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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 24, 2017 at 11:05:58 PM

Artist: Oku Hanako
Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Source: セイレン
Tags: Seiren opening Tsuneki Hikari Miyamae Tooru Touno Kyouko xinying chocox walaowey op
BPM: 154
Filesize: 19372kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.45 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Hard (2.89 stars, 219 notes)
  3. Normal (1.81 stars, 153 notes)
  4. Walao's Flower (4.06 stars, 290 notes)
  5. Xinying's Insane (3.68 stars, 288 notes)


Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size)
Download: Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV size) (no video)
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#6

Opening

Special thanks to KaedekaShizuru for mp3 --> check his/her mapset
Special thanks to Xinying and walaowey for GD



[Map Set]
Easy by me : DONE
Normal by me : DONE
Hard by me : DONE
Xinying's Insane by Xinying : DONE
Flower by walaowey: DONE
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Hi
From your req~
General
  1. Title: I think that "(TV size)" is necessary. I recommend it as follows.
    Title: キミの花 (TV size)
    Romanised Title: Kimi no Hana (TV size)
    Source: recochoku / image
    itunes / image
    The site mentioned above links from the official site of the seiren. Official site of the Seiren / image
    So, It's a trustworthy site.
  2. Tag: Addition of the "opening"
Hard
  1. 00:31:363 (1) - The flow of the curve recommends reverse. It makes a good flow for 00:30:973 (4) - and 00:31:947 (2) - http://puu.sh/tofIU.jpg
  2. 00:40:713 (1) - ^ 00:07:986 (1) - this, too w
  3. 00:43:245 (4) - Stack recommends movement to 00:43:051 (3) -
  4. 00:48:895 (2) - You pick up piano sound in 00:46:947 (1,2,3,1) - . So, I think that it is necessary to pick up a sound of the 00:49:090 - .
  5. 01:00:388 (3) - I think a normal whistle of the additions to have good addition to the head of the slider.
  6. 01:11:492 (4) - I think that the whistle of the tail of the slider is not necessary.
  7. 01:23:960 (4) - ^
  8. 01:23:959 (4) - Error of the Ai mod.
Normal
  1. 00:11:103 (3,4) - I recommend ctrl+G. It makes the flow that is good for 00:12:661 (1) - by doing it in the same way as 00:09:544 (1,2) -
  2. 00:31:947 (2) - Pls make the flow of the curve it upside down.
  3. 00:47:921 (3,4,5) - Rhythm are kinda strange. Because the 00:48:895 - is a strong sound, click is better. and I think that it is not necessary to pick up 00:48:116 - . Please try the following rhythm http://puu.sh/tohkN.jpg or http://puu.sh/tohp4.jpg
Easy
  1. 00:36:622 (4) - I feel an end-point to be unnaturally. The end-point recommends that I make modifications to 00:37:206 -
  2. 00:49:090 (4) - Why is a start 00:49:090 - ? I start in 00:48:895 - and think that it terminates in the 00:49:674 -
gl ;)
posted
Hi
Thank you :D
General all fixed

kunka wrote:

Hi
From your req~
Hard
  1. 00:31:363 (1) - The flow of the curve recommends reverse. It makes a good flow for 00:30:973 (4) - and 00:31:947 (2) - http://puu.sh/tofIU.jpg Will consider it, i want emphasize 2 so use drop flow
  2. 00:40:713 (1) - ^ 00:07:986 (1) - this, too w ^^
  3. 00:43:245 (4) - Stack recommends movement to 00:43:051 (3) - Fixed
  4. 00:48:895 (2) - You pick up piano sound in 00:46:947 (1,2,3,1) - . So, I think that it is necessary to pick up a sound of the 00:49:090 - . Fixed, my bad xD
  5. 01:00:388 (3) - I think a normal whistle of the additions to have good addition to the head of the slider. Fixed
  6. 01:11:492 (4) - I think that the whistle of the tail of the slider is not necessary. Fixed
  7. 01:23:960 (4) - ^ Fixed
  8. 01:23:959 (4) - Error of the Ai mod. Fixed
Normal
  1. 00:11:103 (3,4) - I recommend ctrl+G. It makes the flow that is good for 00:12:661 (1) - by doing it in the same way as 00:09:544 (1,2) - Fixed
  2. 00:31:947 (2) - Pls make the flow of the curve it upside down. Will consider it, xD i want empahsize 3 so i usep drop flow again here
  3. 00:47:921 (3,4,5) - Rhythm are kinda strange. Because the 00:48:895 - is a strong sound, click is better. and I think that it is not necessary to pick up 00:48:116 - . Please try the following rhythm http://puu.sh/tohkN.jpg or http://puu.sh/tohp4.jpg Fixed
Easy
  1. 00:36:622 (4) - I feel an end-point to be unnaturally. The end-point recommends that I make modifications to 00:37:206 - Fixed
  2. 00:49:090 (4) - Why is a start 00:49:090 - ? I start in 00:48:895 - and think that it terminates in the 00:49:674 - Will consider it, i follow the guitar sound actually even it is not so loud
gl ;)
posted
m4m

easy

01:15:778 (2) - small ds unconsistency
00:15:778 (1,2) - ^
01:01:752 - can map a 1/1 slider here specialy before kiai it gives that intro
01:29:025 - i think spinner end here is better and fit nicer

normal

01:01:752 - same for easy if u want
01:29:025 - same
fml its good xd

hard

00:34:090 (4,1) - maybe blanket the 1/2 slider on head of slider 1 would look neater
01:01:752 - maybe here 1/1 slider with slow sv

its rly good cant find anything
>w<
/me run
posted
Hi
Thank you

Lilyanna wrote:

m4m

easy

01:15:778 (2) - small ds unconsistency Fixed
00:15:778 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:01:752 - can map a 1/1 slider here specialy before kiai it gives that intro will consider it cause i follow the rhythm but also follow the vocal so if just vocal i will ignore it
01:29:025 - i think spinner end here is better and fit nicer Fixed

normal

01:01:752 - same for easy if u want
01:29:025 - same Fixed
fml its good xd

hard

00:34:090 (4,1) - maybe blanket the 1/2 slider on head of slider 1 would look neater Nope, i make it like that on purpose
01:01:752 - maybe here 1/1 slider with slow sv same like in easy
i change the spinner too in hard
posted
Hi~ so m4m time ^_^

General

Idk why, but I think that the song's end is just like an edge, it is cutted so sharpy... Can you fix this in any way?

Easy

00:06:427 (1,2,3) - different distance snap...
00:28:245 (1,2,3) - sounds weird a little
Also, you can make moments "slider-circle-slider" more round to seems better.

Normal

No problems with separate elements, but in general...
The same as in Easy, but more: you can make connecting all of elements more round/linear to let them become whole parts of map, but not the lonely tap-waiting objects :3
Also I thought as maybe here is strange rhythm, because I really confused when I see this... I can't pass the normal with fc, lol :c

Hard

00:07:401 (2) - move it in way to be more nice :P
00:30:194 (2,3,4) - non-symmetrical placing of sliders of really only one type, why not to place first slider (of these three) a bit far to make same distance?
00:49:869 (6,7) - I even don't hear them... Maybe you can make them louder?
01:16:168 (5) - please place it in other place to face smoother... (near the next element or far from it)
01:16:947 (2,3,4) - the same as with other 2,3,4 sliders at the start of Hard's mod
01:19:284 (5) - oh again this placing :c

That's all, I hope I was useful :P
Good luck, and I'm waiting for this will be ranked, really nice song :D
posted

Morroni wrote:


Easy

00:06:427 (1,2,3) - different distance snap... It's fine
00:28:245 (1,2,3) - sounds weird a little ??sound fine to me i follow the beat and the vocal
Also, you can make moments "slider-circle-slider" more round to seems better.

