1. Easy (0.86 stars, 169 notes)
2. Hard (4.47 stars, 428 notes)
3. Normal (2.85 stars, 268 notes)

TianChao V5 wrote:

烂B 给你☆

Sumisola wrote:

一会看图

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
結束時的綠線應該要放在轉盤結尾上結束kiai以前是跟hard难度的结尾一样``后来把normal跟easy的缩短了(hard忘了缩短我自重)``忘了弄回来
[Easy]
AR用2會比較好一點
01:32:110 (4) - 堆疊問題
02:15:443 (4) - 下來4格grid會比較好?[nazi]于是感觉下来4格更怪了``重新排了下你看看行不行
02:24:776 (3) - 為什麼返回的位置怪怪的@@额``不知道``已修复
03:07:444 (1,2) - spacing?
03:31:443 (1,2) - ^
03:45:443 (5,1,2) - 一樣是不均勻的spacing

[Normal]
00:38:110 (1,2,3) - 不均勻的間距
00:41:110 (4,5) - spacing
02:06:776 (1,2,3) - 一樣是間距問題
02:54:776 (3,4,5) - ^
03:02:110 (1,2,3) - ^
04:04:110 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:22:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - 總覺得有點歪掉!! 修一下吧[nazi]于是重新排了下``好像有点2了``
00:37:776 - 還有00:43:110 - 不知道為什麼我很想在這加一個note (?)前面类似的地方也加上了
01:22:443 (2,3,4,5) - 正方形比較好看[nazi]
01:25:110 (9,10) - 平行(7,8)比較好(?)
03:13:776 (2,3,4,5) - nazi一下!! 你把每個slider的位置切齊點會比較好看
像↓

SPOILER

還有↓

SPOILER

這兩個的位置就不同 了解我的意思嗎0.0?(不懂可以用IRC問我)改成这样没错吧?
03:18:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這種的排法容易造成玩家的困惑 不建議使用(節奏不太一樣的問題)拉出来可以么?
04:01:110 (8) - 堆疊在一起比較好
04:08:443 (14) - 並沒有完全的堆疊好
04:15:526 (1) - 結束的位置...明顯與其它diff不同~需要改過來!!啊哈```看General


建議:用grid size 4去調整吧

作的不錯(雪莉的SB果然很神阿=口=")
star~

Lan wings wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月4日 at 1:23:58

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Kyoko no Tsukiyo
BPM: 90
Filesize: 8067kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.81 stars, 172 notes)
2. Hard (4.51 stars, 425 notes)
3. Normal (2.8 stars, 268 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kyoko no Tsukiyo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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谢谢菲姐的SB``然后我想问下怎么加TAG?
然后7月3号之前下载的麻烦重新下载一下

zoern66 wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月4日 at 1:23:58

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Kyoko no Tsukiyo
BPM: 90
Filesize: 8067kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0.81 stars, 172 notes)
2. Hard (4.51 stars, 425 notes)
3. Normal (2.8 stars, 268 notes)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Kyoko no Tsukiyo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
谢谢菲姐的SB``然后我想问下怎么加TAG?
然后7月3号之前下载的麻烦重新下载一下

• Title: Kyokou no Tsukiyo (100% sure about this. use this to change title)
  
  (The name of uploader is hard to find =_=b, leave this for other modders)
  
  Tags: Moonlight night of fiction sherrie__fay
  
  Offset: 1443. (Wrong metronome ._.)
  
  You need a preview point! (Timing----Set Current position as preview point)
  
  Hmm, skin is pretty nice, but why hit50k.png is different from hit50.png?
  
  Delete 1 - 1 (Lan wings).osb in your folder since it isn't used!
  
  I suggest to make the white combo colour more blue because the reverse arrow is also white...so...hard to notice there's a reverse.
  
  Also use tick rate 2 in all diff? 4 is too many imo...
  
  Here's a hitsounds you may use?...http://puu.sh/39Sn
  
  The outro is 1 min long...Though it's less than 20%, I suggest you crop the last part...

• 00:18:776 (2) - ...make like this? at least move the point a little to make the slider looks even.
  00:56:776 (1) - hmm, might be a little close to the spinner...Perhaps it's better to remove this note?
  02:46:110 (1) - ^
  03:16:110 (3) - ._. intentional? try this?
  03:31:443 (1) - might be a little close to the spinner?
  03:56:777 (5) - ^
  04:12:110 (3) - I suggest to make this smoother like this..

• 00:24:776 (5) - New combo?
  00:30:776 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?
  00:36:444 (6) - ...
  00:58:110 (4) - Add clap? Or remove clap at 00:58:776 (6) ?
  01:37:776 (1) - Add finish.
  02:20:109 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?
  02:29:443 (3,5) - The end of 5 is slightly blocked by 3, so...this?
  02:40:109 (3,1) - I prefer not stack these...just make 02:41:443 (1,2) symmetry?
  03:57:443 (8,1) - the reverse of 1 is hard to see...you'd better move the end point towards left.
  04:06:110 (5) - Curve this a little?

• 00:37:110 (9) - Just use 1/4 slider and mvoe 1/4 beat forward to have a pause here?
  00:42:444 (10) - ^
  01:23:776 (6) - New combo?
  01:36:443 (X) - add a note here.
  02:15:276 (4) - Remove this?
  02:33:443 (3,4,5,6) - ...meaningless stacks which reduce fluent and flow of the music...
  03:23:776 (1,3) - Hidden reverse arrow again, move 03:24:776 (3) or 03:23:776 (1) so that the arrow can be seen.
  04:12:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need for a anti-jump here...try a cross?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Title: Kyokou no Tsukiyo (100% sure about this. use this to change title)changed
  
  (The name of uploader is hard to find =_=b, leave this for other modders)
  
  Tags: Moonlight night of fiction sherrie__fay 于是这里不懂为啥要改?
  
  Offset: 1443. (Wrong metronome ._.)changed
  
  You need a preview point! (Timing----Set Current position as preview point)看不懂
  
  Hmm, skin is pretty nice, but why hit50k.png is different from hit50.png?删了
  
  Delete 1 - 1 (Lan wings).osb in your folder since it isn't used!删了
  
  I suggest to make the white combo colour more blue because the reverse arrow is also white...so...hard to notice there's a reverse.等菲姐上线找他换颜色去``
  
  Also use tick rate 2 in all diff? 4 is too many imo...主要是因为hard难度的太鼓模式用4给力一些``
  
  Here's a hitsounds you may use?...http://puu.sh/39Snchanged
  
  The outro is 1 min long...Though it's less than 20%, I suggest you crop the last part...我找人剪掉算了

[Easy]

• 00:18:776 (2) - ...make like this? at least move the point a little to make the slider looks even.changed
  00:56:776 (1) - hmm, might be a little close to the spinner...Perhaps it's better to remove this note?changed
  02:46:110 (1) - ^ changed
  03:16:110 (3) - ._. intentional? try this?changed
  03:31:443 (1) - might be a little close to the spinner?changed
  03:56:777 (5) - ^同上上的意思?
  04:12:110 (3) - I suggest to make this smoother like this..changed

[Normal]

• 00:24:776 (5) - New combo?changed
  00:30:776 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?不懂``
  00:36:444 (6) - ...changed
  00:58:110 (4) - Add clap? Or remove clap at 00:58:776 (6) ?changed
  01:37:776 (1) - Add finish.changed
  02:20:109 (2,3) - Try 0.75x BPM?同上上上上
  02:29:443 (3,5) - The end of 5 is slightly blocked by 3, so...this?changed
  02:40:109 (3,1) - I prefer not stack these...just make 02:41:443 (1,2) symmetry?changed
  03:57:443 (8,1) - the reverse of 1 is hard to see...you'd better move the end point towards left.changed
  04:06:110 (5) - Curve this a little?changed

[Hard]

Hmm, the whistle slider body doesn't fit well imo...Remove them?找不到合适的``可以帮我找一个么

• 00:37:110 (9) - Just use 1/4 slider and mvoe 1/4 beat forward to have a pause here?不懂什么意思`你看看现在的行不行?
  00:42:444 (10) - ^^
  01:23:776 (6) - New combo?changed
  01:36:443 (X) - add a note here.changed
  02:15:276 (4) - Remove this?changed
  02:33:443 (3,4,5,6) - ...meaningless stacks which reduce fluent and flow of the music...改hitsound?
  03:23:776 (1,3) - Hidden reverse arrow again, move 03:24:776 (3) or 03:23:776 (1) so that the arrow can be seen.藏箭头?好像没藏吧
  04:12:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need for a anti-jump here...try a cross?changed

Nice song~
Your mapping skill has improved much, good job

don't forget spboxer3's kds btw.擦``忘了给我自重

No_Gu wrote:

- -表示做楼上的翻译压力巨大。。。

oWingz wrote:

Nice and relaxing map
Star~

Just suggestions
[Easy]
00:52:490 - Remove Spinner for break
02:20:441/02:26:823 - Break time
03:26:823 - Remove Spinner for break

[Normal]
00:31:990 - Remove Slider 3 and Circle 1 //Add Break
03:27:156 - Remove Spinner for break

[Hard]
Hard map is hard

Megurine Luka wrote:

看见V+图就想mod >///<
Nice Skin&BG..

[Easy]
Clap的声音都略重了._.相对起来很多地方感觉finish的音效就足够了._.
比如[00:11:490][1]和[00:14:157][3]试试看只下finish~个人感觉好听很多
因为曲子本身就比较轻柔突然那么重的clap总觉得很破坏._.clap的音量调低了``看看怎么样

很多clap再斟酌下？
不是一定要玩万金油下法的吧>▽<没那能力啊``只能用万金油了``
顺带一提._.最后一个spinner下clap实在太让人难受了Q.Q

[Normal]
音效方面同Easy
00:20:157 [5] 拉的对称一点会比较好&move down
00:32:157 [6] 太直..拉弯点
好多条子都太直了..个人感觉不好看其实偶比较喜欢略弯的``
如果相邻几个一起直就还好..有时候会出现前一个直后一个弯视觉上就不是很好看
00:36:491 [3] ^

完全可以拉成这样..

00:20:157 [5] move down..almost touch the life bar
00:44:824 [3] 拉条有点崩
00:48:824 [1] move down..
01:14:157 [3] 太直
02:06:823 [1] ^
02:19:490 [1] move up
03:52:824 [1,2] move down
03:54:824 [5] 拉条崩，最好拉的和前一个对称的样子这样?
04:15:156 [1] 一样的问题..下clap太难受了Q.Q去掉了

[Hard]
00:42:490 [10] spacing
01:07:157 [3,4]

try this

01:16:490 [4,5,6] spacing可以适当拉大点
01:23:823 [1] move down
02:08:490 [4,6] 拉条略崩
02:18:157 [4,5,6] 同第三条
02:29:823 [5] move down
03:09:823 [6,7,8]

try this

03:13:823 [2,3,4,5] 同第三条感觉没以前好看了..
03:43:156 [5,8] new combo
03:51:157 [6] move up



anyway, star☆