Hey o/ from my queue
I really like this song+map and SB only makes it better!
Good luck!
I really like this song+map and SB only makes it better!
Melancholy
00:00:674 - a 1/4 slider maybe? i know it starts with instrument but it could be nice to have that vocals mapped
00:13:195 (5) - i think a slider could fit better since vocals continue from here to the next note
00:22:780 (1) - this is a big jump for this section, maybe consider nerfing it a bit, also overlap it a bit more like 00:21:504 (5) - here
00:23:288 (3,1) - stack them better
00:29:771 (4,1) - these are too fast compared to the previous slider, it breaks consistency a bit, 00:27:610 (3,4,1) - this is great because it follows a fluid pattern
00:33:712 (3,4) - 4 should have the same distance as 00:33:457 (1,2) - these, only 3 has a different and lower sound
00:33:712 (3,2) - stack them maybe
00:36:000 (1,2) - i think this breaks consistency, maybe just follow vocals
00:38:669 (4) - it could fit better if you cut this to the white line and fill with a circle, just for instruments and vocals change
00:43:881 (4,4) - stack
00:51:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider mapping vocals instead of instruments since you did it all through this section
00:57:483 (2) - maybe curve it a bit more so it blankets better
01:04:220 (4) - this seems to be too curved compared to the rest
01:08:288 (4,5) - i think you should increase distance a bit
01:12:229 (4,5) - you could put slider first, just for vocals and it will increase intensity since you play a circle and a slider next
01:15:788 (2) - cut this to the red tick and fill with a circle, you're mapping intruments here but a single slider doesnt represent them that well
01:15:407 (4,1) - slider first
01:26:339 (1,2,3) - you could increase their distance a bit
01:27:617 (5,6,1) - make their distance the same, i still think 1 should have higher distance
02:01:926 - intensity is too high here so it'll be fine to map this beat
02:09:744 (2,3) - increase distance maybe
02:22:837 (1,2) - ^
02:33:515 (3) - this could me smoother
02:41:142 (1,2) - too much distance imo
02:43:200 (1,2,1,2,1) - you could increase distance
02:48:880 (2,3) - you could perfect this blanket, there are few objects to look at on this calm section so why not make them pretty
00:00:674 - a 1/4 slider maybe? i know it starts with instrument but it could be nice to have that vocals mapped
00:13:195 (5) - i think a slider could fit better since vocals continue from here to the next note
00:22:780 (1) - this is a big jump for this section, maybe consider nerfing it a bit, also overlap it a bit more like 00:21:504 (5) - here
00:23:288 (3,1) - stack them better
00:29:771 (4,1) - these are too fast compared to the previous slider, it breaks consistency a bit, 00:27:610 (3,4,1) - this is great because it follows a fluid pattern
00:33:712 (3,4) - 4 should have the same distance as 00:33:457 (1,2) - these, only 3 has a different and lower sound
00:33:712 (3,2) - stack them maybe
00:36:000 (1,2) - i think this breaks consistency, maybe just follow vocals
00:38:669 (4) - it could fit better if you cut this to the white line and fill with a circle, just for instruments and vocals change
00:43:881 (4,4) - stack
00:51:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider mapping vocals instead of instruments since you did it all through this section
00:57:483 (2) - maybe curve it a bit more so it blankets better
01:04:220 (4) - this seems to be too curved compared to the rest
01:08:288 (4,5) - i think you should increase distance a bit
01:12:229 (4,5) - you could put slider first, just for vocals and it will increase intensity since you play a circle and a slider next
01:15:788 (2) - cut this to the red tick and fill with a circle, you're mapping intruments here but a single slider doesnt represent them that well
01:15:407 (4,1) - slider first
01:26:339 (1,2,3) - you could increase their distance a bit
01:27:617 (5,6,1) - make their distance the same, i still think 1 should have higher distance
02:01:926 - intensity is too high here so it'll be fine to map this beat
02:09:744 (2,3) - increase distance maybe
02:22:837 (1,2) - ^
02:33:515 (3) - this could me smoother
02:41:142 (1,2) - too much distance imo
02:43:200 (1,2,1,2,1) - you could increase distance
02:48:880 (2,3) - you could perfect this blanket, there are few objects to look at on this calm section so why not make them pretty
Insane
00:00:674 - same as melancholy
00:04:848 (5) - slider into slider fits better
00:20:869 (2,1) - stack maybe
00:25:322 - maybe lower the volume here to clearly hear what you're mapping or change hitsound for something softer
00:31:424 (3,4) - i think that mapping instruments here fits better, too much slider spam
00:35:364 (2) - this represents nothing, if you want to map vocals here a slider fits much better
00:44:517 (2,3,4) - same as melancholy, you're focusing on vocals in this section so why not map them here too
00:54:305 (1,2) - these should be the same shape
01:11:085 (3,2) - stack maybe and move 01:11:593 (1) - down a bit
02:32:880 (4,1) - i think you should use other angle, maybe 4 x:351 y:187 and 1 x:190 y:229
02:36:566 (3,4) - start a slider on 3 tail, it fits better imo
02:51:228 (4,1) - dont overlap them
02:56:790 (4) - slider into circle should be better
00:00:674 - same as melancholy
00:04:848 (5) - slider into slider fits better
00:20:869 (2,1) - stack maybe
00:25:322 - maybe lower the volume here to clearly hear what you're mapping or change hitsound for something softer
00:31:424 (3,4) - i think that mapping instruments here fits better, too much slider spam
00:35:364 (2) - this represents nothing, if you want to map vocals here a slider fits much better
00:44:517 (2,3,4) - same as melancholy, you're focusing on vocals in this section so why not map them here too
00:54:305 (1,2) - these should be the same shape
01:11:085 (3,2) - stack maybe and move 01:11:593 (1) - down a bit
02:32:880 (4,1) - i think you should use other angle, maybe 4 x:351 y:187 and 1 x:190 y:229
02:36:566 (3,4) - start a slider on 3 tail, it fits better imo
02:51:228 (4,1) - dont overlap them
02:56:790 (4) - slider into circle should be better
Good luck!