1. osu!community
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked/Approved Beatmaps
posted
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 2 avril 2017 at 01:09:56

Artist: Kano
Title: Yuudachi no Ribbon
Tags: みきとp mikitop vocaloid utaite cover evening shower arumachi no hakuchumu cut ver short kalibe janpai akitoshi corinn doormat chromoxx
BPM: 230
Filesize: 3930kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akitoshi's Normal (2,27 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Chromoxx' Inner Oni (5,28 stars, 777 notes)
  3. Chromoxx' Muzukashii (3,37 stars, 478 notes)
  4. Chromoxx' Oni (4,59 stars, 625 notes)
  5. Doormat's Hard (3,28 stars, 303 notes)
  6. Expert (5,27 stars, 373 notes)
  7. Extreme (5,81 stars, 413 notes)
  8. Insane (4,48 stars, 319 notes)
  9. Janpai's Easy (1,74 stars, 124 notes)
  10. Kalibe's Insane (4,03 stars, 325 notes)


Download: Kano - Yuudachi no Ribbon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

#30
Credits
  1. Janpai for Easy diff and Banner!
  2. Akitoshi, Doormat, Kalibe for GDs!
  3. moph's full ver here
  4. Chromoxx for Taiko GDs!
posted
ayy short version too :^)
no gd slot or smth for insane? w
posted

Sotarks wrote:

no gd rqs pls thx!!
posted
rip moph :((
posted

Ambient wrote:

rip moph :((
:(
posted
KANO #1 god luck!
posted
ok finally ready for mods!!
posted
mod
Extreme-

I had to play with -9ms to get a nice hit error

00:33:020 (2,3,4,5) - feels like this needs bigger spacing, but this 00:34:063 (2,3,4,5) - is fine
00:40:454 (2,3,4) - would ctrl+g 2 and 4
00:44:759 (6) - try stack 6 directly on 4?
00:49:715 (2,3,4,5,1) - same as just now
00:56:237 (1) - really think this could be another set of jumps

nothing much to say, clean map
#
posted
Star for vs moph's mapset.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/456237

Thx haru!
posted
link moph's set to respect him ty
placeholder for m4m

Lazy to formatting right now, so i'll just do some simple formatting instead lel

[General]
  1. The tags field are blank currently, maybe you can put something that related to the song like the producer and also the GDers name into it?
  2. All good beside the tags~


[Extreme]
  1. 00:02:880 (2,1) - The current movement/flow is pretty edgy imo, then how 00:02:880 (2) - designed makes things a bit unflowy, maybe you can ctrl+h 00:02:880 (2) - this instead for a better flow but yea i mean, mirror it but still on the same place/coordinate.
  2. 00:04:054 (1,3) - Lol is the blanket here intentional, i mean you can improve it if you want.
  3. 00:06:401 (1) - Here, maybe you can try this design for a neater look? Basically still the same shape but loop is more visible so people wont recognize it as "burai".
  4. 00:08:628 (2,3,4) - Pretty weird spacing here where you got 2>3 a big spacing while 3>4 is pretty small/near. I know the sound on 4 isnt that loud or important but would it be nice if both spacing of 2>3>4 have the constant/consistent spacing?
  5. 00:13:194 (4,5) - Please no stack??? You didnt even put any stacks before and after this object and that is pretty inconsistent, i'd say making this a jump would be better
  6. 00:55:715 (1,2,1,2) - I dont think a back and forth jump like this would work on this part. But it will be work if its made upwards instead.
  7. 01:08:498 (3,4) - Maybe a bigger spacing to emphasize the loud vocal here?
  8. 01:15:156 (1) - Ehh, pls the movement from 01:14:895 (3,4) - is really edgy + how you make 01:15:156 (1) - is just something that becomes more edgy @_@. What about CTRL+G'ing this instead? i think it would be cool and plays much better.

    Thats all.


[]
I think i will end up modding one difficulty only since my set has one diff lel. But if you want me to mod it further, dont hesitate to call me back modding the other diffs~

Good luck man!
posted
oui


[Hitsound]

  1. Si tu whistle içi pour la guitare, autant whistle aussi içi 00:00:923 - :c
  2. 00:55:194 - missing finish
  3. 00:48:411 - missing clap



[Extreme]

  1. j'ai pas l'impression que ce slider 00:32:368 (7,1) - est emphasis comme il faut, avec le flow étant exactement le même que celui-ci 00:31:976 (4,5) - ; mais avec moins de spacing
  2. 00:56:498 (1,1) - c'est peut être juste moi, mais je trouve qu'içi, un anti jump passe beaucoup mieux.



[Expert]

  1. 01:10:324 (2,2) - c'est un peu inattendu les SV change sans les NC. Du coup, NC ?
  2. 00:38:498 (5,6,1) - ce slider 00:38:759 (1) - est plutot bien emphasize avec le flow. Mais cependant, je trouve que ce qui en ressort le plus finallement, c'est surtout ce snare 00:38:628 (6) - . Je sais pas si c'est intentionnel, mais du coup, je dirais que pour mieux emphasize ce slider 00:38:759 (1) - ; ça serait surement mieux d'avoir un spacing entre ses 2 notes 00:38:628 (6,1) - plus grande que celui-ci 00:38:498 (5,6) - .



