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Hatsune miku - One-way Route

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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月16日 at 11:28:24

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: One-way Route
Source: Yucha-P
Tags: yucha Vocaloid vocaloid2
BPM: 184
Filesize: 12807kb
Play Time: 03:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. One-way Route (5 stars, 592 notes)
  2. Route (4.52 stars, 378 notes)
  3. Street (2.84 stars, 227 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - One-way Route
Download: Hatsune Miku - One-way Route (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Come Guys XD!!
Hatsune Miku
One-way Route

Thanks to everyone below!

2011/5/08: UP
2011/7/13:change normal
loveFantasy
192kbps as request
http://puu.sh/1VCT
右鍵在網頁上任何位置點, 另存新檔即可

BPM: 184.000
Offset: 1,364

Source: Vocaloid (V大寫, 其他小寫)
Tags: yucha yucha-p vocaloid2 其他的刪掉
Title: One-way Route
Artist: Hatsune Miku (M大寫)

要更動Offset, 一次調整所有紅線和綠線的方法如下圖

good luck.
EnakoRin
(我来混KDS的
Now is modding Hatsune miku - One-way street(tutuhaha)

General
{
  BPM = 184.02……我用软件测的,如果这是真的你这图就得推了重来了orz
  歌曲包里面有个无用的两个osb文件,删掉之
  用记事本打开你的osu文件,看到[Events]那里的下面,把"sm14301091 - 【初音ミク】一方通行【オリジナル曲】_baofeng.flv"改为非中文名字。同样文件夹下的flv文件名称也改了
  flv文件有音轨,会增大歌曲包的大小,重压成无音轨的avi格式
  视频本身的分辨率也太小了……下nico上的高清格式吧
  音乐文件不要用320kbps的,改用192kbps的。这是新出的硬性规定
}

way
{
  song setup里面,把Overall Diffculty调到8
  offset = 1362

  00:01:361 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
  00:03:318 (1) - 去掉new combo
  00:05:927 (1) - 去掉new combo
  00:07:883 (1,2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  00:36:417 (2) - 同上,再右移一格,注意这个slider的最后多了一格锚点,去掉之
  00:37:232 (2) - 左移一格
  00:40:004 (6) - 右移一格
  00:41:635 (2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  00:43:102 (1) - 加finish
  00:58:755 (1) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:02:342 (1) - 去掉new combo
  01:04:461 (2) - new combo
  01:04:951 (4) - 同上
  01:05:440 (5) - 同上
  01:06:581 (1) - 这里可以加KIAI
  01:07:722 (4) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:10:331 (6) - 唔……不够水平呢
  01:11:473 (9) - 最后一个圈加finish
  01:14:897 (2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:44:245 (4) - 同上
  02:01:366 (1) - 同上,加KIAI
  02:05:931 (7) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  02:08:540 (5) - 同上,距离不对
  02:09:681 (2) - 我的建议是这个slider换成circle
  02:11:638 (8) - 最后一个圈加finish
  02:17:344 (1) - 去掉new combo
  02:28:921 (7) - new combo
  02:30:878 (4) - 建议从这里到02:23:671换成finish音效的spinner
  02:57:292 (5) - 右移一格
  02:58:759 (1) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  03:03:161 (5) - 距离不对
  03:13:760 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish

还是不错的
}

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EasyModder Beta3
Program By Weiren
Shiki
Hi`.

[way]
↑ w大写吧 其实我感觉改成One-way好点
总体来说我觉得hitsound声音小了点
00:07:871 (1) - 试着把这个拉得左右对称
01:00:699 (7) - 1 grid down
或者 01:00:536 (6) - 1 grid up
01:07:384 (3,4) - 拉开点
01:24:178 (7) - 减一个repeat?
01:27:113 (5) - 中间那个红点有什么意义吗?
01:39:179 (3,4,5,6) - 突然变间距感觉很奇怪
01:45:701 (1) - 拉得对称些
01:55:484 (8,1) - 1 grid left?
02:08:202 (4,5) - 间距太小,人家会以为间隔是1/4
02:12:278 (2) - 拉得对称些?
02:22:224 ~ 03:01:030 - 这段基本静音了,会很没有打击感
02:57:280 (5) - 1 grid up and right?

