Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakar

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LKs
你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗 8-)
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie

LKs wrote:

你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗 8-)
LKs你從昨天晚上就說我有潛力,求解釋
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie
好吧真相弄清了继续找MAT- -
KoraActD
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lucyfly
Star~★
Mystica
[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么


[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴


敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie

Mystica wrote:

[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么


[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴


敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
十分感谢
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie
o.o 感谢LKs切歌
DNR
Do I smell a mod?!

Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~.

The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!

Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.

Cool stuff.
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie

CDFA wrote:

Do I smell a mod?!

Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~. I'm cut lol

The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!

Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.

Cool stuff.
thanks
indyinyou
[Dango]

about hitsound i think use whistle better than clap

00:19:924 : remove fin add whistle
00:20:524 : remove clap
00:21:124 : whistle
00:22:324 : remove newcombo add whistle
00:23:524 : whistle
00:24:424 : remove clap
00:24:724 : whistle
00:25:324 : remove newcombo
00:27:124 : remove clap add whistle
00:29:224 : remove clap
00:29:524 : add whistle
00:30:124 : remove newcombo
00:38:524 : use soft hitsound better
00:40:924 : remove clap
00:43:624 : ^
eldnl
[General]

- The hitcircle is different for the sliders and circles, this is a problem?
- The mp3 is too long, you must cut it.

[Small Dream]

I don't like that use claps in songs like this, sounds bad for me, maybe if you change these claps for whistles?
00:31:924 (6) Remove finish in the middle.
00:33:724 (6,1,2,3) Don't stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, this is hard to read for beginners.
00:48:124 (7,1) This note is too close to the previous.
01:01:924 (5,1) Remove the finish and add in (1)
01:06:124 (1) Remove new combo
01:09:724 (5) Fix this slider using grid level 3. Something like this: http://puu.sh/3OGT
01:15:724 (1,2,3,1) Please unstack these notes, and in (3) use a soft finish, sounds better.
01:24:124 (5) Finish at the end.
01:30:124 (1) Finish
01:49:924 (1) Remove new combo and add finish at the end.
01:51:724 (1) Add a note here and move the spin pleaseee.

[DANGO]

Approach Rate 6
Same whistles suggestions :3
For hard and insane difficulties you must use grid level 3 or 4.
00:19:924 (3) Remove finish
00:35:524 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:224 (1) With this slider you don't following nothing in the music, the sounds is in the white tick. Remove new combo too.
00:57:724 (2) Add here.
01:01:024 (5) You don't follow the rhythm with this note, move to the next white tick.
01:11:824 (1,2) Stack this perfectly under the slider.
01:19:624 (1) Remove new combo.
01:20:524 (1,1) Inconsistent spacing.
01:32:524 (2,1,2,3,1) ^ Same
01:39:124 (1,1) Remove new combo here or in the next slider.
01:41:524 (1) Remove new combo
01:42:424 (1,2,3) Spacing
01:45:724 (x) Add a note and move the spin?
01:54:124 (1) Make this just a note and add a soft finish.

I love this song ~
Star.
Kawayi Rika
神曲啊神图啊~~~~~~~
加油~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+++++++++++星~~~
Roddie
Hi.

  1. Wow... There so you've ended on 01:54:724, huh? You know, if could save a lot of space if you just cut the mp3. :p
    If you can't cut it, ask me in-game and I'll do it for you.
  2. The bitrate is 320kbps. that's unrankable ): You got to have the bitrate at least 192, man. If you can't change the bitrate, again ask me in-game and I'll do it for you.
  3. The "hitcirclesb" png file. I don't see it in the playing field and it's not being used. Delete it.
  4. Add "Dango Daikazoku" in the tags.
  5. You got to have a "approachcircle" png file in the map's folder.
  1. 00:48:124 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  2. 01:16:124-Remove new combo.
  3. 01:21:124-^?
  4. 01:21:724-Put a new combo here?
  5. 01:45:724 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. :p
  1. 00:35:524-Remove new combo?
  2. 00:46:524-^
  3. 00:56:224-^
  4. 00:57:724-Put a new combo here.
  5. 01:01:024 (5)-Remove this note here. I don't think this sounds right here. :/
  6. 01:01:324 (x)-Add a note here.
  7. 01:11:824 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.
  8. 01:17:224 (1)-I strongly suggested you move this slider somewhere else. It's not a bold move by putting a note/slider under a slider track. :/
  9. 01:32:524 (1, 2, 3)I'm not a big fan of anti-jumps. :p if you want to leave it there, that's fine but I think it would be a great if you use the distance snap.
  10. 01:39:124-Remove new combo.

I'm not going to star this until I see some improvements.
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie
thanks 8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)8-)
wmfchris
把mp3剪一下吧

01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w

Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Magical Pokie

wmfchris wrote:

把mp3剪一下吧

01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w
thanks thanks 凑字数 ;)爱你哦
Roddie
Meh. I was expecting a whole lot of improvement but it's close enough. Here's star for you~
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[General]

The music is suddenly cut at the end. Using fade-out for the music is much better imo ~

[Wmf's Taiko]

01:53:597 - ( 1 ) The spinner is too short imo as it has only 5 hits. End it at 01:55:397 instead ?

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:50:297 - ( 74 ) Red note ?

00:53:297 - ( 83 ~ 84 ) o o ?

00:57:797 - ( 93 ) Blue note ?

01:28:997 - ( 202 ) ^

01:42:797 - ( 251 ) Red note ?

The map is nice ~

I like relaxing music :3 ~

Rating : 8.5/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
wmfchris
fixed >w<

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Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
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