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PROgj2 wrote:03:23 PROgj2: なんか途中３連おかしくなかった？
03:24 PROgj2: ズレてたよｗ
03:25 PROgj2: 01:18:434
03:25 PROgj2: だね
03:26 xNyamx: ああ。 ほんとだ。。
fLaw wrote:HELLO! Mod for the Insane difficulty.
A lot of the things that bothered me were just sliders not being curved, or being too sharply curved. Some of the straight sliders I thought were fine though and went nicely with the music.
00:08:277 (4) - Curve here going down would look cleaner00:15:152 (1) - Curve slider more towards the next note. Flows better with the song.00:35:777 (4) - This slider seems a bit too high, I suggest moving it lower, then maybe curving it again towards the right00:36:715 (8) - Also this slider would go well with the previous if it were curved towards it, like on opposite.00:37:496 (3) - This part also feels like its a bit too high. Not a lot, just a litttttttlleee bit
00:48:902 (1) - Maybe move this slider a little more right, or curve it to the right? Both are good00:59:527 (2) - Maybe move this note a little higher so it doesn't feel like a straight line? more bouncy01:02:809 (1) - I would suggest another curve coming from the left, can't go wrong with curves sometimes
01:04:527 (1) - This slider would look nice flipped over the previous one01:15:621 (2) - Space this note a little more between these two notes01:17:496 (1) - Slider feels way too high, maybe move it down and left a bit?
01:19:059 (1) - This curve would flow better if it were flipped upside down and maybe curving to the left01:22:652 (1) - Maybe move this slider up a tiny bit?
01:32:652 (1) or 01:33:121 (2) - I think it would be nice if there were a curve on at least 1 of these
01:37:652 (1) - This would be nice with a big curve on it
All the sliders with sharp curves bugged be a bit, but feel free to ignore them. I just think the map had a nice smooth sound to it, so the jagged edges bothered me.00:18:434 (4) - Sharp curve at the end feels awkward, moving the point more in the middle or making it more smooth looks nicer
00:43:434 (3) - The sharp curve on this feel weird again (smooth curve)
00:43:746 (4) - The sharp curve on this feel weird again (smooth curve)
00:44:684 (4) - (smooth curve)
00:46:559 (1) - (smooth curve)
00:48:277 (4) - (smooth curve)
00:52:809 (1) - (smooth curve)
00:56:246 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:02:184 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:08:121 (2) - (smooth curve)
01:10:777 (3) - (smooth curve)
01:14:527 (3) - (smooth curve)
01:17:027 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:18:746 (5) - (smooth curve)
01:21:090 (5) - (smooth curve)
01:22:027 (3) - (smooth curve)
01:23:121 (2) - (smooth curve)
01:27:184 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:30:309 (1) - (smooth curve)
01:34:059 (1) - (smooth curve)
01:36:871 (2) - (smooth curve)
01:38:121 (2) - (smooth curve)
01:38:121 (2) - (smooth curve)
01:40:934 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:45:934 (3) - (smooth curve)
01:46:246 (4) - (smooth curve)
01:47:809 (1) - (smooth curve)
01:48:434 (3) - (smooth curve)
01:48:746 (4) - (smooth curve)
Other than these, this was a good difficulty.
Thanks a lot!!
