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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 28. Februar 2017 at 19:30:01

Artist: MY FIRST STORY
Title: Itazura Fiction
Tags: j-rock jrock antithese mfs
BPM: 183
Filesize: 4691kb
Play Time: 02:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,38 stars, 293 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,43 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3,18 stars, 544 notes)
  4. Oni (4,28 stars, 806 notes)


Download: MY FIRST STORY - Itazura Fiction
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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going for ranked :3
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SPOILER
2017-02-25 23:04 Raiden: 00:45:583 (182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) -
2017-02-25 23:05 Raiden: how about making it something like K ddd K
2017-02-25 23:05 Raiden: and stuff
2017-02-25 23:05 Raiden: i think you'll get what i mean
2017-02-25 23:06 Chromoxx: hm, i like the current pattern more
2017-02-25 23:06 Raiden: https://puu.sh/ujfU0.png i tried this and sounds pretty good
2017-02-25 23:06 Chromoxx: goes better with the melody
2017-02-25 23:07 Raiden: 82 86 90 94 are finishers
2017-02-25 23:08 Raiden: what melody
2017-02-25 23:08 Chromoxx: if anything i'd do D kkk D kkk D kkk
2017-02-25 23:08 Raiden: yeah or that
2017-02-25 23:08 Raiden: i don't miind
2017-02-25 23:08 Raiden: i just want the gimmick-esque thingy
2017-02-25 23:08 Raiden: because it fits so good here
2017-02-25 23:09 Chromoxx: ye went D kkk D kkk D kkd
2017-02-25 23:09 Raiden: aweosm
2017-02-25 23:10 Chromoxx: 01:22:304 - same here then i guess
2017-02-25 23:10 Raiden: 01:09:189 (355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363) - current 1/2 chain is a bit too long
2017-02-25 23:10 Raiden: maybe add a 1/4 somewhere
2017-02-25 23:10 Raiden: haven't reached there yet
2017-02-25 23:10 Raiden: lol
2017-02-25 23:11 Chromoxx: it's the same repetition so i changed that too
2017-02-25 23:11 Raiden: ikk
2017-02-25 23:11 Raiden: kk*
2017-02-25 23:12 Chromoxx: as for the 1/2 chain i prefer it as it is now so that that part stands out a bit from the rest
2017-02-25 23:12 Raiden: then make the 1/4 longer
2017-02-25 23:12 Raiden: instead of triplets
2017-02-25 23:12 Raiden: too intense to be only 1/2 :D
2017-02-25 23:14 Chromoxx: well, i added a note at 01:09:763 - but don't wanna add any more
2017-02-25 23:14 Raiden: -boooooooo
2017-02-25 23:14 Raiden: nigga add more
2017-02-25 23:16 Chromoxx: 01:09:927 - ok added one here too so that it's a 5plet
2017-02-25 23:16 Raiden: awesOM
2017-02-25 23:17 Raiden: 01:21:648 (418,419,420,421) - ctrl+g?
2017-02-25 23:17 Raiden: so the kats kick in in the guitar chord
2017-02-25 23:18 Chromoxx: made it kdkk instead of ddkk but ye
2017-02-25 23:19 Raiden: kk
2017-02-25 23:19 Raiden: 01:27:550 (1) - slider instead? XD
2017-02-25 23:19 Chromoxx: i like the ninja-esque spinner more here tbh
2017-02-25 23:20 Chromoxx: slider would be too much emphasis imo
2017-02-25 23:20 Raiden: oh
2017-02-25 23:20 Raiden: its ninja?=
2017-02-25 23:20 Chromoxx: 2x SV
2017-02-25 23:20 Raiden: k
2017-02-25 23:23 Raiden: 02:08:042 - why this break if you did none
2017-02-25 23:23 Raiden: in th whole kiai
2017-02-25 23:23 Chromoxx: ?
2017-02-25 23:24 Chromoxx: there's no break
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: wat
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: there is
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: .,
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7421088
2017-02-25 23:24 Chromoxx: is there no note in the timestamp you pasted?
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: ther ed tikc
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: LOL
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: what the fUCK
2017-02-25 23:24 Chromoxx: uh no
2017-02-25 23:24 Chromoxx: you must have accidentally deleted it lul
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how did i delete
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: that not
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: ehow
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how
2017-02-25 23:24 Raiden: how
2017-02-25 23:24 Chromoxx: idk...
2017-02-25 23:25 Raiden: 02:09:517 (334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345) - spice this up a bit?
2017-02-25 23:25 Raiden: kddkddk -> kddkkdk
2017-02-25 23:25 Raiden: at some points
2017-02-25 23:25 Raiden: or whatever
2017-02-25 23:26 Chromoxx: 02:10:665 - changed this to k
2017-02-25 23:26 Chromoxx: to emphasize the very high guitar thing there
2017-02-25 23:26 Chromoxx: should be enough
