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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 13 March 2018 at 9:38:50 AM

Artist: Kobaryo
Title: Dotabata Animation [feat. t+pazolite]
Tags: Candy Speed Pops Wonki Soul Evans
BPM: 260
Filesize: 6933kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy - 4Key (1.26 stars, 506 notes)
  2. Hard - 4Key (3.22 stars, 1476 notes)
  3. Insane - 4Key (4.06 stars, 1855 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (2.15 stars, 779 notes)
  5. Soul's Hyper - 4Key (2.49 stars, 1131 notes)
  6. Ultra - 4Key (5.69 stars, 2508 notes)
  7. Wonki's Extra - 4Key (5 stars, 1956 notes)


Download: Kobaryo - Dotabata Animation [feat. t+pazolite]
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Artist: Kobaryo
Original Album: Candy Speed Pops
Soul's Hyper by: Soul Evans
Wonki's Extra by: Wonki
BG by: もりのほん
posted
Needs hit markers between the parts where it has none; other wise a great map.
posted

Yuskia wrote:

Needs hit markers between the parts where it has none; other wise a great map.
There is none because I haven't finished
posted
Great map! <3 <3
posted
quick mod for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/573280 from #requests

320kbps? I sense that you're going for loved? :D

1|2|3|4

[Easy]
00:43:385 (43385|2) - Suggest remapping this section. It's unclear both in the editor and in play what you're actually mapping. You miss a lot of beats
and a lot of synths so it's really hard to tell. I'd strongly recommend making it more clear because if I can't play it, there's no way someone suited
for easy diffs can. A possible solution is just mapping the appropriate white ticks that are empty. I did a test run and it feels great. The
higher of density of notes is fine imo due to kiai.
01:10:616 (70616|1) - missing a note here
01:12:462 (72462|0) - ^
01:14:308 (74308|0) - ^
Judging by your pattern this seems intentional but it plays off. Strongly suggest changing it.
01:38:770 (98770|0) - Second LN in this section doesn't fit. Suggest shortening it and adding spaced singles. e.g http://i.imgur.com/ye8WHv8.png
02:11:077 (131077|3) - move to 1

[Hard]
00:03:808 (3808|2) - According to your scheme this should be a double
00:09:808 (9808|0) - Why are these singles? Especially when this is hitsounded i feel like doubles would suit it much more
00:13:154 (13154|2) - This section is very inconsistent with double placement
00:42:808 (42808|2) - single here anywhere
00:46:500 (46500|2) - ^
sinlges above need to be fixed. they're not like the gaps after something like 00:46:039 (46039|0,46039|3) - where it makes sense to keep it blank
01:07:962 (67962|1) - section feels janky. Map either the drums or the melody from about 1:01 to 1:09
01:12:116 (72116|1) - add note
01:21:231 (81231|1) - add note on 1 to keep to your scheme
01:21:693 (81693|2) - add note
etc
01:38:770 (98770|0) - feel like you could evolve this section beyond the one immediately before with 1/4 streams. As long as you keep the pattern simple,
it should play fine. 1-2-4-3 repeats and 1-2-3-4-3-2-1 felt great.
posted

Litharrale wrote:

quick mod for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/573280 from #requests

320kbps? I sense that you're going for loved? :D

1|2|3|4

[Easy]
00:43:385 (43385|2) - Suggest remapping this section. It's unclear both in the editor and in play what you're actually mapping. You miss a lot of beats
and a lot of synths so it's really hard to tell. I'd strongly recommend making it more clear because if I can't play it, there's no way someone suited
for easy diffs can. A possible solution is just mapping the appropriate white ticks that are empty. I did a test run and it feels great. The
higher of density of notes is fine imo due to kiai.
01:10:616 (70616|1) - missing a note here
01:12:462 (72462|0) - ^
01:14:308 (74308|0) - ^
Judging by your pattern this seems intentional but it plays off. Strongly suggest changing it.
Already remapped the whole section, since i also think its a bit off-rhythm
01:38:770 (98770|0) - Second LN in this section doesn't fit. Suggest shortening it and adding spaced singles. e.g http://i.imgur.com/ye8WHv8.png
02:11:077 (131077|3) - move to 1

