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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 20, 2017 at 9:15:06 PM

Artist: Sasaki Sayaka
Title: Sorahana
Source: 空飛ぶ羊と真夏の花 -When girls wish upon a star.-
Tags: soratobu hitsuji to manatsu no hana navel honeybell eroge opening
BPM: 154
Filesize: 17167kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (2.72 stars, 818 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (3.42 stars, 973 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1.81 stars, 536 notes)


Download: Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana
Download: Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana (no video)
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OP from Soratabu Hitsuji to Manatsu no Hana

Standard Version Here!


by Protastic101
by Rivals_7
by alacat
by alacat


Changelog


December 15, 2016 - revived the beatmap (re-charted)
December 16, 2016 - apply Ascension_H mod.
December 16, 2016 - apply Nysrogh mod.
December 16, 2016 - apply SurfChu85 mod.
December 17, 2016 - apply Another Lie mod.
December 17, 2016 - apply 17VA mod.
December 17, 2016 - apply Syadow- mod.
December 17, 2016 - apply riunosk mod.
December 18, 2016 - apply Lenfried- mod.
December 20, 2016 - apply - Ly0572 - mod.
December 21, 2016 - apply -[ Niro ]- mod.
December 23, 2016 - apply AchsanLovers mod.
December 23, 2016 - apply JooF12 mod.
December 23, 2016 - change all diff names.
December 23, 2016 - apply -BlueFire- mod.
December 24, 2016 - apply JztCallMeRon mod.
December 24, 2016 - apply Wonki mod.
December 25, 2016 - apply Worms mod.
December 26, 2016 - apply Etsu mod.
December 26, 2016 - apply Gravey- mod.
December 29, 2016 - apply akuma123 mod.
December 29, 2016 - apply Ibrahim mod.
December 29, 2016 - apply Raediaufar mod.
January 05, 2017 - apply Raveille mod.
January 05, 2017 - apply Davin Fortune mod.
Febuary 21, 2017 - apply Critical_Star mod.
Febuary 21, 2017 - apply arcwinolivirus mod.
Febuary 23, 2017 - apply Purrinya mod.
Febuary 25, 2017 - apply MilkingFarmer31 mod.
March 6, 2017 - apply deetsiu mod.
March 16, 2017 - apply mods and bubbled by Protastic101.
March 18-19, 2017 - apply mods and bubble popped by Rivals_7
March 16, 2017 - apply mods and rebubbled by Protastic101.
March 20, 2017 - qualified by Rivals_7
March 20, 2017 - disqualified and re-qualified by alacat


Thank You Box

Ascension_H - for the mod.
Nysrogh - for the mod.
-SoraGami- - for the star.
Another Lie - for the mod.
17VA - for the mod.
Syadow- - for the mod and star.
SurfChu85 - for the mod.
riunosk - for the mod.
Lenfried- - for the mod.
- Ly0572 - - for the mod and star.
-[ Niro ]- - for the mod.
AchsanLovers - for the mod.
JooF12 - for the mod and star.
-BlueFire- - for the mod.
JztCallMeRon - for the mod.
Wonki - for the mod.
Worms - for the mod.
Etsu - for the mod.
Gravey- - for the mod.
akuma123 - for the mod.
Ibrahim - for the mod.
Raediaufar - for the mod.
Raveille - for the mod.
Davin Fortune - for the mod.
Critical_Star - for the mod.
arcwinolivirus - for the mod.
Purrinya - for the mod.
MilkingFarmer31 - for the mod.
deetsiu - for the mod.
Protastic101 - BN check.
Rivals_7 - BN check.
alacat - Qualify check.
posted
Hi XD
Colunm : |1|2|3|4|
MX
00:02:285 (2285|0) - move to 3
00:02:382 - add a note to 1
00:02:577 (2577|0) - no sound and remove a note
00:02:674 (2674|1) - move to 1
00:03:941 - add a note to 2
00:04:135 (4135|1) - remove
00:04:233 - add a note to 2
00:05:402 (5402|2) - move to 4
00:05:499 - add a note to 3
00:05:694 (5694|2) - remove
00:05:791 (5791|1) - move to 3
00:07:057 - add a note to 3
00:07:155 (7155|2) - remove
00:07:350 - add a note to 1
00:08:324 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816181
00:10:174 - add a note to 2
00:10:272 (10272|1) - re move
00:10:467 - add a note to 3
00:11:635 (11635|3) - move to 3
00:11:733 - add a note to 4
00:11:928 (11928|3) - remove
00:12:025 (12025|2) - move to 4
00:14:168 (14168|1,14168|2) - one note
00:38:129 - recommand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816204
00:40:077 (40077|1) - move to 4
00:55:467 (55467|3,55467|2,55661|1,55661|2) - ctrl+ j
00:59:168 (59168|2) - move to 2
01:34:817 (94817|2) - this Ln end to 01:39:687 this my suggestion