[Insane]

  1. 00:06:401 (1) - PENIS
  2. 00:53:368 (1) - l'absence d'emphasis spacing me fait un peu étrange içi.
  3. 01:11:889 (4) - jsp moi, mais je l'aurais vu un peu plus haut afin d'accentuer 01:12:150 (1) - par le flow.
  4. je sais pas si c'est voulu, mais cette note 01:22:590 (1) - est moins accentuer que celle la 01:24:677 (1) - (je déduis que les 2 notes sont pour la guitare, qui sont plus ou moins similaire sur leurs timeline). btw, je trouve même que 01:22:590 (1) - est plus strong.



[Kalibe's Insane]

  1. 00:05:227 (4,5) - since both are snare, I think stacking those note is better than those 00:05:358 (5,6) - . Also, the mouvement will follow the guitare too.
  2. 00:53:368 (1) - you didn't really emphasized cymbal with spacing on this part of the song. But this one, is the only one. (on this part)



[Doormat's Hard]

  1. 00:14:107 (2) - dunno if it's intentional, might also be a bit nazi, but the transition between this slider 00:13:715 (1) - & this slider 00:14:107 (2) - . Isn't really the curve of 00:14:107 (2) - ; but mostly a lil zigzag with the current shape.
  2. 00:40:324 (3,4) - 00:48:933 (4) - Maybe use the same mimic as those pattern ? 00:38:237 (3,4) - 00:36:411 (3) - 00:32:237 (4) - . Those kind of mimics are the dominant one in this part, and only those 2 patterns are like this.


[Akitoshi's Normal]

  1. 00:23:107 (3) - 01:29:895 (3) - maybe NC for the sudden change of the guitare ?
  2. 01:01:715 (1) - I think, moving this note a bit more to the top, will make the emphasis better.



[Janpai's Easy]

  1. 00:19:976 - 00:11:628 - missing finish
  2. except those missing finish, I sometimes feel like, the Easy diff gap is really close to the Normal (timeline)


that's a nice & clean mapset here!
good luck!
posted
nm

[Janpai]

Why not map intro?

00:13:715 (3) - missing NC
00:26:759 (2) - move the tail sliderpoint up like 1 grid to fix the blanket lol

Some of the sliders don't really have sounds on the heads, which leads me to belive there's better rhythm you can choose. For example, 00:08:498 (2)'s head has no important sound on it compared to nearby white ticks. I think it's better if you follow a rhythm similar to what Akitoshi does for this intro part, by making 00:08:237 - clickable (so this - http://imgur.com/a/gBsHs) this is basically true up until the first bookmark

[Akitoshi]

Why not map intro?

01:14:237 (1) - not snapped

so...yea nice diff lol

[Doormat]

00:05:227 (4,5) - I know you stacked these on 1's head, but consider just lining them up with 3, I think it would look nicer.
00:50:107 (4,1) - the only other 1/2 jump like this outside of the kiai was to a finish, so it makes me feel like this one doesn't fit

nice work

[Kalibe]

00:10:324 (4,1) - here the jump is to 1, but on 00:12:150 (3,4,1) - the jump is to 4, i know you had to stack 4 under 00:11:628 (1) - for aesthetics, so i suggest moving 00:12:020 (2,3) - so that that the spacing from 3 to 4 isn't as high.
00:21:541 (3,4,5,6) - rather linear jump sequence, doesnt feel good to play
00:45:933 (1,3) - This overlap doesn't really good compared to the other ones
01:14:237 (1) - not snapped

nice map, I didnt make a big deal over the fact that objects dont have the same amounts of space between them (example would be something like 01:12:933 (5,2,2) - because i figure its not something you went for when making the diff

[Insane]

00:03:793 (3,2) - fix stack, its pretty noticeable
00:14:628 (4) - missing NC
00:17:107 (2,3) - i guess you aren't going for blanket but at least make it symmetrical or something
01:10:063 (1) - and 01:10:585 (1) - could use a hitsound on the heads, weird to just have nothing

personally I didn't think this map looked very nice, but the things I dislike were definitely intentional so w/e

[Expert]

love your cs3.2 maps!

00:01:314 (2) - should be 1/2 reverse? would be like 00:04:445 (2) - and 00:02:097 (2) - (which are also 1/2 sliders when theres the drum on the red tick)
00:06:401 (1) - fix the shape, curve doesnt really look smooth
01:10:585 (1,2) - Very challenging because of the lower of SV on 01:10:585 (1) - , would really consider nerfing this. even with slider lenience this is extremely challenging not to 100 the slider. Even for 01:10:063 (1,2) - to a lesser extent
01:13:063 (4,1,2) - very linear movements, uncomfortable to land

[Extreme]

Osu crashed while I was modding this lol

00:03:662 (1) - this SV increase feels pretty unnecessary to me, like even if you want it you should put another one for 00:05:227 (5) - then
00:49:715 (2,3) - looks nicer if you copypaste this for 00:49:063 (7,4,5) -

I suck at modding things this hard because of my inability to play them lol, bpms a bit too fast for me

Good job with the set everyone, fun maps overall. gl!
posted
hi m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/570679

[General]
  1. 01:14:243 (1) - unsnapped in Insane diff
  2. 01:14:243 (1) - unsnapped in Kalibe's diff
  3. tags?


[Extreme]
  1. 00:08:107 (3,4) - so through this introduction this is the only time you represent this sound with such a large jump. compared to the rest of the section this one is enormous, so you should probably nerf this or change the rest to be bigger. whichever is easier for you
  2. 00:48:411 - clap on head?


