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Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size)

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SiU_LeAf
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SiU_LeAf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月5日 at 上午 09:33:36

Artist: Harada Hitomi
Title: Kyuuai Real (TV Size)
Source: Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi
Tags: KingsAL2
BPM: 163
Filesize: 2575kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alarmable (5 stars, 309 notes)
  2. Hard (4.53 stars, 181 notes)
  3. Normal (2.77 stars, 107 notes)
Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd Beatmap.

原田ひとみ - 求愛リアル

[Alarmable] is made by KingsAL2

I change the background. Please re-download if you downloaded this beatmap before July 5.
Last edited by SiU_LeAf , edited 11 times in total.
aabc271
osu! Alumni
1,334 posts
Joined August 2009
aabc271
Try BPM 163.000, offset 1897 ?
Remember to resnap all notes after changing timing
Star~ :)
No need to kds this post~
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

aabc271 wrote:

Try BPM 163.000, offset 1897 ?
Remember to resnap all notes after changing timing
Star~ :)
No need to kds this post~
Thank you~
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
黑兔！！
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

karenying wrote:

黑兔！！
沒錯, 就是曾幾何時的天魔黑兔=v=
spboxer3
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spboxer3
[Noraml]
最後可以加個spin到01:34:438 - 結束

[Hard]
00:14:560 (4) - 不要用finish阿 可以繼續用whistle效果也是不錯
01:05:910 (4) - 正方形有點偏掉了
同Normal最後可以加個spin到01:34:438 - 結束

[Alarmable]
00:08:487 (1,2,3,4) - 沒有排到一直線上...
我在想01:03:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星形嗎0.0?如果是的話就有點變形了

good map
star~~
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

spboxer3 wrote:

[Noraml]
最後可以加個spin到01:34:438 - 結束

這個小葉考慮一下, 其實小葉不太想加上(汗

[Hard]
00:14:560 (4) - 不要用finish阿 可以繼續用whistle效果也是不錯　　　fixed
01:05:910 (4) - 正方形有點偏掉了　　　好眼力, fixed
同Normal最後可以加個spin到01:34:438 - 結束

[Alarmable]
00:08:487 (1,2,3,4) - 沒有排到一直線上...
我在想01:03:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - 星形嗎0.0?如果是的話就有點變形了

[Alarmable]留給AL2自已看>_<

good map
star~~
Thanks for modding
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
先Star~
小葉是Ero game魔神

點解咁快有黑兔op 雖然蘿球都係
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

KanaRin wrote:

先Star~
小葉是Ero game魔神
小葉何來Ero game魔神了!!!!!!
Ero Game啥的最討厭了 >:(
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
原来的Ero的啊（¯﹃¯）
这图的背景好纠结啊～我也没找到合适的呢。╮（￣▽￣）╭
NOTICE：把mp3文件切割一下，后面空白的太多了！
no kd 8-)
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

xykbear wrote:

原来的Ero的啊（¯﹃¯）
这图的背景好纠结啊～我也没找到合适的呢。╮（￣▽￣）╭
NOTICE：把mp3文件切割一下，后面空白的太多了！
no kd 8-)
喵嘻嘻, 小葉也沒找到, 一直想換了w
後面空白的部分在下次上載再處理
以上！
wmfchris
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wmfchris
hentai baka leaf

[general]
make the audio lead-in unique (500)
tag al2e10
The colour differenece between two combo colour is not significant. Try another combo 2 colour?
cut the unmapped part

[baka al2]
delete duplicated timingline 6002
00:02:413 (5,1) - NC on (5), remove NC on (1), consider to NC on next (6)
00:06:094 (5) - NC
00:11:984 (1~9) - soft, gradually louder?
00:14:744 (1) - remove NC?
00:16:033 (2,4,6) - remove whislte on (2), whislte on beginning (4), ending of (6,7)?
00:47:873 (1~5) - make them in equal spacing
00:58:916 (1) - finish at beginning
01:01:861 (6,7,8) - make them to have the same curvature?, i.e., http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/104645
01:08:119 (9,10,11) - spacing
01:14:376 - use a pattern of xxx x xxxxx is better

Al2 check your spacing orz

[Hard]
00:02:413 (3) - 1/2 forward
00:21:186 (1,3) - remove NC on (1), NC on (3)
00:28:180 (1) - make this parallel to last (3)?
01:03:149 (1,2,3) - does not look good orz
01:14:560 (s) - mute
01:21:86 (1,5,9) - clap every 4 beats

[Normal] -> use soft hitsound like the previous diffs
00:00:941 (1,2) - interchange (1) and (2)
00:10:511 (4) - slider starts here (1 beat)

長 實 直slider有時頗為礙眼 其他的不錯

star
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

wmfchris wrote:

hentai baka leaf

[general]
make the audio lead-in unique (500)
tag al2e10
The colour differenece between two combo colour is not significant. Try another combo 2 colour?
cut the unmapped part