Shapy wrote:Random mod cause why not (^^;)
You're following the voice too much in this diff i think, this is not a bad thing but sometimes is really consfusing for a difficulty
like this you should really re check that
- 00:05:309 (1)(2)(3)(4) - I'm not a big fan of this sliders, i think it's acceptable but idk i prefere adding long slider or something
just my personal opinion here :') okay
00:40:934 (2)(3) - You can blanket this if you want ok
01:04:059 (2)(3) - The (3) stop as 1/2 red tick it's a bit confusing for beginners in my sense add a sliders here can make this easier ok
01:14:996 (6) - Follow the vocal here is a mistake i think, you have a strong beat here 01:15:152 - that you can follow instead of the voice fixed
01:16:871 (9) - You're sliders end finish in a weird place i mean if you follow the vocal the slider should finish here 01:16:871 - finish point changed
(And i know you have a little sound here 01:17:027 - but it's not neccesary too follow this :/)
01:17:496 (1) - Same thing here but this time you following nothing i don't hear something here (or i'm just deaf idk :') ) changed~
01:55:152 - mute the end of the spinner okay
- 00:19:684 - don't really like this stream specialy this part 00:19:996 - the space is really annoying to take, you should reconsider this hmm.. keep
(oh and you can NC btw)
00:23:277 (3)(4)(5) - You're not following the song at this part you should have something like this instead
00:24:684 - You can start you're stream here i think 00:24:996 - keep
00:37:574 - this part of the stream is a little bit spaced i think but this is my opinion little changed
00:38:277 (3) - You can overlap this note too the slider end at 00:39:059 (1) - stack
00:49:840 - add a note ? keep
00:57:340 (5) - This note is not overlap too (1) fixed
You're mapset is pretty nice but i need a bit off cleaning particulary you're slide i see some sliders very weird sometime ^^'
Sry if i don't mod more my modding "skill" is not very good i try too find the most thing than i can :/
Good luck for rank (*^▽^*) (Need too rank my set too ;w;)
YukiZura- wrote:Extra Diff
firstly im not the greatest at modding but i can help you a little bit (im also still learning a bit >,<)
00:09:762 - try put some sound here .. 00:09:684 - replace this with small sliderovermap... keep
00:13:121 - Try make the slider shape like this one 00:12:652 - (i think it will look more tidy without too much slider shape and it feels more
00:15:152 - This slider also the same.. make it look like 00:15:621 - this one okay
00:34:684 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - love this part tho >,< Thanks^^
01:08:121 - = 01:07:652 - sliderz xD okay
01:11:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - to 01:12:496 - this part is a bit weird (to be honest i dont like that part) OK changed!!
01:16:559 - to 01:17:574 - same at this partsorry if this vid is lagging hehehe .. (just a suggestion)
if you dont like that placement .. try rearraged it
click this link to see the vid ---> https://puu.sh/sRq0L/8ca356d8c1.mp4
overall i really enjoy this diff
also i love this song xD
hope to see it ranked ^o^
zz-e wrote:[Normal ]
First of all, raise the OD/HP (or at least one of them) to 4.
Overall, a few sliders are better off being fully curved, and they have small inconsistencies in terms of curves. Note that I do like most of the pointy sliders! I especially like the short curved sliders (like 00:10:621 (2) and 00:16:246 (4) ), though I would recommend to make them symmetrically curved (or at least the same inequality in every short slider).For example, I would prefer this one to be round:
While I feel like this one fits the song
00:27:809 (1) - I'd change this slider in a more fluent slider01:05:777 (2) - Following the song it should be half a measure longer.
01:07:652 (1) - This is a slider that follows the beat while all other circles/sliders follow vocals. For consistency I would change that. Not really the best way, but I made 'something' up
01:10:621 (2,3,4,5,6) - This might be too demanding (not wrong, it does follow the song). At least, I feel like it flows better if you remove circle 2.
01:30:934 (2,3,4,5) - With the circle size that you have chosen, this is rather busy. I know you can't have too much spacing, but maybe something like this:01:39:059 (5) - Move the slider a little bit to the left.
Hopefully some points are useful. I liked your map and the song!
Dailycare wrote:Random mod
*Do you really use the file 4159842898-1686323-J6Q2-1366x768-MM-100.jpg? If no, just remove this. sorry! okai
*What about adding the romanized name of the game as tags? ok-
*Uncheck Widescreen support at all diffs except for Secret
*00:13:668 (6) - There's no sound here. You can put a circle at 00:13:512 - ok fixed
*00:14:684 (5) - What about chaging the slider to two circles? I think emphasizing 00:14:840 - is more better than the current slider change (all circle)
*00:18:512 (5) - Considier removing this note and putting a note at 00:18:355 - ok fixed
*00:19:684 (5) - 00:19:996 (9) - 00:24:684 (5) - 00:27:184 (5) - I think it would be nice if you set NCs here. nice!
