forum

Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size)

posted
Total Posts
91
Topic Starter
S h i o n
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月25日 at 23:07:09

Artist: Wakaba
Title: Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size)
Source: Sekai Ichi Hatsukoi
Tags: bl yaoi ending sherrie__fay tutuhaha
BPM: 107
Filesize: 9878kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.78 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (4.56 stars, 190 notes)
  3. Normal (3.52 stars, 120 notes)
  4. tutuhaha's Insane (4.89 stars, 263 notes)
Download: Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size)
Download: Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
君を好きだけじゃ物足りない .......................1st map
..................... 憧れだけじゃ埋めきれない
......................................................................... SB by lucyfly &
.................................................................................. sherrie__fay
......................................................................... Skin by xykbear
明日、仆は君に会いに行く。............................... Video by Katlin
Ending of the anime 「世界一初恋」

Mods:

Special thanks:

And if you want to play my Insane diff , here.
peipei4129
nice :)
Beren
[Loli]Dark
star~
Shirakawa Kotori
世界第一初恋 :shock:

腐女哥哥你好
DarknessAngel
好聽耶><
這圖都沒有連打說0.0
恩,還行!
tutuhaha
0口0这个必须挺!不管怎么样都要挺!(在下腐女一只)
先strat
mizuki_sakuya
神触哥哥 :D
Shiomiya Shiori
:) 神触欧尼酱
Supy
神触哥哥大好人 :3
Kiiwa
~^^/
Megurine Luka
:)

edit: set a preview time (timing——set current point as preview time
Ephoenix
腐女哥哥你好

...........................长长长长长长 还不够长! :)
DarknessAngel
[General]

Kai time should be at(01:12:055)
神觸哥哥做的圖好簡單...(逃



[Onodera]

AR-2,OD-2(要不然會太散,300也很難打出來,1星要有1星的樣子)
排列網格最好再小一點,不然有些距離會對不準

00:24:392(3) - 1 grid left & up
00:59:719(2) - 1 grid right
01:27:195(3) - making this seems to be better


[Takano]

AR-1,OD-1 seens to be beter(Normal設定不要太難,除非是4星:3)

00:34:205(1) - start at (00:34:485),until (00:35:607)
01:00:559(5,6) - try to make this without spacing mistake(這個會讓新手摸不著頭緒)


[Hatsukoi]

AR-1,OD-1(我覺得這種輕鬆的4.5星要有這種感覺:3)

00:44:438(2) - move this slider to (00:44:298),and make this


[Koi janai !]

00:12:055(1,2,3) - You had better to move them to here
00:22:429(1) - 1 grid left with "Alt"
00:39:251(5) - Making this can look beter
00:51:308(1) - Let this spinner be until (00:52:429)
01:04:765(4) - 1 grid right with using 1.5x
01:19:345(4) - 1 grid left

[My Massage]
我覺得改完這些問題就滿少了
這首歌好聽耶
神觸哥哥加油0.0
sherrie__fay
SB here by lucyfly & sherrie__fay
至于mod
看这里看这里
SPOILER
[General]
前2个diff+了绿线变速?……这个不让 不是我说的 换谁都不让的……。。
所有diff保证kiai开始结束在同一时间点
前3个diff最后的转盘没有消音 最后个diff却+了 好偏心哪(拖走
都+上吧。(正色
song setup-storyboarding 点开这个 把letterbox什么什么的那个去掉 不然SB会很难看
所有diff全这么去掉一下
enable countdown也全这么去掉一下。OK。
诶还有个diff的preview point和其他3个不一样?调回来:3
改名以后这图没更新过吧喂 我重新down了一遍,还是你以前的ID呢
[Onodera]
HD=3
AR=3
OD=2
00:10:934 - +note
00:24:392 (3) - 改成和(2)一样的弯的
00:48:065 - +note
00:52:990 (1) - 结尾+clap
00:54:111 (2) - 开头+finish
00:55:233 (3) - 角度调一下 不要和(2)的末尾贴在一起
01:03:083 (5) - 修形(其实这个diff滑条拉得有点不认真啊
01:08:691 (3) - snap没有对好(?) grid太大了……
01:12:055 (1) - 改finish
[Takano]
AR=5
OD=4
00:00:280 (1) - 转盘末尾音量减小 或者在00:03:644和00:04:205各+一个note
00:09:251 (1) - 好遮啊 这个对于新手 不好读吧
00:11:494 (5) - 同样不好读 这个slider 最好也snap了 反正左边那么大地方 不用白不用.还有这里有个长音,要不要考虑+个转盘?
00:21:588 (2) - 把他做的和(1)一样
00:22:709 (3,1) - ..怎么说呢,这个diff总之还是面向新手。 2分拍和全拍的连点一旦重叠,在低AR下就几乎分辨不出(是我让你-1的AR……但新手真心感觉上是跟不上AR6)
00:44:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 调整间距 至少让他不要挨得那么乱
01:00:279 - +note!这个空白实在是太太太太太……坑爹了……后边567因为遮挡的原因,感觉也需要重排一下下
01:05:887 (3,4) - 滑条和note分开……这种遮挡好丑←女生典型思维(拖
01:10:373 +note啦 这么大一个重音不+note我也好想点哪(拖+1
01:19:905 (4,1,2) - 这个竖过来摆吧……横着摆有点遮了
[Hatsukoi?]
00:04:765 (3,4) - 没对好(话说你都不·开grid4我情何以堪)
00:06:448 (1) - ……还是……不要跳了……老老实实做成snap……
00:31:401 (2) - 这个note从后面拿出来
00:44:438 (2) - 改掉 不要跟vocal
01:00:560 (9,10) - 说真的你所有变速都有点膜疼 一般来说,做图不会也用不着放这么多变速……如果你学红空,那这图不适合那么变……还有,这两个slider……又贴上了……
01:31:681 (4) - +clap
[Koi janai!]
AR7
OD6
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - snap 左边空间无限 何须自钻牛角尖:O
00:17:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - 要么改成3个小slider 要么6连打 混用看不清
00:21:588 (7,8) - 没对齐……话说怎么insane也不开grid4……
00:23:691 (6) - 其实这整个串都不太好读,但我不会改……至少把这根绿线去掉……这里变速真心不合适
00:24:952 (5,6,7) - ……去掉变速……还连着3个……太坑爹了
00:36:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - snap 遮 改掉
00:40:651 (3,4) - 又挨上了。。我个人对这种排位不是很喜欢啊
00:49:345 (4) - 和(2)的末尾对齐 开grid4
01:01:681 (8,1,2,3) - 遮了 分开
01:09:251 (5) - 5%不好听 调60% 和前面一样
01:10:934 (5,6) - 位置调换一下,5挪到右边,6挪到左边