[Expert]
  1. 00:02:880 (2,1) - give a bit more visual distance between these two?
  2. 00:20:889 (1,4) - stack? or was that on purpose


[Insane]
  1. 00:08:368 (4) - nc?
  2. 00:14:628 (4) - nc? I think mayb you did these on purpose or something but yeah
  3. 00:48:933 (5) - hey don't fix your blanket
  4. 01:14:237 (1) - clap on tail
  5. 01:19:460 (1) - The pattern would look better here if you moved this slider to x35 y151


[Kalibe]
  1. 01:01:715 (1,2) - This jump is pretty big compared to the rest of the stuff in the kiai. Dunno what you can do about that but it seems kinda out of place if this is the only one.


[Doormat]
  1. 01:05:106 (2) - can you make this less angled cause i don't like it


[Akitoshi]
  1. 00:07:455 (1) - I think if you used a 1/1 rhythm here instead it would be better because this is the only time you use a 2/1 slider for this sound in the entire intro, until the end where you change for variation. I think it's nicer for consistency.
  2. 01:08:759 (2) - okay hella subjective but can you make this slider look more like 01:23:373 (2) this one thanks
  3. corinn's normal


[Janpai]
  1. 00:22:063 (1,2) - Would prefer if the 2 was following the implied direction from 1. Movement like this in an easy, though not as hard because of the gap in rhythm, is still pretty edgy because they're supposed to be the most accessible and therefore the most simple to follow.
  2. 01:27:286 (2) - Are you sure you wanna skip out on the cymbal crash?


nice set i rly like the low diffs
posted
M4M

[General]
I didn't like the way this song is edited. you can think more about reason why original version used twice longer highlight in last one maybe.

[Janpai]
00:26:237 (1,2) - at least make it balanced, i mean blanket
01:07:976 (1) - how about making this slider to head 01:08:759 (2) - , rather than copypaste of slider before?

[Akitoshi]
clear unnecessary green ticks pls

[Doormat]
clear unnecessary green ticks pls

00:34:585 (1,2) - blanket or at least balanced one pls
01:27:416 (3,1) - can improve this circle-slider flow

[Kalibe]
01:10:063 (1,1) - same sound, why different rhythm? lacks consistency here
01:27:547 (4) - finish, and song gives strong symbol. I wonder if it's enough with stacked circle.

[Insane]
00:27:802 (3,1) - covered reverse arrow and not give enough time gap.
00:33:541 (1,1,1) - NC for SV change pls
00:50:237 (1,1,1) - same for here
01:27:547 (4) - finish here but no impact note pattern. need some jump or sth

[Expert]
00:33:541 (1,1,1) - NC
01:10:324 (2,2) - a NC

[Extreme]
01:27:025 (2) - NC

Good luck~
posted
kakushigoto ga
french, don't read

general

  1. 01:33:025 - à partir de là l'offset me semble un peu en retard jsais pas si c'est normal


insane
  1. 00:09:541 (1) - pk pas remove ce reverse est rendre clickable 00:09:933 (2) - comme tu l'as fait à 00:07:846 (2) -
  2. 00:33:541 (1,1,1) - je sais pas si ces changements de sv soient nécessaires, y a pas vraiment de changement dans la musique et on pourrait facilement les misread
  3. 00:57:281 (1,1) - le flow est un peu bizarre, et maladroit je crois, on attend plutôt un flow circulaire comme 00:56:759 (1,1,1) -
  4. 00:57:933 (2) - pk pas delete ça comme tu l'as fait 01:00:020 - 01:02:107 - etc


expert
  1. 00:04:836 (3) - NC?
  2. rip


extreme
  1. 00:02:880 (2,1) - le spacing est bcp trop grand par rapport à 00:03:793 (2,1) - alors que ça devrait être le contraire
  2. 00:07:455 (1) - soft-hitfinish serait great
  3. 00:48:412 (3) - le clap serait cool
  4. 00:34:454 (5) - 00:35:498 (5) - etc - ^same mais soft-hitclap pas drum-hitclap
  5. 01:14:243 - augmente le volume à 62% comme dans la première partie

[]
c'est tout pour moi, gl!!
posted
thx for mods guys checked all of them! and fixed some stuff!!
i'm running out of time atm with school to reply to mods propelly so if you have any concern about something feel free to poke me in game if u see me so I can reply to you propelly to the concern you mentionned.
@gders pls check mods!
posted
fixed almost everything u mentioned guys, thanks really!!!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56694
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 94329
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Yuudachi no Ribbon
TitleUnicode:夕立のりぼん
Artist:Kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Kalibe's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1186057
BeatmapSetID:556174

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.8
SliderMultiplier:1.53
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
141,260.869565217391,3,2,22,32,1,0
923,-125,3,2,22,42,0,0
3662,-100,3,2,22,52,0,0
4054,-111.111111111111,3,2,22,52,0,0
6401,-111.111111111111,3,2,22,52,0,0
7455,260.869565217391,4,2,22,62,1,0
7455,-100,4,2,22,62,0,0
23107,-133.333333333333,4,2,22,62,0,0
24150,-125,4,2,22,62,0,0
33541,-111.111111111111,4,2,22,52,0,0
36672,-125,4,2,22,62,0,0
50237,-111.111111111111,4,2,22,52,0,0
53368,-111.111111111111,4,2,22,52,0,0
56498,-111.111111111111,4,2,22,52,0,0
56694,-111.111111111111,4,2,22,52,0,0
56759,-125,4,2,22,42,0,0
56954,-125,4,2,22,5,0,0
57020,-142.857142857143,4,2,22,42,0,0
57215,-100,4,2,22,5,0,0
57281,-166.666666666667,4,2,22,42,0,0
57476,-100,4,2,22,5,0,0
57541,-100,4,2,22,72,0,1
70063,-100,4,2,22,52,0,1
70259,-100,4,2,22,5,0,1
70324,-100,4,2,22,72,0,1
70520,-100,4,2,22,5,0,1
70585,-100,4,2,22,52,0,1
70781,-100,4,2,22,5,0,1
70846,-100,4,2,22,72,0,1
71041,-100,4,2,22,5,0,1
71107,-100,4,2,22,72,0,1
74243,260.869565217391,4,2,22,52,1,0
74243,-100,4,2,22,52,0,0
86960,-100,4,2,22,5,0,0
87025,-100,4,2,22,52,0,0
89895,-100,4,2,22,52,0,0
90938,-100,4,2,22,52,0,0
93025,-133.333333333333,4,2,22,52,0,0
93938,-100,4,2,22,52,0,0
94329,-100,4,2,22,42,0,0
94982,-100,4,2,22,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 140,115,115
Combo2 : 148,172,199
Combo3 : 242,206,140
Combo4 : 255,113,113

