.不同意的話可無視之

[General]
  1. 沒什麼..


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:466 (1) - 個人感覺這裏加個Finish會比較好.畢竟是第一個重音.. 也好我索性把一串都加了
  2. 00:54:323 (3) - Whistle?感覺和後面的一樣會好一點...因為這裏用了斷音的效果,聲效一樣會比較好.. 因为是断音所以才用了这个音效啊...
  3. 01:20:751 (1) - 這個可以換一個位置嗎?Spinner的OSU和(1)-的hitburst有一點cover掉了...有點怕新手跟不來.. 不至于吧这...
  4. 01:40:037 (4) - 加上whistle?感覺會好聽一點.. 不赞同,因为节奏密度低了,所以音效密度也不该高
  5. 02:06:555 (x) - 個人覺得這個spinner的開始點有點急,考慮把它移到02:06:644 - 這裏?結束點不變
可以.

[Normal]
  1. 00:22:180 (3) - 考慮用1/1代替這個? 没有,这里一直计划就是这么过去,对我而言感觉很好
  2. 00:50:037 (2) - 這樣?在slider後部分多加一個折點...感覺好看多 \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126105 貌似不错改掉了
  3. 00:52:894 (2) - ^液...一樣.
  4. 01:02:180 (4) - 這裏可以換成1/2 slider+5個reverse.. 在Normal中还是显的节奏紧张吧
  5. 01:27:180 (2) - 其實我覺得把這個Slider依到01:27:001 - 會比較舒服...但礙於現在的排版,不容易修改..麻,你決定,如果改了還要在01:27:537 - 多加個note 这里是13小节走整数节奏24小节变红线,不改.


[Kana's Taiko Oni]
  1. Volume -10%?
  2. 00:00:751 (1-17) - 其實這裡有很多配搭都可以的,我自己比較喜歡的是:dkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkk
  3. 00:18:430 (96) - change it to k?
  4. 00:18:787 (97,98) - 換成Big kat?這樣可以更強調這2個clap喔..
  5. 00:20:216 (103,104) - ^Same!
  6. 00:42:001 - 感覺這裏加個note會好一點...
  7. 00:57:359,00:57:537,00:57:716 - 各加一個note,而且都是kat.
  8. 00:57:894 (342) - 這個d會比較好聽..
  9. 01:50:216 - 加note?
  10. 01:51:823 (620,621) - 換成k?
  11. 02:08:698 (749) - 換成d?
  12. 02:11:644 (x) - 移走Spinner?然後在02:12:894 - 和02:13:013 - (1/3) 加note.


[Hard]
  1. 00:11:109 (2) - 這裏不要跳?雖然不太難,但是感覺有點怪.說不出的感覺= =可能是我叒 看看 我觉得正常范畴..?[url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126126]這個?[/url]
  2. 00:18:787 (1,2) - 這裏為甚麼不和後面的(1.2)-一樣?感覺Spacing可以在大一點.. 因为看下和前面1234的位置对比,我有时也想模仿下structure 233
  3. 00:55:037 ~ 00:56:466 - 可以考慮x xxx xxx xxx x x的節奏?(x為1/2拍) 如果改的話,個人建議用slider-note-slider-note的擺法,這樣不會太難.. 这里是因为hitsounds连续给了4个欢快的红线whistle,排版去适应节奏+hitsounds所以弄成4个slider,又因为比较欢快就跳了一点

沒什麼可跳的..

[Rin]
  1. 招牌難度 :O
  2. 00:15:751 (3,4,5,6,2) - 這個5邊形咁覺放的有一點不好..00:16:823 (2) -感覺要放下一點.如果改了(3)- 可能需要移動來配合(2)- 这没有办法的事... 因为slider只能那么长,间距却不能那么缩
  3. 00:32:180 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 這堆有一點難度,出來得效果不太好,換一下new combo的位置會好一點,我覺得:00:32:716 (1) - new combo 00:33:251 (1) - new combo. 改了一些
  4. 00:56:466 (1) - Slider略醜.. 用意是挡之前的五边形加画半个心.如果觉得丑...我只能认栽好像
  5. 00:58:966 (1) - 考慮把這個(1)- 疊在(4)- 的上面00:59:681 (5) - 疊在前面combo的(5)- 上面 Hard我倒觉得这么做可以,Insane有点太缩
  6. 01:18:609 (x) - 這個加條綠線增加音量,做一個crescendo的效果.. 加了不过那种效果要歌肯配合才行啊233
  7. 01:42:359 (x) - 考慮這裏加個break?因為HP setting的關係,不加break的話這裡會扣掉1/4良的HP,如果之前有miss的話這裡就等著悲劇.. 我认为1/4不算多,如果悲剧就认命吧,而且前后都算送分段


好了..

