AlneCraft wrote:

Mitose Noriko is bae (´・◡・｀)

pls rank more gust games omg, their soundtrack is so good, nefertiti next pretty please?

With that petty shit out the way, an NM outta nowhere!

(i really want to see this ranked if this wasn't obvious)

1. 8.5 OD on a 4.87 star map LUL. you sure you aren't monstrata's stud? what's a stud? >_> i just feel the rhythm is repetitive enough to focus more on accuracy than actually hitting the notes

2. gotta love the increased spacing on large white ticks, but sometimes it's too high (00:53:821(4)) or sometimes it's too low (01:00:721(4)) - fixed

3. i think there're too many 1/2 sliders, which makes the map look and feel very repetitive after a while, maybe it would be worth it to change some of the sliders to circles instead? (00:54:421(6). 01:01:321(6) or hell, any section of the map that goes like: Long Slider, 1/2 slider, circle, 1/2 slider (x3) -> repeat until kiai) - its intended to be repetitive because the song is repetitive

4. on an opposite note (00:55:621(1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe make it into 1/2 slider + circle (x2)? the spacing from the previous circle is already high enough) - moved the previous circle closer, i want these to be jumps

5. 01:50:519(1,2,3) - you sure the SV change is necessary? - yes, it shows the slow down and decrease of pitch of the guitar and serves to make the map more interesting. i mean, you said it was boring so :^)

6. 02:04:622(1,2) - turn this into a slider? - no thanks, i want these to be jumps

7. 02:18:121(4,5,6) - drums feel like they sound like this: dum-dum-dum instead of du-dum du-dum du-dum, so maybe you should turn this into sliders similar to these: 01:34:619(4,5,1) or maybe turn them into single circles? - i don't get it, a picture would be helpful and i think i already did this the way it sounds? it's dum dum dum like you said

8. 02:31:171(2,3,4) - more like this throughout the map please - it fits in this instance so i used it, i also vary rhythm in the guitar parts

9. 03:07:021(1,2) - guitar doesn't get more intense and drums aren't there either, why increase spacing? - fixed

10. 03:24:421(1,2,3) - look point 5 - same reply

11. 03:38:521(1,2) - look point 6 - ^

12. 04:40:921(7,8) - this could use a stream - too much strain for the star rating, the previous parts of the map weren't nearly as hard as it gets now, and it's already hard enough to hold these correctly. that said, i changed the direction for emphasis i guess, we'll see how it goes

i also have a picture of the ost album if i can find it...

also some metadata stoof:

add "gust" and "nis" to tags (like here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/273267), the developers and the publishers respectively. you may also add "koei" or "banpresto" as well. "Daisuke Achiwa", composer's name. http://artonelico.wikia.com/wiki/EXEC_SPHILIA - added all except koei and banpresto

rip schwarzvgrune, you were the only person to rank gust maps in 2015. may your legacy live on.

Pentori wrote:

hoi

[General]
combo colours? for ppl like me that play with them enabled - i thought i already had them but oh well, added
04:16:321 - conflicting timing lines, make sure the red line has kiai enabled too - woops, fixed

