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Nardis - Cosmo Memory

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Stjpa
886 posts
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Stjpa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 19. Januar 2017 at 14:18:34

Artist: Nardis
Title: Cosmo Memory
Source: BMS
Tags: hootowlstar feb thievley BMS of fighters ultimate bofu 2016 final fantasy alpha complex big crunch frenz2016
BPM: 175
Filesize: 28415kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Feb's Another (4,84 stars, 493 notes)
  2. Hard (3,34 stars, 311 notes)
  3. HOS' Beginner (1,66 stars, 130 notes)
  4. Hyper (4,06 stars, 401 notes)
  5. Thievley's Intermediate (2,2 stars, 227 notes)
  6. Z Camelopardalis (5,51 stars, 510 notes)
Download: Nardis - Cosmo Memory
Download: Nardis - Cosmo Memory (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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LINEAR PATTERNS IN 2017 LOOOL

thanks to Ba(e)ttle for providing the video
beginner by HootOwlStar
intermediate by Thievley
another by Feb
Last edited by Stjpa , edited 42 times in total.
MikasaSerket
520 posts
Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket
c:
rawrneru
188 posts
Joined October 2014
rawrneru
gdplsoriwillcry
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Stjpa

Rachneru wrote:

gdplsoriwillcry
Where were you when I was looking for GDers. D:
Gonna do the last diff myself, sorry.
rawrneru
188 posts
Joined October 2014
rawrneru
*crys*

maybe next time IDK Im ALWAYS FUKCIGN UNLCUHJKY WUTHTHIS FUCKIbin SIEWUTery dgjtyucghfhgfhghjg
Thievley
osu!artist
219 posts
Joined July 2014
Thievley
B)
Last edited by Thievley , edited 2 times in total.
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
haip
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
check aimod

Z Camelopardalis
  1. you can add some whistles at the beginning, like 00:03:272 (4) - 00:04:643 (4) - .etc
  2. 00:29:843 (4) - can add new combo for the stream
  3. 00:34:300 (1,2,3,4) - it fits well but i think you can increase the spacing a bit since the music sounds like that, how about using ds1.0
  4. 00:46:300 (1,1) - the jump is kinda uncomfortable to play since 00:45:786 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - this pattern's spacing isn't that big, it's kinda harsh. to me it's better to increase the spacing of 00:46:215 (2,1) - , considering the diff's difficulty it's not that hard
  5. 01:07:557 (5) - new combo? it's a new jump pattern
  6. 01:11:329 (1,3) - personally i dislike this kind of stacks because it's pretty annoying but it's up to you, i'd prefer stacking with 01:11:243 (4) - instead and it won't affect the gameplay much lol
  7. 01:57:786 (10,11,1,1,2,3) - not straight /hides
  8. 01:59:329 (1,2,3) - it's a bit confusing, consider stacking 02:00:015 (2,3) - this?
  9. very nice
Feb's Another
  1. 00:52:129 (1,1) - placing objects under a fast slider's tail is always bad to play, i don't know why eveyone likes that :c
Thievley's Advanced
  1. 00:35:329 (5,1) - wew nice, i'm fine with it but i don't know if others agree
  2. 00:48:186 - add something? or extend 00:47:672 (3) - this here like 00:50:415 (3) -
  3. 00:53:157 (4) - ^ if you agree with this make sure to keep consistency
  4. 01:11:329 (1,2) - 01:19:557 (1,2) - please no, it's almost unrankable
nice set, gather some mods and 12+sp then call me back
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Stjpa

Karen wrote:

check aimod

Z Camelopardalis
  1. you can add some whistles at the beginning, like 00:03:272 (4) - 00:04:643 (4) - .etc I used to have some whistles there when I was experimenting around with hitsounding, but I will give it another try
  2. 00:29:843 (4) - can add new combo for the stream woops
  3. 00:34:300 (1,2,3,4) - it fits well but i think you can increase the spacing a bit since the music sounds like that, how about using ds1.0 alright
  4. 00:46:300 (1,1) - the jump is kinda uncomfortable to play since 00:45:786 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - this pattern's spacing isn't that big, it's kinda harsh. to me it's better to increase the spacing of 00:46:215 (2,1) - , considering the diff's difficulty it's not that hard I tried
  5. 01:07:557 (5) - new combo? it's a new jump pattern Forgot to use one there yep
  6. 01:11:329 (1,3) - personally i dislike this kind of stacks because it's pretty annoying but it's up to you, i'd prefer stacking with 01:11:243 (4) - instead and it won't affect the gameplay much lol It's for sure not the prettiest thing to do, but I tried to map the song as good as possible and since the sound of that circle and the sliderhead are similar it's the best option
  7. 01:57:786 (10,11,1,1,2,3) - not straight /hides I actually don't see how it's not straight :v
  8. 01:59:329 (1,2,3) - it's a bit confusing, consider stacking 02:00:015 (2,3) - this? I don't really wanna stack it for the same reason I gave above. It doesn't really fit the music and it would be weird to stack it if they don't even fit when it was vice versa throughout the map. I uploaded this diff two months ago and I got a lot of testplays during that time, some from players of this difficulty and of people who were capable of HDHR'ing this, neither of them had any problems to read it
  9. very nice My first Extra I've ever mapped doesn't seem to be that bad ٩(`(エ)´ )و
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
@karen
due to 00:51:786 (1) - this being used as 1/4 with a bit of spacing i can 00:52:129 (1,1) - stack these without confusion for the player here.