[Hard]
00:05:603 (9) - a grid down?
00:07:233 (2) - 减一repeat
00:35:277 (6) - new combo?
00:40:494 (5) - ^
01:04:624 (1,1) - 重音分别在01:04:950 01:05:113 01:05:440和01:05:603,这两个应该重新调整下
01:22:233 (1,2,3,4) - 如果你想摆个梯形什么的那就歪了
01:39:190 (5) - 减一个repeat? 然后要重新弄音效

[Easy]

00:59:488 (7) - 前移1/4
01:15:548 (5) - 我觉得这个不好看

GJ. Star~
Neptunus
同OFFLINE,建议短slider去掉绿线
整体很好
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Weiren wrote:

(我来混KDS的
Now is modding Hatsune miku - One-way street(tutuhaha)

General
{
  BPM = 184.02……我用软件测的,如果这是真的你这图就得推了重来了orz
  歌曲包里面有个无用的两个osb文件,删掉之
  用记事本打开你的osu文件,看到[Events]那里的下面,把"sm14301091 - 【初音ミク】一方通行【オリジナル曲】_baofeng.flv"改为非中文名字。同样文件夹下的flv文件名称也改了
  flv文件有音轨,会增大歌曲包的大小,重压成无音轨的avi格式
  视频本身的分辨率也太小了……下nico上的高清格式吧
  音乐文件不要用320kbps的,改用192kbps的。这是新出的硬性规定
}

way
{
  song setup里面,把Overall Diffculty调到8
  offset = 1362

  00:01:361 (1) - 第一个圈加finish
  00:03:318 (1) - 去掉new combo
  00:05:927 (1) - 去掉new combo
  00:07:883 (1,2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  00:36:417 (2) - 同上,再右移一格,注意这个slider的最后多了一格锚点,去掉之
  00:37:232 (2) - 左移一格
  00:40:004 (6) - 右移一格
  00:41:635 (2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  00:43:102 (1) - 加finish
  00:58:755 (1) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:02:342 (1) - 去掉new combo
  01:04:461 (2) - new combo
  01:04:951 (4) - 同上
  01:05:440 (5) - 同上
  01:06:581 (1) - 这里可以加KIAI
  01:07:722 (4) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:10:331 (6) - 唔……不够水平呢
  01:11:473 (9) - 最后一个圈加finish
  01:14:897 (2) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  01:44:245 (4) - 同上
  02:01:366 (1) - 同上,加KIAI
  02:05:931 (7) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  02:08:540 (5) - 同上,距离不对
  02:09:681 (2) - 我的建议是这个slider换成circle
  02:11:638 (8) - 最后一个圈加finish
  02:17:344 (1) - 去掉new combo
  02:28:921 (7) - new combo
  02:30:878 (4) - 建议从这里到02:23:671换成finish音效的spinner
  02:57:292 (5) - 右移一格
  02:58:759 (1) - 建议这里不要用x0.5,会比较奇怪
  03:03:161 (5) - 距离不对
  03:13:760 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish

还是不错的
}

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EasyModder Beta3
Program By Weiren
0.5X的那些我改了一点
剩下的我会想想怎么摆比较自然【1X的有点挤
谢谢^ ^ :)
Hyskoahunter
~stars~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Shiki wrote:

Hi`.