[Infel]
00:04:320 (3,4) - hm, strange way to represent a 1/1 gap. maybe try something anti-flow or stacked since at 00:01:920 (3,4) - you used very similar spacing - i guess i'll go with shurelia's suggestion then. stacked them
00:05:120 (5) - vocal stretches to the white tick 00:05:520 - , so making this a 1/1 slider would be more appropriate - done
00:07:320 - the breaks r fading out too early, just drag this to how it originally would be - fixed too
00:15:887 (6) - 1/1 slider - done
00:18:487 - fix break. there r no sounds to snap to so ending it early is very awkward - ^
00:21:571 (4,5) - the finishes arent rly necessary, the sounds dont stand out much compared to 00:20:971 - removed (copy-pasta mistakes ;w;)
00:37:471 - the "aah" occurs a lot more often 00:24:271 - 00:27:571 - yet you're only highlighting a few of them with finishes. try achieve some consistency with these - yeah, fixed
00:47:221 (4,5,6,1) - flow isn't the best since your really only playing the slider heads here http://puu.sh/tDgVE/aab268b7ca.jpg and it causes some pretty awkward movements in contrast to the larger spacing you used for other stuff eg. 00:46:771 (2,3,4) - fixed it
01:44:519 (2) - there r no sounds here, so try something else - there's a bass note here
02:01:919 (1,2) - skipping the drum on 02:02:371 - isnt very nice because you mapped the drum on 02:02:671 (2) - making the rhythm a weird blend of vocals + drums - changed rhythm slightly
02:31:171 (2,3,4) - why the sudden shift in intensity? - nerfed slightly
02:31:621 (5,6,7) - should add drum samplesets - right, forgot x.x
02:32:221 - why is this slider muted? - another dumb mistake, should have been on slider end
02:32:221 (7) - you could try making this a 1/2 slider to create a stopping feeling as the music suggests - i think 1/1 is fine imo, especially now that the slider end is actually muted instead of the head :/
02:54:721 (5) - 03:06:421 (2) - dont think u need to include these since the sound is really weak. skipping it would b better like u did for 02:58:021 - changed
03:11:521 (2) - ^ - ^
03:11:821 (3,4,5) - this is best represented as 1/4. 1/6 is overkill - sure i guess since i don't use repeating 1/6 anywhere else
03:12:721 (1,2) - i would use more distance to indicate the transition to a 1/1 section. otherwise this just looks like 1/2 spacing - fixed
03:16:021 - dont forget the continue resetting the metronome - oh my god i thought i did this part aksdjflasgdasdf fixed.
03:18:271 (2,3) - extended sliders in slower sections are awful imo. ending this on the red tick would suit the pace of the section more - done
03:36:271 - again u shouldn't skip this. u could try http://puu.sh/tDvuh/20cec3f5b8.jpg if u want to prioritise the vocals - already changed as above
04:05:071 (4) - normally u wouldve nc'ed this - true. fixed

good luck !

kokopanko wrote:

suggestion:use 3 combo colors for mir, heart of land's line and anything else respectively.

Nao Tomori wrote:

later

11:47 Nao Tomori: 00:22:771 (7) - 
11:47 Nao Tomori: 00:26:821 (2) - 
11:48 Nao Tomori: 00:31:321 (6) - 
11:48 Nao Tomori: 00:30:721 (4) - 
11:49 Nao Tomori: 00:44:821 (1,2) - 
11:49 Mir: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/cDKZS4W.png
11:49 Mir: ok?
11:50 Nao Tomori: 01:04:021 (4) - 
11:51 Nao Tomori: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244925
11:52 Mir: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/y7FU6uc.jpg
11:52 Mir: ?
11:53 Nao Tomori: 01:09:419 (5,6) - 
12:00 Mir: 04:34:921 (1) -
12:00 Mir: 04:16:321 -
12:04 Nao Tomori: 00:52:621 (5) - 
12:08 Nao Tomori: 01:22:319 (5) - 
12:17 Nao Tomori: 02:25:021 (4,5,1) - 
12:23 Nao Tomori: 01:04:621 (6) - 
12:28 Nao Tomori: 02:25:321 (5) - 
12:28 Nao Tomori: 02:28:321 (4) - 
12:29 Nao Tomori: 02:58:171 (2,3) - 
12:33 Mir: so far i have this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/w2LPsDN.jpg
12:33 Mir: is this better?
12:41 Nao Tomori: 04:06:121 (6) - 
12:42 Nao Tomori: 04:08:671 (2,3) - 
13:39 Nao Tomori: 04:36:121 (5,6) - 

Shurelia wrote:

when

Lasse wrote:

as requested - o/

intro feels really empty hitsound wise (cause there are none besides soft hitnormal), how about putting whistles on all the clickable objects? volume is really low anyways
that until 00:05:520 -, then keep 00:09:093 (1,2,3,4) - like it is. maybe finish on 00:11:463 (4) -
and then clickable whistle thing on 00:11:924 - again
or probably something to make 00:13:924 (1) - stand out a bit more cause it maps something else

00:19:921 - this part until 00:23:146 - might be nicer with 30% volume
00:20:971 (1) - finish doesn't fit here at all I think

same with finishes on slidertails in the intro. even if there is something in the song, you don't really map it anyways. and getting more feedback from head than tail is pretty gross here

Everything above fixed.

00:23:221 - this part feels like it lacks some differentiation. the parts where vocals stop just feel the same as the ones with vocals. this could be done with using different pattern/shapes, rhythms/undermapping, movement or anything, but right now it's consistent, but the song isn't..
together with the hitsounding (none except these finishes and some hitnormals) makes this part feel really bland
whistles for vocal for example might be a great addition
Overall it feels like the map just lacks some hitsounding stuff like using whistles for things that stand out or whatever, it just feels really empty with some occasional claps and normal hitnormals

or in parts like 01:10:019 - they could emphasize the underlying guitar rhythm etc.

