1. Easy (1.78 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (4.56 stars, 190 notes)
3. Normal (3.52 stars, 120 notes)
4. tutuhaha's Insane (4.89 stars, 263 notes)

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sherrie__fay wrote:

SB here by lucyfly & sherrie__fay
至于mod
看这里看这里

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[General]
前2个diff+了绿线变速？……这个不让 不是我说的 换谁都不让的……。。
所有diff保证kiai开始结束在同一时间点
前3个diff最后的转盘没有消音 最后个diff却+了 好偏心哪（拖走
都+上吧。（正色
song setup-storyboarding 点开这个 把letterbox什么什么的那个去掉 不然SB会很难看
所有diff全这么去掉一下
enable countdown也全这么去掉一下。OK。
诶还有个diff的preview point和其他3个不一样？调回来:3
改名以后这图没更新过吧喂 我重新down了一遍，还是你以前的ID呢
[Onodera]
HD=3
AR=3
OD=2
00:10:934 - +note
00:24:392 (3) - 改成和(2)一样的弯的
00:48:065 - +note
00:52:990 (1) - 结尾+clap
00:54:111 (2) - 开头+finish
00:55:233 (3) - 角度调一下 不要和（2）的末尾贴在一起
01:03:083 (5) - 修形（其实这个diff滑条拉得有点不认真啊
01:08:691 (3) - snap没有对好(?) grid太大了……
01:12:055 (1) - 改finish
[Takano]
AR=5
OD=4
00:00:280 (1) - 转盘末尾音量减小 或者在00:03:644和00:04:205各+一个note
00:09:251 (1) - 好遮啊 这个对于新手 不好读吧
00:11:494 (5) - 同样不好读 这个slider 最好也snap了 反正左边那么大地方 不用白不用.还有这里有个长音,要不要考虑+个转盘?
00:21:588 (2) - 把他做的和(1)一样
00:22:709 (3,1) - ..怎么说呢，这个diff总之还是面向新手。 2分拍和全拍的连点一旦重叠，在低AR下就几乎分辨不出（是我让你-1的AR……但新手真心感觉上是跟不上AR6）
00:44:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - 调整间距 至少让他不要挨得那么乱
01:00:279 - +note!这个空白实在是太太太太太……坑爹了……后边567因为遮挡的原因，感觉也需要重排一下下
01:05:887 (3,4) - 滑条和note分开……这种遮挡好丑←女生典型思维（拖
01:10:373 +note啦 这么大一个重音不+note我也好想点哪（拖+1
01:19:905 (4,1,2) - 这个竖过来摆吧……横着摆有点遮了
[Hatsukoi?]
00:04:765 (3,4) - 没对好（话说你都不·开grid4我情何以堪）
00:06:448 (1) - ……还是……不要跳了……老老实实做成snap……
00:31:401 (2) - 这个note从后面拿出来
00:44:438 (2) - 改掉 不要跟vocal
01:00:560 (9,10) - 说真的你所有变速都有点膜疼 一般来说，做图不会也用不着放这么多变速……如果你学红空，那这图不适合那么变……还有，这两个slider……又贴上了……
01:31:681 (4) - +clap
[Koi janai!]
AR7
OD6
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - snap 左边空间无限 何须自钻牛角尖:O
00:17:380 (2,3,4,5,6) - 要么改成3个小slider 要么6连打 混用看不清
00:21:588 (7,8) - 没对齐……话说怎么insane也不开grid4……
00:23:691 (6) - 其实这整个串都不太好读，但我不会改……至少把这根绿线去掉……这里变速真心不合适
00:24:952 (5,6,7) - ……去掉变速……还连着3个……太坑爹了
00:36:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - snap 遮 改掉
00:40:651 (3,4) - 又挨上了。。我个人对这种排位不是很喜欢啊
00:49:345 (4) - 和(2)的末尾对齐 开grid4
01:01:681 (8,1,2,3) - 遮了 分开
01:09:251 (5) - 5%不好听 调60% 和前面一样
01:10:934 (5,6) - 位置调换一下，5挪到右边，6挪到左边