[Hard]
00:02:413 (3) - 1/2 forward　　　　　不太喜歡這樣改。
00:21:186 (1,3) - remove NC on (1), NC on (3)　　　　　fixed
00:28:180 (1) - make this parallel to last (3)?　　　　　fixed
01:03:149 (1,2,3) - does not look good orz　　　　　fixed(?)
01:14:560 (s) - mute　　　　　不要, 感覺不好
01:21:86 (1,5,9) - clap every 4 beats　　　　　不要, 感覺不好

[Normal] -> use soft hitsound like the previous diffs　　　　　fixed(?)
00:00:941 (1,2) - interchange (1) and (2)　　　　　fixed
00:10:511 (4) - slider starts here (1 beat)　　　　　fixed

長 實 直slider有時頗為礙眼 其他的不錯

不太懂...

star
Thanks for modding!
話說為啥是英文啊!! T^T
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al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
小葉要努力呀, 不看英文怎rank?

fixed, 音效加強板!

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
IRC modded +STAR (拍肩

抱著謎之H信念前進吧!!
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

Vikon wrote:

IRC modded +STAR (拍肩

抱著謎之H信念前進吧!!
都說了, H啥的小葉才不知道!! 別散播謠言!!
小葉沒看過天魔黑兔，沒看過小說，沒看過漫畫
只是看過7月新番的介紹和宣傳的PV啊!!!
al2e10
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al2e10
=0

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu
chungskale
120 posts
Joined December 2009
chungskale
熊來了 :lol: 拿星星來了 :lol:
mod不在行) 只建議~多是提議100經常出現的地方~

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:928 (4,5) - ugly stacking. 建議分開~
  2. 00:42:720 (1) - same as hard. 建議放在00:42:536 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟 00:03:149 (1,2,3,4,5) 排
  2. 00:42:720 (1) - 放在這裡00:42:536 -
  3. 00:47:137 (7) - 意義不明的慢slider :oops:
  4. 00:54:867 - 00:55:603 - 00:56:339 - +note
  5. 00:59:652 (1) - - start at 00:59:468 -
  6. 01:05:910 (4) - 建議如下圖~(4)的尾clap (5)finish:
    SPOILER
  7. 01:27:996 (2) - 可以刪掉
[Alarmable]
  1. 有d位忽然細聲得太多, 之後大聲返太快了~ e.g. 00:34:438 -
  2. 01:24:683 - remove clap
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
Thanks for mod request :P
Bakaleaf
Btw.Some modding info.

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Let's go.

[Normal]

00:03:149 (3) - Left 1 gird as well.
00:06:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:08:671 (4) - Yep. The New combo should be here.
00:23:027 (3) - In fact , I don't suggest any SV changing at the lowest diff in a mapset. And it's not been recommended. Add a Spinner here?
00:54:499 (6,7) - Hidden notes are a bit hard for new players >~< Well, but it's still fine. Just up to you.
01:06:278 (6,7) - ^
01:08:855 (3,4) - ^
01:11:616 (2,3) - Don't overlap here. Suggestion for this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105307

Ok. That's all for Normal diff. Good enough.

[Hard]

HP Drain + 1

00:35:542 (T) - Why using speed down here? 1.0x as well.
00:54:131 (4) - I guess it shouldn't be speed down. Long slider is also ok.
01:08:855 (4) - New combo here.
01:11:800 (3) - Umm, overlap on 01:11:616 (2) - ? And suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105309

Seems fine o.o

[Alarmable]

Add Kiai Time?
HP Drain + 1 ? More score XD.

00:17:137 (6) - New Combo?
00:32:045 (5) - Overlap at 00:32:229 (6) - ? to be smooth.
00:32:781 (7) - New Combo.
00:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105312 more fun to play XD
00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.

Good job! Like this diff.

Sounds like 水樹 (?) ww
Good luck XD
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

KanaRin wrote:

Thanks for mod request :P
Bakaleaf
Btw.Some modding info.

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Let's go.

[Normal]

00:03:149 (3) - Left 1 gird as well.　　　　fixed
00:06:830 (1) - Remove New Combo.　　　　fixed
00:08:671 (4) - Yep. The New combo should be here.　　　　fixed
00:23:027 (3) - In fact , I don't suggest any SV changing at the lowest diff in a mapset. And it's not been recommended. Add a Spinner here?　　　　改為不轉速也不用Spinner
00:54:499 (6,7) - Hidden notes are a bit hard for new players >~< Well, but it's still fine. Just up to you.
01:06:278 (6,7) - ^
01:08:855 (3,4) - ^
01:11:616 (2,3) - Don't overlap here. Suggestion for this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105307
fixed

Ok. That's all for Normal diff. Good enough.