[Hard]
00:03:808 (3808|2) - According to your scheme this should be a double
00:09:808 (9808|0) - Why are these singles? Especially when this is hitsounded i feel like doubles would suit it much more
00:13:154 (13154|2) - This section is very inconsistent with double placement
00:42:808 (42808|2) - single here anywhere
00:46:500 (46500|2) - ^
sinlges above need to be fixed. they're not like the gaps after something like 00:46:039 (46039|0,46039|3) - where it makes sense to keep it blank
01:07:962 (67962|1) - section feels janky. Map either the drums or the melody from about 1:01 to 1:09
01:12:116 (72116|1) - add note
01:21:231 (81231|1) - add note on 1 to keep to your scheme
01:21:693 (81693|2) - add note
etc
01:38:770 (98770|0) - feel like you could evolve this section beyond the one immediately before with 1/4 streams. As long as you keep the pattern simple, didnt even use 1/4 for Insane diff, i think will keep the current
it should play fine. 1-2-4-3 repeats and 1-2-3-4-3-2-1 felt great.
Thanks
posted
Comming from my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 1/2/3/4, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Insane
00:04:385 Would place a single note here on 2
00:04:500 And here one on 3
00:06:231 ^^
00:08:077 ^^
00:09:635 Missing a note here
00:15:116 ^^
00:17:193 ^^
00:18:116 ^^
00:39:231 Mabye place a LN here, but not a double in my opinion
00:46:673 Missing a note
01:20:077 Would not place a double here
01:38:770 (98770|3,98827|2,98885|0,98943|1,99000|3,99058|2,99116|0,99173|1,99231|3,99289|2,99346|0,99404|1,99462|3,99520|2,99577|0,99635|1,99693|3,99750|2,99808|0,99866|1,99923|3,99981|2,100039|0,100096|1,100154|2,100154|3,100270|0,100385|3,100500|0,100616|3,100673|2,100731|0,100789|1,100846|3,100904|2,100962|0,101020|1,101077|3,101135|2,101193|1,101250|0,101308|3,101366|2,101423|1,101481|0) Here you could put in some 1/16 streams (i don't know if thats rankable, but it would fit, sry)
01:43:385 Place a double here
01:47:077 ^^
02:04:096 Missing a note here
02:09:577 Would place a note here, too
02:26:770 Here should be a tripple
02:28:616 ^^
02:30:462 ^^
02:32:308 ^^
02:59:770 Would place these LN's at 1 and 2 because they sound like the first LN's
03:03:462 Would change these quad with LN's


Cool map, really fun to play
posted
1|2|3|4
Easy
00:09:693 - better to use 2/1 LN here
00:17:077 - add note to 1, this will be not so hard for ez diff
00:28:154 - make single
00:30:000 - ^
00:38:308 - https://puu.sh/uRkzh/6631d19b65.png
00:42:693 - add note
00:47:077 - double
01:24:000 - double
01:30:923 - i think two notes for vocal isn't good, you can replace it to 2/1 LN or two 1/1 notes
01:34:616 - ^
01:38:308 - ^
02:22:616 - 02:24:462 - singles
02:32:770 - look at sreenshot above
02:37:154 - note
02:37:846 - double
02:41:539 - double
02:45:231 - double
Normal
00:39:693 (39693|2,39693|3,39923|1,40154|3,40154|2) - why you don't use this beautiful pattern further? 00:41:539 - 00:43:385 - 00:45:231 - and etc.
01:01:846 - double
01:10:616 - 01:12:462 - 01:14:308 - i think better to place here notes
01:46:154 - you miss double
01:49:385 - ^
Hard
00:40:731 - 00:44:423 - and etc. i don't know why don't mapped these sounds
00:42:808 - 00:46:500 - i think you should map main melody
01:35:077 - this part seems boring, maybe you will add some LNs from 01:35:077 - until 01:36:693 and etc.
wew Insane
00:42:808 - 00:44:423 - 00:46:500 - add notes
00:51:462 - https://puu.sh/uRmCu/0d6078e867.png
01:28:154 - 01:30:000 - 01:31:846 - 01:33:693 - make here doubles or triples
01:39:693 - https://puu.sh/uRmRX/bb151fa0bd.png
02:46:039 - https://puu.sh/uRn85/734376a092.png
spiedkor
01:49:385 - double
nice diff dude xd
posted