@lolcubes:

lolcubes wrote:

Hey Rin, here's some stuff.
As I can't read what the above post says, I will just mod it at my own pace, hopefully I caught stuff kanpakyin didn't, and vice versa.

[General]:
  1. 01:57:894 - From this point onward you can hear a large drum being hit in the music. Strongly advising using a custom1 normal finish on the following notes: No. the reason why i won't do so is simple: my hitsound use is mainly based on the beats by myself, if i follow a very regular rhythm to put a heavy sound (N1 finish), it may sounds very straight and that's not what i want.
    01:57:894
    01:58:609
    01:59:323
    02:00:037
    02:00:751
    02:01:466
    02:02:180
    etc, you can hear in the background
  2. Just a suggestion, but if you could colorize the slider border using a custom code to something darker than white (light gray would be okay I think, slightly reddish, so 232 224 224 color would be okay I think). I think this would look a little better.
    ...i think current one is good enough. However if a second modder mention it i may change that.


[Rin]:
  1. 00:11:466 (3) - Maybe new combo? As far as I know changing slider speeds within a same combo without seeing a tick on it isn't allowed, so this is just for clarity. Nobody will miss it. But new combo is still a good idea, at least it won't heart anyone.
  2. 00:20:751 (1,2,3,4) - You should probably reverse this combo so (1) is where (4) is currently, (2) is where (3) is currently ,etc. Main reason is questionable readability of the current (2), because it's almost completely hidden behind the hitburst of a previous combo. If there was only a static background this could be seen nicely, however with video it's certainly very hard to notice. Reversing it would give you an extra 1/2 of time for the hitburst to vanish and it would improve the readability. Other patterns look fine because you expect such shapes, here you can't expect a star if you see only one note. If one can't read notes hidden by hitburst, he probably can't play Insane maps. Also i f you try to notice that: this part is totally symmetry, the main rhythm goes from right to left , the "clap*2" goes from left to right. 1. It won't cause readable problems simply because none of the test players missed that (you could say they're pro, but insane map is made for pros.), 2. Consistency should be kept.
  3. 00:56:287 (11,12) - Is there a reason why you changed the spacing? I think it looks better if you used same spacing like in the streams before that. Might have to curve the slider that comes after a little bit then. 00:55:037 (1,2,5,8,11) - this is a pentagon. 11 and next 1 should be connected with a note at a nice place (where 12 is now), and 1's track just cover those note, check it.
  4. 00:56:466 (1) - This slider is fine, however there are other stuff in the background which are better (if you ask me) if you map. 00:57:359, 00:57:448, 00:57:537, 00:57:716 are the locations of said notes, and sliding over them (in silence) is something I don't really like. Since the slider itself isn't that wrong, this is only a suggestions and do as you wish. Explained in the previous line a bit. Also, it sounds too busy after such long, a mapper should know how to handle the rhythm, not following vocal or drums all the way. just my 2 cents here.
  5. 01:42:180 - While the HP drain is actually quite low, why not place a break here? When playing unless I either see letters of a rank in top right, or I see the HP drain standing still, I am still anticipating a note to come, which kinda defeats a purpose of such emptiness (and having a break). You should place a break here. It's called drain section... if i put a break, you will hear a very busy section-pass/fail sound and then you still have to start in 3s (a break should be 5~15s), people could gain HP easily because of the notes before and after that, check them
  6. 02:07:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - If possible, I suggest that you place the combo colors yourself. First the red, then a color which you want, then red again, etc. It doesn't break anything and makes this so much easier to read (i am actually almost colorblind to some colors ;-; ) If it's just you i won't change... because there may be players searching for another combo color (Don't forget i'm the first one to use this technique, but i didn't use it in this map)
  7. No spinners on the map. I guess that's okay if you really want it that way, but OD7 is low enough to allow quite some SS ranks, and without a spinner there wouldn't be any score variation between those. emm yeah, that's kinda a problem, changed to OD8


[Hard]:
  1. 00:11:466 (3) - Just like in Rin difficulty, would be nice to place a new combo here. well it's ok.
  2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here, same reasons like in Rin diff. no.
  3. Just like in Rin difficulty, you don't have a spinner. Same reasons apply here. But this is a Hard, and it's easy enough for people to HR+HD (maybe DT?) variation would be there, i don't worry about this diff.