GL~!
posted

Ascension_H wrote:

Hi XD
Colunm : |1|2|3|4|
MX
00:02:285 (2285|0) - move to 3
00:02:382 - add a note to 1
00:02:577 (2577|0) - no sound and remove a note
00:02:674 (2674|1) - move to 1
00:03:941 - add a note to 2
00:04:135 (4135|1) - remove
00:04:233 - add a note to 2
00:05:402 (5402|2) - move to 4
00:05:499 - add a note to 3
00:05:694 (5694|2) - remove
00:05:791 (5791|1) - move to 3
00:07:057 - add a note to 3
00:07:155 (7155|2) - remove
00:07:350 - add a note to 1 no added because the consistency is not stable.
00:08:324 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816181
00:10:174 - add a note to 2
00:10:272 (10272|1) - re move
00:10:467 - add a note to 3
00:11:635 (11635|3) - move to 3
00:11:733 - add a note to 4
00:11:928 (11928|3) - remove
00:12:025 (12025|2) - move to 4
00:14:168 (14168|1,14168|2) - one note
00:38:129 - recommand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816204
00:40:077 (40077|1) - move to 4
00:55:467 (55467|3,55467|2,55661|1,55661|2) - ctrl+ j
00:59:168 (59168|2) - move to 2
01:34:817 (94817|2) - this Ln end to 01:39:687 this my suggestion much better if you stay like that :)

GL~!
Apply almost all :) Thanks for Mod :)
posted

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Ascension_H wrote:

Hi XD
Colunm : |1|2|3|4|
MX
00:02:285 (2285|0) - move to 3
00:02:382 - add a note to 1
00:02:577 (2577|0) - no sound and remove a note
00:02:674 (2674|1) - move to 1
00:03:941 - add a note to 2
00:04:135 (4135|1) - remove
00:04:233 - add a note to 2
00:05:402 (5402|2) - move to 4
00:05:499 - add a note to 3
00:05:694 (5694|2) - remove
00:05:791 (5791|1) - move to 3
00:07:057 - add a note to 3
00:07:155 (7155|2) - remove
00:07:350 - add a note to 1 no added because the consistency is not stable.
00:08:324 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816181
00:10:174 - add a note to 2
00:10:272 (10272|1) - re move
00:10:467 - add a note to 3
00:11:635 (11635|3) - move to 3
00:11:733 - add a note to 4
00:11:928 (11928|3) - remove
00:12:025 (12025|2) - move to 4
00:14:168 (14168|1,14168|2) - one note
00:38:129 - recommand https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816204
00:40:077 (40077|1) - move to 4
00:55:467 (55467|3,55467|2,55661|1,55661|2) - ctrl+ j
00:59:168 (59168|2) - move to 2
01:34:817 (94817|2) - this Ln end to 01:39:687 this my suggestion much better if you stay like that :)

GL~!
Apply almost all :) Thanks for Mod :)
and sorry i unfamiliar under the 4*
posted

Ascension_H wrote:

and sorry i unfamiliar under the 4*
it's okay :)
posted
Hi bro! from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/533844/start=0
|0|1|2|3|

NM
00:06:376 - try this more easy for the diff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816517
00:08:908 - try this too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816532
00:12:220 (12220|2) - delete this LN and add other note here, because after the LN are a double note and for a NM i think is umconfortable and add other note at the same position for the final
The hard part.. i think you need to remap this part so much ignore sounds , and unncesary LNs ~~ let's start
I going to explain you, like this part you ignore some sounds , to push LNs, and thats LNs are so bad for a NM diff
00:13:973 - try this for all this part ( combine other patterns but like this) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816549 , just really do this for this diff the LNs are to hard
00:33:843 - do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816561 is more good with your next pattern and more easy
00:35:791 (35791|1) - and another more note in 0
00:38:908 (38908|3) - delete this LN and add a note in the same place
00:39:493 (39493|0) - delete this LN too and add a simply note in the same place
00:40:467 (40467|2) - same with this
and same with the other LN in this part, just replace all with double notes or one note(like the sound) :s thats all for this diff
HD
01:02:999 (62999|3) - move this to 2
01:03:064 (63064|2) - move this to 3
01:03:648 (63648|1) - delete this one
01:04:233 (64233|1) - move this to 0 :o
01:05:596 (65596|2) - move this to 0 ;);)
01:05:791 (65791|2) - move this to 3
01:10:467 (70467|0) - move to 3
01:10:661 (70661|3,70759|2,70856|0,70954|3,71051|2) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816584


