sherrie__fay wrote:

SB here by lucyfly & sherrie__fay
至于mod
看这里看这里

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[General]
前2个diff+了绿线变速？……这个不让 不是我说的 换谁都不让的……。。
所有diff保证kiai开始结束在同一时间点
前3个diff最后的转盘没有消音 最后个diff却+了 好偏心哪（拖走
都+上吧。（正色
song setup-storyboarding 点开这个 把letterbox什么什么的那个去掉 不然SB会很难看
所有diff全这么去掉一下
enable countdown也全这么去掉一下。OK。
诶还有个diff的preview point和其他3个不一样？调回来:3
改名以后这图没更新过吧喂 我重新down了一遍，还是你以前的ID呢
[Onodera]
HD=3
AR=3
OD=2
00:10:934 - +note
00:24:392 (3) - 改成和(2)一样的弯的
00:48:065 - +note
00:52:990 (1) - 结尾+clap
00:54:111 (2) - 开头+finish
00:55:233 (3) - 角度调一下 不要和（2）的末尾贴在一起
01:03:083 (5) - 修形（其实这个diff滑条拉得有点不认真啊
01:08:691 (3) - snap没有对好(?) grid太大了……
01:12:055 (1) - 改finish
[Takano]
AR=5
OD=4
00:00:280 (1) - 转盘末尾音量减小 或者在00:03:644和00:04:205各+一个note
00:09:251 (1) - 好遮啊 这个对于新手 不好读吧
00:11:494 (5) - 同样不好读 这个slider 最好也snap了 反正左边那么大地方 不用白不用.还有这里有个长音,要不要考虑+个转盘?
00:21:588 (2) - 把他做的和(1)一样
00:22:709 (3,1) - ..怎么说呢，这个diff总之还是面向新手。 2分拍和全拍的连点一旦重叠，在低AR下就几乎分辨不出（是我让你-1的AR……但新手真心感觉上是跟不上AR6）
00:44:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 调整间距 至少让他不要挨得那么乱
01:00:279 - +note!这个空白实在是太太太太太……坑爹了……后边567因为遮挡的原因，感觉也需要重排一下下
01:05:887 (3,4) - 滑条和note分开……这种遮挡好丑←女生典型思维（拖
01:10:373 +note啦 这么大一个重音不+note我也好想点哪（拖+1
01:19:905 (4,1,2) - 这个竖过来摆吧……横着摆有点遮了
[Hatsukoi?]
00:04:765 (3,4) - 没对好（话说你都不·开grid4我情何以堪）
00:06:448 (1) - ……还是……不要跳了……老老实实做成snap……
00:31:401 (2) - 这个note从后面拿出来
00:44:438 (2) - 改掉 不要跟vocal
01:00:560 (9,10) - 说真的你所有变速都有点膜疼 一般来说，做图不会也用不着放这么多变速……如果你学红空，那这图不适合那么变……还有，这两个slider……又贴上了……
01:31:681 (4) - +clap
[Koi janai!]
AR7
OD6
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - snap 左边空间无限 何须自钻牛角尖:O
00:17:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - 要么改成3个小slider 要么6连打 混用看不清
00:21:588 (7,8) - 没对齐……话说怎么insane也不开grid4……
00:23:691 (6) - 其实这整个串都不太好读，但我不会改……至少把这根绿线去掉……这里变速真心不合适
00:24:952 (5,6,7) - ……去掉变速……还连着3个……太坑爹了
00:36:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - snap 遮 改掉
00:40:651 (3,4) - 又挨上了。。我个人对这种排位不是很喜欢啊
00:49:345 (4) - 和(2)的末尾对齐 开grid4
01:01:681 (8,1,2,3) - 遮了 分开
01:09:251 (5) - 5%不好听 调60% 和前面一样
01:10:934 (5,6) - 位置调换一下，5挪到右边，6挪到左边

于是就这样了:D
感觉还是不错的
老实改一下 可以rank的 别坟了啊:O
lucyfly我徒弟我会到处乱说么

160,288,8691,1,8
256,328,9251,6,0,B|288:291|344:289,1,90,2|0
432,248,10373,1,0
448,144,10934,1,0

Megurine Luka wrote:

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\好的我来mod TV size/
Full ver.真是伤不起，做到后面我自己都蛋疼的没梗
不过王子昨天说这歌听上瘾了...我怒跪

[strike][*strike]部分=扯蛋
[b][*b]=必须改
[red][*red]=建议改
无修饰则为建议ovo

[General]
王子的链接错了，点进去 user can not found，最后多了一个l
吗的快叫菲姐弄个skin出来这样我俩都好用
add 菲姐ID in tags

