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Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line

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Wizard Of Orz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 at 1:56:43 PM

Artist: Minami Kuribayashi
Title: Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size)
BPM: 179.5
Filesize: 23806kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rosette Style (3.59 stars, 122 notes)
  2. Chrno Style (4.68 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size)
Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (no video)
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Chrno crusades opening title which is my favorite anime :D!

Added vid :d

Added normal

fixed things

Ok the song and video didnt come out for some reason and its fixed now :D

big thanks to mattyu007 for modding my beatmap and i changed some things u stated

ok uploaded hollows map with couple of changes
CHANGED a bunch of spammed finish sounds by hollow >.>

fixed that dam spacing in the end >.>

changed it to awps timing

Can some BATs look in to this to get some approval?

added minor improvements

snapped normal

changes...

had pokebis mod mine

changed back to matty's timing

hooray for name changes!

cyclones help was loved :D

ty awp for retiming (no thanks to bubble pop)
-SiN-
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Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
its working now
mattyu007
I'm going to post a .osu file but i'll just put what I did here...
Some things look like this, that means it's something I didn't change (ie. removing beats) but are a suggestion

Timing: (Offset;BPM)
1,533 ms; 175 BPM
6,252 ms; 181.33 BPM
17,566 ms; 180.93 BPM
22,869 ms; 179.90 BPM
57,555 ms; 180 BPM
72,220 ms; 176.32 BPM
73,541 ms; 179.95 BPM
^ These may be (and probably are) off but hopefully not off by THAT much...

Hard:
Resnap all notes, Recalc slider lengths, Added 1 second lead-in
00:00:66 (1,2,3,4) - Moved back to line up with the red tick
00:01:53 (5) - Moved back to the white tick, moved it a little lower closer to (6)
00:01:87 (6) - Moved back to the white tick
00:02:04 (7) - Moved back to the red tick
00:02:73 (8) - Moved back to red tick, moved over closer to (9,10,11)
00:03:07 (9,10,11) - Moved back to the red tick, moved a little lower
00:03:42 (11) - Shortened to end on the red tick
00:03:93 (1,2) - Moved back to the white ticks
00:04:27 (2) - Lengthened to end on the next red tick
00:06:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Resnapped with the 1/2 divisor
00:09:23 (1) - Remove it? (I didn't do this, but I think it sounds better)
00:09:39 (2,3) - Resnapped to the red ticks
00:11:54 (1) - Moved to start on the white tick and end on a white tick
00:21:56 (1) - What is this for?
00:21:86 (2,3) - Moved to the white tick
00:22:62 (1,2,3,4) - Moved to blue tick, white tick, blue tick, white tick
00:25:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - Resnapped, moved (3,4) away from (2)
00:27:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Resnapped
00:29:53 (6) - Moved closer to (7)
00:31:87 (12) - Sounds better if it's not repeating?
00:33:20 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Resnapped (getting lazy :( (and tired))
00:40:87 (8) - Moved ontop of (6,7)
00:43:03 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Resnap....
00:52:21 (1) - Start, end on white tick
Not typing any more "resnap" stuff.......
01:09:38 (11) - Moved closer to (10)
01:17:05 (1) - Remove?

uhhhh...I'll do normal when I get back (~1 hour)

EDIT: Here's Normal:
Resnap all notes, Recalc slider lengths, Added 1 second lead-in
00:00:50 (1) - Remove it?
00:04:27 (2) - Made longer so it ends on the next red tick
00:11:21 (1) - Fixed to end and start on white ticks
00:25:87 (2) - Moved closer to (3)
00:28:20 (3) - Repeat once more?
00:30:87 (5) - Flipped vertically (spacing)
00:32:04 (6) - Moved to the end of the slider
00:38:87 (1) - Lengthen so it ends on the next white tick?
00:43:21 (1) - Shortened to end on the white tick
00:57:72 (5,8) - Remove? (I don't see how they go with the song)
00:58:88 (9) - Lengthen to end on the white tick?
01:00:22 (1) - Lengthened to end on the red tick
01:04:47 (5) - Moved down
01:05:30 (7) - Shortened to end on the white tick
01:10:80 (2) - Shortened to end on the blue tick
01:14:37 (1) - Lengthen to end on the red tick?
01:15:70 (1) - Add a repeat on the slider?
01:19:20 (1) - Shortened to end on the white tick