That's all GL :!::!:
posted

Nysrogh wrote:

Hi bro! from https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/533844/start=0
|0|1|2|3|

NM
00:06:376 - try this more easy for the diff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816517 no changes because i have pattern that i follow
00:08:908 - try this too https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816532 same as i said in first suggest.
00:12:220 (12220|2) - delete this LN and add other note here, because after the LN are a double note and for a NM i think is umconfortable and add other note at the same position for the final i don't think that's uncomfortable but if there's a SV that's in an acceptable issue
The hard part.. i think you need to remap this part so much ignore sounds , and unncesary LNs ~~ let's start
I going to explain you, like this part you ignore some sounds , to push LNs, and thats LNs are so bad for a NM diff
00:13:973 - try this for all this part ( combine other patterns but like this) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816549 , just really do this for this diff the LNs are to hard okie but i add some notes that you never suggest for consistency
00:33:843 - do like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816561 is more good with your next pattern and more easy
00:35:791 (35791|1) - and another more note in 0 no add notes here. complicated with hit-sound
00:38:908 (38908|3) - delete this LN and add a note in the same place
00:39:493 (39493|0) - delete this LN too and add a simply note in the same place
00:40:467 (40467|2) - same with this
and same with the other LN in this part, just replace all with double notes or one note(like the sound) :s thats all for this diff
i remain this one because this part is LN.
HD
01:02:999 (62999|3) - move this to 2
01:03:064 (63064|2) - move this to 3
01:03:648 (63648|1) - delete this one
01:04:233 (64233|1) - move this to 0 :o
01:05:596 (65596|2) - move this to 0 ;);)
01:05:791 (65791|2) - move this to 3
01:10:467 (70467|0) - move to 3
01:10:661 (70661|3,70759|2,70856|0,70954|3,71051|2) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6816584 repattern some notes.


That's all GL :!::!:
Thanks for Mod. I will mod your map ASAP!
posted
ohh look it's my name xD

have a star =w=
posted

-SoraGami- wrote:

ohh look it's my name xD

have a star =w=
lol.....thanks for the star Sora :):)
posted
Short IRC Mod from a request at discord

chatlog
22:30 *SurfChu85 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1156350 Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana [MX]]
22:30 SurfChu85: 00:01:116 - would've wanted the intro to go left to right since i have this thing for pitch relevancy
22:31 Shiro-neechan: okie
22:31 SurfChu85: 00:03:843 (3843|3,4233|2) - these two as well, but yeah, up to you, can't really give a "decent" way to show how you'll get the streams working tho
22:33 SurfChu85: 00:10:369 (10369|2,10467|2) - you might want to reconsider this, i don't see any other minijacks on the stream
22:33 SurfChu85: (btw, i can only point out what's more noticeable on my side, i'm not on my usual equipment)
22:34 Shiro-neechan: okie repattern some notes
22:36 SurfChu85: 01:34:817 (94817|2,94817|1,94817|3) - also, i like your idea for the finisher, it's just that i kind of feel that the releases are a bit awkward
22:37 SurfChu85: you could've ended the one in column 2 (am using 1|2|3|4)
22:37 SurfChu85: at 01:41:051 - \
22:37 SurfChu85: your call
22:37 Shiro-neechan: okie
22:37 Shiro-neechan: done
22:38 SurfChu85: i guess that's it
22:39 SurfChu85: i don't see anything for me to point out on the other sections (and i need to relearn how to mod easy diffs)
22:40 Shiro-neechan: i see (you need to relearn to mod easy diffs)
22:40 SurfChu85: (i know)
22:41 SurfChu85: should i post to the thread?
22:41 Shiro-neechan: yeah if you're finish
22:41 SurfChu85: i am lol
22:41 SurfChu85: go update
22:44 SurfChu85: oh wait
22:46 SurfChu85: 00:16:311 (16311|1) - shouldn't this be two LN's due to the sound at 00:16:700 - ?
22:46 SurfChu85: or are you not following those sounds?
22:47 Shiro-neechan: oh wait
22:49 SurfChu85: yep, seems like that's all i can see and hear
22:49 SurfChu85: lol
22:51 Shiro-neechan: yeah XD
22:53 SurfChu85: i'll wait for your go signal to post this chat log
22:54 SurfChu85: (am waiting for your reply on my last check lol)
22:54 Shiro-neechan: omg
22:54 Shiro-neechan: post i was in kitchen
22:54 Shiro-neechan: post it
22:54 Shiro-neechan: *post* XD
22:54 SurfChu85: but yeah, about the LN, did you apply or nah?
22:55 Shiro-neechan: yeah
22:55 SurfChu85: okay, posting