[way]
↑ w大写吧 其实我感觉改成One-way好点
总体来说我觉得hitsound声音小了点
00:07:871 (1) - 试着把这个拉得左右对称
01:00:699 (7) - 1 grid down
或者 01:00:536 (6) - 1 grid up
01:07:384 (3,4) - 拉开点
01:24:178 (7) - 减一个repeat?
01:27:113 (5) - 中间那个红点有什么意义吗?
01:39:179 (3,4,5,6) - 突然变间距感觉很奇怪
01:45:701 (1) - 拉得对称些
01:55:484 (8,1) - 1 grid left?
02:08:202 (4,5) - 间距太小,人家会以为间隔是1/4
02:12:278 (2) - 拉得对称些?
02:22:224 ~ 03:01:030 - 这段基本静音了,会很没有打击感
02:57:280 (5) - 1 grid up and right?

[Hard]
00:05:603 (9) - a grid down?
00:07:233 (2) - 减一repeat
00:35:277 (6) - new combo?
00:40:494 (5) - ^
01:04:624 (1,1) - 重音分别在01:04:950 01:05:113 01:05:440和01:05:603,这两个应该重新调整下
01:22:233 (1,2,3,4) - 如果你想摆个梯形什么的那就歪了
01:39:190 (5) - 减一个repeat? 然后要重新弄音效

[Easy]

00:59:488 (7) - 前移1/4
01:15:548 (5) - 我觉得这个不好看

GJ. Star~
灰常感谢指出排版的问题XD
那个意义不明的红点我一不小心点上去的【、、、、
拉走了【。。。。。
XD
Hyskoahunter
~stars~
zsr123
:)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

zsr123 wrote:

:)
thank you for stars XD
Pereira006
hello~

this just some suggestion

[easy]

Music track is 2
-4 Overall dificult

00:01:364 (1) - Grid 1 leff
00:03:972 (3) - Grid 1 left
01:54:842 (1) - Incorrect spacing
01:56:146 (1) - Incorrect spacing
02:10:331 (4) - grid 1 right and up if you do this 02:11:146 (5) - grid 1 right

[hard]

Music track 2

00:09:842 (8) - Grid 1 dowm
00:41:472 (8,9,10,11) - Grid 1 left
00:59:733 (1) - New combo

perfect diff i like this

[one-way]


Music track 2
Slider tick rate is 1 no 0.5

01:19:950 (2) - Grid 1 up

wooow aswome

Star and good luck
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~

this just some suggestion

[easy]

Music track is 2
-4 Overall dificult

00:01:364 (1) - Grid 1 leff
00:03:972 (3) - Grid 1 left
01:54:842 (1) - Incorrect spacing
01:56:146 (1) - Incorrect spacing
02:10:331 (4) - grid 1 right and up if you do this 02:11:146 (5) - grid 1 right

[hard]

Music track 2

00:09:842 (8) - Grid 1 dowm
00:41:472 (8,9,10,11) - Grid 1 left
00:59:733 (1) - New combo

perfect diff i like this

[one-way]


Music track 2
Slider tick rate is 1 no 0.5

01:19:950 (2) - Grid 1 up

wooow aswome

Star and good luck
thank you for you help XD
niceXD :)
zsr123
不会mod呀 :o

都是建议 觉得好就用吧 :o

[One-way]

01:14:896 (2) - 延长到 01:15:385 ?..

[Hard]

01:04:624 (1) - 01:04:950 结束
01:05:277 (1) - 移到 01:05:113 01:05:440结束
01:05:603 (x) - 这里加个slider 到01:05:766结束 结束的地方用normal hitsound

02:10:820 (x) - 加个note ?


SB没有用到的话 去文件夹下把那2个.osb删掉 然后full submit一遍

:)
valuable_old
:)
Debbiee
Hi :P

General
Change the background. It must be at least 800x600

Easy
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
00:37:233 (6) - Finish on the end
00:40:168 (3) - Finish
01:03:972 (1) - ^
01:07:885 (2) - Clap on the repeat
01:08:863 (3) - Clap
01:11:472 (6) - ^
01:18:320 (3) - Clap on the end
01:18:972 (4) - ^
01:20:929 (6) - ^
02:05:277 (4) - ^
02:05:929 (5) - ^
02:13:103 (2) - ^
02:13:755 (3) - ^

Hard
00:11:146 (11) - Finish on start
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
02:32:668 - ^

One-way
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
02:18:646 (2) - Remove NC
02:32:668 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.


