[Normal]
0:15:306 (2) - rorate this slider by 15° clockwise, looks a lot better like this. select it, then press ctrl+shift+r to do that. also, select 'Selection centre' option, so your slider won't move.
{0:41:215 (2,3) - distance snap between notes: 0.85x. aaand...
{0:43:670 (5,6,7) - distance snap between notes: 0.75x. you should keep the same distance between notes, to make your map flawless.
0:45:306 (1,2,3) - oh, this one especially.
0:51:033 (2,3,4,5) - and agaaain. i'm not gonna post stuff like that from now on, you should search for them on your own now. :)
1:12:579 (1) - delete that new combo, i suppose?
2:17:761 (3,4) - too long distance between those.
3:30:852 (1) - should start 1/2 earlier.
[Hard]
0:18:579 (1,2,3) - kinda huge jump you've got there, maybe swap (1) with (2)? ctrl+r to do that, after you select both notes
1:20:215 (1,2,3) - i don't think those huge jumps are really necessary, you can go with something like that (click!). don't add jumps like that just to increase the map's difficulty at one moment a bit. :)
1:54:988 (1) - delete that note, i guess.
2:07:533 (4) - you totally should move this slider a bit closer to the previous one's end.
2:56:215 (1,2,3) - once again, you can come up with something better and easier.
3:13:670 (1,2,3) - yeah.
3:22:397 (1,2,3) - ^
kinda nice map, i liked it. pretty nice rhythm, hitsounds are so-so, and the way you place notes pretty much fit the song.
besides, i'd like to ask you one thing: please read people's rules while you're posting in a modding queue. you're pretty lucky that i'm in a good mood today and actually decided to map your song, because you broke one rule - you shouldn't give people WIP maps. believe me, modders totally prefer modding completed mapsets than just single difficulties. please, remember that in the future. for now, good luck!
0:15:306 (2) - rorate this slider by 15° clockwise, looks a lot better like this. select it, then press ctrl+shift+r to do that. also, select 'Selection centre' option, so your slider won't move.
{0:41:215 (2,3) - distance snap between notes: 0.85x. aaand...
{0:43:670 (5,6,7) - distance snap between notes: 0.75x. you should keep the same distance between notes, to make your map flawless.
0:45:306 (1,2,3) - oh, this one especially.
0:51:033 (2,3,4,5) - and agaaain. i'm not gonna post stuff like that from now on, you should search for them on your own now. :)
1:12:579 (1) - delete that new combo, i suppose?
2:17:761 (3,4) - too long distance between those.
3:30:852 (1) - should start 1/2 earlier.
[Hard]
0:18:579 (1,2,3) - kinda huge jump you've got there, maybe swap (1) with (2)? ctrl+r to do that, after you select both notes
1:20:215 (1,2,3) - i don't think those huge jumps are really necessary, you can go with something like that (click!). don't add jumps like that just to increase the map's difficulty at one moment a bit. :)
1:54:988 (1) - delete that note, i guess.
2:07:533 (4) - you totally should move this slider a bit closer to the previous one's end.
2:56:215 (1,2,3) - once again, you can come up with something better and easier.
3:13:670 (1,2,3) - yeah.
3:22:397 (1,2,3) - ^
kinda nice map, i liked it. pretty nice rhythm, hitsounds are so-so, and the way you place notes pretty much fit the song.
besides, i'd like to ask you one thing: please read people's rules while you're posting in a modding queue. you're pretty lucky that i'm in a good mood today and actually decided to map your song, because you broke one rule - you shouldn't give people WIP maps. believe me, modders totally prefer modding completed mapsets than just single difficulties. please, remember that in the future. for now, good luck!