Normal

No problems with separate elements, but in general...
The same as in Easy, but more: you can make connecting all of elements more round/linear to let them become whole parts of map, but not the lonely tap-waiting objects :3
Also I thought as maybe here is strange rhythm, because I really confused when I see this... I can't pass the normal with fc, lol :c Normal is fine [/color]

Hard

00:07:401 (2) - move it in way to be more nice :Pwill consider it
00:30:194 (2,3,4) - non-symmetrical placing of sliders of really only one type, why not to place first slider (of these three) a bit far to make same distance? it is look fine now
00:49:869 (6,7) - I even don't hear them... Maybe you can make them louder? Fixed
01:16:168 (5) - please place it in other place to face smoother... (near the next element or far from it) it flow good now and i want use jump to emphasize it
01:16:947 (2,3,4) - the same as with other 2,3,4 sliders at the start of Hard's mod actually 2 3 4 is not a pattern the pattern start 3 4 5 so its fine now
01:19:284 (5) - oh again this placing :c it flow good now and i want use jump to emphasize it
posted
my diff~


edit: had to fix a small rhythm mistake
posted
IRC
2017-01-18 21:19 Del05: halo :D
2017-01-18 21:19 Riantra: :D
2017-01-18 21:19 Riantra: hai
2017-01-18 21:20 Del05: bs minta mod nggak gan
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: aku udah lupa soal modding :<
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: padahal pingin balik mapping lagi tapi ilmunya dah hilang
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: lol
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: wkwkkw
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: belajar lg gan wkwkw
2017-01-18 21:21 Del05: gpp kok
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: boleh kirim mapnya
2017-01-18 21:21 Riantra: tapi saya noob banget pasti wkwk
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1184212 Oku Hanako - Kimi no Hana (TV Size)]
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: itu sih mapnya
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: gpp kasih pendapatnya juga gp
2017-01-18 21:22 Del05: gpp
2017-01-18 21:22 Riantra: oke
2017-01-18 21:23 Del05: makasih gan :D
2017-01-18 21:24 Riantra: hmm seiren
2017-01-18 21:24 Riantra: fresh
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: iya
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: aku suka ama heroinenya
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: wkwkw
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: artnya mirip amagami
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: katanya sih
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: sequelnya amagami
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: testplay dulu ya uwu
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: cuma yg lama dah lulus semua
2017-01-18 21:25 Riantra: lol
2017-01-18 21:25 Del05: jd kayak kouhainya
2017-01-18 21:27 Riantra: pingin ngasih pendapat tapi soal mapping saya noob xD
2017-01-18 21:28 Del05: gpp kasih aja
2017-01-18 21:28 Del05: ntah jumpnya flownya
2017-01-18 21:28 Riantra: yang normal lebih enak ketimbang easy
2017-01-18 21:30 Riantra: ga bisa bacanya xdd
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: hm.. berarti new styleku lbh enak drpd old style
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: baca ? diff apa
2017-01-18 21:31 Riantra: yang insane haha
2017-01-18 21:31 Riantra: belum kuat baca ar segitu
2017-01-18 21:31 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:32 Del05: berarti arnya aku minta diturunin aja
2017-01-18 21:32 Riantra: diff easy
2017-01-18 21:33 Del05: knp easy ?
2017-01-18 21:33 Riantra: 00:26:687 (3) - ini namanya slider bolak balik apa ya, pokoknya itu kalau bisa reversenya dihilangin
2017-01-18 21:33 Riantra: pendapat pribadi aja sih, rasanya aneh
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: aku follow vocal sih buat di tail itu ada vocalnya
2017-01-18 21:34 Del05: consider dulu :D
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: 00:26:687 - 00:27:856 - imo enakan dibuat 1/1 slider clap tail gitu
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: tapi vocal not bad juga
2017-01-18 21:36 Riantra: cuma karena sebelumnya ga ngikut vocal jadi aneh
2017-01-18 21:37 Del05: seblm follow vocal cuma gk se follow yg itu sih
2017-01-18 21:37 Del05: emang
2017-01-18 21:37 Riantra: 00:47:921 (2,3) - terus ini, kalau buat first try bikin salah baca pasti haha
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: hm..
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: diapakan ya itu
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: dijadiin stu slider ?
2017-01-18 21:38 Del05: tp malah jd aneh xD
2017-01-18 21:39 Riantra: hmm
2017-01-18 21:40 Riantra: 00:49:090 (4) - mungkin ininya aja yang digeser
2017-01-18 21:41 Riantra: 00:48:505 (3) - jadi 1/2 slider?
2017-01-18 21:41 Del05: ke ?
2017-01-18 21:42 Del05: hm.. kalo 1/2 malah jd aneh
2017-01-18 21:42 Del05: soalnya gitarnya cuma sampe blu tick
2017-01-18 21:42 Riantra: 00:49:090 (4) - digeser ke 00:48:895 -
2017-01-18 21:43 Riantra: jadi 1/1 slider
2017-01-18 21:43 Riantra: 00:49:674 - add note
2017-01-18 21:43 Del05: hm.. oke lah
2017-01-18 21:44 Del05: fixed
2017-01-18 21:44 Riantra: yang lainnya bagus kok
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: okok
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: kirim ke forum ya irc
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: bs ksh kds
2017-01-18 21:45 Del05: sekalian aku msh bs inget yg aku consider td
2017-01-18 21:52 Del05: mkasih gan :D
2017-01-18 21:52 Del05: aku tunggu postnya wkwk
2017-01-18 21:52 Riantra: sama-sama xd
2017-01-18 21:53 Riantra: aku merasa ga ngebantu nih xD