2017-02-25 23:27 Raiden: kk
2017-02-25 23:27 Raiden: muzu
2017-02-25 23:27 Raiden: 02:09:845 (225,226) - ctrl+g?
2017-02-25 23:27 Chromoxx: ye
2017-02-25 23:28 Raiden: 02:06:894 (209) - kat?
2017-02-25 23:28 Chromoxx: sure
2017-02-25 23:48 Raiden: will look more at futsuu & kantan later
2017-02-25 23:48 Raiden: we're doing sshit rn
2017-02-25 23:48 Raiden: XD
2017-02-25 23:48 Chromoxx: ok
2017-02-25 23:48 Chromoxx: hf xD
14:07 Chromoxx: <3
14:08 Raiden: d
14:08 Chromoxx: it's starting XD
14:08 Raiden: ?
14:08 Chromoxx: the second "burst" of maps
14:09 Raiden: ye
14:09 Chromoxx: are you free for itazura today then or do you still have some other stuff going on? seemed like there might be something from what you posted in the mentor discord
14:09 Raiden: ye
14:09 Raiden: at 18:00
14:09 Chromoxx: ah
14:09 Raiden: which means 19 for me
14:10 Chromoxx: you said the discussion might not happen
14:10 Chromoxx: so i thought you might have other stuff to do today
14:10 Raiden: yeh
14:10 Raiden: it will happen in the end tho
14:10 Raiden: need to update
14:10 Chromoxx: ok nice
14:13 Chromoxx: so yeah, is there still time for itazura then or not? :o
14:14 Raiden: what map was that again
14:14 Chromoxx: the one u started checking yesterday
14:14 *Chromoxx is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1223398 MY FIRST STORY - Itazura Fiction]
14:14 Raiden: a
14:15 Raiden: i lostr the log
14:15 Raiden: crap
14:15 Chromoxx: i still have it
14:15 Raiden: o
14:15 Chromoxx: i can give you when you want to post
14:15 Chromoxx: you finished checking muzu/oni and were gonna start on futsuu
14:17 Chromoxx: i already updated with the changes made to muzu/oni too
14:18 Raiden: on futsuu all i can suggest is to spice up last kiai
14:18 Raiden: 01:51:156 - here
14:18 Raiden: 01:53:124 (69) - moving this 01:52:960 - here
14:18 Raiden: and stuff like that
14:19 Raiden: v o c a l s ~
14:19 Chromoxx: haven't used anything like that in the other parts so it might be a bit inconsistent
14:19 Raiden: ozzy ending fam
14:20 Chromoxx: meh
14:20 Chromoxx: not my style xD
14:20 Raiden: i mean not that much of a big deal but it's boring
14:21 Chromoxx: oh wait i was in the kantan
14:21 Chromoxx: lmao
14:21 Chromoxx: sec lemme reconsider
14:21 Raiden: what
14:21 Raiden: lOl
14:21 Raiden: gonna put the water to boil now then while you reconsider
14:21 Raiden: i legit woke up half an hour ago
14:22 Chromoxx: but still, i think it's ok as it is, would become kinda unexpected and inconsistent imo
14:34 Raiden: interesting + follows more closely the song + reflects intensity >> consistency
14:34 Raiden: hi im back
14:34 Raiden: and no ur not dad
14:35 Chromoxx: intensity is reflected enough already imo
14:35 Raiden: not imo
14:35 Raiden: :(
14:36 Chromoxx: :(
14:36 Raiden: now trhat i notice it'd legit be just
14:36 Raiden: moving like 2 notes
14:38 Chromoxx: part is already mapped different from the other ones and flows interestingly enough tbh
14:38 Raiden: >flow
14:38 Raiden: in futsuu
14:39 Chromoxx: instead of moving i could just add a note at 01:52:960 -
14:39 Raiden: why not
14:39 Raiden: sure
14:39 Chromoxx: ok cool
14:40 Raiden: 01:55:583 - go quint
14:40 Raiden: 8))))))
14:40 Chromoxx: nah
14:40 Chromoxx: ddd k fits well there tbh
14:40 Chromoxx: quint would be over the top, not the right spot
14:40 Raiden: pranked
14:41 Chromoxx: QUINT PRANK GONE SEXUAL
14:41 Raiden: kantan mappers be like
14:41 Raiden: RHYHT·M?·??? WHERE???????????????????????????
14:44 Chromoxx: pls
14:44 Chromoxx: was that it for the futsuu then?
14:45 Raiden: yes
14:45 Raiden: change or nuke
14:45 Chromoxx: what?
14:45 Raiden: change or nudes
14:47 Chromoxx: i added the one k that i said but not more
14:48 Raiden: no more????
14:48 Chromoxx: no more
14:48 *Chromoxx is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/442245 Subformat - More (feat. Charli Brix)]
14:48 Chromoxx: tbh i felt an urge to map this when i saw it in my maps yesterday XD
14:49 Chromoxx: was there anything in the kantan or shall i update?
14:49 Raiden: lmfao
14:49 Raiden: nah
14:49 Raiden: kantan is just
14:49 Raiden: kantan
14:50 Chromoxx: ok sec
14:50 Chromoxx: lemme finish watching nardo test my map and then i'll update xD
14:51 Raiden: lol ok
14:52 Chromoxx: finished mapping the other thing i started on yesterday but got brainblocked on ^^
14:53 Chromoxx: aa accidentally closed osu
14:53 Chromoxx: gonna update
14:54 Raiden: k
14:54 Chromoxx: updated
14:55 Raiden: give log
14:56 Chromoxx: i'll forum pm so u can copypasta
14:57 Chromoxx: fuck
14:57 Chromoxx: i just accidentally deleted it instead of copying
14:57 Chromoxx: but luckily i didn't save it like that
14:57 Raiden: what
14:58 Chromoxx: sent