于是就这样了:D
感觉还是不错的
老实改一下 可以rank的 别坟了啊:O
lucyfly我徒弟我会到处乱说么

160,288,8691,1,8
256,328,9251,6,0,B|288:291|344:289,1,90,2|0
432,248,10373,1,0
448,144,10934,1,0

Megurine Luka wrote:

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\好的我来mod TV size/
Full ver.真是伤不起，做到后面我自己都蛋疼的没梗
不过王子昨天说这歌听上瘾了...我怒跪

[strike][*strike]部分=扯蛋
[b][*b]=必须改
[red][*red]=建议改
无修饰则为建议ovo

[General]
王子的链接错了，点进去 user can not found，最后多了一个l
吗的快叫菲姐弄个skin出来这样我俩都好用
add 菲姐ID in tags

[Onodera]
按一下ctrl+2
HP-1~2
AR OD各-1
distance snaping建议恒定使用1.0，你的distance现在很多都有差距
00:04:765 (1) - 有点太平滑了，拉的弯一点
00:04:765 (1,2,3) - 间距不一样，调整一下
00:11:494 (4) - Easy建议不要叠，我被H30挑过._.
00:19:345 (3) - 间距
00:24:111 (3) - Easy最好不要压red tick
00:26:074 (x) - add circle，不加的话把下一个note的间距拉大，就算加了也要调整间距
00:28:037 (2) - 同00:24:111 (3), 后面的red tick我就不指出了._.
00:28:878 (4) - spacing
00:31:121 加clap
00:31:681 (1,2) - spacing
00:37:289 (x) - add circle
00:44:579 (1,2,3) - 新手会不知道中间空多少再按的，所以干脆拉远
00:56:915 (7) - spacing
00:58:597 (1) - ^
01:00:840 (1) - ^
01:01:962 (3) - ^（记得保持同样时长的空当间距是等距的，这点在Easy和NM里很重要._.后面懒得一个一个弄了ovo，你开着distance snaping用1.0全部调整一下吧）

01:10:934 (7) - 我这边做的时候用的是一个slider结束在01:11:214，因为这样正好可以压两个重音._.
01:21:588 (x) - add circle
01:22:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 呜呜呜EZ真的不适合玩渐变spacing

[Takano]
有MAT/BAT很注意diff之间开始结尾时间的一致性，所以建议第一个spinner删掉或者在EAZY里加上spinner
↑不删的话：00:03:644 (x) - add circle
AR-1~2
同样的ctrl+2按一下
00:05:607 (2) - 还是spacing的问题，记得开distance snaping调整所有spacing，spacing问题我就不指出了._.比如这边这个，2不叠1的尾巴但是3叠了2
00:12:896 (1) - spinner对NM来说太短了，建议去掉改成slider
Slider changed，大概改过SV了？记得把所有slider全部重新调整
改完了我来recheck
ovo

Hatsukoi ?
建议把名字里的问号去掉
00:06:728 (2) - 这个slider有点难看._.波浪的明显一点吧，后面的也是._.有些slider都太平滑了
00:42:896 (8) - 把slider的倒数第二个白点去掉，
00:54:111 (3) - spacing
00:56:915 (1) - 这种跳有点太突然了._.
00:58:878 (2) - spacing
01:25:513 (1) - ^
感觉比简单难度的好多了。果然神触就应该做难图>.>

Koi janai !
同样地，去掉感叹号
OD+1~2
00:32:242-不要静音比较好
00:58:317 (4) - 太扭曲了吧=口=
01:00:560 (8) - NC
01:00:840 (1) - del NC

Spacing对我来说没什么大问题，估计是这歌本身我也快听得快吐了的关系...不过这种排列我估计会有人挑刺>.>


以上ovo。
ps. @毛前辈：这都黑QAQ

为了证明spacing对我没问题...

