1. Easy (1,22 stars, 214 notes)
2. Hard (4,12 stars, 434 notes)
3. Normal (2,71 stars, 281 notes)

1. I Suggest you to delete de osb file If it's not in use.

1. 00:30:180 (8) - Align with 00:28:466 (6) - (?)
2. 00:58:466 (5) - Follow the vocals maybe automatic, so you can change the position of this note and not keep it stacked.

Aleks719 wrote:

General
Turn off useless countdown in all diffs fixed
Normal custom hitsounds? You dott have them. Remove n:c1 from timing fixed
imo, 100% is too loud it's okay imo
Where is your preview point? fixed
Speed changing is Easy, Normal looks fine, but i'm not sure in it it's okay imo

Hard
02:39:182 (8) - unsnapped fixed

00:24:609 (3) - remove clap, add whistle no,sorry
00:25:038 (4) - remove whistle from the start, add clap no,sorry
01:59:966 (6) - not sure in this note following the drums
03:04:466 - add note I'm following the vocals there, so no, sorry

Normal
00:40:252 (3) - 1/4 later following the vocals, but fixed
00:53:966 (6) - ^ no, sorry
01:43:038 (1) - finish instead of whistle at the start fixed

Easy
fine

1. The sliderslide sound sounds noisy. Maybe mute it ? (if you mute it with a .wav file, don't forget that it has to be at least 100ms long even if it's just a 100ms long silence or a 0-byte .wav file)

1. 02:10:717 (2) - ~ 33% of the beginning is offscreen, it's not fun to play especially at the top border because of the lifebar and the score numbers. You ought to change it.
2. 00:46:466 (2) - Same for this one.
3. 01:37:895 (4) - This 1/4 doesn't really fit, you have tried to follow the vocal, but the vocal is not really one the 1/4. So it would be better if you end it 1/4 later on a main beat to avoid any confusion.
4. 01:56:323 (2) - This circle is kinda unnecessary as it's just a transition between 01:53:323 (1) and 01:56:752 (1). That doesn't fit the rest of the map. Moreover, if you remove it it will make 01:56:752 (1,2) a unique pattern and it will accentuate the effect that the vocal made. (Dunno if you have understand this point xD)
5. 02:11:323 (1) - Too much offscreen
6. 02:17:323 (1) - Same for this one
7. 03:20:966 (1) - Reduce it by 1/2. The spot where it ends doesn't fit the music.
8. 03:24:180 (1) - Too much offscreen

1. 00:58:895 - As this break is very short, the letterbox who appears and disappears in less than 2 second looks very ugly. Remove the letterbox ? Do it in each difficulty.
2. 01:24:180 (2,3) - If you want to make this pattern consistant, you should add a circle at 01:25:038.
3. 02:17:323 (6) - Offscreen
4. 02:23:966 (1) - This whistle totally don't fit xD I think you wanted to put a finish here no ?
5. 02:27:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jumps in normal. Well I think they are fine though.
6. 02:41:323 (1) - Offscreen again
7. 02:44:752 (1) - As it's a copy/paste...

1. 00:13:466 (1,2,3) - Offscreen, they are hidden by the lifebar ;__;
2. 00:41:752 (3) - Offscreen, objects who are too close from the border are not fun to play.
3. 01:13:680 (1) - Offscreen again and hided by the lifebar.
4. 01:24:823 (6) - The shape of this slider is hided by the lifebar
5. 02:13:895 (6) - Offscreen again
6. 02:57:180 (8) - Offscreen

Blue Dragon wrote:

I never thought someone could mod 200+ maps in a queue o-o

Blue Dragon wrote:

Astom: Fixed some of your suggestions. Most of them I didn't fix because I was following the vocals, then the drums, then other instruments, and your modpost looked like you wanted to follow the drums mostly. well I think than follow a constant sound like drums makes your map more easy of follow but is not like than your actual hitsounds are bad so~ is your decision

1. Looks good!

1. The break is quite short in a "Easy diff" You should consider newbie play with a 3 mins song is very tired,so you should give more break to them.(although this song is quite slow.)
2. 00:11:323(2)- Lol,this slider have touch the HP bar,humm,I recommend you replace this slider,avoid this condition appear in Easy diff!
   
