[General] You use alot of whistles overall, should go fine though.
But you should try to make them suite the song a little better.
And you need a difficulitie that has 3 stars or less to get it ranked, so gogo make an easy
~ (your [Normal] diff has currently 3,60 stars)
Kiai is used diffrently on the difficultys, make it the same on every difficulty.
You need Source and you want tags.. But I guess you already know that.
[Normal]00:05:234 (1) - Spacing
00:13:684 (3) - This touches the lifebar, drag it down at least 3 grids.
00:23:825 (1,2) - These two touches the lifebar aswell, drag them down.
00:28:473 (3,4) - Touches lifebar~
00:56:994 (4) - Touches lifebar~
01:01:431 (7) - New combo
01:02:276 (8) - Remove new combo
01:04:389 Add finish hitsound
01:10:938 (9) - Remove new combo
01:12:839 (1) - New combo
01:19:600 (6) - New combo
01:20:445 (1) - Remove new combo
01:38:192 (1) - Touches lifebar~
01:39:882 (5) - Touches lifebar~
01:53:403 (5) - This is too close to 4
02:08:614 (6) - New combo
02:41:149 (4) - Remove new combo
02:42:206 (1) - Remove new combo
02:44:107 (6) - New combo
02:44:530 (2) - New combo
Make a slider from 02:55:727 to 02:55:938 instead of one beat at 02:55:938.
02:57:628 (1) - New combo
[Hard]00:11:994 (4) - New combo
00:13:684 (1) - New combo
00:14:107 (2) - Remove new combo
00:57:628 (5) - New combo
00:58:051 (6) - Remove new combo
01:01:431 (1) - New combo
01:02:276 (2) - Remove new combo
01:12:839 (1) - New combo
01:16:642 (1) - New combo
01:19:600 (7) - New combo
01:20:445 (1) - Remove new combo
02:20:445 (1) - New combo
02:25:515 (1,2,3,4) - This is way too hard for you'r [Hard] Diff compared to your [Insane] diff.
[Insane]00:03:755 (7) - New combo
00:03:966 (1) - Remove new combo
00:05:445 (5) - New combo
00:06:501 (1) - Remove new combo
00:07:135 (12) - New combo
00:08:825 (7) - New combo
00:09:459 (1) - Remove new combo
00:10:304 (6) - New combo
00:11:783 (9) - Remove new combo
00:12:206 (1) - New combo
00:13:684 (1) - New combo
00:18:544 (8) - New combo
00:52:980 (1) - New combo
00:54:670 (1) - New combo
00:56:572 (6) - Remove new combo
00:56:994 (1) - Remove new combo
00:57:628 Add a note here
00:58:051 And here
01:01:220 (1) - New combo
01:04:389 (8) - New combo
01:04:706 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:079 (9) - New combo ~ And add a finish hitsound
01:06:501 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:839 (9) - New combo
01:13:262 (2) - Remove new combo
01:21:290 (1) - New combo
01:22:135 (4) - Remove new combo
01:22:980 (1) - New combo
01:24:459 (1) - New combo
01:25:093 (1) - Remove new combo
01:26:361 (1) - New combo
01:32:276 (1) - Remove new combo
01:33:121 (9) - New combo
01:36:501 (9) - New combo
01:39:882 (1) - New combo
01:43:262 (8) - New combo
From 01:58:473 to 01:58:684 is actually a pretty big jump, perhaps the best choise is to make it smaller.
02:06:501 (7) - Two grids down
02:06:924 (8) - Two grids down
01:46:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - try to remove the whistles here and listen.. sounds better ye?
02:28:051 (4) - Remove new combo
02:29:318 (3) - Remove new combo
02:32:276 (1) - New combo
02:41:149 (1) - New combo
02:41:994 (2) - Remove new combo
02:46:008 (1) - New combo
02:47:699 You should have the slider beginning here compared to before.
02:52:346 (2) - Remove finish hitsound
02:54:037 (4) - Remove finish hitsound
02:55:938 (1) - New combo
02:56:149 (1) - Remove new combo
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I wish you good luck and I'll star it:)