LordTimeWaste wrote:

Comming from my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 1/2/3/4, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Insane
00:04:385 Would place a single note here on 2 /main sound
00:04:500 And here one on 3
00:06:231 ^^
00:08:077 ^^
00:09:635 Missing a note here
00:15:116 ^^
00:17:193 ^^
00:18:116 ^^
00:39:231 Mabye place a LN here, but not a double in my opinion
00:46:673 Missing a note
01:20:077 Would not place a double here
01:38:770 (98770|3,98827|2,98885|0,98943|1,99000|3,99058|2,99116|0,99173|1,99231|3,99289|2,99346|0,99404|1,99462|3,99520|2,99577|0,99635|1,99693|3,99750|2,99808|0,99866|1,99923|3,99981|2,100039|0,100096|1,100154|2,100154|3,100270|0,100385|3,100500|0,100616|3,100673|2,100731|0,100789|1,100846|3,100904|2,100962|0,101020|1,101077|3,101135|2,101193|1,101250|0,101308|3,101366|2,101423|1,101481|0) Here you could put in some 1/16 streams (i don't know if thats rankable, but it would fit, sry)
01:43:385 Place a double here
01:47:077 ^^
02:04:096 Missing a note here
02:09:577 Would place a note here, too
02:26:770 Here should be a tripple
02:28:616 ^^
02:30:462 ^^
02:32:308 ^^
02:59:770 Would place these LN's at 1 and 2 because they sound like the first LN's
03:03:462 Would change these quad with LN's


Cool map, really fun to play

Mage wrote:

1|2|3|4
Easy
00:09:693 - better to use 2/1 LN here
00:17:077 - add note to 1, this will be not so hard for ez diff seems unnecessary, liek i leave here single 00:16:616 -
00:28:154 - make single
00:30:000 - ^
00:38:308 - https://puu.sh/uRkzh/6631d19b65.png
00:42:693 - add note
00:47:077 - double will be too hard
01:24:000 - double
01:30:923 - i think two notes for vocal isn't good, you can replace it to 2/1 LN or two 1/1 notes
01:34:616 - ^
01:38:308 - ^
02:22:616 - 02:24:462 - singles
02:32:770 - look at sreenshot above
02:37:154 - note
02:37:846 - double too hard
02:41:539 - double
02:45:231 - double
Normal
00:39:693 (39693|2,39693|3,39923|1,40154|3,40154|2) - why you don't use this beautiful pattern further? 00:41:539 - 00:43:385 - 00:45:231 - and etc.
01:01:846 - double
01:10:616 - 01:12:462 - 01:14:308 - i think better to place here notes
01:46:154 - you miss double
01:49:385 - ^
Hard
00:40:731 - 00:44:423 - and etc. i don't know why don't mapped these sounds now i'm thinking its kinda weird not to have them, added
00:42:808 - 00:46:500 - i think you should map main melody current pattern plays good imo
01:35:077 - this part seems boring, maybe you will add some LNs from 01:35:077 - until 01:36:693 and etc.
wew Insane
00:42:808 - 00:44:423 - 00:46:500 - add notes
00:51:462 - https://puu.sh/uRmCu/0d6078e867.png spam 1/4 is not really my intenstion here (while some of the 1/4 should be 1/8), i rather do double jacks to build up the intensity here
01:28:154 - 01:30:000 - 01:31:846 - 01:33:693 - make here doubles or triples nah, the doubles here are either for the main sound, or the 1/8
01:39:693 - https://puu.sh/uRmRX/bb151fa0bd.png
02:46:039 - https://puu.sh/uRn85/734376a092.png
spiedkor
01:49:385 - double other same sound used single
nice diff dude xd
thank u, very nice mod!
posted
i said not to req qat level of polish but whatever
00:46:616 (46616|1) - could add a break from kiai there