[HitObjects]
48,292,923,6,0,P|96:284|188:268,1,122.4,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,1314,2,0,P|247:293|236:332,2,61.2,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,188,1706,6,0,P|256:228|360:192,1,183.6,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
420,136,2227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,136,2358,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,64,2488,6,0,P|276:40|232:48,1,122.4,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,158,2880,2,0,P|239:162|296:140,1,122.4,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,3271,2,0,B|64:192|144:192|96:280,1,183.6,2|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,158,3793,1,0,1:0:0:0:
178,158,4054,6,0,P|248:204|312:184,1,137.69999579773,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,156,4445,2,0,L|364:296,1,137.69999579773,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
288,372,4836,2,0,P|216:332|152:344,1,137.69999579773,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
84,300,5227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,300,5358,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,244,5488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
59,204,5619,6,0,P|132:191|216:176,1,137.69999579773,4|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,112,6010,2,0,P|212:130|280:144,1,137.69999579773,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
344,224,6401,6,0,P|420:256|480:228,2,137.69999579773,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,180,7184,2,0,P|186:228|176:292,1,103.274996848297,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,316,7455,6,0,B|252:292|228:360|328:332,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,288,7846,2,0,L|284:256,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,180,8237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,241,8368,6,0,P|85:193|125:109,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
212,74,8759,2,0,P|229:124|232:151,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,257,9020,2,0,P|299:208|316:176,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
408,128,9281,2,0,P|423:163|428:200,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,324,9541,6,0,L|200:284,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,9933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,308,10063,2,0,P|16:264|24:228,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
80,156,10324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,264,10454,6,0,P|133:171|144:100,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
69,43,10846,2,0,P|145:71|208:37,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
297,3,11237,1,0,1:0:0:0:
297,3,11368,2,0,L|281:89,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,175,11628,6,0,P|355:146|422:148,1,153,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,12020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,264,12150,2,0,P|353:259|319:246,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,175,12411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,212,12541,6,0,P|132:312|156:364,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,285,12933,2,0,L|254:364,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,242,13194,2,0,L|341:326,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,175,13454,2,0,L|248:255,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,352,13715,6,0,P|41:339|9:299,2,153,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
230,285,14368,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,249,14498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
222,199,14628,6,0,B|141:159|152:222|75:185,1,153,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
0,117,15020,2,0,P|82:108|166:100,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
101,15,15411,1,0,1:0:0:0:
101,15,15541,2,0,P|136:18|183:24,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,77,15802,6,0,B|283:128|283:128|266:174|266:174|275:228,2,153,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
370,45,16454,2,0,L|386:125,1,76.5,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,246,16715,6,0,P|334:209|269:228,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,271,17107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,271,17237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,339,17368,2,0,P|292:352|331:353,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,271,17628,2,0,P|137:273|101:285,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,217,17889,6,0,P|270:113|247:67,2,153,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,271,18541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
123,186,18672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
37,271,18802,6,0,B|140:300|140:300|186:262,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
261,217,19194,2,0,B|341:192|317:261|415:222,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
492,136,19585,1,0,1:0:0:0:
508,222,19715,2,0,P|460:216|436:200,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,19976,6,0,P|427:118|496:112,1,153,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,44,20368,2,0,P|336:50|260:59,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,96,20759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,28,20889,6,0,P|41:129|54:179,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,21281,2,0,P|174:224|214:218,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,21541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,276,21672,1,0,1:0:0:0:
205,343,21802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,232,21933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,316,22063,6,0,P|148:324|216:348,1,153,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,248,22585,2,0,P|371:270|295:275,1,153,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,159,23107,5,8,0:0:0:0:
228,108,23237,2,0,L|204:241,1,114.750004377365,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,23629,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,92,23759,2,0,L|224:225,1,114.750004377365,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,343,24150,6,0,P|280:319|336:330,1,122.4,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,266,24672,2,0,L|109:273,2,61.2,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,204,25063,6,0,P|297:213|356:222,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,279,25454,2,0,P|385:228|417:164,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,101,25846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,101,25976,2,0,P|427:97|397:83,1,61.2,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,22,26237,6,0,P|383:34|318:47,1,122.4,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,94,26759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,94,26889,2,0,L|191:159,1,61.2,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,232,27150,6,0,P|137:219|74:206,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,114,27541,2,0,P|111:104|194:91,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,27933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,120,28063,2,0,L|301:185,1,61.2,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,28324,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,256,28585,2,0,P|216:313|226:381,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,296,28976,2,0,P|323:301|371:313,1,61.2,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,380,29237,6,0,P|432:319|441:258,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,190,29628,2,0,P|427:218|365:202,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,160,30020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,188,30150,2,0,P|201:154|215:113,1,61.2,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,160,30411,6,0,L|273:283,2,122.4,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,76,31063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,76,31194,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,108,31324,6,0,P|168:112|104:76,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,36,31715,2,0,L|48:164,1,122.4,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
66,237,32107,1,0,1:0:0:0:
135,186,32237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,265,32368,1,8,0:0:0:0:
71,350,32498,6,0,P|48:290|68:234,1,122.4,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,170,33020,2,0,P|307:179|353:198,1,122.4,4|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