duh banyak lupanya, cara ngepost di forum aja lupa xd
posted
As you requested.

[Normal]
00:07:596 (2) - putting 199.172 could be better for flow. overlapping 00:09:544 (1) - doesn't matter, It's okay.
00:25:908 (2) - some....missed hitsounds?
00:36:038 (3) - this is the only one 1/2 rhythm in this diff. looks awkward, and 00:36:232 - this part doesn't need to emphasize.
00:53:181 (1,2) - this rhythm could be better for read.
01:25:323 (2) - this is. too.

[Normal]
00:13:830 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many rhythm terms. imo, 00:15:583 - deleting this beat could be better.
00:23:765 - this is strong sound, Add ad beat.
00:36:622 - why don't you add a beat in here? It has strong piano sound
00:38:375 (2) - missing hitsound
00:53:765 - this part has vocal, I prefer you adding a vocal sound in tere, 00:53:960 (2) - start at 00:53:765 - ?
00:57:077 (2) - ^
01:14:025 (6,7) - swap rhythm, could be better for vocal emphasizing.
01:14:804 (8) - and this beat doesn't need,,

[Hard]
00:36:038 (1,2) - how about blanket?
00:48:895 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about make star pattern?
01:21:817 (2) - slider blanket

[Insane]
00:00:388 - 00:01:947 - why you ignored this rhythm part? I think you should add a beat since you add a beat in 00:03:505 - .
00:07:596 (4) - stacking 3 looks not so good, imo. DS feels decreased.
00:10:518 (3) - you don't need to make a jump in here, music is calm now.
00:25:323 - add a beat
00:25:908 (4,5) - Ctrl G for make flow with 00:26:297 (6) - .
00:38:181 (3,5) - ctrl G and make a star pattern.
00:41:297 (2,3) - stack looks weird, too.
01:17:921 (7) - delete this beat since you didn't added a beat in 01:05:453 - .

GL
posted
Hi
Thanks

Neoskylove wrote:

As you requested.