1PC成绩
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Kiiwa wrote:

Hope that I helped you, Shion.
moemoemymessageistooshort

DarkRingSystem wrote:

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:)先占楼
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mi sa wrote:

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神风同学都说了那么多了，我也顶一下吧，加油~

-Gamu- wrote:

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hi-

All suggestions

[General]

●fine~

[Easy]

●AR-1. OD-1
●00:40:653 (7) - new combo add
●00:41:214 (1) - new combo remove
●01:07:569 (4) - new combo add
●01:09:812 (7) - ^
[Normal]

●00:49:625 - circle add
●01:09:812 (3) - new combo add
●01:15:419 (1) - new combo remove
●01:16:541 (3) - new combo add
●01:17:662 (1) - new combo remove

[Hard]

●00:00:280 (1) - Move to the end 00:01:962. 00:02:522 - circle add. 00:03:083 - circle add
●00:38:410 (5) - new combo add

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

●AR+1. HP+1 slow song,but i am stil thinking about increasing AR.
●00:58:597 (5) - new combo add


Good map!!!!!!!!!

Really great

DarknessAngel wrote:

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啊哈，你最後還是找管理員處理啦？
我有空再來玩玩看你改過之後的圖
這麼大陣仗的MOD應該改善很多了才對
呵呵，看看我們的圖能不能湊巧一起RANKED吧？XD

-Gamu- wrote:

Star~

Using the kudos you gave me

theMikeAG wrote:

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Very confused modder ahoy!

~General~
Make sure you place claps on EVERY heavy note in the song.

~Easy~
00:26:635 (4) - Add clap.
00:28:878 (3) - Add clap to slider end.
00:45:139 (2) - Add clap to slider end.
00:46:822 (4) - Add clap.
Basically, add a clap to every heavy note in the song.

~Normal~
00:12:616 (5) - Move this note 1 space left for symmetry.
00:30:280 (6) - If you were move this note, it would look better. See this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/150551
01:31:120 (2) - This note isn't snapped to the grid. Move it on top of (3).

~Hard~
Got nothing here.

~Guest Difficulty (aka I'm not spelling that out. )~
Nothing here either.

That is all. Good map.

merchat7 wrote:

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As requested

[General]

- Remove audio from video I must do it ?
- mp3 is 320kbs. Must be changed to 128-192kbs if you want to get it ranked.
- Use the same slider tick for all difficulties, so change Easy slider tick rate to 2.
- Remove ed and put ending instead for tags.

[Easy]

- Ctrl+shift+a, ai mod, make sure you have no spacing error in Easy.

00:36:167 (1,2,3,4) Two sliders instead, 4 hit circles next to each other is hard for beginners.
00:40:653 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:00:840 (1,2,3) Slider instead

Don't put more than 2 hit circle next to each other in an Easy. Solid map.

[Normal]

- Ai mod, make sure there are no spacing error for your easiest difficulties.

00:03:083 (2,3) Just space them out
00:13:177 (6,7,8) Repeating slider instead?
00:40:653 (1) Make it like (4) at 00:42:896 instead. Doesn't look good as a wave slider.
01:24:952 (4,1) Remove 4 & 1 and put repeating slider here
01:32:242 (x) Forgot spinner? Add it.

[Hard]

00:35:607 (1) Don't reduce the volume for this, i thought i missed the note because of it.
00:44:999 (4,5) Remove 4, remove a repeat from 5 and move it to 00:45:420. Add hitcircles at 00:45:139 & 00:45:280. Don't use kick slider (slider with more than one repeat) if you can.

I didn't mention all the kick sliders since they are readable enough, but change them if you can.

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]

- Curve your stream, instead of leaving them straight, for example, 00:01:261 or 00:02:943 and there are more ... It feel and play better if you do it and make your difficulty a little more interesting. Everything else seem fine.