Nice map. Star!
Good luck. ;)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

valuable wrote:

:)
thank you for your stars !XD
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Debbiee wrote:

Hi :P

General
Change the background. It must be at least 800x600

Easy
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
00:37:233 (6) - Finish on the end
00:40:168 (3) - Finish
01:03:972 (1) - ^
01:07:885 (2) - Clap on the repeat
01:08:863 (3) - Clap
01:11:472 (6) - ^
01:18:320 (3) - Clap on the end
01:18:972 (4) - ^
01:20:929 (6) - ^
02:05:277 (4) - ^
02:05:929 (5) - ^
02:13:103 (2) - ^
02:13:755 (3) - ^

Hard
00:11:146 (11) - Finish on start
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
02:32:668 - ^

One-way
00:11:798 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.
02:18:646 (2) - Remove NC
02:32:668 - This break is really long. Add some notes here.


Nice map. Star!
Good luck. ;)

thank you for your mod ! I did it !
TorNis
[Easy]
Decrease -1 overral difficulty and -1 HP drain

00:02:668 (2) - end slider on 00:03:320 to follow your intro pattern
00:08:863 (3) - remove it, because if your intro pattern
00:10:657 - End slider on 00:11:798
00:31:363 - Move slider back to 00:31:037 and increase it till 00:32:342
00:34:950 (3) - hidden note is too hard for "easy"
00:40:168 (3,4) - ^
00:42:777 (7) - ^
00:58:755 (1) - ^
01:03:972 (5) - ^
01:08:211 (3) - spacing problem
01:14:896 (4) - it seems you tried to follow vocal line, slider should end on white tick, but that's too hard for easy, so instead place slider on 01:14:733
01:17:016 (1) - hidden again :)
01:49:624 - remove new combo
01:52:233 - ^
01:54:843 - ^
01:57:450 - ^
01:59:407 - add new combo
02:00:711 (6,7) - hidden
02:07:885 (2) - remove reverse and put at 02:09:190 circle. imo it's better for vocal line
02:11:146 (6) - replace the slider with circle
02:11:798 (1,2) - add these 2 circles into next combo
02:14:407 (7) - hidden
02:17:668 (2) - ^
02:18:972 (4) - ^
02:36:255 (4) - ^
02:40:494 (1,2,3) - this doesn't fit the music. this try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87531 (look at the timeline)
02:50:603 (6) - hidden
02:53:537 - start of combo is too away from center after spinner
03:01:363 (3) - look at 01:14:407 comment

[Hard]
00:03:972 - New combo
00:09:190 - ^
00:35:277 - ^
00:40:494 - ^
00:59:733 - Remove new combo
01:54:842 - ^
01:55:820 (2) - circle would be better imo
01:58:429 (8,9,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87532 (look at the timeline)
03:09:190 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know about 1 note per combo. Players won't be able to see that clearly + new combo removes dots (jumping indicators)

That's all :3
Also star for effort :)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

TorNis wrote:

[Easy]
Decrease -1 overral difficulty and -1 HP drain

00:02:668 (2) - end slider on 00:03:320 to follow your intro pattern
00:08:863 (3) - remove it, because if your intro pattern
00:10:657 - End slider on 00:11:798
00:31:363 - Move slider back to 00:31:037 and increase it till 00:32:342
00:34:950 (3) - hidden note is too hard for "easy"
00:40:168 (3,4) - ^
00:42:777 (7) - ^
00:58:755 (1) - ^
01:03:972 (5) - ^
01:08:211 (3) - spacing problem
01:14:896 (4) - it seems you tried to follow vocal line, slider should end on white tick, but that's too hard for easy, so instead place slider on 01:14:733
01:17:016 (1) - hidden again :)
01:49:624 - remove new combo
01:52:233 - ^
01:54:843 - ^
01:57:450 - ^
01:59:407 - add new combo
02:00:711 (6,7) - hidden
02:07:885 (2) - remove reverse and put at 02:09:190 circle. imo it's better for vocal line
02:11:146 (6) - replace the slider with circle
02:11:798 (1,2) - add these 2 circles into next combo
02:14:407 (7) - hidden
02:17:668 (2) - ^
02:18:972 (4) - ^
02:36:255 (4) - ^
02:40:494 (1,2,3) - this doesn't fit the music. this try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87531 (look at the timeline)
02:50:603 (6) - hidden
02:53:537 - start of combo is too away from center after spinner
03:01:363 (3) - look at 01:14:407 comment

[Hard]
00:03:972 - New combo
00:09:190 - ^
00:35:277 - ^
00:40:494 - ^
00:59:733 - Remove new combo
01:54:842 - ^
01:55:820 (2) - circle would be better imo
01:58:429 (8,9,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87532 (look at the timeline)
03:09:190 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know about 1 note per combo. Players won't be able to see that clearly + new combo removes dots (jumping indicators)

That's all :3
Also star for effort :)
thank you so much XD!!!
MoodyRPG
[Easy]

00:24:842 (4) - New combo
00:56:146 (5) - ^
01:19:624 (5) - ^
01:40:494 (3) - ^
01:58:755 (3) - ^
02:03:972 (4) - ^
02:14:407 (5) - ^
02:27:450 (6) - ^
02:36:581 (5) - ^
02:48:320 (4) - ^
03:09:190 (5) - ^

[balbal]

Fine

[One-way]

00:35:113 (1) - Remove new combo

Star~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Easy]

00:24:842 (4) - New combo
00:56:146 (5) - ^
01:19:624 (5) - ^
01:40:494 (3) - ^
01:58:755 (3) - ^
02:03:972 (4) - ^
02:14:407 (5) - ^
02:27:450 (6) - ^
02:36:581 (5) - ^
02:48:320 (4) - ^
03:09:190 (5) - ^

[balbal]

Fine

[One-way]

00:35:113 (1) - Remove new combo

Star~
thank for mod and startXD!!!!!!!
Shinki
Elfen_Lied
mapper群的新人路过 :)
star~
Nymph
加油~
DaxMasterix
Good BeatMap =w=
Star~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Thank you for DaxMaster ,Nymph_ ,Elfen_Lied ,Shinki 's star XD!!
Astom
hi~

[General]
-Set preview point in all diffs (Timing -> Set Current position as Preview Point)

[Easy]
-00:10:657 (1) - finish it in 00:11:798, at least 4k of points with autoplay for easy diff.
-00:45:711 unnused timing point?
-01:03:320 (4) - whistle at end?
-lower volume, like in insane, at start

[balbal]
-Open AIMod (File -> Open AIMod) and look for unsnapped circles
-lower volume, like in insane, at start
-01:26:798 (1) - hidden reverse arrow, do something different please.

[One-way]
-Slider Tick Rate 1, no reason for use 0,5
-Open AIMod (File -> Open AIMod) and look for unsnapped circles

:3
- Rche -
balbal
what does it mean...
some unsnapped notes in this diff. check AIMod.
00:09:842 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:342 (2) - new combo
01:26:146 (1,1,1) - this kind of placement is not good-looking...
02:10:331 (2) - new combo?

One-way
unsnapped notes again.
i can't mod insane diffs well so skipped.