[Normal]
00:07:596 (2) - putting 199.172 could be better for flow. overlapping 00:09:544 (1) - doesn't matter, It's okay. Fixed
00:25:908 (2) - some....missed hitsounds? There is no beat there (beat in red tick)
00:36:038 (3) - this is the only one 1/2 rhythm in this diff. looks awkward, and 00:36:232 - this part doesn't need to emphasize. will consider it if someone said again about this i will change it
00:53:181 (1,2) - this rhythm could be better for read. Fixed
01:25:323 (2) - this is. too. will consider it if someone said again about this i will change it

[Normal]
00:13:830 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many rhythm terms. imo, 00:15:583 - deleting this beat could be better. Actually it is same with 00:01:362 (2,3,4,5,1) -
00:23:765 - this is strong sound, Add ad beat. Fixed
00:36:622 - why don't you add a beat in here? It has strong piano sound Fixed
00:38:375 (2) - missing hitsound There is no beat there (beat in red tick)
00:53:765 - this part has vocal, I prefer you adding a vocal sound in tere, 00:53:960 (2) - start at 00:53:765 - ? Will consider it cause i want to emphasize the beat more
00:57:077 (2) - ^
01:14:025 (6,7) - swap rhythm, could be better for vocal emphasizing. i want to emphasize the cymbal sound at 01:14:219
01:14:804 (8) - and this beat doesn't need,, Fixed

[Hard]
00:36:038 (1,2) - how about blanket? It is on purpose i make it like that
00:48:895 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about make star pattern? Will consider it cause it flow well now, i think
01:21:817 (2) - slider blanket Fixed
posted
halo

Easy
00:25:129 (1,2) - flownya disini agak kasar,coba kayak gini biar agak halus dikit http://prnt.sc/dxl7dz
00:36:622 (4) - unsnapped slider tailnya
00:40:712 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - flow pattern (1,2,3,4) mirip dengan (1,2,3) mungkin bisa di kasih beda dikit flownya *mungkin ini nggk guna jadi di skip aja,cuma uneg2 doang
00:48:895 (4) - suara cymbalnya keras banget disini loh,nggk mau pakai finish?
01:27:661 (1) - spinnernya terlalu terburu-buru munculnya,kan ini level easy jadi mungkin di mundurin dikit spinnernya ke red tick ~

Normal
00:02:921 (5) - ini jadi circle aja deh,masa masih awal lagu rhythmnya dah susah kayak gini lel
00:09:155 (5) - ^
00:15:388 (5) - ^
00:21:622 (6) - ^
00:31:947 (2) - mungkin slider tailnya di red tick aja biar rhythmnya nggk terlalu dense disini
00:44:414 (2) - ^
00:58:245 (3) - circle disini,biar enak ke vocalnya
01:00:973 (4,5) - potong jadi 2 1/2 slider? biar enak ke drumnya

Hard
01:09:739 (4) - kalau aku sih mending stack di slider (4) aja biar agak enak flownya
01:10:908 (2,3) - unstack? agak rada aneh sih kalau stack disini
01:23:765 (3) - stack di slider (1)? biar lebih leluasa pemain ngekliknya

ok itu aja kak GL!
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:388 - 00:01:947 - why you ignored this rhythm part? I think you should add a beat since you add a beat in 00:03:505 - . there is no sound at the start lol
00:07:596 (4) - stacking 3 looks not so good, imo. DS feels decreased. DS is not decreased, consistent 1.21x
00:10:518 (3) - you don't need to make a jump in here, music is calm now. Build up to next slider well, keep
00:25:323 - add a beat there is no sound
00:25:908 (4,5) - Ctrl G for make flow with 00:26:297 (6) - . your flow is bad compared to mine, so keep for now
00:38:181 (3,5) - ctrl G and make a star pattern. 00:38:570 (5) - deserves more emphasis compared to 00:38:181 (3) , and there is nothing wrong with this pattern/flow playability wise
00:41:297 (2,3) - stack looks weird, too. have you tried playing it?
01:17:921 (7) - delete this beat since you didn't added a beat in 01:05:453 - . the beat here 01:05:453 - is really soft, so skipping it wouldn't be a problem. But the beat here 01:17:921 (7) is much more obvious, skipping it would be questionable.


even though no change from mod, I fixed a jump that I feel is overmapped. My new diff -> https://puu.sh/trGrr/6a02db5b42.osu
posted