Not really type of my song since it's very slow, so no star. Sorry, but good luck on getting it rank.

Pereira006 wrote:

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Hello~~

IMO <- My opinions

General

The Tags What mean "bl"? i need konw it and the symbol " __ " pleasse remove it all diff
I can see you mp3 is 320kbps pleasse enconding to 192kbps or 128kbps


Some Suggestions
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[Easy]

Slider tick rate 1? i can see diff another is 2 pleasse same this

00:04:765 (1) - the start slider hitsound whistle?i can hear men higer voice with strong drums that mean remove whistle and add finish IMO
00:20:466 (4) - another strong drums so add finish?
00:27:195 (1) - ^
00:52:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lack hitsound pleasse use clap or whistle if you wanna
01:00:840 (1) - add finish
01:19:906 (5,1) - I can see is incosiente spacing pleasse fix this spacing if you change try fix spacing at 01:22:709 (2,3,4)
01:22:709 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - so random spacing why? pleasse fix this spacing

this good play but time kiai so random spacing pleasse fix and some here have lack hitsound pleasse try it
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[Normal]

00:22:709 (1) - incosiente combo so only 00:23:270 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:541 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing if you fix this don't forget fix spacing at 00:48:504 (3,4,5) no
01:03:924 (1,2) - Incosiente spacingno
01:06:167 (4,1) - jump huh but i not sure Normal can't make jump i suggest you fix this spacing you can ignore this if you wanna
01:31:681 you finish here but another diff finish is 01:34:485 so add spinner on 01:32:242 and until to 01:34:485 to make same all diff finish
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[hard]

01:29:438 time kiai is finish here but another diff are 01:29:999 you should all diff consienty time kiai
00:06:448 (1) - 3 hitsound o.o? pleasse remove finish and whistle and clap stay
00:35:607 (1) - this is nothing drums or lyrics and are overmapped pleasse remove this
01:18:223 (1) - that same 00:06:448 (1)

very nice this mapset
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[tutuhaha's harsukoi]

well nothing wrong here okay.jpg
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that all i think
good luck

DragonSparta wrote:

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Hi~

Easy
00:02:522 (1) - This spinner ends too early. Find a way to make it have enough bonus and not that short no,but if others think so , i will change it
00:19:345 (3 and 4) - One grid left ok
01:03:083 (5) - Make it balanced on both sides of this slidersok

Normal
00:19:391 (4) - Move this away from overlapping (1) ok
00:24:438 (4) - ^ok
00:55:840 (5) - New combo no
01:00:086 (7) - Overlapping with (4) it isn't ?

Hard
00:11:530 (1,2,3) - Make this a triangle in the center of the map ok
Some Overlapping notes occur in the diff. I would like to see a clean map

Insane
Ok~
____________________________________________
That's all~

shikyu wrote:

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Request via modding queue

[Easy]
00:32:837 (2) - down 3 grid (end of slider) ok
00:37:323 (3) - add clap at the end of slider ok
01:22:183 (3,4) - add clap at the end of slider ok

[Normal]
00:28:912 (3) - add clap ok

[Hard]
Fine for me

[tutuhaha's Hatsukoi]
some suggestion... fix hitsounds, sounds weird in some places ok

Hope it useful

tutuhaha wrote:

搞好了- -
还是有很多问题的- -
need more mod in my diff - -
Oyeah - -y【slap(╬￣皿￣)＝○＃(￣＃)３￣)】
mi sa同学你简直太好人了有没有QAQ....

