Blue - Accepted and fixed
Light Blue - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Light Blue - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
it took me way to long to apply thisLenfried- wrote:
more lv 800:52:633 (52633|1,52633|2,52821|1,52821|0) - if these are doubles because of the brass, 00:52:633 (52633|1) - is actually on the 1/3 snap and 00:52:821 (52821|1) - on the 1/6th. I'll take simplification as an excuse but just had to put this to the table - they're clearly on 1/4 tho
00:56:008 (56008|3,56008|2) - dont hear anything stringy / brassy here as the sustained sound actually starts at 00:55:915 - There is a break in the strings between 00:55:915 - and 00:56:008 -
00:56:758 (56758|0,56758|1,56946|3,56946|2) - backed by some piano-ish sound (dk what instrument it is) than strings. Single? - Same case as above.
00:57:321 - W triple? - well fk i had to rearrange the next few seconds to fix this
00:59:946 (59946|0,60040|1) - swap col if no PR juat to add some ease - no longer applicable due to the previous notes being rearranged
01:13:540 (73540|3) - stray W - that's a drum whistle tho?
01:13:915 - nitpick. Should be jack oriented like 00:25:915 - done
01:16:071 (76071|0,76165|0,76258|2,76352|2,76446|3,76540|3) - considering the nature of these jacks for the cc - c - w, 01:17:852 - should have something like https://puu.sh/ATqqF/fa98db6df3.png - done but with the second jack on col 2 instead of col 3
01:19:540 (79540|2) - move to 4 with the same idea as ^ - i ended up moving a lot of notes around
01:20:852 (80852|3,80946|0) - swap col with the same idea as ^ - ^
01:27:415 - this section broke away from the jack usage from the last. Not a big deal but the jacks with regards to Ws are messy
does not jack:
01:27:790 (87790|0) - equivalent jack does not jack in the previous main melody section
W -> jack:
01:28:540 (88540|1,88633|1) -
01:29:290 (89290|1,89383|1) -
jack -> W:
01:29:946 (89946|2,90040|2) -
Sane case for non consecutive Cs:
C -> jack:
01:28:352 (88352|3,88446|3) -
01:28:915 (88915|2,89008|2) -
no jack:
01:29:196 (89196|0) -
01:29:852 (89852|0) -
might need some cleaning up for this section - the section should be a lot more organized now
01:35:665 - and 01:37:165 - odd choice not going for something jacky - didn't put jacks on kicks here tho
01:52:258 - idk this sounds just about the same as 01:53:758 - should have the note?. If you apply the note, add to lv 6 as well - there's no hihat at 01:53:758 -
01:54:415 - lv 6 has a double and this doesnt lmfao - added a note
01:55:915 - another one of those sounds that are interpreted as jacks in the into but is now a bland jumptrill - i didn't want anything straining in this section. A split trill should be difficult enough for a calm finale like this. Also, i didn't put jacks on every kick in the diff.lv 900:25:915 - make this similar to lv 8 if not, LN-y or inverse like cause the current pattern strays too far away from the theme of the chart - made the jacks a lot simpler
00:40:915 - (and ever succeeding 4/1 until 00:48:415 - ) minor idea, with respect to 00:39:415 (39415|1,39508|1) - , 00:40:915 (40915|2,41008|1) - this must jack instead. I get the idea and whatnot but it's something worth raising - i put a jack at 00:39:415 - for the crash tho
00:46:540 - 3434 into a jack is blergh 00:46:727 (46727|2) - move to 2 - fixed
00:48:227 (48227|2) - to same idea as ^ additionally, 00:48:321 (48321|3,48415|3) - can go to 3 if you moved the previous note to 1 - that makes the ln transition harder here than the others in this section
01:13:540 (73540|3) - stray W (stray C for lv 5 check that out too) - that's a drum whistle :\ fixed the lv 5 clap tho
01:35:665 - this sounds a lot like 01:37:165 - so the jacking in the latter section is quite inconsistent. Consider: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11343490 - redid a lot of the stuff in this section cuz i realized that the LNs weren't following PR