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

halo

Easy
00:25:129 (1,2) - flownya disini agak kasar,coba kayak gini biar agak halus dikit http://prnt.sc/dxl7dz Consider dulu deh soalnya menurutku udah enak flownya
00:36:622 (4) - unsnapped slider tailnya Fixed
00:40:712 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - flow pattern (1,2,3,4) mirip dengan (1,2,3) mungkin bisa di kasih beda dikit flownya *mungkin ini nggk guna jadi di skip aja,cuma uneg2 doang Gpp sih itu
00:48:895 (4) - suara cymbalnya keras banget disini loh,nggk mau pakai finish? Fixed
01:27:661 (1) - spinnernya terlalu terburu-buru munculnya,kan ini level easy jadi mungkin di mundurin dikit spinnernya ke red tick ~ Fixed

Normal
00:02:921 (5) - ini jadi circle aja deh,masa masih awal lagu rhythmnya dah susah kayak gini lel consider dulu
00:09:155 (5) - ^
00:15:388 (5) - ^
00:21:622 (6) - ^
00:31:947 (2) - mungkin slider tailnya di red tick aja biar rhythmnya nggk terlalu dense disini Fixed
00:44:414 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:58:245 (3) - circle disini,biar enak ke vocalnya Nggak deh gini aja enak wkwkw
01:00:973 (4,5) - potong jadi 2 1/2 slider? biar enak ke drumnya Fixed

Hard
01:09:739 (4) - kalau aku sih mending stack di slider (4) aja biar agak enak flownya consider dulu
01:10:908 (2,3) - unstack? agak rada aneh sih kalau stack disini Fixed
01:23:765 (3) - stack di slider (1)? biar lebih leluasa pemain ngekliknya Fixed

ok itu aja kak GL!
posted
Hi~ =w=

[Easy]
  1. 00:28:245 (1,2,3) - It seems you've folling vocal here. But 00:29:219 (2) - here you followed drum, which make me confused when test playing while 00:28:245 (1,3) - is folloing vocal. There is no need to follow every drum as there're many when it's short red line. I suggest replace it with a slider. https://puu.sh/trK4X/ff660eb0ab.png
  2. 00:40:712 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:31:363 (1,2) - replace them with this ? It may sound better. https://puu.sh/trKhF/f9eab37a05.png
  4. 00:35:453 (2) - just a note here seems lost something. replace with a slider end at 00:35:843 ?
  5. 00:47:921 (2) - ^
  6. 01:00:973 (3) - finish at 01:01:752 ?
  7. 01:27:466 (1,1) - Not very sure whether it is ok to put a spinner just after a note in easy diff. remove the note ?


[Normal]
  1. 00:31:363 (1,2,3) - follow vocal ? https://puu.sh/trKKh/5d8526b7fb.png
  2. 00:43:830 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:14:025 (6) - drum is soft here so just use a slider here ? And finish is also soft at 01:14:219 so I think you can ignore it and only follow vocal here.
  4. 01:27:466 (1,1) - same in easy.

Main problem is that there're some strange rhythm and I'm not sure whether you're following vocal or not. I just give suggestions in my opinion.

[Hard]
  1. 00:35:454 (3) - replace it with a slider and a note ? may sound better.
  2. 00:48:116 missing note. what about this rhythm ? https://puu.sh/trLS8/90b6407c7b.png
  3. 00:53:765 (2,3,1) - you followed drum at 00:51:622 (1,2,3) - so I suggest you still follow drum here. what about this ? https://puu.sh/trLZm/61620af856.png
  4. 00:59:414 (1,2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/trM3L/92f523cb8f.png
  5. 01:21:817 (2,3) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ?
  6. 01:23:375 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:29:415 (3) - remove hitsound here ?
  8. 00:41:882 (3) - ^
  9. 00:49:869 (6,7) - ^
  10. 00:24:544 (5) - add whistle here ?