Good luck!
posted

SurfChu85 wrote:

Short IRC Mod from a request at discord

chatlog
22:30 *SurfChu85 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1156350 Sasaki Sayaka - Sorahana [MX]]
22:30 SurfChu85: 00:01:116 - would've wanted the intro to go left to right since i have this thing for pitch relevancy
22:31 Shiro-neechan: okie
22:31 SurfChu85: 00:03:843 (3843|3,4233|2) - these two as well, but yeah, up to you, can't really give a "decent" way to show how you'll get the streams working tho
22:33 SurfChu85: 00:10:369 (10369|2,10467|2) - you might want to reconsider this, i don't see any other minijacks on the stream
22:33 SurfChu85: (btw, i can only point out what's more noticeable on my side, i'm not on my usual equipment)
22:34 Shiro-neechan: okie repattern some notes
22:36 SurfChu85: 01:34:817 (94817|2,94817|1,94817|3) - also, i like your idea for the finisher, it's just that i kind of feel that the releases are a bit awkward
22:37 SurfChu85: you could've ended the one in column 2 (am using 1|2|3|4)
22:37 SurfChu85: at 01:41:051 - \
22:37 SurfChu85: your call
22:37 Shiro-neechan: okie
22:37 Shiro-neechan: done
22:38 SurfChu85: i guess that's it
22:39 SurfChu85: i don't see anything for me to point out on the other sections (and i need to relearn how to mod easy diffs)
22:40 Shiro-neechan: i see (you need to relearn to mod easy diffs)
22:40 SurfChu85: (i know)
22:41 SurfChu85: should i post to the thread?
22:41 Shiro-neechan: yeah if you're finish
22:41 SurfChu85: i am lol
22:41 SurfChu85: go update
22:44 SurfChu85: oh wait
22:46 SurfChu85: 00:16:311 (16311|1) - shouldn't this be two LN's due to the sound at 00:16:700 - ?
22:46 SurfChu85: or are you not following those sounds?
22:47 Shiro-neechan: oh wait
22:49 SurfChu85: yep, seems like that's all i can see and hear
22:49 SurfChu85: lol
22:51 Shiro-neechan: yeah XD
22:53 SurfChu85: i'll wait for your go signal to post this chat log
22:54 SurfChu85: (am waiting for your reply on my last check lol)
22:54 Shiro-neechan: omg
22:54 Shiro-neechan: post i was in kitchen
22:54 Shiro-neechan: post it
22:54 Shiro-neechan: *post* XD
22:54 SurfChu85: but yeah, about the LN, did you apply or nah?
22:55 Shiro-neechan: yeah
22:55 SurfChu85: okay, posting


Good luck!
Thanks surf :)
posted
Re-mod from my nameless queue
NM
00:25:272 - add note to col 1? it is a bit akward for leaving it blank after releasing LN -_-
00:50:207 - use double note for consistency
00:50:986 - ^
01:00:921 (60921|0) - use LN like this to keep consistency 00:25:077 (25077|2) -
01:01:311 (61311|1) - ^
01:02:869 - maybe add LN like above, because the pitch is same

I only found fewer than before, because HD & MX already modded by other.
Sorry if not too helpful.
posted
[NM]

00:11:830 (11830|1,12025|0,12220|1) - move 1,2,1 to looks more softer

00:25:272 - add 1


[HD]

00:24:687 (24687|1) - end at 00:25:077 - here and 00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|3,25207|2,25272|0) - change to trill for intend play like drums.