Will get someone to hitsound this cuz apparently I can't. :eyes:

00:55:621 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - drums and melody seem more like 2-2-2 and not 3-3 here? or just keep it in one thing like 01:23:519 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - changed
00:56:221 (2,3) - is pretty noticeable cause melody thing starts there and not on the red tick before // it's on 00:55:621 (1,3,2,3) -
might also want to use drum additions here to fit the song better than your custom clap - hitsounding
also movement on 00:56:371 (3,1) - is so strange for no reason, movement on the slider is extremly forced. how about curving 1 for http://lasse.s-ul.eu/uo723gOO.jpg (can adjust 2 to look better with it obviously) - changed

01:09:119 (3,4,5,6) - similar here about using some drum additions, since it stands out so much // 01:23:519 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - // 01:37:919 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:03:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - etc - hitsounding

01:09:719 (6) - could be spaced way more or have nc or anything, I nearly misread this as 1/2 cause of the patterning before and it's like the only spot in the whole map I had issues with in that regard. also 01:09:119 (3,4,5) - seem kinda overspaced considering how you mapped these before - fixed both
01:06:419 (1) - finish would be great here // 03:25:921 (1) - 03:35:821 (1) - hitsounding
01:31:319 (5) - any reason to snap these and all similar ones to 1/12? at least 1/8 could make sense with the other snapping, but 1/12? your tails are muted anyways so you also don't really follow anything - snapped to 1/8 instead
same for things like 01:50:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - seems like there is a clear purpose, but I don't really get it - it's to emphasize the holds of the guitar since they're really dragging in the song, so I extended the sliders a lot more

01:34:919 (5,1) - could be cleaned up a bit overall http://lasse.s-ul.eu/tnqOvWYi.jpg (mainly cause your first curve is a bit broken lol)
01:38:369 (5,6) - really weird movement again for no reason, considering your had things like 01:23:519 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - pretty normal. why not ctrlg 01:38:069 (3,4) - and move 5 for http://lasse.s-ul.eu/fIK2cCso.jpg

Fixed above

01:50:519 (1,2,3,4,5) - drum additions? - hitsounding
02:03:721 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - similarly to the other one I can't see why you would make groups of 3 vocals on 02:04:321 (2,1) - and drums also don't seem to have 3/2 emphasis or anything. It just felt really weird to me - it's actually 6 note groups so I removed the ncs on the two 3's so it's 1,2,3,4,5,6 x 2 now

02:44:371 (1) - could add normal sliderwhistle or something like that and fade it by using some green lines + sampleset changes http://lasse.s-ul.eu/sJGYk0xw.jpg - hitsounding
02:53:821 (1,2) - really sudden and only 1/3 rhythm in the map, so in this case I think tapping should be simplified a bit, like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/SdyUXKSL.jpg or maybe http://lasse.s-ul.eu/vwaHFyyn.jpg - made a reverse

02:58:321 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - now here the 3note thing actually fits the guitar - the guitar here fills what would have been 3 note drums anyways so the guitar just ends up falling into the already established structure of the drums
03:37:621 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again I think groups of 3 make no sense with guitar/drums/vocals or anything. also the way spacing is handles here seems pretty weird as it's more like some kind of buildup, but 03:38:071 (1,2,3) - has the biggest jumps? // 04:04:621 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - okay I ended up removing all the NC things so these follow 6-note patterns to avoid confusion, as for the jump intensity, it actually feels like the intensity peaks in the middle and then drops again into the chorus so I made the middle jumps bigger to reflect that

04:16:321 (1) - could use normalwhistle on body or something // 04:59:971 (1) - hitpounds
04:40:021 - barely hitsounded 40% volume soft sampleset stream is pretty gross to play feeback wise - hitsounds
04:43:771 - guitar changes here, so your stream could reflect that http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rkVuQbUP.jpg
similar for 04:44:221 - like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/zLOc8pP6.jpg or http://lasse.s-ul.eu/M360qXdk.jpg
snapping overall on the streams is kinda weird cause of guitars, but having them simpliefied to 1/4 should be aslright in this case - made changes to this stream
04:46:321 (2,3,4,5) - could be two 1/4 sliders to get more emphasis on the really strong drum beats - made first one kick, second one hold
04:55:321 (1) - could ctrlg this so it visually makes more sense with movement into stream - done
04:57:721 (2,3,4) - could all be split into two single 1/4 sliders to make more sense with guitars - did changes accordingly
04:59:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - switching between drum and guitar emphasis multiple times here makes this so weird. maybe like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/rhXqgYWu.jpg for drums, or http://lasse.s-ul.eu/P6uhZp7H.jpg for guitar would work better - I like the guitar rhythm more so going with the second option