于是就这样了:D
感觉还是不错的
老实改一下 可以rank的 别坟了啊:O
lucyfly我徒弟我会到处乱说么

Download: 32731 Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size).rar
Topic Starter
S h i o n

sherrie__fay wrote:

SB here by lucyfly & sherrie__fay
至于mod
看这里看这里
SPOILER
[General]
前2个diff+了绿线变速?……这个不让 不是我说的 换谁都不让的……。。
所有diff保证kiai开始结束在同一时间点
前3个diff最后的转盘没有消音 最后个diff却+了 好偏心哪(拖走
都+上吧。(正色
song setup-storyboarding 点开这个 把letterbox什么什么的那个去掉 不然SB会很难看
所有diff全这么去掉一下
enable countdown也全这么去掉一下。OK。
诶还有个diff的preview point和其他3个不一样?调回来:3
改名以后这图没更新过吧喂 我重新down了一遍,还是你以前的ID呢
[Onodera]
HD=3
AR=3
OD=2
00:10:934 - +note
00:24:392 (3) - 改成和(2)一样的弯的
00:48:065 - +note
00:52:990 (1) - 结尾+clap
00:54:111 (2) - 开头+finish
00:55:233 (3) - 角度调一下 不要和(2)的末尾贴在一起
01:03:083 (5) - 修形(其实这个diff滑条拉得有点不认真啊
01:08:691 (3) - snap没有对好(?) grid太大了……
01:12:055 (1) - 改finish
[Takano]
AR=5
OD=4
00:00:280 (1) - 转盘末尾音量减小 或者在00:03:644和00:04:205各+一个note
00:09:251 (1) - 好遮啊 这个对于新手 不好读吧
00:11:494 (5) - 同样不好读 这个slider 最好也snap了 反正左边那么大地方 不用白不用.还有这里有个长音,要不要考虑+个转盘?
00:21:588 (2) - 把他做的和(1)一样
00:22:709 (3,1) - ..怎么说呢,这个diff总之还是面向新手。 2分拍和全拍的连点一旦重叠,在低AR下就几乎分辨不出(是我让你-1的AR……但新手真心感觉上是跟不上AR6)
00:44:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 调整间距 至少让他不要挨得那么乱
01:00:279 - +note!这个空白实在是太太太太太……坑爹了……后边567因为遮挡的原因,感觉也需要重排一下下
01:05:887 (3,4) - 滑条和note分开……这种遮挡好丑←女生典型思维(拖
01:10:373 +note啦 这么大一个重音不+note我也好想点哪(拖+1
01:19:905 (4,1,2) - 这个竖过来摆吧……横着摆有点遮了
[Hatsukoi?]
00:04:765 (3,4) - 没对好(话说你都不·开grid4我情何以堪)
00:06:448 (1) - ……还是……不要跳了……老老实实做成snap……
00:31:401 (2) - 这个note从后面拿出来
00:44:438 (2) - 改掉 不要跟vocal
01:00:560 (9,10) - 说真的你所有变速都有点膜疼 一般来说,做图不会也用不着放这么多变速……如果你学红空,那这图不适合那么变……还有,这两个slider……又贴上了……
01:31:681 (4) - +clap
[Koi janai!]
AR7
OD6
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - snap 左边空间无限 何须自钻牛角尖:O
00:17:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - 要么改成3个小slider 要么6连打 混用看不清
00:21:588 (7,8) - 没对齐……话说怎么insane也不开grid4……
00:23:691 (6) - 其实这整个串都不太好读,但我不会改……至少把这根绿线去掉……这里变速真心不合适
00:24:952 (5,6,7) - ……去掉变速……还连着3个……太坑爹了
00:36:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - snap 遮 改掉
00:40:651 (3,4) - 又挨上了。。我个人对这种排位不是很喜欢啊
00:49:345 (4) - 和(2)的末尾对齐 开grid4
01:01:681 (8,1,2,3) - 遮了 分开
01:09:251 (5) - 5%不好听 调60% 和前面一样
01:10:934 (5,6) - 位置调换一下,5挪到右边,6挪到左边