*phew*
I hope i haven't missed anything :|

Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (supergarlic) [Hard].osu

Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (supergarlic) [Normal].osu
mattyu007
Lookin good :P

Hard:
01:17:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should be closer together (spacing)

Normal:
00:02:73 (8) - Slider is a little too long, should end on the white tick.
00:04:27 (2) - Too long, should end on the red tick
00:22:86 (1,1) - Move them both back to the white tick and make them longer so they end on the white ticks
00:31:87 (6) - Shift it down so it's back on the grid, the notes will stack upwards and to the left automatically in play mode
00:51:80 (6) - Push it back so it ends on the white tick
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
did what u said matty :D
mattyu007
Well I can't really find anything wrong with it...You should probably find a BAT to look at it tho
awp
Roger, General! *sigtag*

I happened to love Chrno Crusade, too.
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
when u see chrno crusade its so captivating huh awp :D

so sad though =[ :(
awp
Oh wow this is better mapped than I thought. But video not work for me I really gotta fix my shit. Mattyu was close with his timings...sorta

there's only two sections. Here's what I got, though I'm not super confident with the first one.

BPM 178.25
Offset 1535

then

BPM 180.15
Offset 12260

For the most part your placement, distance and patterns are good, though I'd like to see them after the timing change. From what I saw originally there were patterns I really liked and some I thought could be changed to better compliment the song. You're one to keep an eye on, though~
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
thanks lol O_o :)
awp
by the way this map is going to make me really wanna watch Chrno Crusade again. I am not sure if I have all the episodes though one sec

Assuming there's 24 episodes then I have them all. Also, iirc, there was only like one bad episode (the Christmas one) and the climax, which lasted like six fucking episodes, was just fantastic. Loved the ending. People said it was a real downer (and arguably so) but it was excellent and a refreshing change from all those "awww everything worked out in the end ;D" pieces of yesterday.

btw got your other map timed, posting in it now~

well in a minute. Minor fine tuning.
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
oh i was changing mine after i saw that your modding it lol
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
i mean i was changing my beatmap then stopped after seeing ure post =p

NEVER STOP WATCHING CHRNO CRUSADE!!~~
-SiN-
yes, this is good :)

supergarlic wrote:

NEVER STOP WATCHING CHRNO CRUSADE!!~~
you will die for sure :lol:
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
what does that mean D:?
-SiN-
i mean, you should working on something else :lol:
Just kidding.. haha. :P

Hey, i like your beatmap :)
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
thanks lol
HollowDream_old
Well here u go super. i changed some spacing and added some other things.if i have more time later i might fix the timing probs but they arent that bad and i think its ok. Hope it helps even by a little :)

Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (supergarlic) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
i used ure map but i changed things

u use too much finish on a soft song >.>
HollowDream_old
im only putting this here because super did some weird thing to the end and he says he has no time to fix so here. (i know u want to make it harder but come on the spacing u did in the end was stupid)

Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (supergarlic) [Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
i didnt download ure i just changed ending =p
HollowDream_old

supergarlic wrote:

i didnt download ure i just changed ending =p
fine -_-
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
~~
awp
I took a quick look at the latest version, and right off the bat, [Normal] is not snapped to the timeline. Could you fix this please ;(
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
snapped
Pokebis
We fixed a bit in irc.
Anyways, this map has Pokeproval.
Of course I'm not a BAT so no real bubble, but this has my imaginary bubble.
BATs look at this please!
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
Listen to pokebis =[
mattyu007
I'll look at it :D
....tomorrow, sorry D:

But from what I remember, some beats sounded a little off last time I played it. Try going through the maps in the editor and fixing anything that doesn't sound right.

Edit: also,

lol@irc wrote:

[22:05] <supergarlic> why D:
[22:05] <supergarlic> to peppy im jsut a random osuer
[22:05] <supergarlic> but to many others...
[22:05] <supergarlic> i brighten their bread
thanks, garlic!
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
:D
mattyu007
I liked my old timing bettter ;/

@Pokebis: I wouldn't give it a bubble juuuust yet :P
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
changed~~
mattyu007
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mattyu007
Timing:
:/ I'm not so sure about my timing anymore! D: D: Need to bug someone else to get timing done...