🤔 = 12
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wtf first post bubble icon :o
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Can we get it modded at least first?
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Loctav wrote:

Can we get it modded at least first?
some maps are too good to be modded friendo
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t/549537
:thinking:
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here we go again
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add emo rock alternative post-hardcore to tags thanks

also is jrock necessary as a tag cause i mean it's the genre so
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Logic Agent wrote:

also is jrock necessary as a tag cause i mean it's the genre so
genres don't show up in search filters so you can keep it in
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bubble this map
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Loctav posted, i'm not a BN anymore, very interesting yes...

Can we pls stop spamming my email now kthx?
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Ehhhh...
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I need kd, will mod later.

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what
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wtf the second time speed bubble?
I am not doubting the map's quality.Actually it is of good quality imo and it don't need too many mods.But can you guys stop doing b4b in ur little bn group now? I saw too many great map which need bn to give a check but they went to graveryard without any bn even give it a quick scan. I must say it is not fair to other mappers.I am not even a std player but I recently qualified a std map.And what I saw nearly half of the taiko ranked map is map by bns. I think that is why taiko ia still not a popular mod now. Every taiko mappers need to be respected.
Anyway. This is a great map.And don't blame me chromoxx.
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handsome muscle wrote:

wtf the second time speed bubble?
I am not doubting the map's quality.Actually it is of good quality imo and it don't need too many mods.But can you guys stop doing b4b in ur little bn group now? I saw too many great map which need bn to give a check but they went to graveryard without any bn even give it a quick scan. I must say it is not fair to other mappers.I am not even a std player but I recently qualified a std map.And what I saw nearly half of the taiko ranked map is map by bns. I think that is why taiko ia still not a popular mod now. Every taiko mappers need to be respected.
Anyway. This is a great map.And don't blame me chromoxx.
Happy you liked my map but to adress your other comments: Ifyou check my recent modding activity you'll see most maps are from non-bns, also if i saw a good map i have never left it sitting unattended.
Anyway, can't be called b4b from now on anyway so yeah we're all good...
Tired of the fact that i was a BN being used against me whenever i do something myself.
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handsome muscle wrote:

wtf the second time speed bubble?
I am not doubting the map's quality.Actually it is of good quality imo and it don't need too many mods.But can you guys stop doing b4b in ur little bn group now? I saw too many great map which need bn to give a check but they went to graveryard without any bn even give it a quick scan. I must say it is not fair to other mappers.I am not even a std player but I recently qualified a std map.And what I saw nearly half of the taiko ranked map is map by bns. I think that is why taiko ia still not a popular mod now. Every taiko mappers need to be respected.
Anyway. This is a great map.And don't blame me chromoxx.
If you saw many maps which need bn to give a check, become a BN yourself and check them. Life isn't fair, on other news water is wet. "Half the taiko ranked maps is by bns" maybe because they are able to pull out quality maps in a more consistent way and do shit while they're at it, and ALSO have earned the trust of other BNs??? I can see no correlation between your statement and the fact that taiko is not popular, you're just trying somehow to discredit us with no real evidence. If anything, more content into the game means more popularity, as more people have access to lower difficulties, something that did not happen often in the past.

Don't know how else to put it, so there's that: sorry that BNs don't want to spend THEIR free time to look at YOUR stuff and that they favor their friends or other BNs because they get something in exchange from it.

This was just a small incident but things aren't going to change much.

@chromoxx Maybe get some more opinions and I'll get back at this
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Keep this thread clean and try to help the mapper instead by modding their mapset, so the ranking process continues. Not in the mood to clean the thread every time drama rises, so take this as my only warning.
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Deif wrote:

Keep this thread clean and try to help the mapper instead by modding their mapset, so the ranking process continues. Not in the mood to clean the thread every time drama rises, so take this as my only warning.
then, he won't stick with the rule, will he?, circle jacking and circle jacking all the time?, i don't regret what did i post here, because i want to improve taiko community, but the otherwiselmao.............. well, making meme of this thread isn't that bad, thanks for your great times LOL..
sadly i didn't screenshot what was i say here
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okay, let's actually talk about this map.

[general]

  1. idk, but I feel like the diff gap on those part : 00:35:091 - 00:48:206 - between Muzu & Oni are a bit high.


[Oni]

  1. I wouldn't use a triplet here : 00:42:140 (156,157,158) - . I think it'd be better to have the build up with the triplet after this 00:42:960 - . I'd say, the perfect place for the ddk would be here 00:43:452 - .
  2. 00:47:058 (194,195,196,197) - might be just me. But I don't really like how you break the flow here. I don't really think it really fit here. I think, just deleting this note 00:47:140 (195) - to get this one 00:47:058 (194) - as a big D or K would be more consistent with your pattern here.
  3. if you fix this ^ ; don't forget about this one 01:23:779 (439,440,441,442) -
  4. 00:48:206 (206) - 01:24:927 (451) - note quite sure about this note. Your whole k spam is no the snare drum. But there's really nothing on this tick. Also, you didn't mapped it here : 02:12:140 -
  5. 00:55:747 (248,249,250,251,252) - 01:35:091 (52,53,54,55,56) - dunno if that's what you want. But I find this one really cool as ddkdk with the vocal. It's pretty much similar to this 01:00:665 (287,288,289,290,291,292,293) - or this 01:40:010 (91,92,93,94,95,96,97) - .



[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:13:779 (18,19,20,21) - I'd say triplet note a single don/kat goes better with the drum. (instead of single kat + triplet)
  2. 00:48:042 (116,117,118) - almost same thing as oni. Since 00:48:206 - doesn't really exist. I'd say using a drum roll from here 00:47:714 - to here 00:48:124 - would be better.
  3. 01:24:763 (288,289,290) - same case goes here.



[Futsuu]

  1. 01:21:976 - isn't it better to stop the drum roll here ? It'd let 1/1 break to hit the big D.
  2. since you use drum roll which end on blue tick here 02:11:484 (129) - ; maybe you should do the same thing here : 00:48:124 - 01:24:845 - . There's also the same case on kantan. Maybe you should also apply it on kantan. (if you fix it ofc)


expect the drum roll thing, nothing much on kantan.
Good luck!
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Ascendance wrote:

Loctav wrote:

Can we get it modded at least first?
some maps are too good to be modded friendo
too good? You gotta be kidding me Ascendance. I know the Elite Mapper player in mania, but still he need mod for his map even he is "Elite Mapper"
His username is "ExPew"
Raiden, did you use "connection" as your reason to rank this faster? If so, that means your work isn't really called as work. If not, that means you should or must work your ass at least mod it. I'm not educated enough to be BN, that's why i read those BN rules before arguing this.
Even a map that have real good quality, that doesn't mean it should be ranked or bubbled without following the process.
If still have things that denied my points, go ahead i will listen it. Thats all.
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