1. Hard (2.48 stars, 228 notes)
2. Normal (1.84 stars, 146 notes)
3. Rose-colored Campus Life (3.38 stars, 261 notes)

Hobbes2 wrote:

Placeholder, sorry for being so late

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

Turn off widescreen support? done

[Normal]
Hmm the stacks you made is popping the DS like 01:13:527 (1,2) - 01:18:981 (3,4) - 01:23:609 (1,2) - 01:25:097 (2,3) - and lots others im not using view stacks in 2017 kill me
00:12:039 (6) - I think you can make this a 1/1 slider to emphasize the long trumpet sound i would love to tbh but normal diff restrictions are tilting me so hard

[Hard]
00:01:791 (2,3) - Not perfectly aligned. k
00:02:783 (5,6) - ^
00:13:527 (1) - I personally would want the white tick to be clickable because of the loud snare sound. i'll see if i can change stuff here.

00:14:518 (4) - ^
01:23:113 (2,3,4) - Hmm spike in object density, but there's not really an increase in intensity of the music here. i rly love the spike here tho qwq. 01:19:477 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - feel like they are building up towards something and this stream is a great complement to them
01:09:560 (1,2) - I know you're mapping to the vocals here, but I feel like Mapping more towards the drums and snares is better. right now the rhythm just feels weird to me. kiai is 92.5 percent vocals tho xd. Totally fine imo

[Rose]
00:07:907 (3,4,1) - Really big difference in spacing, it makes jump to the notes really hard, I don't know if you want that kind of a big jump in a 3.3 diff SR system sucks. This diff is definitely not 3.3*. For myself, I find these jumps very fun to play. imo spikes are lovely when done correctly <3
01:07:576 (4,1) - also big spike in jump
01:11:213 (7,1,2) - ^

Hmm that's all, very unique song and mapping style, not bad. Sry for short mod, here's a star C:
Good luck!

Mir wrote:

yea
[General]
Video offset:
Normal: -120
Hard: -150
Rose-colored Campus Life: -150
oopsy doopsy

[Rose-colored Campus Life]
ugh this diffname is so long to write lovely anime ref <3

- 00:08:733 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This placement is meh considering 00:09:725 (2,3,6) - imo moving 00:09:560 (1,2,4,5) - up so you can do a triangle with https://i.imgur.com/Gg8YJBg.png etc would be nice. fair
[Hard]
- 00:41:956 (1) - Song is quite constant and has an "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" sound but this slider implies there's a wiggle in there somewhere and a very big wiggle in there, but no wiggle is present in the sound. I suggest changing the slider.tried to make this one analogous with 00:43:940 (1,2) - and also because of the snare
- 00:46:419 (2) - For two snares you can do two circles if you want. done~
[Normal]
Having the combo colors black and white + bg too to have some sort of progression from bleak -> getting there -> colorful would be cool but idk if that's what you had in mind. another anime ref imo the bgs i have now fit better cuz of the protagonist's sudden realization in ep12.

- 01:00:303 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these under the sliderends tbh since it makes it too difficult to read. i want to make this part unique somehow and I don't have anything else xd. imo it's not that hard to read cuz the pattern repeats itself so many times
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Clean set. Call me back.

1. You should compress your bgs a bit to save space, they're pretty big, try this site, it's ezpz

1. 00:00:304 (1,2,3) - 00:07:246 (1,2) - 00:08:237 (1,2,3) - Why are these combos so short?
2. 00:28:072 (1,2) - 01:06:750 (7,1) - 01:23:609 (1,2) - 01:25:097 (2,3) - Deactivate ds and fix spacing (should be 1.2x not 1.1x)
3. 00:30:056 (1,2) - 00:48:899 (2,3) - ^ These are the opposite, they're a bit bigger than they should
4. 01:27:907 (1,2) - spacing adjustment as well

1. 00:55:841 (1,3) - improve blanket?

1. 01:15:675 (1) - Is this slider intentionally ending in 1/6? I can hear you're ignoring the sound at the 1/3 beat :c (01:16:006 - )
2. 01:28:072 (1) - It's the last beat + it's a strong one, what about highlighting it more with a bigger jump? suggestion

KittyAdventure wrote:

Congratulations!