ez
00:46:846 (46846|3,47077|2) - This part felt like it had too much flow with the previous part, could change lane of 00:47:077 (47077|2) - or general pattern
00:49:616 (49616|1) - Bit hard to follow, a ln would make it easier but you don't have any in kiai so idk
00:56:308 (56308|2) - Don't these change on the red tick?
01:00:923 (60923|1) - Add note?
02:10:616 (130616|0,130616|1) - Putting this and previous in 1|2 felt a little repetitive but fine
02:21:693 (141693|0) - lane 1 felt a bit overused in this part
03:03:462 (183462|3) - Change to ln? felt like it needed more

nm
00:04:616 (4616|1) - two circles might be overdoing it here since you're not really mapping the drums here
00:54:462 (54462|3) - only diff without LNs here?
02:05:423 (125423|1,125423|2) - just this area it felt like there was too many pairs of circles that were directly next to each other, not much use of 1|3 or 2|4 pairs. Could use them to make more interesting

hd - what am i doing there
01:15:231 (75231|2) - shorten to half length? the sound that starts on the head kinda disappears when the second starts
01:42:462 (102462|1) - use 3 notes to make different to next part? has cymbel
02:26:193 (146193|3,146308|2,146423|0) - should there be more emphasis put on the white tick? Currently it just kind of follows the previous circle. Makes more sense for me if 02:26:423 (146423|0) - was next to the previous because same sound, but probably fine since it goes lower in pitch there.
posted

Sinnoh wrote:

i said not to req qat level of polish but whatever //dont think my map has reached that level
00:46:616 (46616|1) - could add a break from kiai there //dont understand your point here, if you mean break time, i'm not going to set a break time just for 1sec

ez
00:46:846 (46846|3,47077|2) - This part felt like it had too much flow with the previous part, could change lane of 00:47:077 (47077|2) - or general pattern
00:49:616 (49616|1) - Bit hard to follow, a ln would make it easier but you don't have any in kiai so idk
00:56:308 (56308|2) - Don't these change on the red tick? //true
01:00:923 (60923|1) - Add note? //2 is enough
02:10:616 (130616|0,130616|1) - Putting this and previous in 1|2 felt a little repetitive but fine //repattern
02:21:693 (141693|0) - lane 1 felt a bit overused in this part
03:03:462 (183462|3) - Change to ln? felt like it needed more

nm
00:04:616 (4616|1) - two circles might be overdoing it here since you're not really mapping the drums here //main piano sound, like i did 00:03:577 -
00:54:462 (54462|3) - only diff without LNs here? //why not :^)
02:05:423 (125423|1,125423|2) - just this area it felt like there was too many pairs of circles that were directly next to each other, not much use of 1|3 or 2|4 pairs. Could use them to make more interesting

hd - what am i doing there
01:15:231 (75231|2) - shorten to half length? the sound that starts on the head kinda disappears when the second starts // i can hear the pitch change
01:42:462 (102462|1) - use 3 notes to make different to next part? has cymbel //k
02:26:193 (146193|3,146308|2,146423|0) - should there be more emphasis put on the white tick? Currently it just kind of follows the previous circle. Makes more sense for me if 02:26:423 (146423|0) - was next to the previous because same sound, but probably fine since it goes lower in pitch there. //will go with the pitch
Thank you so much
posted
hey mod form my queue