于是就这样了:D
感觉还是不错的
老实改一下 可以rank的 别坟了啊:O
lucyfly我徒弟我会到处乱说么
有了2位大神的sb 这辈子值了啊……
感谢fay姐手把手指导。

90%都改了.. 至于绿线变速,我在想想把..实在不行remap = =
LoliMaster_old
oh my *O*
Sekaiichi Hatsukoi *-*
Your message is too short. ><
tutuhaha
摸摸
论坛PM我真是好点子因为我最近懒得看帖子(你欠揍吧喂)
0 0以前看过这歌啊哎呀我都忘了
首先
KIAItime的那些绿线绝对要对好,开始和结尾,自己看一遍对没对准反正我看了哪个难度来着是没对准的╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭(懒逼)
歌一定要192KB的
改完歌曲格式后off会发生变化记得找人测反正我测得永远不准啊哈哈哈............

Onodera
改格子,改到3,2太小了容易出现AImod检测不出来的间距问题
改完格子看下面的mod
00:09:251 (1) - 我觉得把00:07:008 (3)这个copy到这里来会比较好,同意的话用下面这个吧↓

160,288,8691,1,8
256,328,9251,6,0,B|288:291|344:289,1,90,2|0
432,248,10373,1,0
448,144,10934,1,0

00:10:373 (2) - +whistle
00:11:494 (4) - ^
00:12:616 (5) - ^
00:13:737 (6) - +finish
00:19:345 (3) - 改完格子后可发现这个间距错了,太近哦
00:20:466 (4) - ...丑啊换一个吧....圆滑点
00:26:635 (5) - 要不要摆到与00:24:111 (3)重叠的位置?另外+clap
00:28:037 (2) - 间距错了,太近
00:31:121 (X) - +clap,话说00:20:466这个要不然换成这个样子?会好看点
00:32:803 (2) - 间距
00:38:410 (4,5) - 个人建议这俩做成白点在中间的,总觉得白点靠尾部有点难看?
00:42:336 (1,2,3,4) - 微妙的间距问题
00:45:139 (3) - ...控好点另外00:46:261这里+clap
00:49:065 (5) - +clap
00:53:551 (X) - +clap
00:56:915 (7) - NC从这里开始?
00:59:719 (2) - 建议间距还是按照DS来
01:00:840 (1,2,3,4,5) - 仔细看也觉得这里的间距很微妙
01:04:205 (X) - +clap
01:09:812 (5,6,7) - 一样的微妙╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
01:16:541 (1) - ...圆滑点吧
01:18:784 (X) - +whistle
01:22:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一到放1/4拍的时候间距都微妙的不对了╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
01:25:513 (1) - +whistle
01:34:485 (X) - 最后这一下干脆消音怎么样?调到S10%
哦顺便一说,改完格子我发现有些间距也会发生微妙的偏差,自己重新拉一下也好,会发现一些更好的排列方式,
这么短的歌重新拉间距不过几分钟的事,当然你只改上面说到的人家也看不出来别的地方有问题,只是建议的啦╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭

Takano
.........这什么鬼?....
出了什么问题么这节奏怎么这么....奇妙?......
你是故意的还是改了slider velocity后没改slider?
故意的的话你这除了KIAI Time以外的节奏就全错了
不是故意的的话改完了我再mod 0 0....
大概瞄了一眼
00:11:494 (4) - 这个你还不如直接加个折返后面的spinner太短了还不如不要
然后这个你想做啥?normal?这样的话后面的排版要大修哦normal建议不要遮
有问题可以再PM我游戏啊论坛啊随便
- -..反正先调节奏
....哦我知道了你忘了在00:18:225这里把绿线调回1X了啦!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OTL先自己检查一遍音效看easynote什么的不允许出框尽量不要遮挡slider圆滑一点不要歪歪扭扭然后然后然后啊还有间距换格子格子(一口气读完)

