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The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus - False Pretense

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Topic Starter
KanaRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月6日 at 14:11:59

Artist: The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus
Title: False Pretense
Tags: Kiiwa Alace aesopl19193
BPM: 155
Filesize: 3861kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alace's Taiko (4.94 stars, 659 notes)
  2. Kana (5 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Kiiwa (4.87 stars, 301 notes)
  4. Normal (2.91 stars, 193 notes)
Download: The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus - False Pretense
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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18th Beatmap.
The Red Jumpsuit Apparatus - False Pretense

Hope you can enjoy it <3

Mapset
[Normal] - By aesopl19193
[Taiko Oni] - By Alace
[Hard] - By Kiiwa
[Insane] - By me
swish
1 ~.~
PeaChick
baka
JoJo
= =b
aabc271
Star~ :)
S o r d a
aho!!

500post>w<
Hinacle
ヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ
Takos
:P
lkp
IRC Modded :)
Madoka
star ! kana ;)
Kotone
8-)
咦 明明沒射kd star的
KSHR
(・∀・)
-Soba-
I like it :c
aesopl19193
:roll:
Kiiwa
yo
go3001
Wow impressive map. Star~
Alace
Kyonko Hizara
:)
aesopl19193
Kotone
all
goodbyeosb

Normal
01:01:150 (2,1) - 跳你妹 這spacing跟01:02:311 (3,1) - 一樣了 跳也跳得有分寸點魂淡ass

Kana
01:14:892 (4) - finish

沒能挑到什么 no kdlol
Topic Starter
KanaRin

karenying wrote:

all
goodbyeosb

Normal
01:01:150 (2,1) - 跳你妹 這spacing跟01:02:311 (3,1) - 一樣了 跳也跳得有分寸點魂淡ass

Kana
01:14:892 (4) - finish

沒能挑到什么 no kd
ALL Fixed~ :oops:
KSHR
modding ;)


General
goodbye osb again ww


Normal
SPOILER
00:00:570 (1) - 1grid left
00:43:924 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:12:569 (3) - & 01:13:344 (1) - 1grid right
01:21:086 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:25:731 (1) - add finish ?
01:49:150 (2,4) - add clap
01:50:311 (1) - add finish ?
02:00:569 (5) - 1grid up
02:14:311 (3) - ^
02:18:569 (5,2,3,4) - 1grid right

Kiiwa
SPOILER
AR : -1 (because Kana's dif which is more difficult than this dif is 8)

00:23:795 (1) - add clap at end
00:24:376 (2) - remove finish and add clap at beginning
00:24:763 (1) - ^
00:25:731 (3) - add clap at beginning ?
00:48:957 (T) - useless section
00:50:118 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:00:957 (3) - remove finish and add clap at beginning same as 00:23:795 (1)
01:02:311 (1) - remove clao and add finish at beginning
01:03:279 (3) - add clap at beginning ? (if you dont add clap at 00:25:731 (3)'s beginning, please ignore this suggestion)
01:14:892 (T) - volume:60%
01:27:279 (1) - add finish
02:10:634 (1) - add finish at beginning
02:16:828 (3) - ^
02:21:279 (1) - end at 02:23:021 please

Kana
SPOILER
00:36:182 (1) - I dont need finish here imo
00:39:279 (1) - this slider is hidden by HP bar. so I think this isnt good http://puu.sh/2Jua
00:43:924 (5) - add finish at beginning
00:50:118 (1) - add finish
01:02:311 (1) - ^
01:21:086 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:57:569 (T) - N:C1 --> N

most of my modding are suggestions, b/c I couldn't find important things
if you think that this suggesution doesnt need, please ignore it
I wish that this modding is useful for you~
this map is really nice!! fight~ :)
Topic Starter
KanaRin

KSHR wrote:

modding ;)


General
goodbye osb again ww


Normal
SPOILER
00:00:570 (1) - 1grid left
00:43:924 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:12:569 (3) - & 01:13:344 (1) - 1grid right
01:21:086 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:25:731 (1) - add finish ?
01:49:150 (2,4) - add clap
01:50:311 (1) - add finish ?
02:00:569 (5) - 1grid up
02:14:311 (3) - ^
02:18:569 (5,2,3,4) - 1grid right

Kiiwa
SPOILER
AR : -1 (because Kana's dif which is more difficult than this dif is 8)

00:23:795 (1) - add clap at end
00:24:376 (2) - remove finish and add clap at beginning
00:24:763 (1) - ^
00:25:731 (3) - add clap at beginning ?
00:48:957 (T) - useless section
00:50:118 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:00:957 (3) - remove finish and add clap at beginning same as 00:23:795 (1)
01:02:311 (1) - remove clao and add finish at beginning
01:03:279 (3) - add clap at beginning ? (if you dont add clap at 00:25:731 (3)'s beginning, please ignore this suggestion)
01:14:892 (T) - volume:60%
01:27:279 (1) - add finish
02:10:634 (1) - add finish at beginning
02:16:828 (3) - ^
02:21:279 (1) - end at 02:23:021 please

Kana
SPOILER
00:36:182 (1) - I dont need finish here imo
00:39:279 (1) - this slider is hidden by HP bar. so I think this isnt good http://puu.sh/2Jua
00:43:924 (5) - add finish at beginning
00:50:118 (1) - add finish
01:02:311 (1) - ^
01:21:086 (1) - add finish at beginning
01:57:569 (T) - N:C1 --> N
Fixed Some~ Thz for modding>a<
Regou
:)
Beren
Sekai
:P
kanpakyin
As per your request:

[General]
  1. Unify the started point?so all difficulty should start at 00:00:570,then unify the lead-in.
  2. Remove the "Letterbox during break"?
  3. IMO,this is not a good difficulty spread,you can see this map is a N I I (I) ,make a easy diff if you can.
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:118(x)-Add a note here to consistent the play flow?
    00:36:182(1.2.1)-Some combo stuff here: Remove new combo on (1)- then make a new combo on (2)- and Remove the new combo on (1)-(Kiai time).
  2. 00:47:021(x)-This part is not appropriate to put a spinner,you can hear the vocal still singing here,so please map this part.
  3. 01:22:634(1.2)-Remove this new combo to consistent your combo,just like your previous combo.
  4. 01:24:957(3)-Reduce 1/2 of this slider,then it can make the newbie have more time to catch the spinner.
  5. 01:52:247(x)-I think you should map this break due to you have already put a long break as previous time.
  6. 02:08:892(2)-Hum..maybe make it like this?
  7. 02:13:731(2.3.4.5)-Please make this square more regular?
[Kiiwa]
  1. 00:23:408(3)-I can't find a reason why you need to jump here.
  2. 00:48:376(x)-You should add a note here because the vocal is depress a semitone.
  3. 01:11:795~01:14:505(1~3)-Here is extremely confused,most of the notes will be hidden by the skin element,alos this pattern is more difficult then overall.
  4. 01:27:279(1)-Remove this new combo,seems it's unnecessary thought.
  5. 01:40:440(3)-I don't know this slider is Rankable or not,but it's really dangerous!Better to change it.
I see some copy paste here :<Well seem I'm misunderstand you,I'm saying a sorry here.. (However I can saw you use a same pattern many time,maybe just change some of them?)

[Alace]
  1. 00:23:795(29)-A kat here?
  2. 00:36:182(60~66)-Here has too many big notes,It's more difficult then overall,you better to remove some or change it to general notes.
  3. 00:37:731(Kiai time)I'm just wondering why the kiai time is easyer then overall?Kiai time is a high tide part,so it should be more difficult?
  4. 01:35:215(8~14)-Try this pattern : dkdkkkkd
    Rating:(for reference only)
  5. Rhythm:4/5
  6. Patterns:4/5
  7. Total:8/10
[Kana]
  1. 00:23:795(7.8)-Try to make a jump here?It might make more fun when playing.byw,(7.8)-is two accent point,so it doesn't matter if you put a jump here.
  2. 00:35:021(1-6)-This jump is quite awkward when I was playing,maybe try this?
  3. 01:31:731(x)-This place is not appropriate for a spinner due to the vocal is start again at 01:32:118- so map this part please.
  4. 01:47:215(1.4)-I have seen this jump pattern so many time in this difficulty!Please change another jump pattern to make more fun.
That's it
Topic Starter
KanaRin
> Kpy Fixed some.
aesopl19193
Topic Starter
KanaRin
Uploaded, Thanks. :)
Nymph
★~
Alace

kanpakyin wrote:

[Alace]

00:23:795(29)-A kat here?
kdd sounds better to me
00:36:182(60~66)-Here has too many big notes,It's more difficult then overall,you better to remove some or change it to general notes.
but they sound good with big one
00:37:731(Kiai time)I'm just wondering why the kiai time is easyer then overall?Kiai time is a high tide part,so it should be more difficult?
the rhythm is kinda empty there, so i don`t really want to overmap , i make the next kiai harder
01:35:215(8~14)-Try this pattern : dkdkkkkd
hmm... not my taste
thanks a lot
Lilac
Very very good map. Best I think I modded today. ^_^

[Kiiwa]
01:40:440 (3) - Hidden slider. Very bad. D:
02:23:021 - Spinner should really end here.

Wow, that's really all. ._.
Topic Starter
KanaRin

Lilac wrote:

Very very good map. Best I think I modded today. ^_^

[Kiiwa]
01:40:440 (3) - Hidden slider. Very bad. D:
02:23:021 - Spinner should really end here.

Wow, that's really all. ._.
Fixed<3
m i z u k i
:!: :!:
fartownik
hi

[Kana]

00:43:924 (5) - New combo? Following previous patterns.
01:36:182 (1,2) - Swap combos.


[Kiiwa]

Finally a proper use of anti jump combo... that plays great.


[Normal]

00:37:344 (1,2) - This would be more reasonable if you start the chorus with a new combo instead of a note before.


A bit of inconsistency in new combos in Kana and Kiiwa diffs, but that's minor.
Good map, star.
Topic Starter
KanaRin
Yep~ ALL Fixed~!

Thanks~ :)
Natteke
:!:
Lilac
Sure sure.
whymeman
Hmm~
Shiirn
\o/
Nymph
:P ye~Kana congrats
OzzyOzrock
kana kana kana kana \:D/
Hanyuu
cool!

Congrat~ :)
KSHR
omedeto~ bakana~
Patchouli
kanakanakanakanakanakanakana~~~~~~~~~~~~~

congrats!
Hinacle
8-)
Topic Starter
KanaRin
Thanks everyone>w<
Mercurial
Nice...

Congratz :3
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