Easy
00:10:657 (1,1) - putting notes just after spinner is no good for easy.
00:35:929 (4) - new combo
01:04:054 (1) - start 1/4 later?
01:40:494 (3) - new combo
02:41:798 (2) - not fit the music imo.
02:51:010 (1) - start 1/4 later?
03:11:880 (1) - ^
mi sa
这是一首好歌,唱的是与传统的背道而驰的style。一方通行,也就是说绝不回头,喜欢初音这种毅然决然的叛逆。

说到mod
easy里面
00:10:657 - spinner到00:11:309就可以了
01:04:054 - spinner从01:04:298到01:05:929
01:07:559 - 加入一个circle,kiai节奏要紧凑一些好
02:19:624 - spinner到02:21:581就可以了
02:36:255 - circle不要重叠,因为变奏
02:50:929 - 去掉circle,spinner前移至此处,spinner到02:52:885止
03:11:798 - 去掉circle,spinner前移至此处,spinner到03:13:755止
音效可以再做一下

balbal里面
00:58:592 - 去掉circle
01:04:950 - circle改成与3重叠,也可以不改
01:27:287 - slider去掉,换成01:27:450的circle
01:59:244 - 1,2,3去掉,改成01:59:081到01:59:896的3个slider,和02:00:059两折返的slider。我觉得这里不必对应vocal,得加节奏
02:19:706 - 后移spinner到02:19:787
02:23:274 - circle位置不好,应该顺着slider
02:34:461 - 一拍的slider换成一个二分之一拍的slider和一个circle
02:40:494 - 直slider换成曲slider
02:51:010 - 后移spinner到02:51:092

One-way难度太高,我玩不了,大致看了一下挺好。
第一次mod,还真是累,不过总算吐槽了点... 你也可以帮我看看图,我是新人,谢谢。
Akareh
Great job, good luck :)

~Star~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Akareh wrote:

Great job, good luck :)

~Star~
thank!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Leorda
Hello

General
* Your BG is very low-quality and very small BG. You need some bigger image and good quality
* I have 2 OSB in your mapset. Remove them
* Set the preview time to 01:06:581
* I think 1st and 4th kiai is not fit to the song

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Easy

00:10:657 (1) - These spinner are too short. You need to extend it or replace this into one slider. Otherwise, some noobs is don't have a time to clear this spinner
00:11:798 (1) - Do not place the circle after spinner, it's not beginner friendly
00:31:363 (1) - Again, it's short spinner
00:32:668 (1) - Same issue as 00:11:798 (1)
01:06:581 (1) - Too far from spinner, you need close this to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
01:48:320 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
01:53:537 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:03:972 (1) - Not stack perfectly with previous note
02:22:233 (1) - Same issue as 00:11:798 (1)
02:27:450 (1) - I think placing this slider on HP Bar is odd to see. Can you move this slider down?
02:47:668 (2) - The slider body is hidden because the tail slider. If the slider body is hidden, the noobs is confusing where to slide the slider
02:53:537 (1) - Too far from spinner, you need close this to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
03:06:581 (1) - Inconsistent spacing

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balbal
00:10:657 (1) - Unstack this? I think it's odd having a stack in 1/2 stream in this diff.....
00:58:592 (5,1) - Stack with tail slider?
01:04:624 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:950 (2) - Unstack this? I get confuse this while gameplay
01:05:440 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:917 (1) - ^
01:14:407 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
01:26:798 (1) - The repeating arrow is hidden, because the slider and hitburst. It's unrankable you know
01:55:820 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - IMO, this combos are make no sense
02:09:679 (1) - Remove new combo
02:10:168 (1) - ^
02:24:842 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
02:25:494 (1,1,2,3) - Make this pattern more pretty please..... It's kinda odd to look
03:13:755 (1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this

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One-way
00:08:700 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:35:113 (1) - ^
01:07:396 (3) - Too close from tail slider
01:17:342 (2) - Make this hitsound from soft-hitnormal to normal-hitnormal
01:52:233 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
02:17:016 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - These combos are make no sense at all

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I think these map needs more work, but not bad at all
Also, sorry for very long mod~ :(
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

KyonkoHizara wrote:

:)
thank for you start!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
yanhan1064
Nice map Star :)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
Thanky for yanhan1064 and Shiki!!!!
Shiki I love you so much!!!!!!!! :)
veoliouy
专业送星 星到付款XD
T s u k a s a
:roll:
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
:cry: 感动的一塌糊涂LS的两位T口T
Megurine Luka
先射星
Topic Starter
tutuhaha
你太萌了Luka
winber1
One-Way