Hatsukoi ?
00:11:214 (X) - +circle
00:20:186 (6) - 间距
00:23:270 (2) - +clap
00:33:924 (1) - spinner从这里开始
00:37:008 (X) - 这里我觉得不应该空拍,+circle
00:38:971 (6) - +clap
00:40:093 (X) - +clap
00:41:214 (4) - ^
00:44:579 (2) - ^
00:46:261 (6) - NC
00:54:111 (3) - ...这已经不是微妙了是差很大了
00:54:952 (4) - ...同上
00:56:915 (1) - 这里我认为你不应该跳,因为节奏不明显╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭,真想跳就从这里跳00:57:476 (3)
01:01:401 (2) - +clap
01:03:644 (7) - ^
01:20:747 (1) - 还想跳的话这里也可以跳
01:23:831 (X) - +clap
01:25:513 (1) - 间距
01:26:354 (2) - 间距
01:27:195 (1) - 后面这一溜的间距看一下

Koi janai !
0 0以前我想帮luka做这个曲子的full版,但是因为歌各种长人各种懒就坑了............LUKA我真的对不起你啊有没有T口T.......
先不管跳啊排版啊之类的,就我感觉你没把这曲子的节奏多样性给玩出来(玩?),节奏处理好了后再跳会简单很多
下面附上我随手做的几秒钟0v0
排版我排了,音效我没加,就这样吧╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭
希望对你有帮助咯^ ^

咦话说膜姐腐了么0口0!我以后有什么不好的SB是不是可以也找膜姐玩0口0!(各种群殴)

Download: Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size) (S h i o n) [Koi janai !X2].osu
Megurine Luka
\好的我来mod TV size/
Full ver.真是伤不起,做到后面我自己都蛋疼的没梗 :?
不过王子昨天说这歌听上瘾了...我怒跪

[strike][*strike]部分=扯蛋
[b][*b]=必须改
[red][*red]=建议改
无修饰则为建议ovo

[General]
王子的链接错了,点进去 user can not found,最后多了一个l
吗的快叫菲姐弄个skin出来这样我俩都好用
add 菲姐ID in tags

[Onodera]
按一下ctrl+2
HP-1~2
AR OD各-1
distance snaping建议恒定使用1.0,你的distance现在很多都有差距
00:04:765 (1) - 有点太平滑了,拉的弯一点
00:04:765 (1,2,3) - 间距不一样,调整一下
00:11:494 (4) - Easy建议不要叠,我被H30挑过._.
00:19:345 (3) - 间距
00:24:111 (3) - Easy最好不要压red tick
00:26:074 (x) - add circle,不加的话把下一个note的间距拉大,就算加了也要调整间距
00:28:037 (2) - 同00:24:111 (3), 后面的red tick我就不指出了._.
00:28:878 (4) - spacing
00:31:121 加clap
00:31:681 (1,2) - spacing
00:37:289 (x) - add circle
00:44:579 (1,2,3) - 新手会不知道中间空多少再按的,所以干脆拉远
00:56:915 (7) - spacing
00:58:597 (1) - ^
01:00:840 (1) - ^
01:01:962 (3) - ^(记得保持同样时长的空当间距是等距的,这点在Easy和NM里很重要._.后面懒得一个一个弄了ovo,你开着distance snaping用1.0全部调整一下吧)

01:10:934 (7) - 我这边做的时候用的是一个slider结束在01:11:214,因为这样正好可以压两个重音._.
01:21:588 (x) - add circle
01:22:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呜呜呜EZ真的不适合玩渐变spacing

[Takano]
有MAT/BAT很注意diff之间开始结尾时间的一致性,所以建议第一个spinner删掉或者在EAZY里加上spinner
↑不删的话:00:03:644 (x) - add circle
AR-1~2
同样的ctrl+2按一下
00:05:607 (2) - 还是spacing的问题,记得开distance snaping调整所有spacing,spacing问题我就不指出了._.比如这边这个,2不叠1的尾巴但是3叠了2
00:12:896 (1) - spinner对NM来说太短了,建议去掉改成slider
Slider changed,大概改过SV了?记得把所有slider全部重新调整
改完了我来recheck
ovo

Hatsukoi ?
建议把名字里的问号去掉
00:06:728 (2) - 这个slider有点难看._.波浪的明显一点吧,后面的也是._.有些slider都太平滑了
00:42:896 (8) - 把slider的倒数第二个白点去掉,
00:54:111 (3) - spacing
00:56:915 (1) - 这种跳有点太突然了._.
00:58:878 (2) - spacing
01:25:513 (1) - ^

感觉比简单难度的好多了。果然神触就应该做难图>.>

Koi janai !
同样地,去掉感叹号
OD+1~2
00:32:242-不要静音比较好
00:58:317 (4) - 太扭曲了吧=口=
01:00:560 (8) - NC
01:00:840 (1) - del NC

Spacing对我来说没什么大问题,估计是这歌本身我也快听得快吐了的关系...不过这种排列我估计会有人挑刺>.>


以上ovo。
ps. @毛前辈:这都黑QAQ


Topic Starter
S h i o n
回复tutuhaha:

基本都改了..
[Takano]
18秒那里少了一根绿线 导致后面slider全部悲剧..我错了..