[Normal]:
  1. 01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really want to nazi, but this star shape doesn't look properly made (the left side is too close to the middle). It's kinda obvious while playing as well, maybe try to fix it? I don't hate nazi if it's useful. fixed.
  2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here. no.


[Easy]:
  1. 01:19:859 (1,2) - I suggest that instead of these 2 circles you map a slider (it would fit because you could blanket it right next to the upcoming one as well). I don't think a new player would really notice they are 1/3 (not the tick, but the note style I mean). Up to you though, because this is not really wrong and it's only a suggestion. It's 3/2. i think 1. it's long enough for even newbies. 2. ...well they have to learn sth right? the rhythm is simple (shrugs)
  2. 01:42:180 - Place a break here. no.


The folder looks clean.
I am not really a fan of completely replacing default hitnormal sound though, but I guess other people are and your hitsounds are placed correctly more or less(that I could hear). Depends on the song.
Hopefully this was of some help to you, star and good luck.
fanzhen0019
Rin大教我摆五角星 \:D/
我只会nazi

Normal
01:06:466 (1) - 挡前面slider尾的话建议左移一格(grid4
01:31:109 (6,7) - 上移一格(grid4
02:13:073 - Hard和Rin这里都有note Normal怎么不加一个o.o

Hard
00:37:894 (1) - slider尾finish?
01:09:323 (1) - finish?
01:14:323 (5,1,1,2,1) - 上移一格(grid4
01:41:823 (5,6,7) - 上移一格(grid4
02:02:180 (1) - 下移一格(grid4

Rin
00:37:894 (1) - 左上移一格(grid4
00:46:019 (2,3) - 2的hitsound把后面这slider开头的hitsound挡住了..至少我听起来比较怪 把2的clap放3开头?(3的finish不去掉
00:55:216 (2,3,4) - 右移1格(grid4)没猜错的话后面那个slider应该是要穿过2,8,5吧
00:56:287 (11) - 下移一格会不会好点?(grid4
01:46:466 (1) - 上一格(grid4
01:58:430 (4,1,2,3) - 左上移一格(grid4
01:58:966 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点怪
这是用relate每个note转72度之后调整大小摆出来的x_x



nazi会不会很蛋疼...

[Stress]MOD完发现M4M的queue满了
L_P
you requested for mod BUT this map is awesome
waiting it ranked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it STAR!
hez
good songs 很好的歌曲啊 lol 神曲lol
铃大人加油\:D/
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Rin大教我摆五角星 \:D/
我只会nazi

Normal
01:06:466 (1) - 挡前面slider尾的话建议左移一格(grid4 其实是我懒,fixed.
01:31:109 (6,7) - 上移一格(grid4 挪了
02:13:073 - Hard和Rin这里都有note Normal怎么不加一个o.o 对Normal来讲难了

Hard
00:37:894 (1) - slider尾finish? 没理由貌似
01:09:323 (1) - finish? 这一段的finish位置都是安排好的,所有五边形位置都不会有(Hard和Rin)而是在两个五边形之后的那个起音上安排.按照音的不同音量还有区别
01:14:323 (5,1,1,2,1) - 上移一格(grid4 ..好
01:41:823 (5,6,7) - 上移一格(grid4 ok
02:02:180 (1) - 下移一格(grid4

Rin
00:37:894 (1) - 左上移一格(grid4
00:46:019 (2,3) - 2的hitsound把后面这slider开头的hitsound挡住了..至少我听起来比较怪 把2的clap放3开头?(3的finish不去掉 也好,这样很干脆
00:55:216 (2,3,4) - 右移1格(grid4)没猜错的话后面那个slider应该是要穿过2,8,5吧
00:56:287 (11) - 下移一格会不会好点?(grid4 恐怕不会,太近了
01:46:466 (1) - 上一格(grid4 ...k
01:58:430 (4,1,2,3) - 左上移一格(grid4
01:58:966 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点怪 打时你看叠完什么样就知道为什么这么摆了
这是用relate每个note转72度之后调整大小摆出来的x_x

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nazi会不会很蛋疼... 说实话,会,但有用就行.

[Stress]MOD完发现M4M的queue满了
Equivalent
Hi,

General:
I dont really like bright BG, they are so annoying during kiai time. Well, it just personal preference
Just a question: who is omoiyoshino?
01:42:180 till 01:46:466 I suggest add in break for all difficulties. especially in [Rin] when autoplay I see the hp drop till the mid of the hp bar, if someone can't fc the earlier part or miss they would "die" here.