00:41:830 - add note for hithat

00:48:064 - ^

01:28:096 (88096|1) - no sounds? or add notes same as MX



[MX]

00:07:544 (7544|1,7642|0,7739|1) -

1,2,1 is better?

00:13:389 - ~ 00:13:583 - add 1/8 notes since it is insane diff. example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823979

00:24:687 (24687|1) - change to normal note(there's no strings) and 00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|0,25207|2,25272|0) - make it double?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823984

00:41:830 - add note for hithat

00:48:064 - ^

01:15:531 - strong beat, add 4 here

01:27:999 - ^

01:34:428 (94428|3,94525|2,94622|1,94720|0) - express drums for just simple stair note is awkward, change to double note drum stream?
posted
mark for mod
wait until u apply lie n 17VA 's mod

hi shiro o/
Shiro

NM



00:26:148 - add note here ? for drum sound

00:33:064 (33064|1) - move to col 1, balance for this one 00:31:895 (31895|1,32285|1,32674|1,33064|1) -

00:39:103 (39103|0) - better to remove this like this one 00:45:337 -

01:32:674 (92674|1,92869|0) - swap col, for pitch

01:33:648 - same like 01:33:454 - i suggest to make double too

HD



00:13:486 - add note ? i suggest to try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6825473

00:24:298 (24298|1) - remove this, same as 00:23:518 - single note

00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|1,25207|2,25272|1) - little hard for this, i suggest make them in 4132 or 4321 up to u

00:26:635 (26635|0) - remove ? only vocal here

00:35:402 - triple for kick, like 00:32:285 -

00:39:882 (39882|2) - move to col 4, same picth i guess

00:49:233 (49233|1,49428|2,49622|1) - ctrl h, 00:49:038 (49038|2,49233|1) - same pitch

00:50:889 (50889|1) - remove, ghost

00:50:791 (50791|2) - move to col 2, same pitch n 00:50:986 - 00:50:986 - double for kick

01:01:018 (61018|1) - 1/6

01:01:408 (61408|2) - ^

01:33:648 (93648|1) - i think better to move to col 3

MX



00:01:798 (1798|3) - ghost, remove

00:03:356 (3356|2) - 00:04:135 (4135|1) - 00:04:915 (4915|2) - 00:07:252 (7252|0) - ghost again ;w;

00:12:220 - triple, loud sound imo

00:13:973 - little cymbal here, suggest to make triple here

Good Luck >w<
(+) aaaa love this song >///< take my star, hope get rank soon xD
posted

Another Lie wrote:

Re-mod from my nameless queue
NM
00:25:272 - add note to col 1? it is a bit akward for leaving it blank after releasing LN -_- nice catch.
00:50:207 - use double note for consistency
00:50:986 - ^
01:00:921 (60921|0) - use LN like this to keep consistency 00:25:077 (25077|2) -
01:01:311 (61311|1) - ^
01:02:869 - maybe add LN like above, because the pitch is same

I only found fewer than before, because HD & MX already modded by other.
Sorry if not too helpful.

17VA wrote:

[NM]

00:11:830 (11830|1,12025|0,12220|1) - move 1,2,1 to looks more softer i don't think to move this note and there's no problem with that.

00:25:272 - add 1


[HD]

00:24:687 (24687|1) - end at 00:25:077 - here and 00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|3,25207|2,25272|0) - change to trill for intend play like drums. nice catch :)

00:41:830 - add note for hithat

00:48:064 - ^ i don't think to add hithat here because this part is focus on drums

01:28:096 (88096|1) - no sounds? or add notes same as MX there's a sound. check 25 or 50% playback



[MX]

00:07:544 (7544|1,7642|0,7739|1) -

1,2,1 is better? no

00:13:389 - ~ 00:13:583 - add 1/8 notes since it is insane diff. example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823979 okay.