412,132,33411,1,8,3:0:0:0:
448,232,33541,6,0,P|433:317|423:375,2,137.69999579773,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
274,318,34324,2,0,P|266:280|259:242,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
186,188,34585,6,0,P|107:196|52:162,2,137.69999579773,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
371,130,35368,2,0,P|336:114|294:109,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
207,66,35628,6,0,P|169:141|194:198,1,137.69999579773,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,36020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,36150,2,0,P|268:224|276:189,1,68.8499978988648,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
360,124,36411,2,0,P|367:157|375:191,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
440,316,36672,6,0,P|452:257|468:188,2,122.4,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,371,37454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,371,37585,6,0,P|208:346|153:343,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,374,37976,2,0,P|58:300|72:249,1,122.4,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
121,189,38368,1,0,1:0:0:0:
203,210,38498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,210,38628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,128,38759,6,0,P|159:137|91:146,2,122.4,6|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
309,159,39411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,126,39541,2,0,P|423:131|467:139,1,61.2,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
322,37,39802,6,0,P|315:96|307:174,1,122.4,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,316,40324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,257,40454,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,199,40585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,258,40715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,316,40846,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,196,41107,2,0,P|184:184|120:172,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,125,41498,2,0,P|53:153|52:192,1,61.2,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,272,41759,6,0,B|76:248|60:300|136:276,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,235,42150,2,0,P|289:243|320:286,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,364,42541,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,364,42672,2,0,L|250:294,1,61.2,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,42933,6,0,L|408:360,2,122.4,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,188,43585,2,0,L|310:254,1,61.2,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,128,43846,6,0,P|301:107|245:99,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,141,44237,2,0,B|110:158|110:158|52:138,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,62,44628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,62,44759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,62,45020,6,0,P|157:68|236:78,1,122.4,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,26,45541,2,0,P|372:30|324:39,1,61.2,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,80,45802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,161,45933,6,0,P|370:191|426:175,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,141,46324,2,0,L|477:268,1,122.4,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,356,46715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
379,293,46846,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,293,47107,6,0,P|309:265|259:269,1,122.4,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,365,47628,2,0,P|134:348|157:316,1,61.2,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,362,47889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,267,48020,6,0,P|255:191|239:138,1,122.4,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,85,48411,2,0,P|157:144|152:204,1,122.4,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
69,245,48802,1,0,1:0:0:0:
21,166,48933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
21,166,49063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
61,76,49194,6,0,P|127:54|186:58,1,122.4,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,168,49715,2,0,L|307:238,1,61.2,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
231,275,49976,2,0,L|214:200,1,61.2,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
396,224,50237,6,0,P|381:293|364:364,2,137.69999579773,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
343,37,51020,2,0,P|333:68|323:112,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,51281,6,0,P|223:99|209:32,2,137.69999579773,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
158,228,51933,1,4,3:0:0:0:
158,228,52063,2,0,L|141:153,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
24,140,52324,6,0,L|53:279,1,137.69999579773,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,52715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,328,52846,2,0,P|238:345|275:339,1,68.8499978988648,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,53107,2,0,P|394:267|432:268,1,68.8499978988648,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,53368,6,0,P|180:236|144:208,2,137.69999579773,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,54020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,132,54150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,96,54281,6,0,P|318:104|236:116,1,137.69999579773,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,52,54672,2,0,P|156:87|149:129,1,68.8499978988648,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,54933,2,0,P|163:246|145:217,1,68.8499978988648,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,136,55194,2,0,P|29:153|62:162,1,68.8499978988648,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,116,55454,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,116,55585,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,224,55715,2,0,P|295:216|328:212,1,68.8499978988648,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,55976,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,256,56107,1,0,1:0:0:0:
428,364,56237,2,0,P|388:357|356:352,1,68.8499978988648,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,56498,6,0,L|196:348,1,103.274996848297,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,56759,6,0,P|148:340|100:344,1,91.8,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,356,57020,6,0,P|64:312|52:276,1,80.3249975486756,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,248,57281,6,0,P|28:216|48:172,1,68.8499978988648,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,154,57541,6,0,B|165:122|145:194|240:152,2,153,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,58194,1,0,1:0:0:0:
120,244,58324,2,0,P|162:251|199:257,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
316,160,58585,6,0,P|273:166|239:174,1,76.5,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,316,58846,2,0,P|186:330|256:341,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,296,59237,1,0,1:0:0:0:
440,356,59368,2,0,P|459:311|456:273,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,181,59628,6,0,B|324:146|302:211|237:171,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,116,60020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,24,60150,2,0,P|210:68|220:107,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,60411,2,0,P|109:182|117:145,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,44,60672,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,44,60802,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,123,60933,2,0,P|268:127|212:92,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
144,8,61324,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,77,61454,2,0,P|27:64|-6:60,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,184,61715,6,0,L|176:164,1,153,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,292,62107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,292,62237,2,0,P|132:281|88:272,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,209,62498,2,0,P|299:219|344:229,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
300,372,62759,6,0,P|292:328|284:288,1,76.5,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,232,63020,2,0,P|470:304|460:388,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,320,63411,1,0,1:0:0:0:
380,320,63541,2,0,P|374:278|380:225,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,136,63802,6,0,P|339:154|272:110,2,153,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
500,88,64454,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,1,64585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
351,73,64715,6,0,P|256:74|198:42,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,0,65107,2,0,B|116:48|116:48|100:88|100:88|120:144,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,65498,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,193,65628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,135,65759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,196,65889,6,0,P|24:296|44:348,2,153,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
111,285,66541,1,0,1:0:0:0:
195,218,66672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,316,66802,6,0,L|403:299,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,252,67194,2,0,P|411:266|344:224,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
318,134,67585,1,0,1:0:0:0:
226,156,67715,2,0,P|224:114|242:78,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,127,67976,6,0,P|363:150|304:125,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,68368,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,156,68498,2,0,L|127:235,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,72,68759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,160,68889,6,0,P|11:248|22:317,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
111,269,69281,2,0,B|162:247|162:247|263:271,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
364,324,69672,1,0,1:0:0:0:
364,324,69802,2,0,P|376:288|371:244,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,186,70063,6,0,L|151:160,1,114.75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,155,70324,2,0,P|115:91|151:51,1,114.75,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,44,70585,6,0,L|266:59,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,200,70846,2,0,L|176:180,1,76.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,144,71107,6,0,P|408:228|372:276,1,153,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,180,71498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,280,71628,2,0,P|204:325|211:368,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
375,273,71889,2,0,P|364:318|356:355,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,220,72150,6,0,P|183:183|129:193,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,338,72541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,283,72672,1,0,1:0:0:0:
42,234,72802,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,372,72933,2,0,L|248:356,1,76.5,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,324,73194,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,268,73324,2,0,B|312:236|296:300|228:264,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,73715,5,8,0:0:0:0:
268,201,73846,2,0,P|256:141|296:61,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,108,74243,6,0,P|428:156|356:136,1,153,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,74634,2,0,P|200:35|141:49,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,104,75025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,184,75156,6,0,P|187:196|247:165,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
40,104,75547,2,0,P|-2:191|9:246,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,320,75938,1,0,1:0:0:0:
76,320,76069,2,0,L|168:304,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,220,76329,6,0,B|164:184|172:248|96:212,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,104,76721,2,0,B|135:142|135:142|195:122,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
284,92,77112,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,36,77243,6,0,P|185:48|285:69,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,120,77634,2,0,P|420:109|471:99,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,176,77895,2,0,P|295:208|285:259,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
450,244,78156,2,0,L|362:224,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,348,78416,6,0,P|292:328|360:332,2,153,4|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
123,282,79069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,282,79199,2,0,P|106:317|96:363,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
212,252,79460,6,0,P|204:208|184:168,1,76.5,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,116,79721,2,0,P|158:137|220:95,1,153,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
137,38,80112,1,0,1:0:0:0:
0,129,80243,2,0,L|88:113,1,76.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,60,80503,6,0,P|198:46|128:36,1,153,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,205,81025,2,0,L|110:188,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,81286,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,228,81416,6,0,P|340:264|404:248,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
484,208,81808,2,0,L|452:366,1,153,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
382,287,82199,1,0,1:0:0:0:
296,336,82329,2,0,P|250:326|202:315,1,76.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,236,82590,6,0,B|153:224|153:224|198:238|198:238|258:226,1,153,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,164,82982,2,0,B|253:179|253:179|185:157,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
99,110,83373,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,192,83503,6,0,P|-4:294|18:349,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
87,272,83895,2,0,P|98:307|112:346,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,230,84156,2,0,P|174:195|188:156,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,84416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,216,84547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,84677,6,0,P|279:318|338:356,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,382,85069,2,0,P|406:294|438:231,1,153,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
497,164,85460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,148,85590,6,0,L|240:121,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
329,63,85982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,132,86112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,228,86242,2,0,L|264:212,1,76.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,132,86503,2,0,L|265:120,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,56,86764,6,0,P|362:46|316:36,1,114.75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,20,87025,2,0,P|212:44|136:16,1,153,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
50,58,87416,1,0,1:0:0:0:
72,160,87547,1,12,0:0:0:0:
72,160,87677,6,0,L|227:136,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
300,202,88069,2,0,P|288:243|275:291,1,76.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,332,88329,2,0,P|169:295|159:258,1,76.5,8|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
76,188,88590,1,4,3:0:0:0:
76,188,88851,6,0,P|61:265|47:341,1,153,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,125,89373,2,0,P|265:202|279:278,1,153,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,361,89764,1,0,1:0:0:0:
417,299,89895,5,8,0:0:0:0:
417,299,90025,2,0,P|320:261|267:282,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,360,90417,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,360,90547,2,0,P|188:286|151:220,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,132,90938,6,0,P|92:139|181:149,1,153,4|12,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,71,91460,1,0,1:0:0:0:
269,23,91590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,122,91721,2,0,P|262:159|270:208,1,76.5,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
380,92,91982,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,190,92112,2,0,P|361:227|342:351,1,153,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,197,92504,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,276,92634,2,0,P|132:287|56:300,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,205,93025,5,6,0:0:0:0:
319,332,93286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,72,93547,2,0,L|353:144,2,57.3750021886826,0|0|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,41,93938,6,0,L|457:203,1,153,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,305,94329,1,4,1:0:0:0:
posted
mod reply

