1. Aoi's Easy (2.07 stars, 203 notes)
2. Aria (4.95 stars, 602 notes)
3. Insane (4.99 stars, 640 notes)
4. Normal (3.43 stars, 272 notes)
5. Okamiroy's Hard (4.36 stars, 402 notes)

wcx19911123 wrote:

8-)

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
fine

[Skin]
hit300g is the same with hit300k
add hitcircleoverlay,approachcircle

[xykbear's Easy]
00:43:616 (7) - noisy
00:55:888 (1) - too short , to slider ?
02:07:577 (1) - ^
03:42:836 (1,2) - not a line
04:01:538 (1) - voice down the ending

[Normal]
AR+1
00:50:629 (3) - confusing , to 2 sliders is better imo
02:11:667 (4,5,6) - kinda too hard for a Normal
02:26:473 (3,4) - stack
02:45:174 (10,11) - ^
03:33:486 (1) - confusing

[Okamiroy's Hard]
01:51:603 (5,6) - stack
01:53:161 (8,1) - not a line
01:59:005 (8,9) - stack
01:59:979 (1,2) - ^
02:01:538 (4,5) - ^
02:18:680 (1,2) - ^
02:28:031 (1,2) - ^
02:29:590 (6,7) - ^
02:51:408 (3,4) - ^
02:52:382 (5,1) - make this 2 sliders on a same arc is better
02:55:304 (4,1) - stack
03:24:135 (1,2,3) - ^
03:25:693 (4,5,6) - ^
03:38:161 (1,2) - move to middle of the screen
03:48:291 (6,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:31:148 (6,7,8,9,10) - noisy
00:51:018 (5,6) - to the middle of (2)(3)(4)
01:01:343 (4,5) - stack
01:31:927 (1,2) - ^
01:33:486 (1,2) - ^
01:38:161 (1,2) - ^
01:44:979 (3,4) - ^
01:47:512 (1,2) - ^
02:01:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a line
02:26:083 (7) - touch the bar
03:09:719 (1,2) - stack
03:11:667 - voice down
03:25:693 (1) - start at 03:25:499
03:34:265 (5,6,7,8) - stack
03:36:603 (1) - end at 03:40:888

膜拜
神mapper

KuraiPettan wrote:

I hope you will like it.
[attachment=0:c9cf1]Sasaki Sayaka - Zzz (Sumisola) [xykbear's Easy].osu[/attachment:c9cf1]

+Some help via IRC

Star~

1. For all difficulties, I heard sliderslides changing with the timing sections. It sounds extremely bad in-game, so add new custom hitsounds in your folder to fix these.

1. This difficulty is honestly extremely bland. It follows 1/1 or 2/1 rhythms that don't exactly follow the music, and the hitsounds are always the same.
2. 00:31:148 (1) - This new combo isn't really needed nor does it make sense. Moreover, the sliderslide is louder here for some reason - try deleting the slider and re-making it to fix this ?
3. 00:34:265 (2) - this is an example of what I pointed out in General.
4. 00:35:823 (3) - Add a new combo here to stay consistent in your comboing. This will also cut the combo, which is a good thing.
5. 00:42:057 (5) - Same.
6. 00:55:888 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy diff.
7. 01:00:758 (5) - Add a new combo here to cut the very long combo, and be consistent with your previous comboing.
8. 01:05:434 (9) - Same.
9. 01:08:356 (11) - Same.
10. 02:03:096 (6) - Same.
11. 02:07:577 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy diff.
12. 02:40:499 (5) - Add a new combo here: the lyrics go for a whole new sentence.
13. 02:47:512 (2,3) - Spacing issue: nothing in the song warrants a 2x jump here, especially not in an Easy. I guess you just misplaced (3), but fix it.
14. 03:30:369 (3) - New combo to stay consistent in your comboing.
15. 03:40:109 (1) - I'm not sure you need a new combo here
16. 03:42:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'm not sure this kind of thing really fits an Easy. 1/2 repeats slider are confusing enough, because with that slider speed, you can't see the repeats. And few new players think of holding until next note.

1. This difficulty doesn't have a preview time. Make sure you use the same as the one you used in the other diffs.
2. I honestly think this is too hard for a Normal. There are way too many 1/2 rhythms, and they are sometimes arranged in confusing patterns. On top of that, the spacing is really big (although it was done to prevent overlaps).
3. 00:04:655 (1) - The second repeat completely surprised me.
4. 00:24:914 (1) - Why is there a new combo here ?
5. 00:36:993 (3) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders because it looks bad in-game, and the timing isn't very clear sometimes.
6. 00:36:993 (3) - Same
7. 00:37:382 (1,1) - Why does the spacing suddenly switch to 1.3 ? It's really confusing.
8. 00:42:057 (4) - Add a new combo to match the lyrics.
9. 00:46:343 (2) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders because it looks bad in-game, and the timing isn't very clear sometimes. Besides, you used the same exact stack earlier, except the timing was 1/2 and not 1/1, which will confuse players.
10. 00:55:888 (1) - That's a rather short spinner for a Normal, and it's followed by a note 1/1 after, which will be very difficult to play.
11. 01:00:369 (2) - Same.
12. 01:33:096 (2,2) - Same.
13. 01:37:771 (4) - Same.
14. 01:48:680 (2) - Same.
15. 01:49:070 (1) - That's a rather short spinner for a Normal, and it's followed by a note 1/1 after, which will be very difficult to play.
16. 01:00:369 (2) - Same.
17. 01:53:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is seriously too hard for a Normal and doesn't even fit the song... (there's nothing that warrants so much 1/2 here)
18. 02:10:109 (2,4,5,6) - These notes match nothing in the song and add extra unwanted difficulty.
19. 02:23:745 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner...
20. 02:43:421 (5) - Add a new combo to cut the very long combo (and it would fit the lyrics better)
21. 03:02:317 (5) - Add a new combo here to follow the music
22. 03:33:486 (1) - Why a kick slider here when there's just a held note ? A simple slider as long would fit a lot more...
23. 03:52:187 (1,2,3) - This kind of sharp angle might be too hard to play for a Normal diff

1. Why don't you use the same kiai times as other difficulties ?
2. I don't think triplets fit this map whatsoever. Especially not for a Hard diff: they add unnecessary extra difficulty.
3. Be careful with notes stacked under sliders: I've seen a lot of badly done stacks and it looks bad. You should have a look at the whole difficulty to fix them.
4. 00:24:914 (3,4,5,6) - Nothing here calls for an accelerated spacing. It doesn't even add any momentum and doesn't flow well at all - I'd just consider this is broken spacing.
5. 00:43:616 (5) - I think there's something better to do here than just a long repeat slider ?
6. 00:54:525 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off. They should be on the previous red tick. And add a new one on the red tick after (4).
7. 02:14:005 (7,8,9,10) - Nothing here calls for an accelerated spacing. It doesn't even add any momentum and doesn't flow well at all - I'd just consider this is broken spacing.
8. 02:57:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - Once again, this accelerated spacing only feels like spacing errors.
9. 03:21:018 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:22:577 (1,2,3,4) - same issue.