[Hard]

HP Drain + 1　　　　fixed

00:35:542 (T) - Why using speed down here? 1.0x as well.
小葉感覺用0.5x比較配合那首歌
00:54:131 (4) - I guess it shouldn't be speed down. Long slider is also ok.
同上
01:08:855 (4) - New combo here.　　　　fixed
01:11:800 (3) - Umm, overlap on 01:11:616 (2) - ? And suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105309
fixed

Seems fine o.o

[Alarmable]

Add Kiai Time?
HP Drain + 1 ? More score XD.

00:17:137 (6) - New Combo?
00:32:045 (5) - Overlap at 00:32:229 (6) - ? to be smooth.
00:32:781 (7) - New Combo.
00:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105312 more fun to play XD
00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.

Good job! Like this diff.

Sounds like 水樹 (?) ww
Good luck XD
Thanks for modding, 小葉一開始也以為是奈奈唱
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
都改好意見接納 without 00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.
這個不是太重要

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu
SiU_LeAf
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

KingsAL2 wrote:

都改好意見接納 without 00:56:892 (x) - Add a note here? sounds better.
這個不是太重要
uploaded.
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

chungskale wrote:

熊來了 :lol: 拿星星來了 :lol:
mod不在行) 只建議~多是提議100經常出現的地方~

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:928 (4,5) - ugly stacking. 建議分開~ 分開放了=v=
  2. 00:42:720 (1) - same as hard. 建議放在00:42:536 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟 00:03:149 (1,2,3,4,5) 排
  2. 00:42:720 (1) - 放在這裡00:42:536 -
  3. 00:47:137 (7) - 意義不明的慢slider :oops:
  4. 00:54:867 - 00:55:603 - 00:56:339 - +note
  5. 00:59:652 (1) - - start at 00:59:468 -
  6. 01:05:910 (4) - 建議如下圖~(4)的尾clap (5)finish:
    SPOILER
  7. 01:27:996 (2) - 可以刪掉
[Alarmable]
  1. 有d位忽然細聲得太多, 之後大聲返太快了~ e.g. 00:34:438 -
  2. 01:24:683 - remove clap
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
比左20個star, 唔rank你同我係osu消失 =]
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
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Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

KingsAL2 wrote:

比左20個star, 唔rank你同我係osu消失 =]
哇！！這是恐嚇的說！！！
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
是滴
SPOILER
[attachment=0:5aa7d]jNb0O.jpg[/attachment:5aa7d]
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,233 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Wow
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
my mod~~

[General]
why has [Alarmable] no kiai-times?

[Normal]
good ^^

[Hard]
good ^^

[Alarmable]
see [General] ^^

hmm, not very much xDD thank you that i was allowed to mod this ^^ i like that song °o°
star and good luck ~(^.^)~
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

karenying wrote:

是滴
SPOILER
[attachment=0:a5e7e]jNb0O.jpg[/attachment:a5e7e]
小盈小盈小盈小盈小盈小盈小盈小盈>_<
感謝小盈的說~ ^^

kurohana wrote:

my mod~~

[General]
why has [Alarmable] no kiai-times?

[Normal]
good ^^

[Hard]
good ^^

[Alarmable]
see [General] ^^

hmm, not very much xDD thank you that i was allowed to mod this ^^ i like that song °o°
star and good luck ~(^.^)~
Thanks for modding. ^^
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
上面那张大小不对,sorry小叶><
SPOILER

Alarmable
排的挺好 打了一次觉得很爽 音效也不错 就是有点太大声的 挺傷耳 下次考虑一下音量问题
00:00:941 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - soft&normal转换的效果不太好听 试试改一下？
00:21:922 (2,3,1) - 3个音量差距太遠了 略违和 建議30-40-55 这样较顺耳
00:25:235 (1) - 这边就是加过头了 吓死姐 建議80左右
00:31:493 (1,2,3) - 这连 节奏违和,建議这样

00:37:751 - 还是加过头
00:39:223 - ^
00:38:487 (1) - newcombo maybe
00:41:247 (1) - 80~90%? 吓死
00:42:168 (4) - ^
00:43:640 (9) - ^
00:45:112 (6) - ^
00:48:793 (1) - 违和,不适合x0.5 建議用x1.0(要是我的話这slider会x1.2 lol
00:48:793 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这段太大声,吵,改80%左右?