Kin wrote:

oui
[Doormat's Hard]

  1. 00:14:107 (2) - dunno if it's intentional, might also be a bit nazi, but the transition between this slider 00:13:715 (1) - & this slider 00:14:107 (2) - . Isn't really the curve of 00:14:107 (2) - ; but mostly a lil zigzag with the current shape. this flow is intentional, there's nothing about this transition that plays awkwardly imo
  2. 00:40:324 (3,4) - 00:48:933 (4) - Maybe use the same mimic as those pattern ? 00:38:237 (3,4) - 00:36:411 (3) - 00:32:237 (4) - . Those kind of mimics are the dominant one in this part, and only those 2 patterns are like this.they have different stresses in music. i think using the same pattern like that repeatedly would make some of those stresses lose the emphasis while making the map repetitive as well, so i'd prefer to keep what i have for pattern variety

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Doormat]

00:05:227 (4,5) - I know you stacked these on 1's head, but consider just lining them up with 3, I think it would look nicer. like you said, it's stacked on 1's head intentionally, so no change
00:50:107 (4,1) - the only other 1/2 jump like this outside of the kiai was to a finish, so it makes me feel like this one doesn't fit good point, changed rhythm here to match the next few bars

nice work

Logic Agent wrote:

[Doormat]
  1. 01:05:106 (2) - can you make this less angled cause i don't like it this was intended to be the same slider shape as 01:04:715 (1) - so i changed the shapes altogether to something more curved and less angular


thanks for the mods~

https://drmt.s-ul.eu/Xnr1EZsR

edit: forgot to reply to left
left

Left wrote:

M4M
[Doormat]
clear unnecessary green ticks pls sure

00:34:585 (1,2) - blanket or at least balanced one pls oops fixed
01:27:416 (3,1) - can improve this circle-slider flow i think flow here is fine. same sound as 01:27:025 (2) - so that's why i used same slider shape and direction for the emphasis here


thanks for the mods~

https://drmt.s-ul.eu/xIaQGlOw
posted

Kin wrote:

[Janpai's Easy]

  1. 00:19:976 - 00:11:628 - missing finish :arrow:applied
  2. except those missing finish, I sometimes feel like, the Easy diff gap is really close to the Normal (timeline) :arrow:The beatmap creator asked me to make one even though normal looks easy tho


that's a nice & clean mapset here!
good luck!

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Janpai]

Why not map intro? :arrow:I just don't feel mapping the intro

00:13:715 (3) - missing NC :arrow:okay
00:26:759 (2) - move the tail sliderpoint up like 1 grid to fix the blanket lol :arrow:fixed

Some of the sliders don't really have sounds on the heads, which leads me to belive there's better rhythm you can choose. For example, 00:08:498 (2)'s head has no important sound on it compared to nearby white ticks. I think it's better if you follow a rhythm similar to what Akitoshi does for this intro part, by making 00:08:237 - clickable (so this - http://imgur.com/a/gBsHs) this is basically true up until the first bookmark :arrow:I get your point but I don't want to copy Akitoshi's rhythm, if you will take a look on both diffs, we have the same mapping (talking about the 1/1 gap of objects, not the rhythm usage) so this is for the sake of diversity

Logic Agent wrote:

[Janpai]
  1. 00:22:063 (1,2) - Would prefer if the 2 was following the implied direction from 1. Movement like this in an easy, though not as hard because of the gap in rhythm, is still pretty edgy because they're supposed to be the most accessible and therefore the most simple to follow. :arrow:I don't find it really edgy tbh, players have enough time to read the objects.
  2. 01:27:286 (2) - Are you sure you wanna skip out on the cymbal crash? :arrow:I don't really get what you mean here xd


nice set i rly like the low diffs

Left wrote:

M4M

[Janpai]
00:26:237 (1,2) - at least make it balanced, i mean blanket :arrow:fixed from the last mod
01:07:976 (1) - how about making this slider to head 01:08:759 (2) - , rather than copypaste of slider before? :arrow:did sth
Btw feel free to delete my diff if it'll be a nuisance in the ranking because it might be a problem that easy and normal have the same rhythm density and do a NHIXX spread instead.
Thank you so much modders!
kakushigoto
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56694
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 24150,94329
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Yuudachi no Ribbon
TitleUnicode:夕立のりぼん
Artist:Kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:Sotarks
Version:Janpai's Easy
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:1184106
BeatmapSetID:556174

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.6
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
141,260.869565217391,3,2,22,40,1,0
7455,260.869565217391,4,2,22,70,1,0
57541,-100,4,2,22,80,0,1
74243,260.869565217391,4,2,22,70,1,0
74243,-100,4,2,22,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 140,115,115
Combo2 : 148,172,199
Combo3 : 242,206,140
Combo4 : 255,113,113