[Koi janai !]
你随手做的那个好好..我试着去做出多样性的节奏吧..

mod辛苦了..感谢!!!!
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Megurine Luka wrote:

SPOILER
\好的我来mod TV size/
Full ver.真是伤不起,做到后面我自己都蛋疼的没梗 :?
不过王子昨天说这歌听上瘾了...我怒跪

[strike][*strike]部分=扯蛋
[b][*b]=必须改
[red][*red]=建议改
无修饰则为建议ovo

[General]
王子的链接错了,点进去 user can not found,最后多了一个l
吗的快叫菲姐弄个skin出来这样我俩都好用
add 菲姐ID in tags

[Onodera]
按一下ctrl+2
HP-1~2
AR OD各-1
distance snaping建议恒定使用1.0,你的distance现在很多都有差距
00:04:765 (1) - 有点太平滑了,拉的弯一点
00:04:765 (1,2,3) - 间距不一样,调整一下
00:11:494 (4) - Easy建议不要叠,我被H30挑过._.
00:19:345 (3) - 间距
00:24:111 (3) - Easy最好不要压red tick
00:26:074 (x) - add circle,不加的话把下一个note的间距拉大,就算加了也要调整间距
00:28:037 (2) - 同00:24:111 (3), 后面的red tick我就不指出了._.
00:28:878 (4) - spacing
00:31:121 加clap
00:31:681 (1,2) - spacing
00:37:289 (x) - add circle
00:44:579 (1,2,3) - 新手会不知道中间空多少再按的,所以干脆拉远
00:56:915 (7) - spacing
00:58:597 (1) - ^
01:00:840 (1) - ^
01:01:962 (3) - ^(记得保持同样时长的空当间距是等距的,这点在Easy和NM里很重要._.后面懒得一个一个弄了ovo,你开着distance snaping用1.0全部调整一下吧)

01:10:934 (7) - 我这边做的时候用的是一个slider结束在01:11:214,因为这样正好可以压两个重音._.
01:21:588 (x) - add circle
01:22:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呜呜呜EZ真的不适合玩渐变spacing

[Takano]
有MAT/BAT很注意diff之间开始结尾时间的一致性,所以建议第一个spinner删掉或者在EAZY里加上spinner
↑不删的话:00:03:644 (x) - add circle
AR-1~2
同样的ctrl+2按一下
00:05:607 (2) - 还是spacing的问题,记得开distance snaping调整所有spacing,spacing问题我就不指出了._.比如这边这个,2不叠1的尾巴但是3叠了2
00:12:896 (1) - spinner对NM来说太短了,建议去掉改成slider
Slider changed,大概改过SV了?记得把所有slider全部重新调整
改完了我来recheck
ovo

Hatsukoi ?
建议把名字里的问号去掉
00:06:728 (2) - 这个slider有点难看._.波浪的明显一点吧,后面的也是._.有些slider都太平滑了
00:42:896 (8) - 把slider的倒数第二个白点去掉,
00:54:111 (3) - spacing
00:56:915 (1) - 这种跳有点太突然了._.
00:58:878 (2) - spacing
01:25:513 (1) - ^

感觉比简单难度的好多了。果然神触就应该做难图>.>

Koi janai !
同样地,去掉感叹号
OD+1~2
00:32:242-不要静音比较好
00:58:317 (4) - 太扭曲了吧=口=
01:00:560 (8) - NC
01:00:840 (1) - del NC

Spacing对我来说没什么大问题,估计是这歌本身我也快听得快吐了的关系...不过这种排列我估计会有人挑刺>.>


以上ovo。
ps. @毛前辈:这都黑QAQ


为了证明spacing对我没问题...
1PC成绩
[attachment=0:c6740]screenshot044.jpg[/attachment:c6740]
感谢LS两位的认真MOD, 很实用...八成都改了。
话说王子是谁? 难道是5300哥哥?
Kiiwa
Hope that I helped you, Shion.
moemoemymessageistooshort
Megurine Luka
5300王子殿下无误


居然又是字数限制

王子洪福齐天王子体恤百姓王子无限高大
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Kiiwa wrote:

Hope that I helped you, Shion.
moemoemymessageistooshort
:) You helped me a lot on IRC mod. Thanks!~~
DarkRingSystem
:)先占楼


Topic Starter
S h i o n

DarkRingSystem wrote:

SPOILER
:)先占楼
[attachment=0:f0919]starrrrrrrrrrr.png[/attachment:f0919]
[attachment=0:f0919]starrrrrrrrrrr.png[/attachment:f0919]
感谢DRS大神指导..
mi sa
神风同学都说了那么多了,我也顶一下吧,加油~
Topic Starter
S h i o n

mi sa wrote:

SPOILER
神风同学都说了那么多了,我也顶一下吧,加油~
Thank you for your IRC mod~
tutuhaha
搞好了- -
还是有很多问题的- -
need more mod in my diff - -
Oyeah - -y【slap(╬ ̄皿 ̄)=○#( ̄#)3 ̄)】
mi sa同学你简直太好人了有没有QAQ....