00:24:687 (24687|1) - change to normal note(there's no strings) and 00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|0,25207|2,25272|0) - make it double?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6823984

00:41:830 - add note for hithat

00:48:064 - ^

01:15:531 - strong beat, add 4 here

01:27:999 - ^

01:34:428 (94428|3,94525|2,94622|1,94720|0) - express drums for just simple stair note is awkward, change to double note drum stream?i will consider this :)
Thanks for mod Another Lie and 17VA. I will mod your map 17VA later.
posted
m4m reply
NM
00:32:674 - column 1 is quite empty, maybe moving 00:33:648 (33648|1) - to 1?
01:05:791 (65791|1,65986|2) - flip for playability
01:22:155 (82155|1,82350|3,82544|1) - maybe 3 2 4?
01:26:441 (86441|1,86830|1,87220|1,87609|1) - try avoiding this in easier difficulties
01:29:557 (89557|2,89947|2,90337|2,90726|2) - ^
HD
00:01:116 (1116|2,1246|1,1376|0) - flip these as the pitch is going upwards // since the following patterns contain 1/4 bursts, why not make this 1/4 as well?
00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|1,25207|2,25272|1) - i highly suggest you make this into stairs as this is very unexpected in 2.77*
00:28:194 (28194|1,28389|1,28973|1,29168|1,29947|1,30142|1,30337|2,30531|2,30726|1,30921|1) - why the minijacks?
00:35:986 (35986|2,36181|2,36376|1,36570|1,36765|2,36960|2,37155|1,37350|1) - ^
00:44:947 - add a note, theres a kick sound here
00:54:103 (54103|2,54298|2,54493|2) - maybe try and mix and match around to avoid this? something like 00:57:220 (57220|3,57220|1,57415|0,57415|3,57609|1,57609|0) -
00:59:168 (59168|3) - i suggest 3 since the previous note is in the same column
00:59:557 (59557|2,59752|1) - ^ if above is applied, move to 2 4
01:19:622 (79622|2,79817|1) - flip for playability
01:22:155 (82155|2) - move to 2
01:22:350 (82350|1,82447|0) - ^ if applied, flip
01:27:869 (87869|3) - i think putting this at 1/4 would be fine since the following patterns are 1/4 and it'll mess up the timing
01:34:817 (94817|1) - LN end not timed properly?
MX
00:01:700 (1700|2,1895|2,2090|2,2285|2,2480|2) - anchor
00:04:428 (4428|1,4622|1,4817|1,5012|1) - ^
00:05:012 (5012|3,5207|3,5402|3,5596|3,5791|3) - ^
00:05:791 (5791|2,5986|2,6181|2,6376|2,6570|2) - ^
00:32:090 (32090|2,32090|3) - i think 1 note here is fine
01:28:973 (88973|3,88973|2) - ^
01:34:817 (94817|2) - either end the LN earlier, or end it the same as the LN on column 4

good luck for your map~
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00:32:674 - column 1 is quite empty, maybe moving 00:33:648 (33648|1) - to 1? okie
01:05:791 (65791|1,65986|2) - flip for playabilityi consider this but i there some notes to move so that the pitch is relevant.
01:22:155 (82155|1,82350|3,82544|1) - maybe 3 2 4? if i do that the pitch is not relevant
01:26:441 (86441|1,86830|1,87220|1,87609|1) - try avoiding this in easier difficulties
01:29:557 (89557|2,89947|2,90337|2,90726|2) - ^ consider this one. need to remap some notes.
HD
00:01:116 (1116|2,1246|1,1376|0) - flip these as the pitch is going upwards // since the following patterns contain 1/4 bursts, why not make this 1/4 as well? okie i wil consider this
00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|1,25207|2,25272|1) - i highly suggest you make this into stairs as this is very unexpected in 2.77* this is Hard map dude and it's still acceptable and it's little bit weird to change into stairs.
00:28:194 (28194|1,28389|1,28973|1,29168|1,29947|1,30142|1,30337|2,30531|2,30726|1,30921|1) - why the minijacks?
00:35:986 (35986|2,36181|2,36376|1,36570|1,36765|2,36960|2,37155|1,37350|1) - ^as you can see these part has some consistent notes and minijacks. well i don't think that's not problem if you have this note.
00:44:947 - add a note, theres a kick sound here i know there's a kick sound but i don't consider this one.
00:54:103 (54103|2,54298|2,54493|2) - maybe try and mix and match around to avoid this? something like 00:57:220 (57220|3,57220|1,57415|0,57415|3,57609|1,57609|0) - as you can see 00:56:051 (56051|2) - this one is in column 3 but 00:52:934 (52934|1) - this one is in column 2 but i consider this so the LN is still at the position but some notes are move.
00:59:168 (59168|3) - i suggest 3 since the previous note is in the same column
00:59:557 (59557|2,59752|1) - ^ if above is applied, move to 2 4
01:19:622 (79622|2,79817|1) - flip for playability
01:22:155 (82155|2) - move to 2
01:22:350 (82350|1,82447|0) - ^ if applied, flip
01:27:869 (87869|3) - i think putting this at 1/4 would be fine since the following patterns are 1/4 and it'll mess up the timing i don't think so because as you check on 25% playback it's not getting the actual sound if you put in 1/4 so i was intended to put it in 1/6
01:34:817 (94817|1) - LN end not timed properly? iit was intended to do that and some modder says that's not problem
MX
00:01:700 (1700|2,1895|2,2090|2,2285|2,2480|2) - anchor
00:04:428 (4428|1,4622|1,4817|1,5012|1) - ^
00:05:012 (5012|3,5207|3,5402|3,5596|3,5791|3) - ^
00:05:791 (5791|2,5986|2,6181|2,6376|2,6570|2) - ^well i will consider this but not to remap but to move some notes
00:32:090 (32090|2,32090|3) - i think 1 note here is fine
01:28:973 (88973|3,88973|2) - ^ pitch is not relevant if you remove one note
01:34:817 (94817|2) - either end the LN earlier, or end it the same as the LN on column 4i was intended to do that and some modder says that's not problem

