wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
fine

[Skin]
hit300g is the same with hit300k
add hitcircleoverlay,approachcircle

[xykbear's Easy]
00:43:616 (7) - noisy
00:55:888 (1) - too short , to slider ?
02:07:577 (1) - ^
03:42:836 (1,2) - not a line
04:01:538 (1) - voice down the ending

[Normal]
AR+1
00:50:629 (3) - confusing , to 2 sliders is better imo
02:11:667 (4,5,6) - kinda too hard for a Normal
02:26:473 (3,4) - stack
02:45:174 (10,11) - ^
03:33:486 (1) - confusing

[Okamiroy's Hard]
01:51:603 (5,6) - stack
01:53:161 (8,1) - not a line
01:59:005 (8,9) - stack
01:59:979 (1,2) - ^
02:01:538 (4,5) - ^
02:18:680 (1,2) - ^
02:28:031 (1,2) - ^
02:29:590 (6,7) - ^
02:51:408 (3,4) - ^
02:52:382 (5,1) - make this 2 sliders on a same arc is better
02:55:304 (4,1) - stack
03:24:135 (1,2,3) - ^
03:25:693 (4,5,6) - ^
03:38:161 (1,2) - move to middle of the screen
03:48:291 (6,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:31:148 (6,7,8,9,10) - noisy
00:51:018 (5,6) - to the middle of (2)(3)(4)
01:01:343 (4,5) - stack
01:31:927 (1,2) - ^
01:33:486 (1,2) - ^
01:38:161 (1,2) - ^
01:44:979 (3,4) - ^
01:47:512 (1,2) - ^
02:01:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a line
02:26:083 (7) - touch the bar
03:09:719 (1,2) - stack
03:11:667 - voice down
03:25:693 (1) - start at 03:25:499
03:34:265 (5,6,7,8) - stack
03:36:603 (1) - end at 03:40:888

膜拜
神mapper

KuraiPettan wrote:

I hope you will like it.
[attachment=0:c9cf1]Sasaki Sayaka - Zzz (Sumisola) [xykbear's Easy].osu[/attachment:c9cf1]

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Star~

1. For all difficulties, I heard sliderslides changing with the timing sections. It sounds extremely bad in-game, so add new custom hitsounds in your folder to fix these.

1. This difficulty is honestly extremely bland. It follows 1/1 or 2/1 rhythms that don't exactly follow the music, and the hitsounds are always the same.
2. 00:31:148 (1) - This new combo isn't really needed nor does it make sense. Moreover, the sliderslide is louder here for some reason - try deleting the slider and re-making it to fix this ?
3. 00:34:265 (2) - this is an example of what I pointed out in General.
4. 00:35:823 (3) - Add a new combo here to stay consistent in your comboing. This will also cut the combo, which is a good thing.
5. 00:42:057 (5) - Same.
6. 00:55:888 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy diff.
7. 01:00:758 (5) - Add a new combo here to cut the very long combo, and be consistent with your previous comboing.
8. 01:05:434 (9) - Same.
9. 01:08:356 (11) - Same.
10. 02:03:096 (6) - Same.
11. 02:07:577 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy diff.
12. 02:40:499 (5) - Add a new combo here: the lyrics go for a whole new sentence.
13. 02:47:512 (2,3) - Spacing issue: nothing in the song warrants a 2x jump here, especially not in an Easy. I guess you just misplaced (3), but fix it.
14. 03:30:369 (3) - New combo to stay consistent in your comboing.
15. 03:40:109 (1) - I'm not sure you need a new combo here
16. 03:42:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'm not sure this kind of thing really fits an Easy. 1/2 repeats slider are confusing enough, because with that slider speed, you can't see the repeats. And few new players think of holding until next note.

1. This difficulty doesn't have a preview time. Make sure you use the same as the one you used in the other diffs.
2. I honestly think this is too hard for a Normal. There are way too many 1/2 rhythms, and they are sometimes arranged in confusing patterns. On top of that, the spacing is really big (although it was done to prevent overlaps).
3. 00:04:655 (1) - The second repeat completely surprised me.
4. 00:24:914 (1) - Why is there a new combo here ?
5. 00:36:993 (3) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders because it looks bad in-game, and the timing isn't very clear sometimes.
6. 00:36:993 (3) - Same
7. 00:37:382 (1,1) - Why does the spacing suddenly switch to 1.3 ? It's really confusing.
8. 00:42:057 (4) - Add a new combo to match the lyrics.
9. 00:46:343 (2) - I wouldn't recommend stacking notes under sliders because it looks bad in-game, and the timing isn't very clear sometimes. Besides, you used the same exact stack earlier, except the timing was 1/2 and not 1/1, which will confuse players.
10. 00:55:888 (1) - That's a rather short spinner for a Normal, and it's followed by a note 1/1 after, which will be very difficult to play.
11. 01:00:369 (2) - Same.
12. 01:33:096 (2,2) - Same.
13. 01:37:771 (4) - Same.
14. 01:48:680 (2) - Same.
15. 01:49:070 (1) - That's a rather short spinner for a Normal, and it's followed by a note 1/1 after, which will be very difficult to play.
16. 01:00:369 (2) - Same.
17. 01:53:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is seriously too hard for a Normal and doesn't even fit the song... (there's nothing that warrants so much 1/2 here)
18. 02:10:109 (2,4,5,6) - These notes match nothing in the song and add extra unwanted difficulty.
19. 02:23:745 (1) - This comes too soon after the spinner...
20. 02:43:421 (5) - Add a new combo to cut the very long combo (and it would fit the lyrics better)
21. 03:02:317 (5) - Add a new combo here to follow the music
22. 03:33:486 (1) - Why a kick slider here when there's just a held note ? A simple slider as long would fit a lot more...
23. 03:52:187 (1,2,3) - This kind of sharp angle might be too hard to play for a Normal diff

1. Why don't you use the same kiai times as other difficulties ?
2. I don't think triplets fit this map whatsoever. Especially not for a Hard diff: they add unnecessary extra difficulty.
3. Be careful with notes stacked under sliders: I've seen a lot of badly done stacks and it looks bad. You should have a look at the whole difficulty to fix them.
4. 00:24:914 (3,4,5,6) - Nothing here calls for an accelerated spacing. It doesn't even add any momentum and doesn't flow well at all - I'd just consider this is broken spacing.
5. 00:43:616 (5) - I think there's something better to do here than just a long repeat slider ?
6. 00:54:525 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are off. They should be on the previous red tick. And add a new one on the red tick after (4).
7. 02:14:005 (7,8,9,10) - Nothing here calls for an accelerated spacing. It doesn't even add any momentum and doesn't flow well at all - I'd just consider this is broken spacing.
8. 02:57:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - Once again, this accelerated spacing only feels like spacing errors.
9. 03:21:018 (1,2,3,4) - and 03:22:577 (1,2,3,4) - same issue.