*00:30:309 (1) - What about making a spacing bigger like 00:30:934 (4) - ? hmm... ok (maybe)
*00:32:340 - You ignored here but it's a bit awkward for me. It's not a big issue tho. ok keep
*00:44:371 (2) - The spacing is too small. So I think you can do ctrl+g 00:44:059 (1) - for a better distance setting keep
*00:52:574 (6,7) - If you want to follow the vocal then you are also able to remove these notes. And I think it's better. ok
*01:13:121 (2) - What about avoiding overlap? It may make players a bit confused. fixed
*00:16:559 (1,2,3) - 01:39:059 (1,2,3) - There's no reason for kick sliders. If you want to keep it then just make the volume of each slider's end lower
*00:19:684 (5,6,7,8) - They can be replaced by kick sliders.
*00:39:996 (5) - Add a clap instead of whistle
*01:03:512 (4) - Removing it is more better for me but idk lol
*01:09:137 (2) - Remove this. You didn't put a circle here even in the highest diff
*00:12:652 (1) - Did you intend the body's hitsound?
*00:36:246 (5) - Add a NC for dividing patterns? okai
*01:12:652 - 01:17:652 - I really don't recommend ignoring these strong beats. Please put any notes here even though you wanted to follow vocal. ok changed
*01:28:746 (5) - Add a NC too ok
*The distance setting you used for emphasizing strong beats feels awkward because you used x1.3 ~ 2.1. All in all it makes the quality a bit lower. But the whole flow is good enough. Nice work. thanks..
*00:52:496 (4,5) - Can you change them to a 1/2 slider?fixed
*01:16:559 (1) - Did you intend the body's hitsound too?fixed
*00:05:309 - Remove this green line. And you can adjust a volume of the timing point.ok
00:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yay jump, but how about emphasizing more the snare and cymbal, is not all the same drum. Emphasize my making 00:07:496 (4,1) - , 00:08:121 (3,4) - , 00:08:590 (6,7) - and 00:08:902 (8,1) - longer spacing then the normal one.
00:11:871 (3,4,5) - How about ctrl+g the rhythm http://puu.sh/sSi6f/a91b009ffc.jpg, since this 00:12:027 - is pretty low, while the main sound at 00:12:184 - ,00:12:340 - are pretty important and player can feel more while tapping note that they are tapping on a sound. ok
00:13:668 (6) - Move this to here 00:13:355 - , the triplet drum stream is here not at 00:13:668 - , there is no new drum sound at 00:13:668 -
If you apply this, remove the clap hitsound at 00:13:590 - fixed
00:14:371 (3,4,5) - Same reason as 00:11:871 (3,4,5) - , try to ctrl+g. Since the main sound at 00:14:684 - , 00:14:840 - and 00:14:996 - have the same pitch and volume, can do a nice jump. ok but all circles
00:18:590 (6) - Move to 00:18:355 - that's where the drum triplet is.
Then for hitsound to fit the actual drum in the song.
00:18:434 - whistle
00:18:590 - whistle
00:18:746 - clap okai fixed
00:19:684 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - All these clap feel so loud, change these 2 00:19:684 (5,9) - to whistle, just like from the actual drum in the song.fixed
00:52:496 (5,6,7) - These triplet clap sound so loud, and also from the song, remove clap on these 00:52:574 (6,7) - , there is no snare there. removed
01:41:715 (2,3,4) - This is pretty tricky to play, mostly hitting that last notes, since you are making it as hard as 2->3. How about stacking 3 and 4, since they have the same sound and pitch. keep
01:42:184 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - The drum vary once again owo, make 01:42:184 (5) - and 01:42:496 (8) - into whistle and make 01:42:809 (1) - into a finish.okay