   Something you can see

   
3. 00:27:609(5.1)- Some combo suggestion here:Add a new combo on (5)- Remove new combo on (1)- then.
4. 01:07:038(1)- Probably remove clap?Seems weird if you have a clap here.Well,my feeling only.
5. 01:16:466(1-8)- No,please consistent the combo length!this combo is longer than others.If I were you,I would like to add a new combo on (5)-
6. 01:42:823(x)- I recommend you move this green line to 01:42:930- (Use 1/8 snap),please apply this on other difficulty if you do it.
7. 01:49:895(1.2.3.4)- I think this pattern will make confused to newbie,well,depands on you!
8. 02:23:966(x)- I suggest you stop this spinner at 02:25:895- then map somthing after the spinner.However,it's fair enough for now.
9. 03:07:895(1-9)- Same as 01:16:446-

1. 00:25:895(3)- Probably make this slider end at 00:26:752-?Just follow the "Ding" sound.
2. 01:16:038(2.3)- I suggest you use the notes instead of,I don't like this in Normal diff,sure you can save it,my suggestion only.
3. 01:25:895(1.2.3.4)- I just wondering why you don't make it like "Easy" diff?That seems much difficult then this one.
4. 02:15:609(1-5)- I don't know this is difficult then overall or not,however stack it may feel better for me!However you need to consistent the spacing after you do that.
5. 02:29:180(4)- IMO,it should have a clap on this whole slider!

1. 00:13:038(x)- How about add a note here?Just follow the "s" sound lol.
2. 00:18:180(4)- This clap sound seems really weird because you didn't add any clap sound until00:27:180.Remove it if possible!
3. 01:14:966(5)- Consider a clap sound here?It's fit the music!
4. 02:03:823(x)- Please add a note here due to you follow the vocal before so just add a note to follow the vocal here.
5. 02:15:609(2.3.4.5)- IMO,it would be more fun during gameplay if you increase the jump spacing.
6. 02:23:966(x)- Why you didn't make it like "Easy" and "Normal" ?Move the spinner to here and stop at 02:25:038- if possible.Please map something after spinner if you do that.
7. 02:49:680(6-10)- Maybe try this one?It looks better in my eyes.
   
   Advice

   
8. 03:20:752(7)- I think this slider is quite weird,well,not my taste,you can save it,only I don't like it personally though!
9. 03:28:038(1)- Oh god,please remove the clap at the beginning of the slider,it doesn't fit the music and extremely weird.

Equivalent wrote:

stupidity

Equivalent wrote:

Hi, sorry late mod:

General:
I can say your SV is quite not appropriate vs your bpm here, where all of your diff end up being force speed up using inherited timing. It is fine to use higher SV in lower bpm as long they are appropriate with the difficulty. But it too late to change it now, it is fine with your setup, maybe just for revision for the next map/project That's because it fits with the song.
I suggest change the bg from .png to .jpg where 800kb will become 360kb And the quality will go down too!
I don't really hear the hitsound during kiai times, especially the hitclap Because it "blends" with the drums, which should be a good thing.

Kiai times/inherited times:
01:42:823 remove this small kiai time? It's not a kiai time. It's to make the fountain start again in the next section.

There are some under Hp bar notes that annoy me, as me who used default hp bar, it might be not a trouble much. But for those who uses custom skin just like Kanpakyin previously, which have lot more bigger size than default one will interrupted their playtime. For me, it the custom skin that make the notes cant be played/touch the hp bar. HP bar should be standardized in size ~
If you're using a non-default skin that overlaps notes, then it's YOUR fault that the notes are overlapping. They're perfectly fine for me in default skin and I don't think they should be changed to fit every skin down there.
Notes that touch/nearly touch the HP bar:

Easy:
00:11:323 (2)
00:49:895 (2) In normal play, it doesn't really touch the hp bar, but when in hardrock modes it really underneath the hp bar
02:11:323 (1)
02:17:323 (1)

Normal:
01:19:466 (7)
02:17:323 (6)
02:41:323 (1)
02:44:752 (1)

Hard:
00:13:466 (1,2,3)
00:52:038 (2,3,4)
00:58:038 (5)
01:24:823 (6)
02:13:895 (6)
02:51:395 (1,2)
03:19:895 (4)
03:20:323 (6)

That all from me <3

Blue Dragon wrote:

And the quality will go down too!