Download: Wakaba - Ashita, Boku wa Kimi ni Ai ni Yuku (TV Size) (S h i o n) [tutuhaha's Insane].osu
Gamu
hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

●fine~

[Easy]

●AR-1. OD-1
●00:40:653 (7) - new combo add
●00:41:214 (1) - new combo remove
●01:07:569 (4) - new combo add
●01:09:812 (7) - ^

[Normal]

●00:49:625 - circle add
●01:09:812 (3) - new combo add
●01:15:419 (1) - new combo remove
●01:16:541 (3) - new combo add
●01:17:662 (1) - new combo remove

[Hard]

●00:00:280 (1) - Move to the end 00:01:962. 00:02:522 - circle add. 00:03:083 - circle add
●00:38:410 (5) - new combo add

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

●AR+1. HP+1
●00:58:597 (5) - new combo add


Good map!!!!!!!!!

Really great :D
DarknessAngel
啊哈,你最後還是找管理員處理啦?
我有空再來玩玩看你改過之後的圖
這麼大陣仗的MOD應該改善很多了才對
呵呵,看看我們的圖能不能湊巧一起RANKED吧?XD
Topic Starter
S h i o n

-Gamu- wrote:

SPOILER
hi- :)

All suggestions

[General]

●fine~

[Easy]

●AR-1. OD-1
●00:40:653 (7) - new combo add
●00:41:214 (1) - new combo remove
●01:07:569 (4) - new combo add
●01:09:812 (7) - ^
[Normal]

●00:49:625 - circle add
●01:09:812 (3) - new combo add
●01:15:419 (1) - new combo remove
●01:16:541 (3) - new combo add
●01:17:662 (1) - new combo remove

[Hard]

●00:00:280 (1) - Move to the end 00:01:962. 00:02:522 - circle add. 00:03:083 - circle add
●00:38:410 (5) - new combo add

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

●AR+1. HP+1 slow song,but i am stil thinking about increasing AR.
●00:58:597 (5) - new combo add


Good map!!!!!!!!!

Really great :D
All fixed ! (except what I say in red color) ↑ ↑ ↑

Thanks again ~ !
Topic Starter
S h i o n

DarknessAngel wrote:

SPOILER
啊哈,你最後還是找管理員處理啦?
我有空再來玩玩看你改過之後的圖
這麼大陣仗的MOD應該改善很多了才對
呵呵,看看我們的圖能不能湊巧一起RANKED吧?XD
找了别人做最后个难度,自己做的最终还是不要了(for lack of experience),不过放在creator's words里面了。
希望能一起rank吧,一起加油吧,少年。
Gamu
Star~

Using the kudos you gave me :)
Topic Starter
S h i o n

-Gamu- wrote:

Star~

Using the kudos you gave me :)
Thanks~ : )
theMikeAG
Very confused modder ahoy!

~General~
Make sure you place claps on EVERY heavy note in the song.

~Easy~
00:26:635 (4) - Add clap.
00:28:878 (3) - Add clap to slider end.
00:45:139 (2) - Add clap to slider end.
00:46:822 (4) - Add clap.
Basically, add a clap to every heavy note in the song. :|

~Normal~
00:12:616 (5) - Move this note 1 space left for symmetry.
00:30:280 (6) - If you were move this note, it would look better. See this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150551
01:31:120 (2) - This note isn't snapped to the grid. Move it on top of (3).

~Hard~
Got nothing here.

~Guest Difficulty (aka I'm not spelling that out. :o )~
Nothing here either.

That is all. Good map.
merchat7
As requested

[General]

- Remove audio from video
- mp3 is 320kbs. Must be changed to 128-192kbs if you want to get it ranked.
- Use the same slider tick for all difficulties, so change Easy slider tick rate to 2.
- Remove ed and put ending instead for tags.

[Easy]

- Ctrl+shift+a, ai mod, make sure you have no spacing error in Easy.

00:36:167 (1,2,3,4) Two sliders instead, 4 hit circles next to each other is hard for beginners.
00:40:653 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:00:840 (1,2,3) Slider instead

Don't put more than 2 hit circle next to each other in an Easy. Solid map.

[Normal]

- Ai mod, make sure there are no spacing error for your easiest difficulties.

00:03:083 (2,3) Just space them out
00:13:177 (6,7,8) Repeating slider instead?
00:40:653 (1) Make it like (4) at 00:42:896 instead. Doesn't look good as a wave slider.
01:24:952 (4,1) Remove 4 & 1 and put repeating slider here
01:32:242 (x) Forgot spinner? Add it.

[Hard]

00:35:607 (1) Don't reduce the volume for this, i thought i missed the note because of it.
00:44:999 (4,5) Remove 4, remove a repeat from 5 and move it to 00:45:420. Add hitcircles at 00:45:139 & 00:45:280. Don't use kick slider (slider with more than one repeat) if you can.

I didn't mention all the kick sliders since they are readable enough, but change them if you can.