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visuals, and most spacing/emphasis/rhythm stuff looks alright. but hitsounding seems really lacking to me and some of the other stuff is a bit tilting too :c
won't pop, but also won't nominate this for now

Lasse wrote:

some more hitsounding things in addition to the irc yesterday:
02:45:721 (1) - missing whistle // 02:44:371 (1) - 02:45:721 (1) - 02:49:021 (1) - 04:18:121 (1) -

02:55:621 (1) - missing normal finish // 01:10:019 (1) - 01:20:819 (1) - actually I think this one is better as a drum finish so the last normal finish has more impact 02:03:721 (1) -
01:22:619 (1) - missing drum finish // 01:35:219 (1) - 01:37:019 (1) -

03:07:021 (1,2,3,4) - could have whistles on all of these for guitar things

hope I didn't miss any other cymbal things

snapping for guitar part is kinda lol cause the guitars are a mess. think having them that part mapped so 1/4 heavy is alright in this case

Lasse wrote:

fixed artist according to p/5467128
I knew I forgot something 👀

HighTec wrote:

24h :eyes:

Garden wrote:

i don't see a flashing storyboard but u have epilepsy warning on? - kiais used to have massive flashes so i put it on, doesn't seem to be an issue anymore so removed

01:16:919 (5) - why is it 1/6 snapping while it could be simply snapped to 1/4, this isn't a 1/3 song anyway - woops missed it

01:20:219 (4,5) - 01:31:319 (5) - 01:34:619 (4,5) - etc.. and why are they 1/8, 3/4 extended sliders should be enough for these.. hm if you have some reason to do so at least make 1/6 and 1/8 consistent? I can't understand different snapping usages here - yeah the one before was a mistake, also the reason I used such extended sliders was to capture the dragging sound of the guitar into the next notes where it was the most emphasized

02:05:071 (4,5,6) - imo it would be nice if you make them a big triangle like 02:04:621 (1,2,3) - so it feels progressing from 02:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - small ones

03:37:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ u have some different spacing concept here? - not too sure what you mean but the jump distance is based on the pitch of the guitar, which is why it peaks and then falls back down to lower spacing. I think this fits the intensity of the guitar more than just increasing ds jumps :3

04:16:321 (1) - maybe normal whistle on slider body - wanna keep it for the last slider since if i did it for this i'd have to do it for them all and it would kind of ruin the final impact of the last whistle

04:40:321 (5,6,1,2,3,1) - pattern is so clustered, u could space them much more tbh. it doesn't matter spacing is similar to the upcoming intense part cuz rhythms are overall less dense (mainly made up of 1/4 reversed sliders) - spaced them out more since I kind of agree now that you mention it

04:50:221 (1) - consider ctrlg it plays much smoother - done

04:55:321 (1,2) - rest of your jumps from 1/4 sliders to circles are not overlapping, avoid this one as well so visuals are consistent? - agreed on this as well,
fixed

Yuii- wrote:

That moment when Mir has more ranked mapsets than you.

Congrats, fam! Truly deserved.

Karen wrote:

are you sure the bpm isn't doubled, it sounds like bpm100

2016-12-04 17:47 Mir: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/4234581/sheet%20music/exec-sphilia.pdf
2016-12-04 17:47 Mir: apparently
2016-12-04 17:47 Mir: you're right
2016-12-04 17:48 Mir: i think?
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: mhm
2016-12-04 17:48 Mir: -siiiiigh-
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: and
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: 6/8
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: is basically
2016-12-04 17:48 Mir: i don't wanna go through it all and put in the timing points
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: 3/4
2016-12-04 17:48 C00L: :)

2016-12-04 17:46 C00L: dude
2016-12-04 17:46 C00L: i time for like 4 months now
2016-12-04 17:46 C00L: the downbeat is every 3 beat
2016-12-04 17:46 C00L: aka stronger sound in the section
2016-12-04 17:46 C00L: or measure
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: it seither gaytar
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: or drum hit
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: that you
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: hear
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: AKA
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: downbeat
2016-12-04 17:47 C00L: .e

IamKwaN wrote:

can you please link me a website stating the source? thanks.

Okorin wrote:

gz the map itself if a bit monotonous for my tastes but it's nice otherwise