00:10:839 (10839|3) - Maybe move it to (2) to keep the symetric of 00:09:639 (9639|3,9839|2,10039|1)
00:13:039 (13039|0) - Id move it to (4) and
00:13:239 (13239|1) - to (2), jacks are also a way to map the drum without going faster
From 00:13:639 to 00:26:439 there no real mistake in the mapping but its a bit monotonous, the following are some suggestions i think could make this part more fun to play :
For the moments like 00:14:039 i would suggest using those kind of LN pattern. This way it differenciates a bit the piano triplets mapping from the remainding
(you can use it at 00:15:639 + 00:17:239 after that this is the second half of this part)
00:19:639 - Would go for a double here and
00:19:839 (19839|0) - Remove this
After that i think you can keep the current mapping, at least it added a contrast between the first part with LNs and the second with simple notes
00:32:839 (32839|0) - I would have seen this LN at (2) to echo with 00:32:239 (32239|2,32439|1) following the piano who goes with high-low high-low notes (but that would mean changing many notes of the surrounding)
00:44:039 (44039|2,44239|3) - CTRL+G those to, we dont want 00:44:039 (44039|2) to be connected with the previous stair because you start a new pattern after
At 00:57:239 i would re-use the same LNs you did at 00:52:439 (52439|0,52839|3) first because it would give more sense instead of having random LNs at the beginning of this part, and second to add variation in the surrounding patterns.
00:58:639 (58639|3) - Would move it to (0), the jack can go well with the bass
01:05:039 (65039|3) - Move to (2) for the same reasons
01:05:039 (65039|3) - As 00:57:239 its a good place to re-use LNs
01:11:439 (71439|3) - Move to (2) for a jack again, same reasons as 00:58:639 (58639|3)
Ok same from 01:54:439 to 02:20:039 we need to find a way to make the mapping more entertaining here is what i suggest :
For the triplets
01:56:839 (116839|2,117039|0,117239|1) +
02:01:639 (121639|1,121839|3,122039|2) +
02:03:239 (123239|2,123439|1,123639|3) +
02:09:639 (129639|0,129839|2,130039|1) +
02:14:439 (134439|2,134639|1,134839|3) +
02:16:039 (136039|1,136239|0,136439|2) +
They all happens when the singing does a short pause, i suggest removing the middle note (on red tick) and use double on both the first and last note (white ticks) for each of those triplet
I tried and it raises the star rating to 1.77 so as you want
02:46:439 (166439|3) - Move it to (2) sould be connected with the following
03:13:239 (193239|2,193439|3) - I think i would CTR+G this for the alternate that suggest the bass
For the following triplets
03:12:039 (192039|2,192239|1,192439|3) +
03:16:839 (196839|2,197039|1,197239|0) +
03:24:839 (204839|2,205039|3,205239|1) - If you agreed with the previous suggestion around 01:54:439 you should use it here too
03:43:239 (223239|3) - Would move it to (2) so the 03:44:839 (224839|3) at (3) goes well with the piano going even higher
So first difficulty i modded, and im really impressed by the hitsouding - great job. About the mapping, its really clean but lack of originally for certain part and could be more fun sometime i think.