Easy
00:03:116 (3116|2) - add a note
01:57:577 (117577|1) - ^
Normal
00:03:116 (3116|0) - add a note
01:57:577 (117577|1) - ^
Hard
00:25:385 (25385|0) - consider changing this note into an 1/2 LN
00:27:231 (27231|3) - ^
00:29:077 (29077|0) - ^
00:30:923 (30923|3) - ^
01:22:154 (82154|0,82154|3) - delete a note for constancy
01:30:923 (90923|0,90923|3) - delete the note on C3
01:58:154 (118154|3) - ghost note
02:04:385 (124385|3) - move this to C1
02:19:846 (139846|3) - consider changing this note into an 1/2 LN
02:21:693 (141693|0) - ^
02:23:539 (143539|3) - ^
02:25:385 (145385|0) - ^
02:54:462 (174462|3,174462|0,174923|2,175385|0) - ctrl + H because most of the Ln sounds have a low pitch and the last LN has a high pitch
Insane
00:09:808 (9808|0) - consider adding a note on C1
00:38:423 (38423|3) - add a note
01:12:116 (72116|0) - ^
01:12:808 (72808|2) - ^
01:30:923 (90923|1,90923|0) - delete a note
01:31:154 (91154|0) - move to C3 for pitch
01:43:270 (103270|2) - move this to 01:43:298 (103298|2) - on 1/8
01:43:500 (103500|1,103616|2) - move the first note to 01:43:529 (103529|1) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
01:46:962 (106962|1) - ^^ 01:46:991 (106991|1) -
01:47:193 (107193|2,107308|1) - ^^ 01:47:221 (107221|2) -
01:50:654 (110654|2) - ^^ 01:50:683 (110683|2) -
01:50:885 (110885|1,111000|2) - ^^ 01:50:914 (110914|1) -
01:52:616 (112616|2) - add a note
01:54:346 (114346|1) - move this to 01:54:375 (114375|1) - on 1/8
01:54:577 (114577|2,114693|1) - move the first note to 01:54:606 (114606|2) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
02:02:077 (122077|2) - ghost note
02:03:693 (123693|1) - ^
02:10:385 (130385|1) - add a note for constancy
02:32:885 (152885|0) - ^
SPEEDCORE!!
00:09:808 (9808|3) - add a note
00:23:885 (23885|3,23885|2,23885|0,24116|1,24231|2,24346|3,24462|0,24577|1,24693|2,24808|3) - ctrl + H
01:38:193 (98193|1) - add a note
01:43:270 (103270|1) - move this to 01:43:298 (103298|1) - on 1/8
01:43:500 (103500|2,103616|1) - move the first note to 01:43:529 (103529|2) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
01:46:962 (106962|1) - ^^ 01:46:991 (106991|1) -
01:47:193 (107193|2,107308|1) - ^^ 01:47:221 (107221|2) -
01:50:770 (110770|2) - add a note
01:54:462 (114462|1) - ^
02:00:000 (120000|3) - ghost note
02:01:846 (121846|2) - ^
02:03:693 (123693|3) - ^


no kds if it didn't help

good luck with your map
posted

Cokiiplay wrote:

hey mod form my queue

Easy
00:03:116 (3116|2) - add a note
01:57:577 (117577|1) - ^ //too much for a EZ diff, plus i didnt use double for other same sounds
Normal
00:03:116 (3116|0) - add a note
01:57:577 (117577|1) - ^ //double is enough here
Hard
00:25:385 (25385|0) - consider changing this note into an 1/2 LN
00:27:231 (27231|3) - ^
00:29:077 (29077|0) - ^
00:30:923 (30923|3) - ^ //they are not extened sound, using LN will only break the pattern
01:22:154 (82154|0,82154|3) - delete a note for constancy
01:30:923 (90923|0,90923|3) - delete the note on C3
01:58:154 (118154|3) - ghost note
02:04:385 (124385|3) - move this to C1 //prefer the current pattern
02:19:846 (139846|3) - consider changing this note into an 1/2 LN
02:21:693 (141693|0) - ^
02:23:539 (143539|3) - ^
02:25:385 (145385|0) - ^
02:54:462 (174462|3,174462|0,174923|2,175385|0) - ctrl + H because most of the Ln sounds have a low pitch and the last LN has a high pitch //i dont see how CTRL+H will fit the pitch more
Insane
00:09:808 (9808|0) - consider adding a note on C1 //1 note here is enough to show the drum, plus its also jacks
00:38:423 (38423|3) - add a note
01:12:116 (72116|0) - ^
01:12:808 (72808|2) - ^//doubles are only for the main sound here
01:30:923 (90923|1,90923|0) - delete a note //not just for the vocal but also the short 1/8 you can hear at background
01:31:154 (91154|0) - move to C3 for pitch
01:43:270 (103270|2) - move this to 01:43:298 (103298|2) - on 1/8 /current timing is correct
01:43:500 (103500|1,103616|2) - move the first note to 01:43:529 (103529|1) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
01:46:962 (106962|1) - ^^ 01:46:991 (106991|1) -
01:47:193 (107193|2,107308|1) - ^^ 01:47:221 (107221|2) -
01:50:654 (110654|2) - ^^ 01:50:683 (110683|2) -
01:50:885 (110885|1,111000|2) - ^^ 01:50:914 (110914|1) -
01:52:616 (112616|2) - add a note
01:54:346 (114346|1) - move this to 01:54:375 (114375|1) - on 1/8
01:54:577 (114577|2,114693|1) - move the first note to 01:54:606 (114606|2) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
02:02:077 (122077|2) - ghost note
02:03:693 (123693|1) - ^
02:10:385 (130385|1) - add a note for constancy
02:32:885 (152885|0) - ^
SPEEDCORE!!
00:09:808 (9808|3) - add a note
00:23:885 (23885|3,23885|2,23885|0,24116|1,24231|2,24346|3,24462|0,24577|1,24693|2,24808|3) - ctrl + H
01:38:193 (98193|1) - add a note
01:43:270 (103270|1) - move this to 01:43:298 (103298|1) - on 1/8
01:43:500 (103500|2,103616|1) - move the first note to 01:43:529 (103529|2) - on 1/8 and ctrl + H both notes
01:46:962 (106962|1) - ^^ 01:46:991 (106991|1) -
01:47:193 (107193|2,107308|1) - ^^ 01:47:221 (107221|2) -
01:50:770 (110770|2) - add a note
01:54:462 (114462|1) - ^
02:00:000 (120000|3) - ghost note
02:01:846 (121846|2) - ^
02:03:693 (123693|3) - ^