Skin:
->make approach circle.png to 128x128
->delete star.png, star.png is only for custom skin that changed the appearance of star at the difficulty menu. If by single map, it useless.
->As your map here is likely almost fully skin, why not add sliderscorepoint.png as well. Afterall, I think it will be looking ugly if mix with other custom skin sliderscorepoint
-> Spinner approach circle is white thus making it blend with the spinner background color. If me, I would change it to another color, quite hard to see the spinner approach circle
->I suggest add in below codes under colours section as you know there are some custom skin that force dark slider border, thus making it look ugly
[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,128
SliderBorder : 240,240,240

Easy:
No issue

Normal:
The only thing that bother me here is 02:11:466 (5) The slider start and end is overlapping thus making it look ugly and I think without the snaking slider effect, quite hard to see which is which. I think will be harder to read when playing with hidden mod on.

Hard:
No issues as well

Rin:
00:46:109 (3) I dunno about others, but for me it seem hard to read this

Star for you
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Equivalent wrote:

Hi,

General:
I dont really like bright BG, they are so annoying during kiai time. Well, it just personal preference ...in fact i guess there are only 2 or 3 BGs for this song (originally), this one is my favourite
Just a question: who is omoiyoshino? http://loos.jp/yoshino/
01:42:180 till 01:46:466 I suggest add in break for all difficulties. especially in [Rin] when autoplay I see the hp drop till the mid of the hp bar, if someone can't fc the earlier part or miss they would "die" here. Indeed, but that's the effect i want. to prevent people from failing there, the part before is made in a easy way and using massive new combos.

Skin:
->make approach circle.png to 128x128 thanks for reminding i really didn't notice that.
->delete star.png, star.png is only for custom skin that changed the appearance of star at the difficulty menu. If by single map, it useless. True, fixed.
->As your map here is likely almost fully skin, why not add sliderscorepoint.png as well. Afterall, I think it will be looking ugly if mix with other custom skin sliderscorepoint How could i miss that, thanks!
-> Spinner approach circle is white thus making it blend with the spinner background color. If me, I would change it to another color, quite hard to see the spinner approach circle It's from the original skin by S i R i R u so i won't touch this.
->I suggest add in below codes under colours section as you know there are some custom skin that force dark slider border, thus making it look ugly Done with this! You're a pro skin modder
[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,128
SliderBorder : 240,240,240

Easy:
No issue

Normal:
The only thing that bother me here is 02:11:466 (5) The slider start and end is overlapping thus making it look ugly and I think without the snaking slider effect, quite hard to see which is which. I think will be harder to read when playing with hidden mod on. Already asked a BAT to make sure of that. also from testplays i can see it works fine.


Hard:
No issues as well

Rin:
00:46:109 (3) I dunno about others, but for me it seem hard to read this don't worry, we have test players there ww, and yeah no one missed that.

Star for you
KayeSara
Really perfect map._.
Especially the skin, besides the number such as 300 is a ~big girl~
They're a little bit distracting and out of place to me.
Anyway, I am fond of it. :) For girl? jajaja
phonic
Good ;)



Rnked GoGo!

Stra~ 
Miu Matsuoka
I really love the song~ Gogo rank Bakarin~ :3
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Raging Bull
Yay. Rin map.

Well since it's not bubble, I thought I would nazi this one.

Rin:
01:04:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - I found this star weird because it's not fully symmetrical, unless you weren't aiming for symmetry. I think 2,4 isn't in the right spot.

No kds.

Edit: (╯´・∀・)╯彡☆
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
hope it's better now.

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Sekai
Mod4mod as requested on your thread ~ :3

[Easy]
00:21:466 (2) - New combo
00:46:466 (1) - remove the new combo
00:47:180 (2) - new combo
00:49:323 (1) - remove the new combo
00:50:037 (2) - new combo
00:52:180 (1) - remove the new combo
00:52:894 (5) - new combo
01:37:894 (1) - remove the new combo
01:38:609 (5) - new combo

[Normal]
00:37:537 (6) - new combo
00:37:894 (1) - remove the new combo
00:40:394 (7) - new combo
00:40:751 (1) - remove the new combo
00:42:180 (5) - new combo
01:30:751 (4) - ^
01:48:966 (4) - ^
01:49:323 (1) - remove the new combo
01:50:751 (3) - new combo
02:02:180 (5) - ^

[Kana's Taiko oni]
I'll skip it ~

[Hard]
00:10:751 (1) - remove the new combo
00:49:144 (6) - new combo
00:49:323 (1) - remove the new combo

[Rin]
00:34:859 (3) - new combo
00:35:037 (1) - remove the new combo
00:42:001 (7) - new combo
00:42:180 (1) - remove new combo
00:42:894 (5) - new combo

Nice Map and good luck here star too :3
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