Chrno Style:
Resnap all notes using beat snap divisor 1/4
00:04:21 (2) - Alright, this one is an exception...Use 1/6 and move it to the last tick before the white tick. Then switch back to 1/4 and shorten it so it ends on the first blue tick
00:08:56 (6,7) - Move back to white tick,red tick respectively
00:43:96 (1,2) - Move forward 1/4
00:50:80 (4) - 1/4 forward
00:51:80 (7,8) - ^
01:05:22 (10) - Shorten 1/2 beat and move up a little on the playfield so the new sliderend is where the old one was
01:09:38 (11) - 1/4 longer
01:09:97 (12) - 1/4 forward and maybe move this underneath the sliderend of (11)?
01:10:47 (1,2) - Use 1/6 and move then to the last ticks before the white ticks
01:12:13 (1,2,3,4,5) - Using 1/4, move (1) to the blue tick backwards, have (2) 3 ticks away from (1), them have (3) e ticks away from (2), etc...
01:13:35 (6) - Using 1/6, move this to the second tick (the one right before the red tick)
01:19:13 (1) - End ~2 beats later on the white tick

Rosette Style:
Resnap all with 1/4
00:02:56 (8,9) - Move forward to red ticks
00:04:21 (2) - Use 1/6 and move it to the last tick before the white tick.
00:08:98 (1,2,3) - Move forward to red ticks
00:11:21 (1) - Move back so it doesnt overlap with the sliders
00:22:87 (1,1) - Move 1 beat forward
00:25:37 (1,2) - Red tick and white tick right after the slider, also move a bit closer to the black slider end
00:36:96 (6,7,8) - 1/4 forward
00:44:88 (3) - New combo
00:58:22 (7) - Remove it? (doesnt go with the music)
00:58:72 (8) - ^
...after removing
00:58:55 (7,8) - 1/2 back to red ticks, and move closer to (5,6)
01:04:30 (5) - Forward to white tick, move away from (4)
01:05:05 (6) - Forward to red tick
01:05:22 (7) - Remove
01:04:55 (5,6) - Move so that they point to the next combo
01:05:55 (1) - 1/2 back to white tick and repeat until there are 4 repeat signs in the timeline
01:10:47 (1,2) - 1/4 forward to white ticks
01:12:30 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1/4 forward
01:14:37 (1) - ^
01:15:62 (1) - ^

I think that's it for now...
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
FIXED with some disagreements though =o
Cyclone
Timing: After the break i took 180.08 BPM for the entire song. I didn't want to touch anything else. Any offset changes will be in my .osu. It's not perfect by any means, but i don't have enough patience to keep trying right now.


Chrno Style: (Is that spelled right? It's not Chrono?)

00:08:48 (6,7) Move forward 1/4 beat. Shorten Slider by 1/2 beat.
00:10:96 (spinner) Maybe not start that until there's a definite beat playing.
00:22:62 (1) Move back 1/4 beat. Move closer to the Yellow combo for spacing.
00:23:95 (3) Move back 1/4 beat.
00:27:87 (1,2,3,4,5) Delete the 3. Move the 4 back to where the 3 was. Make that slider last 1 full beat. Move the 5 to the red tick.
00:37:21 (7) shorten the slider 1/2 beat. Move it forward 1/2 beat. Add a beat where the 7 originally started.
00:43:13 (1,2) Move back 1/4 beat.
00:43:96 (1,2) Move the 1 forward 1/2 beat. Either delete the 2 or move it to 00:44:54 (White tick)
00:46:88 (1,2,3) Option 1. Remove the 2, and adjust the slider to end where the 2 was. Move the 3 1/2 beat forward and stacked over the 4 and 5
00:46:88 (1,2,3) Option 2. Move the 3 over the 4 and 5 and push it forward 1/2 beat.
00:56:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Remove 3 and 5. Shorten the First slider by 1/4 beat. Move the second slider back 1/4 beat. Move the last 2 beats forward 1/4 beat.
01:05:22 (10) Move forward 1/2 beat
01:05:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Remove the 3. Remove one of the sliders. Make the other slider 1 beat long. Place the slider 1 beat after the remaining note. Add a note 1/2 beat after the slider if you want.
01:07:38 (All Red) Make it: All 1/2 beats up to 6. 6 is a beat long slider. 7: 1/2 beat after end of slider. 8: 1 beat after 7. 9(was 11): 1 beat after 8. 10: 1/2 beat after 9's slider. Delete any extra notes.
01:14:69 Add a beat here.