no kds if it didn't help

good luck with your map
Thx
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水KD大活动开始了

ez

00:44:077 (44077|3) - 到 00:44:193 - 和你前面保持一致
02:38:539 (158539|0) - 这个也是,上移一下

hd

00:25:616 (25616|2,25731|1) - ctrl+H
00:27:808 (27808|0,27923|1,28039|2) - ↑
01:14:770 (74770|1) - 删了?
01:27:808 (87808|2,87923|1,87923|0,88039|3,88039|2) - Ctrl +H ,然后 01:28:270 (88270|1,88270|2) - 移到34
01:32:885 - 这里是不是有音

insane

02:41:077 (161077|1,161077|0,161193|2,161193|3) - 不如1/4
02:45:981 - 有音?
02:46:154 (166154|3,166154|2) - 不如不要...
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biemote wrote:

水KD大活动开始了

ez

00:44:077 (44077|3) - 到 00:44:193 - 和你前面保持一致
02:38:539 (158539|0) - 这个也是,上移一下

hd

00:25:616 (25616|2,25731|1) - ctrl+H
00:27:808 (27808|0,27923|1,28039|2) - ↑ 现在的好看
01:14:770 (74770|1) - 删了?
01:27:808 (87808|2,87923|1,87923|0,88039|3,88039|2) - Ctrl +H ,然后 01:28:270 (88270|1,88270|2) - 移到34 现在的好看
01:32:885 - 这里是不是有音

insane

02:41:077 (161077|1,161077|0,161193|2,161193|3) - 不如1/4
02:45:981 - 有音?
02:46:154 (166154|3,166154|2) - 不如不要...
其他OK
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Hii hii . . . mod as requested

SPEEDDORE
00:06:000 - much more clearer & u use double while 00:06:231 - only the bell sound and also double. . . ehh
00:06:923 - triple here? you make them same level as 00:06:808 -
00:10:154 - triple?
00:33:462 (33462|3,33462|0,33577|2,33577|1) - same here, you make them both equal. 00:33:462 - much more clearer, make triple
01:02:308 - 01:03:231 - hithat here, add?
01:12:116 (72116|3,72116|2) - same sound as 01:11:539 (71539|1,71539|0,71539|3) -
01:28:500 - or 01:28:270 - you wont make a roll here?
01:49:846 - triple?
Cany suggest anything here. . .
Insane
00:40:731 - 00:44:423 - 02:32:885 - double?
same here, such clean diff. . .