[HitObjects]
131,117,7455,6,0,P|79:101|19:129,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,173,8498,2,0,P|276:170|360:162,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,110,9281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
493,168,9541,6,0,P|520:220|507:277,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,231,10585,2,0,B|320:276|320:192|196:232,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,302,11628,6,0,P|117:273|117:194,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,351,12672,2,0,B|298:332|298:332|365:343|365:343|455:321,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,247,13715,6,0,P|502:206|485:164,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,118,14237,2,0,L|433:-1,2,120,2|6|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,172,15281,2,0,L|260:168,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,168,15802,6,0,B|164:121|164:121|177:47,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,247,16846,2,0,P|185:316|98:337,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,293,17628,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,209,17889,6,0,L|51:84,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,258,18933,2,0,B|192:271|192:271|238:250|238:250|294:279|376:241,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,207,19976,6,0,P|448:244|460:329,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,122,21020,2,0,P|331:49|218:107,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,166,22063,6,0,P|115:217|36:205,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,325,23107,2,0,P|219:274|298:286,1,160,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,214,24150,6,0,P|458:174|440:138,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,98,24672,2,0,P|406:56|466:53,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,169,25715,2,0,L|230:160,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,88,26237,6,0,L|98:96,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,141,26759,2,0,P|10:107|48:24,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,200,27802,2,0,P|92:233|73:284,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,346,28324,6,0,P|169:332|208:338,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,358,28846,2,0,P|332:365|402:316,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,273,29889,2,0,P|269:234|276:187,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,124,30411,6,0,L|411:134,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,57,31194,2,0,P|216:36|121:87,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,162,31976,2,0,L|116:242,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,318,32498,6,0,B|219:301|219:301|321:315,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,348,33281,1,4,0:3:0:0:
468,300,33541,2,0,P|481:274|420:172,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,140,34324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,202,34585,6,0,P|239:210|185:190,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,157,35107,2,0,P|111:118|119:79,1,79.9999999999999,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
195,34,35628,2,0,L|365:32,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,28,36411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,107,36672,6,0,P|488:149|495:196,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,226,37194,2,0,P|355:221|304:270,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,288,38237,2,0,P|479:329|454:375,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,371,38759,6,0,P|296:364|199:364,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,364,39541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,341,39802,2,0,P|24:285|84:202,1,160,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,160,40585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,214,40846,6,0,P|261:216|307:216,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,179,41368,2,0,P|426:163|504:190,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,129,42411,2,0,L|293:40,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,50,42933,6,0,L|192:128,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,201,43454,2,0,B|96:187|96:187|17:199,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,259,44498,2,0,P|248:258|297:228,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,186,45020,6,0,P|371:150|372:110,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,51,45541,2,0,B|264:57|264:57|231:46|231:46|180:54,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,23,46585,2,0,P|418:21|474:50,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,127,47107,6,0,P|418:129|362:100,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
506,191,47889,2,0,P|509:246|506:356,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,355,48672,2,0,P|391:349|332:347,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,352,49194,6,0,P|200:368|104:312,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,246,49976,1,4,0:3:0:0:
19,168,50237,2,0,B|100:134|100:196|189:156,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,104,51020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,37,51281,6,0,P|328:23|452:74,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,132,52063,1,4,0:3:0:0:
450,210,52324,2,0,B|404:232|404:232|287:226,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,183,53107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
155,118,53368,6,0,P|133:151|130:191,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,280,53889,2,0,P|82:267|47:214,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,282,54933,2,0,L|315:278,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55454,12,12,56498,0:0:0:0:
60,308,57541,6,0,P|96:299|149:314,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,346,58063,2,0,P|252:355|305:340,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,58585,2,0,P|377:234|400:141,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,73,59368,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,26,59628,6,0,P|325:8|231:59,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,123,60411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
105,81,60672,2,0,L|21:78,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,166,61194,2,0,L|106:169,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,212,61715,6,0,B|235:205|235:205|276:220|276:220|349:210,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,157,62498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,73,62759,2,0,P|338:60|278:65,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,102,63281,2,0,L|136:99,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,63802,6,0,B|35:61|35:61|42:14,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,172,64585,2,0,B|109:236|109:236|93:274|93:274|106:335,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,361,65368,2,0,L|271:346,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,292,65889,6,0,L|411:305,2,79.9999999999999,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,225,66672,2,0,P|240:203|132:236,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,267,67454,2,0,P|36:221|28:173,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,111,67976,6,0,L|41:36,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,160,68759,2,0,P|184:127|291:144,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,212,69541,2,0,L|326:301,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,300,70063,6,0,L|419:220,1,79.9999999999999,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,157,70585,2,0,L|476:77,1,79.9999999999999,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,34,71107,2,0,P|352:28|310:48,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,116,71889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,158,72150,6,0,P|192:202|270:254,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,343,73194,2,0,P|199:334|121:259,1,160,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,98,74243,6,0,L|22:228,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,43,75286,2,0,B|193:30|193:30|284:46,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,92,76069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,161,76329,6,0,P|427:125|422:49,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,205,77373,2,0,B|274:214|230:184|230:184|256:275|207:332,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,356,78416,6,0,P|98:351|57:313,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,248,78938,2,0,P|27:211|65:170,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,124,79460,2,0,L|118:34,2,79.9999999999999,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,179,80243,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,264,80503,6,0,P|231:256|273:159,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,93,81286,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,45,81547,2,0,B|389:31|389:31|474:49,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,127,82329,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,207,82590,6,0,P|485:266|494:337,2,120,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,154,83634,2,0,P|359:130|253:177,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,231,84416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,180,84677,6,0,L|140:54,2,120,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,233,85721,2,0,P|12:264|120:324,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,285,86764,6,0,L|268:280,1,79.9999999999999,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,233,87286,2,0,P|358:282|329:346,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,167,88329,2,0,P|244:156|198:177,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
124,196,88851,6,0,L|103:37,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,188,89895,2,0,L|33:347,1,160,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,327,90938,6,0,L|300:317,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,269,91460,2,0,L|453:279,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,216,91982,2,0,P|496:152|403:120,1,160,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93025,12,4,94329,0:0:0:0:
posted
It's OK janpai, it's hard anyway to have a different rythmn on this bpm ans especially this song, the fact that your diff is easier is pretty cool si lets make it like that don't worry.
Please sign in to reply.