HellDawn wrote:

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General
Your bg 960x768 please change 1024x768 or 800x600 fixed

Normal
00:03:678- Spacing ok

Byakugan249 wrote:

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Ok time to mod this

Easy:
00:04:799(1) - 2 grids up at the 2nd point of the slider. ok
00:27:229(1) - 1 grid down ok
01:14:332(4) - 1 grid down and keep the same movement from there. ok

Normal:
00:08:725(3) - Make the slider like this, and x:424 y:128 ok

00:19:379(4) - 2 grids diagonal to the bottom right ok
01:04:239(2) - take out the last point. that's not needed. and make the slider like this ok

01:26:108(2) make the 2nd point of the slider like a curve. it's straight ok

Hard:
00:06:201(6) - 1 grid up ok
00:08:164(5) - 1 grid down ok
00:21:622(3) - make the slider like this no,but i make it like (1)

00:36:201(1) - 7 grids to the right for the 3rd point ok
00:40:687(3) - make it a curve slider like this. ok

00:47:416(5) - 2-3 grids to the right for the end point ok
00:49:099(3) - 1 grid up and 4 grids right for the 2nd point ok
01:16:575(4) - Make this a new combo ok
01:18:257(1) - 4 grids up for the end point ok
01:31:715(5) - 1 grid right ok

tutuhaha's Hatsukoi:
No problems here

Alright this is the best i can do. GL

YGOkid8 wrote:

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General:
- Preview time in tutuhaha's diff. is different from the rest. fixed
- You must keep the timing sections in all of your diffs. consistent, unless there's a really good reason (guest diffs. don't count)
what should i do ? @@
Easy:
00:00:314 (1,1) - Spinners are too short.
00:02:556 (1,1) - Not enough spinner recovery time.
00:33:958 (1,1) - ^
00:49:659 (1) - End spinner @00:51:902 - instead.
01:25:547 (6) - New Combo.
01:27:790 (1) - No New Combo.
01:30:033 (4) - New Combo.
ok to all

Normal:
00:00:314 (1,1) - Not enough spinner recovery time. ok
00:51:902 (1,1) - Spinner too short, and that ^ ok

S h i o n wrote:

YGOkid8 wrote:

- You must keep the timing sections in all of your diffs. consistent, unless there's a really good reason (guest diffs. don't count)
what should i do ? @@

YGOkid8 wrote:

simple. manually go through all your diffs. and make them the same.
also kudosu previous post

• Hitsounds are a bit too low in all diffs. Raise their volume by 10% or something.

• Several times, it seems you forgot to add claps to the beats to follow your clap pattern. You should go through the difficulty again to add the missing claps. That's pretty much all I have to say about the diff. Nice !

• Same as Easy.

• Same as Easy and Normal. Additionally:

1. 00:53:585 (3,4) - I tripped on this because I didn't know they were sliders (the first one is hidden by the text that pops out after the spinner). Replace them with circles ?

1. Why not give this a standard name ?
2. I'm not a big fan of 1/4 streams mixing sliders and circles. I think it plays bad because it breaks the movement your fingers have to do to stream, and they're confusing (the slider being quite slow they will be confused for circles).

Odaril wrote:

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As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

• Hitsounds are a bit too low in all diffs. Raise their volume by 10% or something.

ok , 5% raised

Easy

• Several times, it seems you forgot to add claps to the beats to follow your clap pattern. You should go through the difficulty again to add the missing claps. That's pretty much all I have to say about the diff. Nice !

claps added

Normal

• Same as Easy.

claps added

Hard

• Same as Easy and Normal. Additionally:

1. 00:53:585 (3,4) - I tripped on this because I didn't know they were sliders (the first one is hidden by the text that pops out after the spinner). Replace them with circles ?

hmm.. somehow tricky,changed to circles

tutuhaha's Hatsukoi

1. Why not give this a standard name ? changed
2. I'm not a big fan of 1/4 streams mixing sliders and circles. I think it plays bad because it breaks the movement your fingers have to do to stream, and they're confusing (the slider being quite slow they will be confused for circles).

Very nice map. Have a look at this post and call me when you're done making fixes (or not making any if you don't want to).
No need to kudosu unless you really think this was helpful.