Other difficulty will have to be modded later. All changes above are in my .osu. I just didn't space them, so thats up to you.

Download: Minami Kuribayashi - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line (TV size) (supergarlic) [Cyclone(Chrno edit)].osu
mattyu007

supergarlic wrote:

FIXED with some disagreements though =o
care to elaborate?
Cyclone
Take my name out of the title. Chrno Style was fine.

Timing Edit:

1st Timing Section
179.50 BPM
1,563 Offset

2nd Timing Section
180.10 BPM
12,259 Offset

3rd Timing Section
180.10 BPM
22,891 Offset

4th Timing Section
180.10 BPM
72,197 Offset

5th Timing Section
180.26 BPM
73,529 Offset

Remove any extra timing sections not listed above. Anybody should feel free to check my timing

Chrno Style:

00:00:68 (1,2) - These need to actually be on the yellow ticks. Start the 1 on the yellow tick left of the red one, and the 2 to the right of the blue tick
00:08:650 (7,8) - Remove 7. Push back the slider to where the 7 was. No other changes to the slider
00:22:21 (1,2,1) - These also need to be on the yellow ticks. the first 1 needs to be left of the White tick, and each note lands exactly 1/2 beat after the previous beat.
01:07:533 (2,3,4,5) - I can tell this was just copied out of my last .osu. Space these out a bit. And maybe move the 7 closer to the end of the slider.


Rosette Style:

00:11:13 (spinner) - Move the spinner same way as in Chrno Style.(shorten THEN move, or else the break will be messed up. Or you could just re-add it afterwards.)
00:25:37 (1) - remove this
00:58:22 (7) - remove this
01:05:05 (6) - move forward 1/2 beat. Space slightly away from slider.
01:05:38 (1) - move directly below start of 2
01:05:72 (2,3) - This could work one of 2 ways. Easiest being repeat the slider 1 more time(1/4 beat more) and push forward the 3 1/4 beat. Or you can SHORTEN the slider by 1 repeat(1/4 beat less), push the 3 forward 1/4 beat and add in the missing note(on the red tick).
01:18:37 (4) - shorten or lengthen by 1/4 beat. Both seem to work.
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
fixed and i forgot to change the name lol
Cyclone
Almost there.

Chrno Style:

00:08:41 (6,7) - Move forward 1/2 beat (i think i confused you on the placement of this before.)
Re-add the break

Rosette Style:

00:00:64 (1,2) - I missed these before. Same as in Chrno Style please.
00:22:83 (1) - It's snapped to the wrong Timing Section.
00:52:20 (1) - Lengthen the spinner by 1/4 beat
00:58:20 (7) - I think you removed the wrong note. Move the 7 forward 1/2 beat and space it accordingly.
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
did it
Cyclone
Chrno:

00:00:72 (1,2) - Change Rosette style INTO chrno style, not the other way around. (place then back on the yellow ticks.)
Move the timeline on the break, right click it on the timeline, then add the break again.

Rosette:

00:00:72 (1,2) - By know you should know.(I hope) Yellow ticks please(if you happen to forget which ones, read up to my post which states this)


EDIT: Above has been changed. (Except the break, which actually doesn't kill the song, it's just dangerously close to the spinner) Bubbled
awp
You've got your own thing going, and while on occasion in Rosette style it felt sudden and jerky, I was into it the second time around and it sounded much nicer. Could use a background though, for those who don't like video.

Offset nazi'ing:

Offset 1: idk left it
2: 12,235
3: 22,891 - BPM is 180.106 (lol@MD and Sinistro) and remove the rest of the timing sections.

Also good luck on sticking BG in but I gotta jet oh fuck bubblepoooooooop~
Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
phixed
Cyclone
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
With the new timing in place, New background, Re-snapping of off-beat notes, and color change due to new background, Bubble restored.
Mogsy
Not necessarily my favourite map. But, you know, that doesn't make it bad by any means. Solid map. I can't find anything really wrong with it. So, this is ranked.
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