加油加油~！

SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

karenying wrote:

上面那张大小不对,sorry小叶><
SPOILER
[attachment=1:67e29]Newbg.jpg[/attachment:67e29]

加油加油~！
嘻嘻, 別在意, 其實小葉把它上下各減少5像索, 變成4比3了w
不過現在再上載上去>_<
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
=3=

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu
PotsBreaker
129 posts
Joined January 2011
PotsBreaker
star~.
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

KingsAL2 wrote:

=3=
uploaded
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

00:36:646 (1) - Remove new combo
00:37:014 (4) - Add new combo
00:59:652 (1) - I don't like this spinner,map here

[Alarmable]

01:08:119 (9) - New combo

Star~
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Normal]

Fine

[Hard]

00:36:646 (1) - Remove new combo　　　　fixed
00:37:014 (4) - Add new combo　　　　fixed
00:59:652 (1) - I don't like this spinner,map here　　　　fixed

[Alarmable]

01:08:119 (9) - New combo

Star~
Thanks for modding.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
I should really be modding other maps first...

[Normal]
Having stacks underneath the slider is a bit hard for people to play...Just saying.

[Hard]
00:08:671 (3,1) - Maybe a big jump? Not sure.

[Alarmable]
00:45:665 (1,2,3,4) - That's pretty cheap.

Nothing really else, pretty alright. Clean at least.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
- No video?
- Audio Lead-In time on Hard is different from the rest

For Normal and Hard, add a spinner at 01:28:640 - and finish it 01:34:438 - here. Also add an inherited timing section were the spinner ends with 5% volume
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Lastly,~

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

Lilac wrote:

I should really be modding other maps first...

[Normal]
Having stacks underneath the slider is a bit hard for people to play...Just saying.

[Hard]
00:08:671 (3,1) - Maybe a big jump? Not sure.　　　　Fixed(?)

[Alarmable]
00:45:665 (1,2,3,4) - That's pretty cheap.

Nothing really else, pretty alright. Clean at least.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- No video?　　　　I don't like the video. ~"~
- Audio Lead-In time on Hard is different from the rest　　　　Fixed

For Normal and Hard, add a spinner at 01:28:640 - and finish it 01:34:438 - here. Also add an inherited timing section were the spinner ends with 5% volume　　　　Fixed
Thanks for modding.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Also, I've been told for you to watch for the slow downs that you placed in Hard since the sliderticks are to show whether they are slow or not and that one of the sliders had no slider ticks which is kinda bad...

The more there are, the slow it is...but the sliders are too short to notice... Sadly, I'm not confident enough to bubble it. D: Sorry.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8

Lilac wrote:

Sadly, I'm not confident enough to bubble it. D: Sorry.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
作為一個成熟和有效rank的做法

- Timing section
00:59:100 Remove
01:00:573 ^
- Hard
00:30:757 Remove
00:30:941 ^
00:35:542 ^
00:36:646 ^
00:47:137 ^
00:47:505 ^
00:47:689 ^
00:54:131 ^
00:54:499 ^
00:54:683 ^
00:59:100 ^
01:00:573 ^
01:06:278 ^
01:06:462 ^
01:25:603 ^
01:25:787 ^
01:26:708 ^
01:27:444 ^
01:27:812 ^
01:28:364 ^
01:34:438 轉為 01:28:732

Combo mod
00:20:082 (2) - 減小這些不必要的怪slider
00:22:843 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 用其他方法吧。好怪
00:31:861 (2) - 為快rank一點的map, 減小怪怪slider吧
00:41:247 (2) - ^
01:15:297 (1) - ^
01:27:076 (1) - ^
00:50:266 (6-2nd) - Remove clap

- So far ~
Good luck to me and you. ~.~
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf
不太會英文所以打中文去<_<

normal
改成沒在note在slider尾端下面

hard
刪掉全部0.5x
之類的各樣東西

以上
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Hard
Make the kiai time in this dificulty the same as in [Normal] or the other way around.

Alarmable
Add kiai time to this difficulty and make sure it's the same as in the two other difficulties

Fix it, contact me, bubble in the pocket.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10

Lesjuh wrote:

Hard
Make the kiai time in this dificulty the same as in [Normal] or the other way around.

Alarmable
Add kiai time to this difficulty and make sure it's the same as in the two other difficulties

Fix it, contact me, bubble in the pocket.
Thank you so much. ~

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Alarmable].osu

Download: Harada Hitomi - Kyuuai Real (TV Size) (SiU_LeAf) [Hard].osu
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf
Thanks.:)
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Bubbled!
SiU_LeAf
116 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
SiU_LeAf

Lesjuh wrote:

Bubbled!
Thanks for bubbled!!>_<
It is my first bubbled Beatmap.
I am very happy T^T

--------------還是打中文好~(汗--------------

十分感謝泡泡!!>_<
這張是小葉第1張泡泡MAP,
感動的說 T^T
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Normal]

00:45:665 (1) - This slider sounds awkward starting here on 1/2. Try making it 1/2 shorter and move it 1/2 later.

[Alarmable]

The 85 ~ 100% Volume sections are a bit much to hear with. Try to tone it down a bit so it doesn't explode in loudness for those with headphones.

Once those are fixed, just let me know to recheck.
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