Well that's all, hope it helps. . . .
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HI YAHOO
m4m req on my sheriruth
SPEEEDCOORE
00:17:193 - missing something here
00:50:770 - maybe add 2 for cymbal, also this is the hardest diff so i think should be fully mapped
01:21:923 (81923|2,81923|3,81923|0) - maybe reduce to 2? because no kick
01:23:539 - ^
01:27:693 - this part should be buffed, it's too easy for 6* and there is a lot to catch
01:33:000 (93000|2,93000|3) - if this is for vocal then 01:33:116 - it should be mapped here too
01:43:270 (103270|1,103500|2) - these are wrong snapped, it should be 01:43:308 - (2/3) and here 01:43:539 - (1/3)
01:46:962 (106962|1,107193|2) - ^
01:50:654 (110654|1,110770|2,110885|1) - ^
01:54:346 (114346|2,114462|1,114577|2) - ^
02:12:577 - maybe add 3 cos the instrument is there
03:03:462 (183462|2,183462|3) - hmm , maybe no need to map cymbal as ln...

thats all, hope it's helpful :D
btw..looks like i mod the old version of this map, if it does not exist, suan ba
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Hi, I'm from the noobest q ever true
Let's start
0|1|2|3
Hard
00:25:962 - You missed a note
00:29:654 - ^
00:38:885 (38885|1,39000|2,39000|3,39116|1,39116|0) - 00:38:885 (38885|1) - has the same sound as 00:39:000 (39000|2,39000|3,39116|0,39116|1) so add a note here
00:39:462 (39462|1) - Remove this
00:43:212 - You missed a note
00:43:327 - ^
00:44:423 (44423|0) - Add a note here
00:48:750 and 00:48:866 - Would recommend adding notes here
00:50:366 and 00:50:481 - ^
00:51:981 and 00:52:096 - Add notes here
00:52:443 and 00:52:558 - ^
01:01:846 (61846|3,61846|0,62193|3,62193|2,62423|0,62423|1,62770|0,62770|3,63116|1,63116|2,63462|0,63462|3,63693|0,63693|1,64039|1,64039|3,64270|2,64270|0,64616|2,64616|3,64962|0,64962|1,65539|0,65539|3,65885|3,65885|2,66116|0,66116|1,66462|0,66462|3,66808|2,66808|1,67154|3,67154|0,67385|3,67385|2,67731|0,67731|2,67962|3,67962|1,68308|0,68308|1,68539|3,68770|2,68770|1,69000|0) - - Would consider remap this part
01:25:846 (85846|3,85846|0,85962|0,86077|2,86193|1,86308|0,86308|3,86423|3,86539|1,86654|2,86770|3,86770|0,86885|0,87000|2,87116|1,87231|2,87231|3) - Would make this part a stream
01:38:770 (98770|3,98770|2,98885|1,99000|3,99000|2,99116|0,99231|1,99346|0,99346|3,99462|2,99577|0,99577|1,99693|2,99808|0,99808|3,99923|1,100039|2,100154|0,100154|3,100270|1,100385|2,100500|1,100616|0,100616|3,100731|2,100846|0,100846|1,100962|3,101077|2,101193|0,101193|3,101308|1,101423|2,101423|3) - ^
02:27:923 (147923|0,147923|1) - Make this a tripple
02:43:212 and 02:43:327 - Would add notes here, same with other part like this
02:45:231 (165231|2,165231|3,165346|1,165462|0,165462|3,165577|2,165693|3,165693|0,165808|1,165923|2,165923|3,166039|1,166154|0,166154|3,166270|2,166385|3,166385|0,166500|1,166616|2,166616|3,166731|0,166846|1,166846|3,166962|2,167077|0,167077|1) - Would make this into a stream

Remember to check the AI mod, I saw 2 warnings there
Hope this help and GL for ranking :)
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From My Mod Queue


Col 1 2 3 4

overrated?

Speedcore
I suggest change diff name
00:26:193 (26193|0) - move to 2, idk why you do this 00:29:885 (29885|3) - 00:27:462 (27462|3) -
00:52:731 idk why i always f-ed up everytime i testplay, i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7717214
01:08:308 (68308|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7717227
01:43:154 (103154|2,103270|1) - ctrl +h, cuz the 2nd and 3rd sounds are same
01:44:539 (104539|3,105000|3) - both different, i suggest move 01:45:000 (105000|3) - to 3
01:47:193 (107193|2,107308|1) - ctrl + h
01:48:231 (108231|3,108462|0,108693|3) - ctrl +h, move last note to 2
02:49:962 -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7717244 , same goes for similar piano sound until end
02:53:654 like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7717248

sorry cant do much, the pattern already ok, variation seems ok cuz the song is repetitive
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Hi mod queue thingy. :)

General
Just one thing here really. Do you mean for OD 8 HP 8.5 on Insane and OD 8.5 HP 9 on Insane? Normally these two values are the other way around.