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

- Curve your stream, instead of leaving them straight, for example, 00:01:261 or 00:02:943 and there are more ... It feel and play better if you do it and make your difficulty a little more interesting. Everything else seem fine.

Not really type of my song since it's very slow, so no star. Sorry, but good luck on getting it rank.
Pereira006
Hello~~

IMO <- My opinions

General

The Tags What mean "bl"? i need konw it and the symbol " __ " pleasse remove it all diff
I can see you mp3 is 320kbps pleasse enconding to 192kbps or 128kbps


Some Suggestions

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Easy]

Slider tick rate 1? i can see diff another is 2 pleasse same this

00:04:765 (1) - the start slider hitsound whistle?i can hear men higer voice with strong drums that mean remove whistle and add finish IMO
00:20:466 (4) - another strong drums so add finish?
00:27:195 (1) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lack hitsound pleasse use clap or whistle if you wanna
01:00:840 (1) - add finish
01:19:906 (5,1) - I can see is incosiente spacing pleasse fix this spacing if you change try fix spacing at 01:22:709 (2,3,4)
01:22:709 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - so random spacing why? pleasse fix this spacing

this good play but time kiai so random spacing pleasse fix and some here have lack hitsound pleasse try it
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Normal]

00:22:709 (1) - incosiente combo so only 00:23:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:541 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing if you fix this don't forget fix spacing at 00:48:504 (3,4,5)
01:03:924 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing
01:06:167 (4,1) - jump huh but i not sure Normal can't make jump i suggest you fix this spacing you can ignore this if you wanna
01:31:681 you finish here but another diff finish is 01:34:485 so add spinner on 01:32:242 and until to 01:34:485 to make same all diff finish
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

01:29:438 time kiai is finish here but another diff are 01:29:999 you should all diff consienty time kiai
00:06:448 (1) - 3 hitsound o.o? pleasse remove finish and whistle and clap stay
00:35:607 (1) - this is nothing drums or lyrics and are overmapped pleasse remove this
01:18:223 (1) - that same 00:06:448 (1)

very nice this mapset
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[tutuhaha's harsukoi]

well nothing wrong here okay.jpg
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all i think
good luck
Topic Starter
S h i o n

theMikeAG wrote:

SPOILER
Very confused modder ahoy!

~General~
Make sure you place claps on EVERY heavy note in the song.

~Easy~
00:26:635 (4) - Add clap.
00:28:878 (3) - Add clap to slider end.
00:45:139 (2) - Add clap to slider end.
00:46:822 (4) - Add clap.
Basically, add a clap to every heavy note in the song. :|

~Normal~
00:12:616 (5) - Move this note 1 space left for symmetry.
00:30:280 (6) - If you were move this note, it would look better. See this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150551
01:31:120 (2) - This note isn't snapped to the grid. Move it on top of (3).

~Hard~
Got nothing here.

~Guest Difficulty (aka I'm not spelling that out. :o )~
Nothing here either.

That is all. Good map.
All fixed.
Thanks !
Topic Starter
S h i o n

merchat7 wrote:

SPOILER
As requested

[General]

- Remove audio from video I must do it ?
- mp3 is 320kbs. Must be changed to 128-192kbs if you want to get it ranked.
- Use the same slider tick for all difficulties, so change Easy slider tick rate to 2.
- Remove ed and put ending instead for tags.

[Easy]

- Ctrl+shift+a, ai mod, make sure you have no spacing error in Easy.

00:36:167 (1,2,3,4) Two sliders instead, 4 hit circles next to each other is hard for beginners.
00:40:653 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:00:840 (1,2,3) Slider instead

Don't put more than 2 hit circle next to each other in an Easy. Solid map.

[Normal]

- Ai mod, make sure there are no spacing error for your easiest difficulties.

00:03:083 (2,3) Just space them out
00:13:177 (6,7,8) Repeating slider instead?
00:40:653 (1) Make it like (4) at 00:42:896 instead. Doesn't look good as a wave slider.
01:24:952 (4,1) Remove 4 & 1 and put repeating slider here
01:32:242 (x) Forgot spinner? Add it.

[Hard]

00:35:607 (1) Don't reduce the volume for this, i thought i missed the note because of it.
00:44:999 (4,5) Remove 4, remove a repeat from 5 and move it to 00:45:420. Add hitcircles at 00:45:139 & 00:45:280. Don't use kick slider (slider with more than one repeat) if you can.

I didn't mention all the kick sliders since they are readable enough, but change them if you can.

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

- Curve your stream, instead of leaving them straight, for example, 00:01:261 or 00:02:943 and there are more ... It feel and play better if you do it and make your difficulty a little more interesting. Everything else seem fine.