--AR +1 (I would prefer you AR +2 tho, but at least +1)
--I find the spacing to be a little small actually. If the spacing was larger, i'd find the song more fun to play :3.. oh well

--in all honesty, i actually want more notes to be placed in the kiai section. (in these kiai times: 01:06:581 - , 02:01:363 - , 03:03:972 - ) I'd like it better if it was mostly constant 1/2 ticks :3

00:30:874 (x) - add note. This space is very awkward.
00:38:374 (2) - *nazi* up 1 grid
01:06:907 (2,3) - anti-spacing doesn't fit here imo. Although I actually read it correctly (on AR 9), I don't really like it here.
01:08:700 (8,9) - blanket combo 8 better? >_>
01:16:352 (3) - add one more repeat on to the note
01:19:950 (2,3) - why did you change the spacing like this o_o... space the same as before?
01:27:287 (3) - unstack?
01:39:353 (4) - this placement of the note really bothers me... also, it just looks like you didn't know where else to put the note even if it's not the case
02:36:581 (11,1) - erm.. i don't like this anti-spacing either.
02:39:679 (1) - remove new combo

balbal

--Use AR 6 or 7.
--If this is supposed to be a hard, the OD and HP drain are WAY too low..

00:03:646 (5) - not perfectly stacked..
00:07:885 (5,6) - spacing.
00:09:842 (1) - remove combo
01:05:440 (1) - ^
01:14:896 (1,1) - ^
01:26:472 (1,1) - ^
01:55:820 (1) - ^
02:00:711 (1) - ^
02:09:679 (1,1) - ^
02:10:820 (5) - new combo
02:25:168 (1,1,1) - remove combo
03:04:787 (3,4) - i would space this out more..


Easy

--Use OD 3 or something, and perhaps decrease hp drain by 1 to match the OD?

01:50:929 (1) - remove combo
01:52:233 (1) - ^
01:54:842 (1,1,1) - ^
02:19:624 (1,1) - the slider seems to come after the spinner a little soon. so you can end spinner at 02:21:581?
02:27:450 (1,2) - spacing
02:36:581 (5,1) - ^
02:53:537 (1) - This note comes a little soon and it definitely too far away from the center. so you should end the spinner a little earlier.
03:13:755 (1) - end spinner here?

Cool map! :3
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

winber1 wrote:

One-Way

--AR +1 (I would prefer you AR +2 tho, but at least +1)
--I find the spacing to be a little small actually. If the spacing was larger, i'd find the song more fun to play :3.. oh well

--in all honesty, i actually want more notes to be placed in the kiai section. (in these kiai times: 01:06:581 - , 02:01:363 - , 03:03:972 - ) I'd like it better if it was mostly constant 1/2 ticks :3

00:30:874 (x) - add note. This space is very awkward.
00:38:374 (2) - *nazi* up 1 grid
01:06:907 (2,3) - anti-spacing doesn't fit here imo. Although I actually read it correctly (on AR 9), I don't really like it here.
01:08:700 (8,9) - blanket combo 8 better? >_>
01:16:352 (3) - add one more repeat on to the note
01:19:950 (2,3) - why did you change the spacing like this o_o... space the same as before?
01:27:287 (3) - unstack?
01:39:353 (4) - this placement of the note really bothers me... also, it just looks like you didn't know where else to put the note even if it's not the case
02:36:581 (11,1) - erm.. i don't like this anti-spacing either.
02:39:679 (1) - remove new combo

balbal

--Use AR 6 or 7.
--If this is supposed to be a hard, the OD and HP drain are WAY too low..