[Xinying's Insane]
  1. 00:28:830 (2,3) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ?
  2. 00:35:453 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:39:544 (2) - stack with end of 00:39:155 (1) - may be better.
  4. 00:53:960 (3,4) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ?
  5. 00:58:440 (2,3,4) - note-slider-slider may be better ? https://puu.sh/trMpG/6851efdaae.png
  6. 01:20:843 (5) - seems out of screen


gl~~
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Moena wrote:

Hi~ =w=

[Easy]
  1. 00:28:245 (1,2,3) - It seems you've folling vocal here. But 00:29:219 (2) - here you followed drum, which make me confused when test playing while 00:28:245 (1,3) - is folloing vocal. There is no need to follow every drum as there're many when it's short red line. I suggest replace it with a slider. https://puu.sh/trK4X/ff660eb0ab.png hm.. i will consider you suggestion because your suggestion use 1/2 rhythm (slider 2 and 3 in your pic) which i want to avoid it(1/2 slider is fine to me)
  2. 00:40:712 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:31:363 (1,2) - replace them with this ? It may sound better. https://puu.sh/trKhF/f9eab37a05.png hm.. i will consider you suggestion because your suggestion use 1/2 rhythm[/spoiler]
  4. 00:35:453 (2) - just a note here seems lost something. replace with a slider end at 00:35:843 ? hm.. i will consider you suggestion because your suggestion use 1/2 rhythm[/spoiler]
  5. 00:47:921 (2) - ^ hm.. i will consider you suggestion because your suggestion use 1/2 rhythm[/spoiler]
  6. 01:00:973 (3) - finish at 01:01:752 ? Nope, i follow the drum here
  7. 01:27:466 (1,1) - Not very sure whether it is ok to put a spinner just after a note in easy diff. remove the note ? it is fine, i think xD


[Normal]
  1. 00:31:363 (1,2,3) - follow vocal ? https://puu.sh/trKKh/5d8526b7fb.png Fixed
  2. 00:43:830 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
  3. 01:14:025 (6) - drum is soft here so just use a slider here ? And finish is also soft at 01:14:219 so I think you can ignore it and only follow vocal here. lemme consider it
  4. 01:27:466 (1,1) - same in easy.

Main problem is that there're some strange rhythm and I'm not sure whether you're following vocal or not. I just give suggestions in my opinion.

[Hard]
  1. 00:35:454 (3) - replace it with a slider and a note ? may sound better. why a note ?? i want to emphasize the drum and piano too
  2. 00:48:116 missing note. what about this rhythm ? https://puu.sh/trLS8/90b6407c7b.png consider it
  3. 00:53:765 (2,3,1) - you followed drum at 00:51:622 (1,2,3) - so I suggest you still follow drum here. what about this ? https://puu.sh/trLZm/61620af856.png i still follow the drum actually xD if you hear it again 00:53:765 (2,3,1) the drum is at 00:54:544 and for 00:51:622 (1,2,3) the drum at 00:53:181 and ofc those two are different part so it is okay
  4. 00:59:414 (1,2,3) - ^ https://puu.sh/trM3L/92f523cb8f.png
  5. 01:21:817 (2,3) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ? why ?? i try to emphaszie the vocal that's why i use slider 2 instead use a circle
  6. 01:23:375 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:29:415 (3) - remove hitsound here ? Fixed
  8. 00:41:882 (3) - ^ Fixed
  9. 00:49:869 (6,7) - ^ Fixed
  10. 00:24:544 (5) - add whistle here ? Fixed
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Moena wrote:

[Xinying's Insane]
  1. 00:28:830 (2,3) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ? I want to make this beat 00:29:219 (3) - clickable
  2. 00:35:453 (3,4) - ^ Why change rhythm here? It sounds good to me
  3. 00:39:544 (2) - stack with end of 00:39:155 (1) - may be better. Good idea haha, fixed
  4. 00:53:960 (3,4) - Ctrl + G to change rhythm ? Why all these rhythm changes?
  5. 00:58:440 (2,3,4) - note-slider-slider may be better ? https://puu.sh/trMpG/6851efdaae.png Your rhythm is good because it makes 00:58:635 - clickable, but it feels really off to play if it doesn't follow the vocal here. So no fix for now
  6. 01:20:843 (5) - seems out of screen it's not off for me
https://puu.sh/trRa7/4a8cf2582e.osu
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I'm not good at modding xd
  • General
  1. Easy, Normal, Hard and Insane : Disable Countdown.
  2. Easy, Normal, Insane and Flower : Disable Widescreen surpport.
  • Easy
  1. 00:36:622 (4) - Because you used 1/2 sider which is uncommon snap in Easy, it should be better if this was 1/1 slider for same piano.
  • Hard
  1. 00:11:103 (1,2) - Swap NC? It's better for empahsis of stacked notes
  2. 00:23:765 (2) - Add a whistle for drum or piano.
  3. 00:30:973 (4) - Use a Ctrl + H shape for consistant pattern?
  4. 00:49:869 (6,7) - Try to add some hitsounds? They're almost inaudiable for now x.x
  • Xinying
  1. Volume of the Kiai is too low.
  2. 00:52:401 (3) - Try to move to (70,107) or something for make same flow as 00:51:622 (1,2) - .
  3. 01:01:362 (3,4) - I'm sure that Ctrl G flow is better and emphasizes 01:01:752 (1) - this slider more cuz of DS.
GL :3
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hihi

[general]
http://puu.sh/tvrnd/44fb790016.wav maybe you can make use of this hitsound for the intro?

disable countdown and widescreen for all diffs
[easy]
00:25:129 (1,2) - copy one and ctrl+j? http://puu.sh/tvqRX/366d823492.jpg
00:34:479 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm, better polarity
00:47:921 (2,3) - make into slider to prevent 3/2 gap
00:50:064 (1) - finish on head
00:59:414 (1,2) - recommend this instead
01:14:414 (4) - maybe 1/2 slider?

[Normal]
aimod spacing issue
00:35:453 (3,4,5,6) - u can do better than this ! doesnt flow great atm
00:50:064 (1) - finish again (and the other diffs too)
01:06:232 (2) - 01:12:466 (2) - 01:15:583 (2) - (and more) u can delete this to avoid long slidertrain
01:10:323 (4) - (and others) whistle is out of place, either remove or add on others too

[Hard]
00:44:414 (2) - minor detail but move it left more would make the patttern look more balanced and nicer :3
00:49:966 (7) - jump on a triple is really hard for hard diffs, AND this is overmapped so yea :/
00:53:181 (1) - flow is really harsh here
00:56:297 (1) - ^
00:59:414 (1) - ^ try ctrl+g
01:08:765 (1) - this is better than before though o/
01:10:323 (1) - but not this, move this left more for better flow
01:16:947 (2,3,4) - use more symmetry, looks messy atm
01:27:077 (3,4,5,6,1) - ehh maybe 1/4 reverse?

[xinying]
00:05:843 (3,4,1) - weird flow
00:35:453 (3) - normal whistle for piano?
00:47:336 (2) - this lonely whistle what is it following lol
00:48:895 (2) - 00:50:064 (1) - finish
01:18:895 (3) - curved slider here looks out of place :s maybe put it straight but angle it down?
01:22:694 (6) - overmapped

[Flower]
00:09:349 (4) - move down to avoid tiny overlap
00:12:077 (5) - these jumps are so non-intuitive :/ i always think (5) should be down and (6) is above lol
00:50:064 (1,2,3) - really awkward flow imo
01:03:895 (1) - 01:07:012 (1) - (etc) whistle on head?
01:14:804 (6,7,1) - THE FC DENIER :c (if u really want pp mapu maybe change to kickslider :p something like http://puu.sh/tvske/e811295bb1.jpg)
01:14:999 (1) - finish
01:17:337 (4,5) - copy pasta symmetry would be nice here

dont really want to change much except that triple tbh cuz i want dat pp /slapped

glhf!
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