[Onodera]
按一下ctrl+2
HP-1~2
AR OD各-1
distance snaping建议恒定使用1.0，你的distance现在很多都有差距
00:04:765 (1) - 有点太平滑了，拉的弯一点
00:04:765 (1,2,3) - 间距不一样，调整一下
00:11:494 (4) - Easy建议不要叠，我被H30挑过._.
00:19:345 (3) - 间距
00:24:111 (3) - Easy最好不要压red tick
00:26:074 (x) - add circle，不加的话把下一个note的间距拉大，就算加了也要调整间距
00:28:037 (2) - 同00:24:111 (3), 后面的red tick我就不指出了._.
00:28:878 (4) - spacing
00:31:121 加clap
00:31:681 (1,2) - spacing
00:37:289 (x) - add circle
00:44:579 (1,2,3) - 新手会不知道中间空多少再按的，所以干脆拉远
00:56:915 (7) - spacing
00:58:597 (1) - ^
01:00:840 (1) - ^
01:01:962 (3) - ^（记得保持同样时长的空当间距是等距的，这点在Easy和NM里很重要._.后面懒得一个一个弄了ovo，你开着distance snaping用1.0全部调整一下吧）

01:10:934 (7) - 我这边做的时候用的是一个slider结束在01:11:214，因为这样正好可以压两个重音._.
01:21:588 (x) - add circle
01:22:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呜呜呜EZ真的不适合玩渐变spacing

[Takano]
有MAT/BAT很注意diff之间开始结尾时间的一致性，所以建议第一个spinner删掉或者在EAZY里加上spinner
↑不删的话：00:03:644 (x) - add circle
AR-1~2
同样的ctrl+2按一下
00:05:607 (2) - 还是spacing的问题，记得开distance snaping调整所有spacing，spacing问题我就不指出了._.比如这边这个，2不叠1的尾巴但是3叠了2
00:12:896 (1) - spinner对NM来说太短了，建议去掉改成slider
Slider changed，大概改过SV了？记得把所有slider全部重新调整
改完了我来recheck
ovo

Hatsukoi ?
建议把名字里的问号去掉
00:06:728 (2) - 这个slider有点难看._.波浪的明显一点吧，后面的也是._.有些slider都太平滑了
00:42:896 (8) - 把slider的倒数第二个白点去掉，
00:54:111 (3) - spacing
00:56:915 (1) - 这种跳有点太突然了._.
00:58:878 (2) - spacing
01:25:513 (1) - ^
感觉比简单难度的好多了。果然神触就应该做难图>.>

Koi janai !
同样地，去掉感叹号
OD+1~2
00:32:242-不要静音比较好
00:58:317 (4) - 太扭曲了吧=口=
01:00:560 (8) - NC
01:00:840 (1) - del NC

Spacing对我来说没什么大问题，估计是这歌本身我也快听得快吐了的关系...不过这种排列我估计会有人挑刺>.>


以上ovo。
ps. @毛前辈：这都黑QAQ

为了证明spacing对我没问题...

1PC成绩
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Kiiwa wrote:

Hope that I helped you, Shion.
moemoemymessageistooshort

DarkRingSystem wrote:

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:)先占楼
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mi sa wrote:

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神风同学都说了那么多了，我也顶一下吧，加油~

-Gamu- wrote:

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hi-

All suggestions

[General]

●fine~

[Easy]

●AR-1. OD-1
●00:40:653 (7) - new combo add
●00:41:214 (1) - new combo remove
●01:07:569 (4) - new combo add
●01:09:812 (7) - ^
[Normal]

●00:49:625 - circle add
●01:09:812 (3) - new combo add
●01:15:419 (1) - new combo remove
●01:16:541 (3) - new combo add
●01:17:662 (1) - new combo remove

[Hard]

●00:00:280 (1) - Move to the end 00:01:962. 00:02:522 - circle add. 00:03:083 - circle add
●00:38:410 (5) - new combo add

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

●AR+1. HP+1 slow song,but i am stil thinking about increasing AR.
●00:58:597 (5) - new combo add


Good map!!!!!!!!!

Really great

DarknessAngel wrote:

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啊哈，你最後還是找管理員處理啦？
我有空再來玩玩看你改過之後的圖
這麼大陣仗的MOD應該改善很多了才對
呵呵，看看我們的圖能不能湊巧一起RANKED吧？XD

-Gamu- wrote:

Star~

Using the kudos you gave me

theMikeAG wrote:

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Very confused modder ahoy!

~General~
Make sure you place claps on EVERY heavy note in the song.

~Easy~
00:26:635 (4) - Add clap.
00:28:878 (3) - Add clap to slider end.
00:45:139 (2) - Add clap to slider end.
00:46:822 (4) - Add clap.
Basically, add a clap to every heavy note in the song.