00:03:646 (5) - not perfectly stacked..
00:07:885 (5,6) - spacing.
00:09:842 (1) - remove combo
01:05:440 (1) - ^
01:14:896 (1,1) - ^
01:26:472 (1,1) - ^
01:55:820 (1) - ^
02:00:711 (1) - ^
02:09:679 (1,1) - ^
02:10:820 (5) - new combo
02:25:168 (1,1,1) - remove combo
03:04:787 (3,4) - i would space this out more..


Easy

--Use OD 3 or something, and perhaps decrease hp drain by 1 to match the OD?

01:50:929 (1) - remove combo
01:52:233 (1) - ^
01:54:842 (1,1,1) - ^
02:19:624 (1,1) - the slider seems to come after the spinner a little soon. so you can end spinner at 02:21:581?
02:27:450 (1,2) - spacing
02:36:581 (5,1) - ^
02:53:537 (1) - This note comes a little soon and it definitely too far away from the center. so you should end the spinner a little earlier.
03:13:755 (1) - end spinner here?

Cool map! :3
thank you for you mod XD!
spboxer3
[Easy]
AR調到2或3
00:33:972 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:48:972 (4) - 堆疊! 需要把(4)擺在(3)的結尾上 完全重疊!

[balbal]
01:20:113 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:07:722 (5,6) - 不好看~容易造成誤解

[One-way]
01:06:907 (2,3) - 不容易看懂spacing的位置 因為(1)(2)的間距和(2)(3)還有(3)(4)的間距完全相同
01:27:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - 說實話有點不好看...改一下吧[nazi]
02:05:929 (8) - 結尾出去外面了...上下是OK的 可是左右CTB會接不到...改一下吧

大致上沒什麼問題的!!
話說看到你的map讓我聯想到Hatsune Miku - Kusaregedou to Chocolate XDDD
star~
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

spboxer3 wrote:

[Easy]
AR調到2或3
00:33:972 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:48:972 (4) - 堆疊! 需要把(4)擺在(3)的結尾上 完全重疊!

[balbal]
01:20:113 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:07:722 (5,6) - 不好看~容易造成誤解

[One-way]
01:06:907 (2,3) - 不容易看懂spacing的位置 因為(1)(2)的間距和(2)(3)還有(3)(4)的間距完全相同
01:27:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - 說實話有點不好看...改一下吧[nazi]
02:05:929 (8) - 結尾出去外面了...上下是OK的 可是左右CTB會接不到...改一下吧

大致上沒什麼問題的!!
話說看到你的map讓我聯想到Hatsune Miku - Kusaregedou to Chocolate XDDD
star~
谢谢瓦XD!!!
Daiguren
8-)
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

8-)
谢谢瓦谢谢XD!THANK!
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o

(Modding 2 only because of queue rules)

General
• Your background needs to be at least 800x600 (1024x768 is recommended though.)
• Tick rate should be the same on all difficulties.
• Audio lead-in 1500
• Ew combo colors.

[Easy]
• AR -1
• OD -1
00:07:559 (2) - Move this to the other side of the slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106980
00:26:798 (2,3) - Right 1 grid (level 3)
00:35:929 (4) - Spacing?
00:43:103 (4) - Remove Combo
01:00:711 (4) - New Combo
01:01:363 (1) - Remove Combo
01:03:972 (1) - Make the timeline like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/106981
01:49:624 (1) - What is with all the new combos in this section...
02:19:624 (1) - Add finish
02:34:624 (2) - Place directly on the end of the slider
02:48:972 (4) - ^
02:58:429 (4) - Try not to overlap this?

[Balbal]
• Make the first 'B' a capital in the difficulty name
• HP +1
• AR -2
• OD +4 (What. The. Hell.)
00:03:646 (5) - Place directly on the sliders end.
00:43:103 (8) - Remove Combo
01:27:287 (1) - ^
02:19:624 (1) - Remove Note, start spinner here, end at same time as before.
02:51:010 (1) - Start at 02:51:092.


Star 8-)
KingKrishna
All i can do is give a star because i couldnt find any problems :P


STAR :)
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