Also, have a strain graph of the SPEEDCORE!! difficulty because pink bars are useless.

Obligatory hitsounding reminder...


0|1|2|3

Easy
Bet you weren't expecting a lengthy mod for this diff, right? ;)
  1. 00:06:231 (6231|2,6462|1) - switch columns 00:06:808 (6808|3) - Move to col 0 to emulate the pitch changes in the tune?
  2. 00:08:077 (8077|1,8308|2,8654|0) - to cols 2,3,1? (Same reason as above)
  3. 00:38:654 (38654|3,38885|3) - Not too comfortable with this on an Easy diff. What about like this?
  4. 00:49:616 (49616|1,49962|3) - Looks like a pattern inconsistency here. Move both 1/2 beat later?
  5. 01:04:039 (64039|0) - Move to a different column? (minijack thing maybe, also the tune has a different note than compared to at 01:03:700)
  6. 01:04:500 (64500|2,64962|1) - Move both to the white tick after? Feels weird having everything syncopated here.
  7. 01:05:539 (65539|3,65885|3,66346|1,66808|2,67385|0,67731|0) - See two points above
  8. 01:11:077 (71077|0,71077|3) - Not at much emphasis as at 01:09:231. Reduce to a single?
  9. 01:19:846 (79846|0) - Move to col 1?
  10. 01:40:616 (100616|3,101539|3) - Move to col 2? (column goes unused for 5 seconds.)
  11. 02:32:770 (152770|3,153116|0,153116|1,153346|0,153693|3,153923|2) - Something similar to 00:38:654.
  12. 02:44:077 (164077|2,164423|0) - Move 1/2 beat later?
  13. 03:03:462 (183462|3) - Move to col 2?
Normal
  1. 00:03:231 (3231|3,3231|2,3577|0,3577|1,4616|0,4616|1,4962|3,4962|2,6462|3,6462|2,6808|1,6808|0,8308|3,8308|2,8654|0,8654|1) - Because of the nature of what you're mapping to here, I don't think that this section needs the doubles.
  2. 00:12:346 (12346|3,12346|2) - Make LNs to 00:13:039?
  3. 00:14:193 (14193|3,14193|2) - Same to 00:14:885?
  4. 00:15:693 (15693|2,16039|0,16385|3,16616|3) - Make LNs? (following held lead)
  5. 00:16:385 (16385|3) - Move to col 2? (Whether or not the previous change is accepted, I still think this should happen. There's a pitch change here, too.)
  6. 00:52:846 (52846|0,52846|3) - Move to 1 and 2? (The pitch differs slightly to the previous note, plus avoiding the minijack)
  7. 00:54:462 (54462|0,54462|3,56423|1,56423|3,58154|2,58154|3,60116|1,60116|0) - Surely there's LNs here, right? Like every other diff you mapped?
  8. 01:35:077 (95077|3,95077|0,95539|1,95539|2,96000|3,96000|2,96462|0,96462|1,96923|3,96923|2,97385|2,97385|0,97846|3,97846|1,98308|0,98308|1) - What about mapping a 1/2 stream instead?
  9. 01:38:770 (98770|3,98770|0,100616|2,101539|0,102000|0) - This bit is emptier than Easy. Surely that shouldn't happen here?
  10. 01:57:693 (117693|0,117693|3,118039|2,118039|1,119077|1,119077|0,119423|2,119423|3,120923|2,120923|3,121270|1,121270|0,122770|1,122770|0,123116|2,123116|3) - Like at 00:03:231.
  11. 02:06:808 (126808|2,126808|3) - LNs to 02:07:500?
  12. 02:08:654 (128654|1,128654|0) - LNs to 02:09:346?
  13. 02:10:154 (130154|0,130154|1,130500|2,130500|3,130846|0,131077|3,131077|0) - Same idea as 00:15:693
  14. Add notes at 02:59:308 and 02:59:770 in col 3? (To follow trumpets)
  15. 03:02:770 - What about like this instead?


Hope this helps and best of luck! :)
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