good luck for your map~
Thanks for Mod :)
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Syadow- wrote:

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wait until u apply lie n 17VA 's mod

hi shiro o/
Shiro

NM



00:26:148 - add note here ? for drum sound i don't consider this even there's a drum sound.

00:33:064 (33064|1) - move to col 1, balance for this one 00:31:895 (31895|1,32285|1,32674|1,33064|1) -

00:39:103 (39103|0) - better to remove this like this one 00:45:337 -

01:32:674 (92674|1,92869|0) - swap col, for pitch

01:33:648 - same like 01:33:454 - i suggest to make double too i don't consider this because the pitch is not relevant if i add one note.

HD



00:13:486 - add note ? i suggest to try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6825473 I was following the base sound and it's weird to have kind of note.

00:24:298 (24298|1) - remove this, same as 00:23:518 - single note

00:25:077 (25077|2,25142|1,25207|2,25272|1) - little hard for this, i suggest make them in 4132 or 4321 up to u

00:26:635 (26635|0) - remove ? only vocal here no and it's not vocal XD

00:35:402 - triple for kick, like 00:32:285 -

00:39:882 (39882|2) - move to col 4, same picth i guess instead of moving this one, 00:40:077 - will move at column 4

00:49:233 (49233|1,49428|2,49622|1) - ctrl h, 00:49:038 (49038|2,49233|1) - same pitch

00:50:889 (50889|1) - remove, ghost i don't think this one is a ghost note. check 25%playback rate.

00:50:791 (50791|2) - move to col 2, same pitch n 00:50:986 - 00:50:986 - double for kick

01:01:018 (61018|1) - 1/6

01:01:408 (61408|2) - ^

01:33:648 (93648|1) - i think better to move to col 3

MX



00:01:798 (1798|3) - ghost, remove

00:03:356 (3356|2) - 00:04:135 (4135|1) - 00:04:915 (4915|2) - 00:07:252 (7252|0) - ghost again ;w;i think you notice that i use hit-sounds and intended to put that but there's a hit-sound.

00:12:220 - triple, loud sound imo

00:13:973 - little cymbal here, suggest to make triple here

Good Luck >w<
(+) aaaa love this song >///< take my star, hope get rank soon xD
Thanks for the Mod and STAR >///< Syadow-
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here comes dat mod

mx
first things first, that SV is bad.
https://puu.sh/sTvQC/3009d4e428.png
what's up with stacking x0.1 SVs consecutively? The consecutive placement of the same SV effect does nothing at all. Also x0.1 is almost never good for slowjam unless you know what you're doing. A great alternative is to use a slowdown that decreases by x.05 every 1/4th snap starting from x1. x.25 is also viable so that the last speed will not be annoyingly slow.

00:15:044 (15044|3) - ghost note. delete. section is 100% similar with 00:19:720 -
i think 01:09:103 - and 01:04:428 - are the same but they have different densities why tho? Also to back this up, the second half of the kiai all 1/1 long drum rolls have doubles. 01:16:895 - 01:21:570 - 01:23:129 - contrary to the first half. It sure is inconsistent but difficulty curving, if intended, can be an excuse.

not at lot to fix just the SV @@


good luck!
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