Not really type of my song since it's very slow, so no star. Sorry, but good luck on getting it rank.
All fixed . (except guest diff ,let tutuhaha decide .)
Thanks ~
Topic Starter
S h i o n

Pereira006 wrote:

SPOILER
Hello~~

IMO <- My opinions

General

The Tags What mean "bl"? i need konw it and the symbol " __ " pleasse remove it all diff
I can see you mp3 is 320kbps pleasse enconding to 192kbps or 128kbps


Some Suggestions

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Easy]

Slider tick rate 1? i can see diff another is 2 pleasse same this

00:04:765 (1) - the start slider hitsound whistle?i can hear men higer voice with strong drums that mean remove whistle and add finish IMO
00:20:466 (4) - another strong drums so add finish?
00:27:195 (1) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lack hitsound pleasse use clap or whistle if you wanna
01:00:840 (1) - add finish
01:19:906 (5,1) - I can see is incosiente spacing pleasse fix this spacing if you change try fix spacing at 01:22:709 (2,3,4)
01:22:709 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - so random spacing why? pleasse fix this spacing

this good play but time kiai so random spacing pleasse fix and some here have lack hitsound pleasse try it
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Normal]

00:22:709 (1) - incosiente combo so only 00:23:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:541 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing if you fix this don't forget fix spacing at 00:48:504 (3,4,5) no
01:03:924 (1,2) - Incosiente spacingno
01:06:167 (4,1) - jump huh but i not sure Normal can't make jump i suggest you fix this spacing you can ignore this if you wanna
01:31:681 you finish here but another diff finish is 01:34:485 so add spinner on 01:32:242 and until to 01:34:485 to make same all diff finish
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

01:29:438 time kiai is finish here but another diff are 01:29:999 you should all diff consienty time kiai
00:06:448 (1) - 3 hitsound o.o? pleasse remove finish and whistle and clap stay
00:35:607 (1) - this is nothing drums or lyrics and are overmapped pleasse remove this
01:18:223 (1) - that same 00:06:448 (1)

very nice this mapset
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[tutuhaha's harsukoi]

well nothing wrong here okay.jpg
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that all i think
good luck
Thanks ~
Vergence

Hi~

Easy
00:02:522 (1) - This spinner ends too early. Find a way to make it have enough bonus and not that short
00:19:345 (3 and 4) - One grid left
01:03:083 (5) - Make it balanced on both sides of this sliders

Normal
00:19:391 (4) - Move this away from overlapping (1)
00:24:438 (4) - ^
00:55:840 (5) - New combo
01:00:086 (7) - Overlapping with (4)

Hard
00:11:530 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle in the center of the map
Some Overlapping notes occur in the diff. I would like to see a clean map :)

Insane
Ok~
____________________________________________
That's all~
Topic Starter
S h i o n

DragonSparta wrote:

SPOILER

Hi~

Easy
00:02:522 (1) - This spinner ends too early. Find a way to make it have enough bonus and not that short no,but if others think so , i will change it
00:19:345 (3 and 4) - One grid left ok
01:03:083 (5) - Make it balanced on both sides of this slidersok

Normal
00:19:391 (4) - Move this away from overlapping (1) ok
00:24:438 (4) - ^ok
00:55:840 (5) - New combo no
01:00:086 (7) - Overlapping with (4) it isn't ?

Hard
00:11:530 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle in the center of the map ok
Some Overlapping notes occur in the diff. I would like to see a clean map :)

Insane
Ok~
____________________________________________
That's all~
Thanks for useful advice ~
shikyu
Request via modding queue :D

[Easy]
00:32:837 (2) - down 3 grid (end of slider)
00:37:323 (3) - add clap at the end of slider
01:22:183 (3,4) - add clap at the end of slider

[Normal]
00:28:912 (3) - add clap

[Hard]
Fine for me

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]
some suggestion... fix hitsounds, sounds weird in some places

Hope it useful :)
Topic Starter
S h i o n

shikyu wrote:

SPOILER
Request via modding queue :D

[Easy]
00:32:837 (2) - down 3 grid (end of slider) ok
00:37:323 (3) - add clap at the end of slider ok
01:22:183 (3,4) - add clap at the end of slider ok

[Normal]
00:28:912 (3) - add clap ok

[Hard]
Fine for me

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]
some suggestion... fix hitsounds, sounds weird in some places ok

Hope it useful :)
Thanks ~
mi sa

tutuhaha wrote:

搞好了- -
还是有很多问题的- -
need more mod in my diff - -
Oyeah - -y【slap(╬ ̄皿 ̄)=○#( ̄#)3 ̄)】
mi sa同学你简直太好人了有没有QAQ....
别、别发我好人卡 :?
AoiX
Skin&Video Request
Video:http://puu.sh/5ZJy
Skin:http://puu.sh/5ZQn
渣技术请多包涵。。。
@Luka,要用也拿去吧~
HellDawn
General
Your bg 960x768 please change 1024x768 or 800x600

Normal
00:03:678- Spacing
kontema
Thx for mapping this
Topic Starter
S h i o n

HellDawn wrote:

SPOILER
General
Your bg 960x768 please change 1024x768 or 800x600 fixed

Normal
00:03:678- Spacing ok
Thanks ~
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply