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ParagonX9 - Chaoz Japan [OsuMania]

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Meiju
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Meiju
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 июля 2018 г. at 22:11:29

Artist: ParagonX9
Title: Chaoz Japan
Source: Castle Crashers
Tags: Myle semyon422 newgrounds
BPM: 165
Filesize: 2998kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. 422's Normal - 6Key (1,93 stars, 544 notes)
  2. Chaos - 6Key (3,88 stars, 1159 notes)
  3. Myle's Hard - 6Key (2,85 stars, 874 notes)
Download: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Japan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks!
Myle for GD
semyon422 for GD
eyes for mod
DDMythical for mod
Lenfried- for mod
Syadow- for mod
MrDorian for mod
DustMoon for mod
Kivicat for mod and star
silentch for mod and 2 stars
Mentholzzz for mod
Or1g1n for mod
Garalulu for check
error_exe777 for check
Protastic101 and FAMoss for hitsound fixes
Last edited by Meiju , edited 35 times in total.
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes
hey, selamat-pagi
|1-6|

[Kaosu]
00:05:818 (5818|0,6181|0,6545|0,6909|0,7272|0,7636|0,8000|0,8363|0,8727|0,9090|0,9454|0,9818|0,10181|0,10545|0,10909|0) - не понимаю зачем такой анчор, могу предположить что ты пытаешься выделить том, но у тома иногда снап меняется, например здесь 00:06:818 - 00:08:272 , либо избавься от анчора, либо нормально заснапь том

00:11:636 (11636|0,12000|0,12363|0,12727|0,13090|0,13454|0,13818|0,14181|0,14545|0,14909|0) - ну тут уже точно смысла нет, пофикси

00:23:181 - на этом месте могла бы быть ваша рекл дабл-нота

00:23:363 (23363|4) - удали это чтобы выделить 00:23:272 (23272|3,23272|2,23272|0,23454|2,23454|1) - эти звуки

00:56:545 (56545|3,56727|1) - поменяй колонками для баланса

01:02:545 (62545|4) - перемести на 6, потому что она пустует

01:10:000 (70000|1) - сделай обычной нотой чтобы выделить необычный звук

[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|1,1090|3) - поменяй местами, чтобы выделить то, что эта тройка отличается от предыдущей по тону 00:00:181 (181|1,272|2,363|3)

00:25:000 (25000|3,25181|3) - ты сделал это намеренно? в других подобных местах ты не ставил 1/2 джеки, а тут поставил

00:27:545 (27545|3) - перемести на 5 для баланса

00:28:181 (28181|3,28363|4) - поменяй колонки местами для баланса

00:39:515 (39515|1) - перемести на 1 для баланса

00:40:484 (40484|1,40727|1,40969|1) - тебе стоит избегать этого
00:41:454 (41454|3,41575|1,41696|3,41818|1,41939|3,42060|1,42303|1) - ^^

00:46:545 - по 00:48:363 - 6-ая колонка пустует, перемести какие нибудь ноты на 6

00:49:090 (49090|0,49212|1) - поменяй колонками, чтобы избежать 00:49:212 (49212|1,49454|1)

00:52:000 (52000|3) - в этом есть смысл?

00:52:363 - с этой точки внимательно смотри на 6-ую колонку и осознай как мало нот ты ставишь на нее

01:18:181 (78181|3,78363|5) - перемести эти ноты на другие колонки, потому что ты начинаешь трилл прежде чем он начинается в музыке 01:18:181 (78181|3,78363|5,78545|3,78727|5,78909|3,79090|5)

[semyon422's Normal]
00:05:818 - тебе стоит как нибудь выделить том в этом парте, иначе слишком скучно получается

00:34:909 (34909|0) - прошлый лн тоже был на 1, перемести этот в другую колонку для разнообразия

00:39:272 - возможно тебе стоит немного понерфить этот парт, это всё-таки нормал. попроси у какого нибудь новичка тестплей

01:04:181 - начни джеки с левой руки, чтобы дать ей отдохнуть от этого 01:02:545 (62545|0,62909|0,63272|0,63636|0)

01:04:181 - лучше понерфи джеки на триллы, это слишком сложно

01:26:000 (86000|2) - лучше перемести на 5 (чтобы было легче начать стейр) и дотяни до 01:26:272

01:27:272 (87272|3) - suggestion: перемести на 3, так выглядит лучше
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

eyes wrote:

hey, selamat-pagi
|1-6|

[Kaosu]
00:05:818 (5818|0,6181|0,6545|0,6909|0,7272|0,7636|0,8000|0,8363|0,8727|0,9090|0,9454|0,9818|0,10181|0,10545|0,10909|0) - не понимаю зачем такой анчор, могу предположить что ты пытаешься выделить том, но у тома иногда снап меняется, например здесь 00:06:818 - 00:08:272 , либо избавься от анчора, либо нормально заснапь том

00:11:636 (11636|0,12000|0,12363|0,12727|0,13090|0,13454|0,13818|0,14181|0,14545|0,14909|0) - ну тут уже точно смысла нет, пофикси

00:23:181 - на этом месте могла бы быть ваша рекл дабл-нота

00:23:363 (23363|4) - удали это чтобы выделить 00:23:272 (23272|3,23272|2,23272|0,23454|2,23454|1) - эти звуки

00:56:545 (56545|3,56727|1) - поменяй колонками для баланса

01:02:545 (62545|4) - перемести на 6, потому что она пустует

01:10:000 (70000|1) - сделай обычной нотой чтобы выделить необычный звук
Спасибо, все принял кроме последнего
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

eyes wrote:

hey, selamat-pagi
|1-6|
[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|1,1090|3) - поменяй местами, чтобы выделить то, что эта тройка отличается от предыдущей по тону 00:00:181 (181|1,272|2,363|3)

00:25:000 (25000|3,25181|3) - ты сделал это намеренно? в других подобных местах ты не ставил 1/2 джеки, а тут поставил

00:27:545 (27545|3) - перемести на 5 для баланса |00:27:909 (27909|3) - переместил на 4 вместо этого

00:28:181 (28181|3,28363|4) - поменяй колонки местами для баланса Для баланса? Вроде бы и так все сбалансировано здесь, не вижу в этом нужды

00:39:515 (39515|1) - перемести на 1 для баланса

00:40:484 (40484|1,40727|1,40969|1) - тебе стоит избегать этого
00:41:454 (41454|3,41575|1,41696|3,41818|1,41939|3,42060|1,42303|1) - ^^

00:46:545 - по 00:48:363 - 6-ая колонка пустует, перемести какие нибудь ноты на 6

00:49:090 (49090|0,49212|1) - поменяй колонками, чтобы избежать 00:49:212 (49212|1,49454|1)

00:52:000 (52000|3) - в этом есть смысл?

00:52:363 - с этой точки внимательно смотри на 6-ую колонку и осознай как мало нот ты ставишь на нее

01:18:181 (78181|3,78363|5) - перемести эти ноты на другие колонки, потому что ты начинаешь трилл прежде чем он начинается в музыке 01:18:181 (78181|3,78363|5,78545|3,78727|5,78909|3,79090|5)
спасибо, где нет ответа - то принял
апдейт
DDMythical
DDMythical
1/2/3/4/5/6


Normal
OD6 HP6 Is way too low in my opinion, At minimum 6.5 -- simply because OD6 is just way too easy for a normal.

00:06:818 (6818|3) - I think you should have a note here because you have mapped this sound previously to a triple
00:06:909 (6909|4) - The sound you map to doubles is mapped to a single here.
00:08:181 (8181|4,8363|1) - The same thing applies here ^
00:26:545 (26545|0) - I would move this to 2 and move 00:26:909 (26909|1) - to 1 so that the left hand flows like this instead of this
00:29:090 (29090|2,29090|3) - Would change into an LN to emphasise the sound
00:45:090 (45090|1) - This is a different pitch to the previous two notes on the column, maybe move it a column for PR?

Hard
00:01:818 (1818|5,2000|2,2181|5,2363|2) - These notes are different pitches, why are they turned into a trill? I would shift the last two notes 1 column to the left.
00:04:727 (4727|3,4909|2,5090|5,5272|4) - Should be noted that you didnt repeat it here.
00:06:909 (6909|0,6909|2) - These chords arent actually going to the drum beat. The drum happens before on the blue tick. This also applies to
00:08:363 (8363|1,8363|5) -
00:09:818 (9818|2,9818|3) -
00:27:545 (27545|3,27727|3) - I don't recommend having these on the same column, its a bit awkward to play and seems unintentional as the song doesnt really call for it
00:29:636 (29636|4,29636|2) - Would definitely move this right 1 column, it uses up the left-empty columns and creates a nice flow on the right hand.
00:32:181 (32181|1) - Would make this a chord.
00:33:363 (33363|2,33545|2) - Re: I don't recommend having these on the same column, its a bit awkward to play and seems unintentional as the song doesnt really call for it.
00:44:363 (44363|5,44363|3,44484|4,44606|0,44606|2,44727|1,44848|3,44848|5,44969|4) - These are really painful patterns as they require ring-middle trilling which is just painnn. I suggest repatterning so that it flows better and is more comfortable.
00:46:181 (46181|1,46303|0,46424|1) - ^ Same point as above applied here; you can fix this by having 00:46:181 (46181|1) - on col. 3
00:49:454 (49454|2,49454|1,49575|4,49575|3,49696|2,49696|1,49818|4,49818|3,49939|2,49939|1,50060|4,50060|3,50181|1,50181|2) - Vary your jumptrills! You can use [13][46] and [12][56]!!
00:50:424 (50424|2) - This should definitely be a double note. It's not following the drum!
00:59:818 (59818|0) - Would make this a double aswell!
01:11:454 (71454|5,71454|3,71636|4,71818|5,71818|3) - I would repattern this as its quite painful, especially for a hard diff.

kaosu
00:14:181 (14181|0,14181|5,14363|4,14363|1,14545|0,14545|5) - I really recommend repatterning out the trills, However this map is complexly layered and as such this would damage the layering.
00:17:000 (17000|2,17090|3) - I would remove these to emphasise the stop-notes.
00:17:454 (17454|0) - And this ^
00:32:000 (32000|3,32000|5,32090|4,32181|3) - This is a bit awkward in comparison to the rest of the jumpstream. Maybe pattern the trill out?
00:58:363 (58363|4,58545|4) - Maybe try to pattern this jack out for playability.
Meiju
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Topic Starter
Meiju

DDMythical wrote:

1/2/3/4/5/6
kaosu
00:14:181 (14181|0,14181|5,14363|4,14363|1,14545|0,14545|5) - I really recommend repatterning out the trills, However this map is complexly layered and as such this would damage the layering. I don't really get why i should repattern it
00:17:000 (17000|2,17090|3) - I would remove these to emphasise the stop-notes. Cool
00:17:454 (17454|0) - And this ^ Yep
00:32:000 (32000|3,32000|5,32090|4,32181|3) - This is a bit awkward in comparison to the rest of the jumpstream. Maybe pattern the trill out? Okay
00:58:363 (58363|4,58545|4) - Maybe try to pattern this jack out for playability. Uhh.. No? This patterns is pretty easy to play
I don't remember that i asked you for mod, but thank you! uwu
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined December 2014
lenpai
dude THANK YOU for mapping 6k. Much appreciated!

im skipping the other diffs as they have a mod pending to be replied to. Should the mod below be inadequate to my liking, ill mod the other diff/s at a later time
kaoss
that was kinda nice to play though the lack of jacks on the 1/3 section made me sad. Nice staccato section tho really had fun with that.

might want to use od 8, the staccato section is rather easy to pull off and the chart definitely has more rice -- something that would normally go for the likes of od 8.5

00:08:272 (8272|0,8363|1,10090|0,10181|1,10818|0,10909|1) - these feel very weird to play and 00:08:363 (8363|1,10181|1,10909|1) - imo would be better off at 3. Should the lack of usage of col 2 be an issue, you can resolve that with other notes like 00:08:000 (8000|0,9090|0) -
00:17:636 - could be a quad and if so a [1346] -> [24] combination would be sweet to play; consider 00:23:181 -
00:23:636 - probably brutal but this can use one more note
00:34:909 - ^
00:49:454 - excessively heavy on the left hand might want to go for something like https://puu.sh/wD0SF/25ec752e77.png
01:24:363 - though not very audible, there are extra sounds that can make this section less ass to play like: https://puu.sh/wD11L/cace3c6528.png
01:26:272 (86272|5,86363|0,86484|4,86606|3,86787|1,86909|2,87151|4) - could be doubles if you ask me

didnt nitpick and ill come back to mod nm.

best of luck!
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

Lenfried- wrote:

dude THANK YOU for mapping 6k. Much appreciated! o.o

im skipping the other diffs as they have a mod pending to be replied to. Should the mod below be inadequate to my liking, ill mod the other diff/s at a later time
kaoss
that was kinda nice to play though the lack of jacks on the 1/3 section made me sad. Nice staccato section tho really had fun with that.

might want to use od 8, the staccato section is rather easy to pull off and the chart definitely has more rice -- something that would normally go for the likes of od 8.5

00:08:272 (8272|0,8363|1,10090|0,10181|1,10818|0,10909|1) - these feel very weird to play and 00:08:363 (8363|1,10181|1,10909|1) - imo would be better off at 3. Should the lack of usage of col 2 be an issue, you can resolve that with other notes like 00:08:000 (8000|0,9090|0) - I already tried several variants, and your too, and the current is just.. the best? uwu
00:17:636 - could be a quad and if so a [1346] -> [24] combination would be sweet to play; consider 00:23:181 - Okay
00:23:636 - probably brutal but this can use one more note too brutal
00:34:909 - ^ but there is okay, also added one more LN uwu
00:49:454 - excessively heavy on the left hand might want to go for something like https://puu.sh/wD0SF/25ec752e77.png Looks cool
01:24:363 - though not very audible, there are extra sounds that can make this section less ass to play like: https://puu.sh/wD11L/cace3c6528.png I make it less ass to play (dude your variant is more ass cuz 1/4 xd)
01:26:272 (86272|5,86363|0,86484|4,86606|3,86787|1,86909|2,87151|4) - could be doubles if you ask me i don't feel that it should be double

didnt nitpick and ill come back to mod nm.

best of luck!
what is staccato owo
Thank you !
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

DDMythical wrote:

1/2/3/4/5/6

Hard
00:01:818 (1818|5,2000|2,2181|5,2363|2) - These notes are different pitches, why are they turned into a trill? I would shift the last two notes 1 column to the left.
00:04:727 (4727|3,4909|2,5090|5,5272|4) - Should be noted that you didnt repeat it here.
00:06:909 (6909|0,6909|2) - These chords arent actually going to the drum beat. The drum happens before on the blue tick. This also applies to
00:08:363 (8363|1,8363|5) -
00:09:818 (9818|2,9818|3) -
00:27:545 (27545|3,27727|3) - I don't recommend having these on the same column, its a bit awkward to play and seems unintentional as the song doesnt really call for it I gout your point, but I don't fine this any awkward + there's no way I could change this to keep pattern idea of the whole section uwu
00:29:636 (29636|4,29636|2) - Would definitely move this right 1 column, it uses up the left-empty columns and creates a nice flow on the right hand.
00:32:181 (32181|1) - Would make this a chord. Chord? I don't think this even deserves a double
00:33:363 (33363|2,33545|2) - Re: I don't recommend having these on the same column, its a bit awkward to play and seems unintentional as the song doesnt really call for it.
00:44:363 (44363|5,44363|3,44484|4,44606|0,44606|2,44727|1,44848|3,44848|5,44969|4) - These are really painful patterns as they require ring-middle trilling which is just painnn. I suggest repatterning so that it flows better and is more comfortable.
00:46:181 (46181|1,46303|0,46424|1) - ^ Same point as above applied here; you can fix this by having 00:46:181 (46181|1) - on col. 3
00:49:454 (49454|2,49454|1,49575|4,49575|3,49696|2,49696|1,49818|4,49818|3,49939|2,49939|1,50060|4,50060|3,50181|1,50181|2) - Vary your jumptrills! You can use [13][46] and [12][56]!! Varied in another way
00:50:424 (50424|2) - This should definitely be a double note. It's not following the drum!
00:59:818 (59818|0) - Would make this a double aswell! Yup, also made 00:54:000 (54000|0) - this a double, too
01:11:454 (71454|5,71454|3,71636|4,71818|5,71818|3) - I would repattern this as its quite painful, especially for a hard diff.
Also did some minor changes
update
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
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lenpai
NO KD

i have returned to mod! >:D

"what is staccato owo" those 1/4 lns

6k makes me hard
00:02:363 (2363|1) - to 3 to produce a mirroring effect with 00:01:636 (1636|3,1818|5,2000|2,2181|4) - also plays better imo
00:14:909 (14909|5) - your triplet 1/4ths have always been adjacent and not disconnected like this. move to 5. But if you want to keep the laning thing that is 00:14:909 (14909|5,15272|5,15636|5) - , you can do this instead https://puu.sh/wDO18/5227bf0a7e.png
00:16:363 (16363|4) - to 4 to compliment the flow of 00:16:727 (16727|2,16909|0) - because 00:16:363 (16363|1,16545|0,16727|4,16909|5) - counteracts each other
00:17:636 (17636|3,17636|5,17818|4) - not the best combination of notes, slightly awkward to play
00:22:363 (22363|5,22454|4,22545|2) - another inconsistent disconnected 1/4 suggesting to move 00:22:363 (22363|5,22454|4) - to the left once and move 00:22:181 (22181|3) - to 3 or 5
00:23:181 (23181|4) - to 4 cause low bpm minitrills are nice
00:40:363 (40363|3,40484|1,40606|2) - this disconnection might be weird to play so 00:40:484 (40484|1) - would be nice at 1
01:12:545 (72545|3,72636|4,72727|3,72909|2,73090|3) - probably off to play so 01:12:727 (72727|3,72909|2,73090|3) - ctrl h
01:20:727 (80727|2,80818|3,80909|2,81000|3,81090|2,81181|3,81272|2) - niiiice <3

didnt nitpick too much. p cool

NO KD
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima
Lenfried-, applied everything you suggested .o.
update
Syadow-
Beatmap Nominator
1,540 posts
Joined October 2013
Syadow-
le me nub ;w;
2017-07-11 19:26 Syadow-: ey mage o//
2017-07-11 19:26 Mage: yo
2017-07-11 19:30 Syadow-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1187858 ParagonX9 - Chaoz Japan [semyon422's Normal]]
2017-07-11 19:30 Syadow-: i think this 4k before :'u
2017-07-11 19:30 Mage: why uwu
2017-07-11 19:31 Syadow-: still nub when i mod up to 4k uwu
2017-07-11 19:32 Mage: o w o
2017-07-11 19:32 Syadow-: u w u
2017-07-11 19:32 Mage: u w u
2017-07-11 19:32 Syadow-: hey hey plz :v
2017-07-11 19:32 Syadow-: wanna irc mage >w<)??
2017-07-11 19:33 Mage: hmhmhmh
2017-07-11 19:33 Mage: Why not
2017-07-11 19:33 Mage: giff me 2 minutes
2017-07-11 19:33 Syadow-: ay ay sir o w o ) 7
2017-07-11 19:34 Mage: ok leeet's go
2017-07-11 19:36 Syadow-: 00:06:545 (6545|0) - move col 2 or / 00:06:818 (6818|0) -
2017-07-11 19:37 Mage: i'm tried to highlight that tom sound and place them on 1 column uwu
2017-07-11 19:38 Syadow-: oh i see
2017-07-11 19:39 Syadow-: 00:10:090 - why double ? double should here 00:10:181 -
2017-07-11 19:39 Syadow-: 00:10:090 - i think this is ghost note ._.
2017-07-11 19:39 Mage: why
2017-07-11 19:39 Mage: again i place doubles for tom sounds
2017-07-11 19:40 Syadow-: i cant here clearly ;w;
2017-07-11 19:40 Mage: like before 00:09:727 - 00:08:272 - 00:06:818 -
2017-07-11 19:40 Mage: ;w;
2017-07-11 19:41 Syadow-: oh sorry :v
2017-07-11 19:41 Syadow-: i didn't notice it ;w;
2017-07-11 19:41 Mage: don't worry :v
2017-07-11 19:42 Syadow-: 00:14:000 (14000|4,14090|3,14181|2) - ctrl h, pitch
2017-07-11 19:43 Mage: ok, then 00:14:727 - 00:15:454 - reverse them too?
2017-07-11 19:43 Syadow-: nope only that
2017-07-11 19:43 Mage: oh ok
2017-07-11 19:44 Syadow-: left right - left right - right left
2017-07-11 19:45 Syadow-: 00:17:000 - 00:17:090 - 00:17:454 - ignore this sounds ?
2017-07-11 19:46 Mage: yeah, to highlight 00:16:909 - 00:17:272 - dis
2017-07-11 19:46 Mage: plays good actually
2017-07-11 19:47 Syadow-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8564066 how about dis ?
2017-07-11 19:47 Syadow-: no 1/2 jack except this
2017-07-11 19:47 Mage: :thinking:
2017-07-11 19:48 Syadow-: or add sv ? :v
2017-07-11 19:48 Mage: svs :'v
2017-07-11 19:48 Syadow-: how ?
2017-07-11 19:48 Mage: maybe not :^)
2017-07-11 19:49 Syadow-: :"u yha
2017-07-11 19:50 Mage: yha :o
2017-07-11 19:50 Syadow-: wait a minutes wanna help my mom first
2017-07-11 19:54 Syadow-: okay i'm back
2017-07-11 19:54 Mage: yay
2017-07-11 19:54 Syadow-: 00:28:636 (28636|3,28818|3,29000|4) - same like 00:28:454 (28454|2,28454|1) -
2017-07-11 19:55 Syadow-: \ :v /
2017-07-11 19:56 Mage: a? =)
2017-07-11 19:56 Mage: o i se
2017-07-11 19:56 Mage: wait
2017-07-11 19:56 Mage: aaa
2017-07-11 19:56 Mage: what :v
2017-07-11 19:56 Syadow-: =()
2017-07-11 19:57 Syadow-: 00:28:454 (28454|1,28454|2,28636|3,28818|3,29000|4) - have a similar sound
2017-07-11 19:57 Mage: actually not
2017-07-11 19:57 Mage: >_>
2017-07-11 19:58 Mage: 00:28:363 (28363|3,28363|0) - 00:28:454 (28454|2,28454|1) - same
2017-07-11 19:58 Mage: others are not
2017-07-11 19:58 Syadow-: ah i see
2017-07-11 19:59 Syadow-: ctrl g 00:40:606 (40606|1,40727|0) -
2017-07-11 20:00 Mage: o ok
2017-07-11 20:02 Mage: 00:46:424 (46424|4,46545|5) - same i guess
2017-07-11 20:02 Syadow-: h3h3h3
2017-07-11 20:03 Syadow-: 00:41:454 - i suggest like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8564196
2017-07-11 20:03 Syadow-: make a stair o w o ) b
2017-07-11 20:04 Syadow-: 00:43:515 (43515|1,43636|2) - ctrl j
2017-07-11 20:05 Syadow-: 00:44:484 (44484|4) - move col 3
2017-07-11 20:05 Syadow-: 00:45:696 - double
2017-07-11 20:08 Syadow-: 00:47:272 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8564241 ?
2017-07-11 20:08 Mage: i think better to make altarnation hm
2017-07-11 20:10 Syadow-: hmm up to u wanna follow the beat or pitch :3
2017-07-11 20:14 Syadow-: 00:48:727 - i think this is double ._. triple for 00:49:454 -
2017-07-11 20:15 Mage: but there is two sounds
2017-07-11 20:15 Mage: 00:48:484 - this and 00:48:363 -
2017-07-11 20:17 Syadow-: 00:49:818 - this too ?
2017-07-11 20:18 Mage: hmm, yep
2017-07-11 20:19 Syadow-: 00:53:454 - triple i guess same like 00:52:727 -
2017-07-11 20:19 Syadow-: 00:53:818 - double ._.
2017-07-11 20:19 Mage: triple - yes, double - no >:(
2017-07-11 20:19 Mage: There is another sound
2017-07-11 20:20 Syadow-: hmm i see
2017-07-11 20:20 Syadow-: 00:54:909 - same
2017-07-11 20:21 Mage: ye
2017-07-11 20:21 Syadow-: 00:57:909 - not loud ;w; can u remove a note
2017-07-11 20:22 Mage: hmhmh
2017-07-11 20:22 Mage: i'll keep
2017-07-11 20:22 Syadow-: 00:57:909 - sama
2017-07-11 20:23 Syadow-: 01:02:000 - double 01:02:181 - triple
2017-07-11 20:24 Mage: yep
2017-07-11 20:24 Syadow-: 01:04:818 - i hear a clear sound here :>
2017-07-11 20:25 Mage: yeah there a lot of sounds buuuuuut it will be so hard with stose mini-LNs-triples o w o
2017-07-11 20:26 its okay >:v *slap
2017-07-11 20:26 Syadow-: 01:16:727 (76727|4) - move to col 6 avoid 01:16:363 (76363|4,76545|4,76727|4) -
2017-07-11 20:28 Mage: ahh it's ok dude i used it before trust me 100% good no faek 00:57:636 (57636|1,57818|1,58000|1) -
2017-07-11 20:28 Syadow-: lol :v
2017-07-11 20:30 Syadow-: 01:27:636 - cymbal here
2017-07-11 20:31 Mage: ayyy let's count it as echo
2017-07-11 20:31 Syadow-: oh i see :v idk the name before
2017-07-11 20:31 Syadow-: maybe thats all >w<)b
2017-07-11 20:32 Mage: Thanks owo)b
2017-07-11 20:32 Syadow-: ur welcome o w o ) b
2017-07-11 20:33 Syadow-: g u d l u c k > w < ) b
2017-07-11 20:33 Mage: i n e e d i t x d
2017-07-11 20:33 Mage: don't forget about sending irc on forum
2017-07-11 20:34 Syadow-: wanna sp eh v:
2017-07-11 20:35 Mage: :'V
2017-07-11 20:36 Syadow-: V:
good luck >w<)//
MrDorian
448 posts
Joined April 2012
MrDorian
Hi Mage owo/
Kaosu
first of all that name hurst my nazi-grammar soul change kds plsyour diff has a lof of one sided flow (from 00:17:636 (17636|5) - to 00:20:363 (20363|0) - for instance or 00:23:272 - this kiai, it's mostly right left with some little changes sometimes), I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I'm pointing it out

00:31:272 (31272|2,31272|4,31363|1,31363|3,31454|2,31454|0) - flip it to balance it with 00:27:090 (27090|2,27090|4,27181|3,27181|1,27272|0,27272|2) - or sth

00:50:666 (50666|2,50787|3) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? .w.

00:51:818 (51818|3,51818|5,52000|0,52000|2) - they are the same sounds, what about making 16 16? owo

01:04:181 (64181|1,64363|3,64545|2) - why they and similiar lns later aren't in the same column? ;w; it would give so nice effect
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

MrDorian wrote:

Hi Mage owo/
Kaosu
first of all that name hurst my nazi-grammar soul change kds plsyour diff has a lof of one sided flow (from 00:17:636 (17636|5) - to 00:20:363 (20363|0) - for instance fixed here or 00:23:272 - this kiai, it's mostly right left with some little changes sometimes), I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I'm pointing it out

00:31:272 (31272|2,31272|4,31363|1,31363|3,31454|2,31454|0) - flip it to balance it with 00:27:090 (27090|2,27090|4,27181|3,27181|1,27272|0,27272|2) - or sth Ok

00:50:666 (50666|2,50787|3) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? .w. No..?

00:51:818 (51818|3,51818|5,52000|0,52000|2) - they are the same sounds, what about making 16 16? owo Cool owo

01:04:181 (64181|1,64363|3,64545|2) - why they and similiar lns later aren't in the same column? ;w; it would give so nice effect Hmm.. idk, maybe i'll change ir later uwu
Thanks!
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
Hi~ Mage
1|2|3|4|5|6
semyon422's Normal
00:10:727 (10727|0) - move to 5,follow pitch
00:30:181 (30181|0) - move to 3
00:44:606 (44606|1,44848|1) - wrong snap?
00:39:272 - 00:50:909 - 1/3 or 1/6
01:09:818 (69818|4) - move to 2&01:10:363 (70363|0) - move to 6
01:23:090 (83090|4,83272|3,83454|4,83636|2,83818|4,84000|1,84181|4) - Anouch?
01:26:272 - 01:27:272 - 1/6
Myle's Hard
00:17:454 (17454|2) - move to 2
00:33:818 (33818|4,33909|2,34000|0) - 00:34:090 (34090|4,34181|2,34272|0) - same? re,plz
00:45:454 (45454|5) - emmmm,highest diff{Kaoso}not catch thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594342
00:50:424 (50424|2,50424|3,50545|1,50666|5,50666|0,50787|4) - Ctrl+h,follow pitch
i hope you can ask QAT about this mapset snap.
Good luck! :)
Kurisu Makise
393 posts
Joined June 2013
Kurisu Makise
Hi! IRL mod :D

Kaosu
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: есть парочка предложений
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Давай
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: во-первых, очень много лесенок
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Ага
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Стоп
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Нет
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: !
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: тут можно и разнообразить
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: нет?
2017-08-21 23:17 Mage: Ну а как разнообразить
2017-08-21 23:17 Kivicat: ну хотя бы на триплах сделать мини-триллы
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: или что-нибудь менее мейнстримное типа 2-3-1
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: или альтернейт
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: 3-4-2, например, или 2-5-1
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: в общем-то с триплами много чего сделать можно
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: потом, тут есть очень хорошие места для св
2017-08-21 23:19 Mage: 00:39:272 - ты этот парт имеешь ввиду?
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: это уже на твое усмотрение, но я их даже ожидал
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: не-не
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: 00:00:181 (181|0,272|1,363|2) - вот такие я имел в виду
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: а в том парте можно сделать джеки
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: по 3 ноты
2017-08-21 23:20 Kivicat: их как раз не так много выйдет, потому что ритм не постоянный
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:39:272 (39272|4,39393|3,39515|2) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:39:636 (39636|4,39757|3,39878|2) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:000 (40000|5,40121|4,40242|3) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:363 (40363|5,40484|4) - дабл
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - джек или 2 дабла
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:42:181 (42181|4,42303|3,42424|2) - ну и отсюда по той же схеме
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: и последнее
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: 01:04:000 - начиная отсюда, очень сложно читать
2017-08-21 23:22 Mage: Ну почему, не сложно
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: можно сделать менее хаотично
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: ну не знаю, я прям сильно ощутил дифф спайк
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: это, конечно, мое субъективное ощущение
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: по этому поводу лучше спроси еще нескольких тестеров
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: Чет я попробовал джеки и как-то больно
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: 00:40:363 (40363|5) - не понял почему здесь дабл
2017-08-21 23:24 Kivicat: ну кстати, с джеками сложность ровнее
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - и тут даблы
2017-08-21 23:24 Kivicat: если ты оставишь лны как есть
2017-08-21 23:26 Kivicat: в первом можно сделать и джек на 3 ноты, но там будет лучше дабл, потому что на третьей ноте больше воспринимается банджо (оно ли это?) и ударный
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: то есть бас, под который делаются джеки, заглушается
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: игрок не будет его чувствовать
2017-08-21 23:27 Mage: 00:39:272 (39272|4,39272|5,39636|4,39636|5,40000|4,40000|5,40363|4,40363|5,40727|4,40727|5) - да тут же одинаковые звуки везде D:
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: он будет чувствовать, что на этом месте появился другой акцент, который ты никак не выделил, если сделаешь джек
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: там да
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: 00:40:606 (40606|0,40606|3) - а здесь другой
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: джеки, кстати, я имел в виду в разных колонках
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: по 3
2017-08-21 23:28 Mage: Да, я его и выделил даблом
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: стоп
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Да, я понял, но это тоже жестко
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: ты называешь даблом 2 ноты на линии?
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Да
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Так и есть лол
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: 00:40:363 (40363|5,40484|4) - я имел в виду вот их в одну колонку
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: мини-джек
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: в мое время даблами называли мини-джеки
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - и здесь то же самое
2017-08-21 23:31 Kivicat: 01:22:909 (82909|5,83090|4,83090|5) - вот это, кстати, немного неудобно
2017-08-21 23:31 Kivicat: ты специально так сделал7
2017-08-21 23:32 Mage: Да специально
2017-08-21 23:32 Mage: Но ладно, поправил
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: ну, если в этом была какая-то идея, то можно было оставить
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: хотя там и дисбаланс
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: 01:22:909 (82909|5) - в общем, я бы это в 2 перенес просто
2017-08-21 23:34 Mage: 01:22:909 - 01:23:272 - 01:23:636 - 01:24:000 - думаю нормально будет везде тут триплы сделать
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: можно и так
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: кстати, вот этот вот последний паттерн
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: 01:26:000 (86000|0,86060|1,86121|2,86181|3,86272|5,86363|0,86484|4,86606|3,86787|1,86909|2,87151|4) -
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: он хорош, но можно сделать один паттерн для всех нот
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: что-то вроде алтернейта
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: ну или не алтернейт, что тебе нравится
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: я бы сделал тупо 5-2-5-2-5-2...
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: :D
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: но это садистский вариант
2017-08-21 23:36 Mage: Окей, сделал лесенку в одну сторону
2017-08-21 23:36 Kivicat: просто здесь как бы идет один рваный стрим
2017-08-21 23:37 Kivicat: в треке это один паттерн, если можно так сказать
2017-08-21 23:37 Kivicat: вроде все
2017-08-21 23:38 неплохо я потестил *мунфейс*
2017-08-21 23:38 Mage: Ну и можно и в тред закинуть :moonface:
silentch
silentch
глото4ек мода куеуе хдд
аимод ок
бг ок
semyon422's nm
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
ты андермапишь мейн звук на этом чарте, было бы прикольно сделать его более ощущаемым.
00:06:818 - ноту
00:08:272 - ноту
00:09:000 - ноту
00:09:727 - ноту
00:11:909 - ноту
00:12:636 - ^
00:14:090 - ^
etc вплоть до киая 00:23:272 - , там уже не надо
00:57:272 (57272|1,57363|2,57454|4) - CTRL H, ну и там выше стоящие немного подровняй =)
01:03:272 (63272|0) - правее
Отличная диффа!
Myle's Hard
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
00:57:272 (57272|0,57272|2,57363|3,57454|5,57454|4) - разнообразь, ctrl H к примеру лул
01:03:090 (63090|0,63090|5,63181|4,63272|2,63272|3) - same here
01:12:363 (72363|0,72363|1,72454|2,72545|3,72636|4,72727|0,72727|2) - ^
Отличная диффа, тут все круто, ну если только ноты двигать фо энджоябл.
Ka osu!
00:42:181 - правая колонка че пустая а
00:45:454 - сейм
00:55:272 (55272|2,55272|0,55272|5,55272|1,55454|4,55454|3,55454|5) - xd
00:58:363 (58363|3,58545|3) - больно
01:06:181 (66181|2) - здесь джек не нужен, питч другой
01:08:181 (68181|0,68181|2,68181|1,68363|1) - боль
01:08:363 (68363|3,68363|5,68363|4,68545|5,68545|3,68727|4,68909|3,68909|5) - тоже больно очень, хотя баланс тут в порядке, я не знаю как, отдельно это играется более менее, однако после переходов с диков на этот парт - играется довольно анкамфортабл.
Дальше все ок
Крутая дифа <3
вот и все
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

silentch wrote:

00:42:181 - правая колонка че пустая а По той че причине что и 00:39:272 - здесь первая
00:45:454 - сейм Так, а вот тут надо пофиксить
00:55:272 (55272|2,55272|0,55272|5,55272|1,55454|4,55454|3,55454|5) - xd Убрал квадр
00:58:363 (58363|3,58545|3) - больно Терпимо
01:06:181 (66181|2) - здесь джек не нужен, питч другой
01:08:181 (68181|0,68181|2,68181|1,68363|1) - боль
01:08:363 (68363|3,68363|5,68363|4,68545|5,68545|3,68727|4,68909|3,68909|5) - тоже больно очень, хотя баланс тут в порядке, я не знаю как, отдельно это играется более менее, однако после переходов с диков на этот парт - играется довольно анкамфортабл. Перефиксил ЛН парт, чекай
Дальше все ок
Крутая дифа <3
Спасибо за мод
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ Mage
Myle's Hard
00:17:454 (17454|2) - move to 2 does not seem necessary
00:33:818 (33818|4,33909|2,34000|0) - 00:34:090 (34090|4,34181|2,34272|0) - same? re,plz
00:45:454 (45454|5) - emmmm,highest diff{Kaoso}not catch thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594342 ...sooo?
00:50:424 (50424|2,50424|3,50545|1,50666|5,50666|0,50787|4) - Ctrl+h,follow pitch if I apply this, then there's some sort of disbalance like 00:49:575 (49575|4,49818|4,50060|4,50303|4,50545|4) - this, so no
i hope you can ask QAT about this mapset snap.
Good luck! :)
applied second suggestion after reviewing this mod, thank you

silentch wrote:

глото4ек мода куеуе хдд
аимод ок
бг ок
Myle's Hard
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
00:57:272 (57272|0,57272|2,57363|3,57454|5,57454|4) - разнообразь, ctrl H к примеру лул не вижу ничего страшного, а вот зато если отзеркалить - будут 1/2 джеки, а здесь они будут сложноваты и типо дизбаланс, все дела
01:03:090 (63090|0,63090|5,63181|4,63272|2,63272|3) - same here ^
01:12:363 (72363|0,72363|1,72454|2,72545|3,72636|4,72727|0,72727|2) - ^ здесь не отзеркалил, но сделал что - то другое
Отличная диффа, тут все круто, ну если только ноты двигать фо энджоябл. <3
сенкс
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

silentch wrote:

semyon422's nm
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
ты андермапишь мейн звук на этом чарте, было бы прикольно сделать его более ощущаемым.
00:06:818 - ноту
00:08:272 - ноту
00:09:000 - ноту
00:09:727 - ноту
00:11:909 - ноту
00:12:636 - ^
00:14:090 - ^
etc вплоть до киая 00:23:272 - , там уже не надо
00:57:272 (57272|1,57363|2,57454|4) - CTRL H, ну и там выше стоящие немного подровняй =)
01:03:272 (63272|0) - правее
Отличная диффа!
первую часть мода я бы с радостью принял, но меня сильно ограничивают в старрейте, а он от этого возрастёт
вторую часть принял, но сделал по-своему
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju
[semyon422's Normal]
Может изменить название дифы на 422's ? :^)
00:29:090 - по сути должен быть 1/2, который ты сделал 01:09:818 - тут
00:48:000 - https://puu.sh/xwhsZ/bb2e53459f.png - почему бы не сделать так (po krasote)
01:02:727 (62727|4,62818|5,63090|5,63181|4,63454|4,63545|5) - а может лучше сделать эти паттерны на 4|5 колонках, в качестве миррора 00:56:909 - этому паттерну, да и легче будет играть средним и указательным
[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|3,1000|2,1090|1) - смести на одну колону в сторону, что бы не казалось что это миррор 00:00:181 - этой лесенки
00:07:181 (7181|4) - удали
00:10:090 - 00:10:454 - 00:10:818 - должны быть даблы, так же как и раньше (00:06:818 - 00:08:272 - ), тогда 00:10:181 - 00:10:545 - 00:10:909 - синглы
00:14:545 (14545|2,14545|0) - лучше сместить на другую колонку, что бы 4 повторения как и раньше (00:11:636 (11636|5,11636|3,12000|5,12000|3,12363|5,12363|3,12727|5,12727|3) - )
00:17:090 (17090|3,17454|2) - удали что бы выделить 00:16:909 - 00:17:272 -
00:17:636 (17636|5) - 00:45:454 (45454|5) - 00:58:363 (58363|5) - каждый раз когда играю твою дифу, недоумеваю от этих ЛНов, пусть лучше тут будут триплы
00:29:636 - я не очень понял почему тут дабл, оставь сингл
00:29:363 - 00:29:545 - нот?
00:40:848 (40848|0) - нет звука, удали
00:44:606 (44606|1,44606|0) - 00:44:848 (44848|4,44848|5) - эти звуки не очень сильно выделяются чтобы мапать их даблами, оставь синглы
00:44:969 (44969|3) - а вот тут дабл бы
00:45:575 - 00:45:939 - ноты
00:47:878 (47878|2) - дабл
00:55:181 - 00:56:636 - 00:58:818 - 00:59:545 - 01:01:000 - 01:02:454 - нот?
00:57:818 - https://puu.sh/xwi8S/51da230db4.png - как-то так
01:01:818 (61818|0) - перемести на 2
01:02:545 - https://puu.sh/xwigS/9ec1ba51c3.png - po krasote
01:04:000 - этот парт выглядит странно в плане твоего решения мапа 1/4, предлагаю отмечать 1/4'ой 01:05:000 - 01:06:454 - 01:07:909 - 01:10:636 - 01:13:545 - только такие звуки, а остальные убрать
01:15:636 - ну и в этой парте тоже самое
01:24:181 - здесь 1/6

kds pls thx
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

Mage wrote:

[semyon422's Normal]
Может изменить название дифы на 422's ? :^) я не против, тебе решать
00:29:090 - по сути должен быть 1/2, который ты сделал 01:09:818 - тут заменил лн на ноту
00:48:000 - https://puu.sh/xwhsZ/bb2e53459f.png - почему бы не сделать так (po krasote) принято
01:02:727 (62727|4,62818|5,63090|5,63181|4,63454|4,63545|5) - а может лучше сделать эти паттерны на 4|5 колонках, в качестве миррора 00:56:909 - этому паттерну, да и легче будет играть средним и указательным принято
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

Mage wrote:

[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|3,1000|2,1090|1) - смести на одну колону в сторону, что бы не казалось что это миррор 00:00:181 - этой лесенки
00:07:181 (7181|4) - удали
00:10:090 - 00:10:454 - 00:10:818 - должны быть даблы, так же как и раньше (00:06:818 - 00:08:272 - ), тогда 00:10:181 - 00:10:545 - 00:10:909 - синглы изменил паттерн, и вообще идея мне не нравится
00:14:545 (14545|2,14545|0) - лучше сместить на другую колонку, что бы 4 повторения как и раньше (00:11:636 (11636|5,11636|3,12000|5,12000|3,12363|5,12363|3,12727|5,12727|3) - )
00:17:090 (17090|3,17454|2) - удали что бы выделить 00:16:909 - 00:17:272 -
00:17:636 (17636|5) - 00:45:454 (45454|5) - 00:58:363 (58363|5) - каждый раз когда играю твою дифу, недоумеваю от этих ЛНов, пусть лучше тут будут триплы
00:29:636 - я не очень понял почему тут дабл, оставь сингл тут вообще должен быть 1/4 стрим, так что сдвинул какую то ноту на 1/4
00:29:363 - 00:29:545 - нот?
00:40:848 (40848|0) - нет звука, удали
00:44:606 (44606|1,44606|0) - 00:44:848 (44848|4,44848|5) - эти звуки не очень сильно выделяются чтобы мапать их даблами, оставь синглы
00:44:969 (44969|3) - а вот тут дабл бы
00:45:575 - 00:45:939 - ноты
00:47:878 (47878|2) - дабл
00:55:181 - 00:56:636 - 00:58:818 - 00:59:545 - 01:01:000 - 01:02:454 - нот?
00:57:818 - https://puu.sh/xwi8S/51da230db4.png - как-то так
01:01:818 (61818|0) - перемести на 2
01:02:545 - https://puu.sh/xwigS/9ec1ba51c3.png - po krasote
01:04:000 - этот парт выглядит странно в плане твоего решения мапа 1/4, предлагаю отмечать 1/4'ой 01:05:000 - 01:06:454 - 01:07:909 - 01:10:636 - 01:13:545 - только такие звуки, а остальные убрать сделал что то uwu
01:15:636 - ну и в этой парте тоже самое ^
01:24:181 - здесь 1/6

kds pls thx
сенкс http://puu.sh/xxpgb/18f8f9d845.rar
Mentholzzz
449 posts
Joined October 2015
Mentholzzz
hello, from my modding queue
1/4 in the lowest diff is kinda unrankable , so probably add another lower diff.
Xhaos
00:08:545 - add a note here for drum in column 6
00:10:909 - ^
00:14:909 - should be quad similar to 00:14:545 -
00:16:363 - ^
00:17:818 - could add another note here for the drum sound
00:20:727 - as above
00:22:181 - ^
00:23:000 (23000|1,23000|4,23181|1,23181|4) - could move this to like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291525 since the sound at 00:22:727 - and 00:23:000 - is different.
00:45:696 - add a note here
00:47:151 - ^
00:53:272 - add a note here, same sound as 00:53:090 -
00:54:727 - ^ and other notes like these
00:57:818 - triple here
01:04:000 - from here I suggest to map the Ln to match the instrument pitch there (idk what is it) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9293157 or smth

Hard
00:23:181 - double here
00:29:272 (29272|3,29454|1,29545|3) - swap this column
00:47:151 - double here
00:54:000 - double here too
01:05:818 (65818|1,66000|5) - swap this to make the left hand ezier

Normal
00:19:454 (19454|2,20000|3) - swap column, the old one is first left-heavy and right-heavy which is kinda too hard for NM imo
01:08:363 (68363|0,68545|2,68727|1,68909|2,69090|0) - this kind pof pattern in NM is quite too hard imo, as well as 01:12:000 (72000|2,72181|0,72363|1,72545|2,72727|0) -
01:26:272 (86272|0) - delet this and extend LN to 01:26:363 -
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

Mentholzzz wrote:

hello, from my modding queue
1/4 in the lowest diff is kinda unrankable , so probably add another lower diff.
Xhaos
00:08:545 - add a note here for drum in column 6 Yep
00:10:909 - ^ ^
00:14:909 - should be quad similar to 00:14:545 - nope, this is somethng like an echo
00:16:363 - ^ ^
00:17:818 - could add another note here for the drum sound Sure
00:20:727 - as above ^
00:22:181 - ^ ^
00:23:000 (23000|1,23000|4,23181|1,23181|4) - could move this to like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291525 since the sound at 00:22:727 - and 00:23:000 - is different. youre right
00:45:696 - add a note here i want to keep single
00:47:151 - ^ ^
00:53:272 - add a note here, same sound as 00:53:090 - not so
00:54:727 - ^ and other notes like these ^
00:57:818 - triple here yep
01:04:000 - from here I suggest to map the Ln to match the instrument pitch there (idk what is it) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9293157 or smth It looks pretty scare i don't know xd aaa
Thank you!
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

Mentholzzz wrote:

hello, from my modding queue

Hard
00:23:181 - double here why
00:29:272 (29272|3,29454|1,29545|3) - swap this column
00:47:151 - double here I was placing doubles every 1/1, so gonna keep that consistent
00:54:000 - double here too I'll keep this one as a single for a better emphasizing of 00:54:181
01:05:818 (65818|1,66000|5) - swap this to make the left hand ezier
no reply = fixed
http://puu.sh/xYXuO/05065543cd.rar
Ayydar
69 posts
Joined September 2014
Ayydar
0|1|2|3|4|5|

Normal
00:16:909 (16909|5) и 00:17:272 (17272|5) - добавь в 0
00:29:090 - http://joxi.ru/DmBZp1FwK6OvmP.jpg
00:57:636 - http://joxi.ru/52aB4Ns4w0RRA0.jpg
01:09:818 (69818|5,69818|4) - поменяй на ЛН
01:27:151 (87151|5) - перетащи на 4
Hard
00:06:818 (6818|3) - Здесь должен быть дабл, коль ты выделяешь барабан
00:08:272 (8272|4) - ^
00:09:727 (9727|3) - ^
00:23:181 (23181|3) - на 4-ую
00:45:333 (45333|0) - добавь
00:49:454 (49454|1) - http://joxi.ru/823vZnhJywYBmO.jpg
00:52:363 - добавь
01:10:000 (70000|2) - раз выделял до этого этот шум, выдели и здесь, хотя бы даблом
01:12:909 (72909|3) - ты до этого не выделял тарелку на красном тике
01:20:000 (80000|0) - http://joxi.ru/V2V31RcxlGX9Av.jpg
01:24:181 - http://joxi.ru/MAjBK7s4NYJvAe.jpg
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

Or1g1n wrote:

Normal
00:16:909 (16909|5) и 00:17:272 (17272|5) - добавь в 0
00:29:090 - http://joxi.ru/DmBZp1FwK6OvmP.jpg
00:57:636 - http://joxi.ru/52aB4Ns4w0RRA0.jpg
01:09:818 (69818|5,69818|4) - поменяй на ЛН
01:27:151 (87151|5) - перетащи на 4

Mentholzzz wrote:

Normal
00:19:454 (19454|2,20000|3) - swap column, the old one is first left-heavy and right-heavy which is kinda too hard for NM imo
01:08:363 (68363|0,68545|2,68727|1,68909|2,69090|0) - this kind pof pattern in NM is quite too hard imo, as well as 01:12:000 (72000|2,72181|0,72363|1,72545|2,72727|0) -
01:26:272 (86272|0) - delet this and extend LN to 01:26:363 -
all accepted
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

Or1g1n wrote:

0|1|2|3|4|5|

Hard
00:06:818 (6818|3) - Здесь должен быть дабл, коль ты выделяешь барабан
00:08:272 (8272|4) - ^
00:09:727 (9727|3) - ^ ваще не нравится как играется, пока пожертвую этим
00:23:181 (23181|3) - на 4-ую и так норм, + потеряется джек, который я во всей части использовал 00:23:181 (23181|3,23363|3) -
00:45:333 (45333|0) - добавь
00:49:454 (49454|1) - http://joxi.ru/823vZnhJywYBmO.jpg от души ваще братан
00:52:363 - добавь
01:10:000 (70000|2) - раз выделял до этого этот шум, выдели и здесь, хотя бы даблом
01:12:909 (72909|3) - ты до этого не выделял тарелку на красном тике
01:20:000 (80000|0) - http://joxi.ru/V2V31RcxlGX9Av.jpg не нраица
01:24:181 - http://joxi.ru/MAjBK7s4NYJvAe.jpg 01:24:454 (84454|0,84454|1,84636|3,84636|4,84818|0,84818|1) - эти штучки плохо играются если так поставить
no reply=fixed
ааааа http://puu.sh/yaOZw/71dcad46b6.rar
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes
01:26:000 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9570520 было бы интереснее (?)
я так же не уверен насчёт снапов, мне кажется тут лучше добавить редлайны
если нет, то перемести это 01:26:787 (86787|2) - сюда 01:26:757 -
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

eyes wrote:

01:26:000 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9570520 было бы интереснее (?) Нет, не интересней
я так же не уверен насчёт снапов, мне кажется тут лучше добавить редлайны
если нет, то перемести это 01:26:787 (86787|2) - сюда 01:26:757 - Окей
Также нашел у себя пару ошибок, спасибо
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[422's normal]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. OD 6 HP 6 is too low, at least make it 7 please
  4. 00:08:545 - missing whistle hitsound
  5. 00:10:909 - missing clap hitsound
  6. 00:25:454 - maybe you added a one more because of the melody progress unlike 00:24:000 - , but it's normal diff, it should focus on one thing, just drum yeah. I recommend to delete one, even it's not same drum with 00:28:363 - 00:31:272 - .
  7. 00:29:090 - I don't think it has enough reason as double, no drum and just noise sound tho. How about just single LN from 00:29:090 - to 00:29:272 - ? it makes more clear to express this part.
  8. 01:09:818 - same reason with above.
  9. 00:29:818 - it should be double if you wanna make this 00:31:272 - double, same drum thing tho.
  10. 00:32:727 - same reason with above.
  11. 01:02:545 - 01:04:000 - making symmetry structure with 00:56:727 - 00:58:181 - is better tho. only 01:03:636 - 01:04:000 - are different with previous thing.
[Myle's Hard]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. How about OD 7.5 / HP 7.5? It's hard diff so deserve it.
  4. 00:23:272 - 00:34:909 - has a big gap between last diff, you should buff it tho.
  5. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  6. 00:54:000 - why didn't you make double this? it has heavy drum like 00:52:545 - , no 1/4 notes around it. double is okay tho
  7. 00:59:818 - same reason with above
  8. 01:15:636 - 01:15:818 - only this part are placed at same col. I recommend to avoid the same col like 01:18:545 - 01:18:727 - .
  9. 01:17:272 - not enough heavy sound to be double, because you make double at heavy drum thing at this part. reduce one plz :3
  10. 01:18:000 - umm you should keep consistency like this part. At 01:16:545 - 01:16:727 - , you did two double for 1/4 triple drum line, but didn't at here.
    making double this is the right solution tho.
  11. 01:19:454 - same thing with above
  12. 01:19:090 - consistency, consistency, single plz

    maybe it has more consistency issue, you should keep an eye on this o.o
[Choas]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. How about OD 8 / HP 8? normal and hard od/hp is too low so I think they should buff a bit more.
  3. 00:13:363 (13363|3) - I don't think it has any sound. ghost note thing yeah
  4. 00:20:181 - missing clap hitsound
  5. 00:23:363 - you can add one more here, stream thing
  6. 00:27:636 - 00:29:090 - at this part, I have a question about 00:28:363 - 00:28:727 - . 00:28:636 - is more heavy than 00:28:727 - , but note spread is reversed. 00:28:727 - has not any heavy drum thing so I think it should be single.
  7. 00:33:272 - missing one note tho, unlike 00:34:727 -
  8. 00:34:363 - has finish sound, triple is better
  9. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  10. 01:09:818 (69818|4) - making this 1/2 length LN like 01:09:818 (69818|5) - is better rather than 1/4, it can emphasis the noise only and looks more sexy.
  11. 01:17:454 - one note for this sound is too light, at least double is better cuz you did triple at 01:16:000 -
  12. 01:18:545 - 01:18:909 - make consistency with 01:15:636 - 01:16:000 - , make triple 01:18:909 - to emphasis 1/2, or use 1/4 at 01:15:909 - and delete one at 01:16:000 -

plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

Garalulu wrote:

[notice][422's normal]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap accepted
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme accepted
  3. OD 6 HP 6 is too low, at least make it 7 please accepted
  4. 00:08:545 - missing whistle hitsound Mage is responsible for hitsounds. I tell him fix this.
  5. 00:10:909 - missing clap hitsound ^

    for this:
  6. 00:25:454 - maybe you added a one more because of the melody progress unlike 00:24:000 - , but it's normal diff, it should focus on one thing, just drum yeah. I recommend to delete one, even it's not same drum with 00:28:363 - 00:31:272 - .
  7. 00:29:090 - I don't think it has enough reason as double, no drum and just noise sound tho. How about just single LN from 00:29:090 - to 00:29:272 - ? it makes more clear to express this part.
  8. 01:09:818 - same reason with above.
  9. 00:29:818 - it should be double if you wanna make this 00:31:272 - double, same drum thing tho.
  10. 00:32:727 - same reason with above.
  11. 01:02:545 - 01:04:000 - making symmetry structure with 00:56:727 - 00:58:181 - is better tho. only 01:03:636 - 01:04:000 - are different with previous thing.
    remapped from 00:23:272 - to 00:34:909 - , LNs added here 00:29:090 - and here 01:09:818 - , for this 01:02:545 - made symmetry with 00:56:727 -
Thanks for mod. Most suggestions was accepted, Mage should fix hitsounds.
Last edited by semyon422 , edited 1 time in total.
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
Please inform me what was changed or not,
I wanna specific respond about my mod so I can check them easily
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju

Garalulu wrote:

Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[Choas]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. How about OD 8 / HP 8? normal and hard od/hp is too low so I think they should buff a bit more.
  3. 00:13:363 (13363|3) - I don't think it has any sound. ghost note thing yeah
  4. 00:20:181 - missing clap hitsound
  5. 00:23:363 - you can add one more here, stream thing Yes i can, but it would be a little bit confusing to play
  6. 00:27:636 - 00:29:090 - at this part, I have a question about 00:28:363 - 00:28:727 - . 00:28:636 - is more heavy than 00:28:727 - , but note spread is reversed. 00:28:727 - has not any heavy drum thing so I think it should be single. How you can see in this part i always use doubles for 1/2, in this section music doesn't gets even calmer, so i keep double
  7. 00:33:272 - missing one note tho, unlike 00:34:727 -
  8. 00:34:363 - has finish sound, triple is better
  9. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  10. 01:09:818 (69818|4) - making this 1/2 length LN like 01:09:818 (69818|5) - is better rather than 1/4, it can emphasis the noise only and looks more sexy.
  11. 01:17:454 - one note for this sound is too light, at least double is better cuz you did triple at 01:16:000 -
  12. 01:18:545 - 01:18:909 - make consistency with 01:15:636 - 01:16:000 - , make triple 01:18:909 - to emphasis 1/2, or use 1/4 at 01:15:909 - and delete one at 01:16:000 -
plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
No reply = Accepted

Thank you very much!

Semёn's diff is also updated, waiting for Myle :^)
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

Garalulu wrote:

Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[Myle's Hard]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. How about OD 7.5 / HP 7.5? It's hard diff so deserve it. I'll keep OD7 since some 1/3 patterns are quite hard in terms of accuracy
  4. 00:23:272 - 00:34:909 - has a big gap between last diff, you should buff it tho. That's not an actual problem, right? Also it's quite impossible to keep the pattern idea while buffing it
  5. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  6. 00:54:000 - why didn't you make double this? it has heavy drum like 00:52:545 - , no 1/4 notes around it. double is okay tho
  7. 00:59:818 - same reason with above
  8. 01:15:636 - 01:15:818 - only this part are placed at same col. I recommend to avoid the same col like 01:18:545 - 01:18:727 - .
  9. 01:17:272 - not enough heavy sound to be double, because you make double at heavy drum thing at this part. reduce one plz :3
  10. 01:18:000 - umm you should keep consistency like this part. At 01:16:545 - 01:16:727 - , you did two double for 1/4 triple drum line, but didn't at here.
    making double this is the right solution tho.
  11. 01:19:454 - same thing with above
  12. 01:19:090 - consistency, consistency, single plz

plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
no reply=applied
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
oki I understand what you say

last thing
[Myle's Hard]
  1. 01:26:090 (86090|3,86772|1) - different snap with other diffs, I think mage's snap is right so you should move / add something
    01:26:000 - 01:26:181 - two drum at 01:26:060 - 01:26:121 -
    01:26:772 (86772|1) - Wrong snap, 01:26:757 - tho

\ O W O /
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima

Garalulu wrote:

oki I understand what you say

last thing
[Myle's Hard]
  1. 01:26:090 (86090|3,86772|1) - different snap with other diffs, I think mage's snap is right so you should move / add something
    01:26:000 - 01:26:181 - two drum at 01:26:060 - 01:26:121 -
    01:26:772 (86772|1) - Wrong snap, 01:26:757 - tho

\ O W O /
I just made it like Mage did, should be fine
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
Hoi
Seems fine
Meiju
584 posts
Joined January 2015
Topic Starter
Meiju
Woah, thank you Lulu OwO
eyes
601 posts
Joined January 2016
eyes
Поздравляю

축하해
Garalulu
936 posts
Joined March 2011
Garalulu
hoi hoi
hitsounding in 2017 :blobsweat:
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,780 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
nice! :D
Xinnoh
Elite Mapper
1,962 posts
Joined April 2014
Xinnoh
hitsound doesn't need rebub, just fix before qualification xd
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
Q,when? :)
error_exe777
720 posts
Joined February 2016
error_exe777
i dont know how long ago you asked me to check this but i apologise for the massive delay :blobsweat:

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[General]
  1. Okay so theres this weird aimod error that pops up about more than 6 notes being played simultaneously. i mean its quite obviously a bug but idk what to do about it, so i would set the offset to 1 instead of 0 to get rid of it idk
[Chaos]

00:23:454 (23454|1,23454|2) - could be cool to have this stack in like [12] with the quad below since the same sound is being played here, and would in turn emphasise it that little bit more

00:29:090 (29090|0) - ideally this should be a double LN like shown at 01:09:818 - for consistency's sake

otherwise, lookin good

[Myle's Hard]

00:55:272 - for the 1/2 here i would suggest adding some sort of 1/2 or 1/4th LN for the little wubby sounding things like top diff introduces.

01:20:727 (80727|2,80818|3,80909|2,81000|3,81090|2,81181|3,81272|2) - could be an idea to CTRL+H these to have the starting placement of the trill to the right instead of the left, which helps differentiate it with 01:20:000 (80000|1,80090|4,80181|1,80272|4,80363|1) - further than it already is

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

error_exe777 wrote:

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
I really don't understand why I should delete this note. I think deleting of this note will bу a mistake because I mapped this sound before on 01:02:545 (62545|0,62909|1,63272|1,63636|0) -
error_exe777
720 posts
Joined February 2016
error_exe777

semyon422 wrote:

error_exe777 wrote:

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
I really don't understand why I should delete this note. I think deleting of this note will bу a mistake because I mapped this sound before on 01:02:545 (62545|0,62909|1,63272|1,63636|0) -
i suggested it since the note shown at 01:03:727 (63727|1) - is quieter and less significant than the other kicks and snares, so consequently takes that emphasis away from them. despite this, i dont mind either way
Lacrima
377 posts
Joined September 2014
Lacrima
accepted both suggestions
also added lns 01:18:545 - here for consistency
semyon422
124 posts
Joined July 2014
semyon422

error_exe777 wrote:

i suggested it since the note shown at 01:03:727 (63727|1) - is quieter and less significant than the other kicks and snares, so consequently takes that emphasis away from them. despite this, i dont mind either way
Okay, I'll delete this note 01:03:727 (63727|1) - with 00:57:909 (57909|4) -
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