~Normal~
00:12:616 (5) - Move this note 1 space left for symmetry.
00:30:280 (6) - If you were move this note, it would look better. See this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150551
01:31:120 (2) - This note isn't snapped to the grid. Move it on top of (3).

~Hard~
Got nothing here.

~Guest Difficulty (aka I'm not spelling that out. )~
Nothing here either.

That is all. Good map.

merchat7 wrote:

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As requested

[General]

- Remove audio from video I must do it ?
- mp3 is 320kbs. Must be changed to 128-192kbs if you want to get it ranked.
- Use the same slider tick for all difficulties, so change Easy slider tick rate to 2.
- Remove ed and put ending instead for tags.

[Easy]

- Ctrl+shift+a, ai mod, make sure you have no spacing error in Easy.

00:36:167 (1,2,3,4) Two sliders instead, 4 hit circles next to each other is hard for beginners.
00:40:653 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:00:840 (1,2,3) Slider instead

Don't put more than 2 hit circle next to each other in an Easy. Solid map.

[Normal]

- Ai mod, make sure there are no spacing error for your easiest difficulties.

00:03:083 (2,3) Just space them out
00:13:177 (6,7,8) Repeating slider instead?
00:40:653 (1) Make it like (4) at 00:42:896 instead. Doesn't look good as a wave slider.
01:24:952 (4,1) Remove 4 & 1 and put repeating slider here
01:32:242 (x) Forgot spinner? Add it.

[Hard]

00:35:607 (1) Don't reduce the volume for this, i thought i missed the note because of it.
00:44:999 (4,5) Remove 4, remove a repeat from 5 and move it to 00:45:420. Add hitcircles at 00:45:139 & 00:45:280. Don't use kick slider (slider with more than one repeat) if you can.

I didn't mention all the kick sliders since they are readable enough, but change them if you can.

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

- Curve your stream, instead of leaving them straight, for example, 00:01:261 or 00:02:943 and there are more ... It feel and play better if you do it and make your difficulty a little more interesting. Everything else seem fine.

Not really type of my song since it's very slow, so no star. Sorry, but good luck on getting it rank.

Pereira006 wrote:

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Hello~~

IMO <- My opinions

General

The Tags What mean "bl"? i need konw it and the symbol " __ " pleasse remove it all diff
I can see you mp3 is 320kbps pleasse enconding to 192kbps or 128kbps


Some Suggestions
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[Easy]

Slider tick rate 1? i can see diff another is 2 pleasse same this

00:04:765 (1) - the start slider hitsound whistle?i can hear men higer voice with strong drums that mean remove whistle and add finish IMO
00:20:466 (4) - another strong drums so add finish?
00:27:195 (1) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lack hitsound pleasse use clap or whistle if you wanna
01:00:840 (1) - add finish
01:19:906 (5,1) - I can see is incosiente spacing pleasse fix this spacing if you change try fix spacing at 01:22:709 (2,3,4)
01:22:709 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - so random spacing why? pleasse fix this spacing

this good play but time kiai so random spacing pleasse fix and some here have lack hitsound pleasse try it
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[Normal]

00:22:709 (1) - incosiente combo so only 00:23:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:541 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing if you fix this don't forget fix spacing at 00:48:504 (3,4,5) no
01:03:924 (1,2) - Incosiente spacingno
01:06:167 (4,1) - jump huh but i not sure Normal can't make jump i suggest you fix this spacing you can ignore this if you wanna
01:31:681 you finish here but another diff finish is 01:34:485 so add spinner on 01:32:242 and until to 01:34:485 to make same all diff finish
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[hard]

01:29:438 time kiai is finish here but another diff are 01:29:999 you should all diff consienty time kiai
00:06:448 (1) - 3 hitsound o.o? pleasse remove finish and whistle and clap stay
00:35:607 (1) - this is nothing drums or lyrics and are overmapped pleasse remove this
01:18:223 (1) - that same 00:06:448 (1)

very nice this mapset
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[tutuhaha's harsukoi]

well nothing wrong here okay.jpg
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that all i think
good luck

DragonSparta wrote:

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Hi~

Easy
00:02:522 (1) - This spinner ends too early. Find a way to make it have enough bonus and not that short no,but if others think so , i will change it
00:19:345 (3 and 4) - One grid left ok
01:03:083 (5) - Make it balanced on both sides of this slidersok

Normal
00:19:391 (4) - Move this away from overlapping (1) ok
00:24:438 (4) - ^ok
00:55:840 (5) - New combo no
01:00:086 (7) - Overlapping with (4) it isn't ?

Hard
00:11:530 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle in the center of the map ok
Some Overlapping notes occur in the diff. I would like to see a clean map

Insane
Ok~
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That's all~