00:51:100 (2) - was snapped to 1/8 beat for some raisons, snapped it to 1/4 like intented.

with that fix
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 95329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Cosmo Memory
TitleUnicode:Cosmo Memory
Artist:Nardis
ArtistUnicode:Nardis
Creator:Stjpa
Version:Feb's Another
Source:BMS
Tags:hootowlstar feb thievley BMS of fighters ultimate bofu 2016 final fantasy alpha complex big crunch frenz2016
BeatmapID:1154507
BeatmapSetID:533678

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.1
SliderMultiplier:1.75
SliderTickRate:2

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wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
hi im gay
[camelo]
  1. 00:13:729 (1,2) - b..blanket :v
  2. 00:48:357 (5) - imo ctrl+g would be better
  3. 01:57:443 (6) - new combo? it's a new stream
[feb]
  1. 00:06:872 (1,2) - that can be made into something more creative? xd
  2. 01:13:386 (1) - mute the sliderend
  3. 00:29:672 - 00:29:757 - 00:32:072 - 00:29:329 - the reason for skipping this 2 beats ?
  4. 00:38:243 (1,1,2,1) - there is need to restructure the nc, they come out of the general concept and hard to read that here 1\2 but not 1\1 rhythm
  5. 00:48:357 (2) - ctrl+g...?
  6. 01:02:757 (1,1) - i don't like this xd
  7. 01:27:615 (5,2) - the sound is very similar to the whistle
  8. 01:49:900 (2,3) - return 1/8 please
[hyper]
  1. 00:56:586 (5) - without white dot would-be better
    SPOILER
  2. 00:17:843 (1,2) - I would prefer here the sound claps
  3. 00:21:957 (1) - the sound of the finish pls
  4. 00:56:929 (6) - nc?
  5. 01:18:700 - you lost triplet
[hard]
  1. 01:17:500 (3) - i know you can make a better wave :v
  2. 00:24:015 (5) - nc?
kill me stjpa
Tarrasky
1,203 posts
Joined March 2014
Tarrasky
m4m

HOS' Normal

00:17:843 (2) - I think there's a important song in 00:18:529 -, i recommend you finish your slider in 00:18:529 - and add a circle in 00:18:872 -
00:25:043 - maybe a breaktime
00:49:386 (1,2) - 00:52:129 (1,2) - 00:54:872 (1,2) - ect. I prefer the NC being in 00:49:729 (2) - 00:52:472 (2) - for consistency with the first 00:46:986 (1) - and the others like 00:57:957 (1) - , but the current way is not wrong
01:08:757 (1) - This sping is so long for a Normal, maybe finish in 01:11:329 - and add a breaktime after looks perfect
This second kiai have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:41:243 - 01:41:329 - 01:41:415 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object or in the middle of the slider (you're not using slidertick hitsounds)
02:15:786 (2) - This slider is really weird with the song, can't even hear the main circle of the slider (02:15:786 -), maybe you finish this slider 02:14:415 (1) - in 02:16:472 - looks really better

Thievley's Advanced

00:25:291 - Maybe break
I recommend you stack here 00:35:329 (5,1) -, looks a bit confuse, or at least decrease a lot the distance, like this, this distance you're using looks a bit a 1/2 spacing, and some players can confuses
00:46:643 (1,1) - /\ same, I think you will make a pattern for this spacing, and i recommend the same from all, more low spacing (semi stack) can be really good
01:33:272 (1) - This spin is in a really good moment but this other 01:30:529 (1) - i think isn't necessary, clearly can be mapped with other objects, but isn't unrankeable i think
02:11:672 (4) - Nc for consistency?
This map have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:40:986 - 01:43:043 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object or in the middle of the slider (you're not using slidertick hitsounds)

Hard

00:06:872 (1,2,3) - (really nazi alert) for aesthetic?
00:32:757 (2) - maybe this spacing is a bit strange 00:32:757 (2,1) -, isn't a 2/1 spacing but looks like, maybe move 00:32:757 (2) - down can be good, more example
00:57:272 (7) - Maybe using a 1/4 reversearrow slider can avoid a bit the ignored sound a bit (00:57:357 -), but the acctual map doesn't looks so bad
02:11:329 (3) - NC? looks a long time without one
This map have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:40:986 - 01:41:329 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object or in the middle of the slider (you're not using slidertick hitsounds)
nothing much to say, nice difficulty

Hyper

00:52:129 (1) - This NC is proposital? if yes maybe you should add in 00:49:386 (8,9) - 00:54:872 (8) - 00:57:272 (8) -, They are also somewhat controversial (the moment in the song), and be more consistent
In here you add a break 00:25:043 - but not in 01:08:929 - and has the same duration, i recommend you add a break in 01:08:757 -
01:18:700 (1) - Maybe a 1/6 slider with reversearrow can be good here, becuase i think this song is important 01:18:872 - but have any object
01:41:500 (9) - 01:52:472 (9) - NC for consistency with the Hard?

Feb's Another

00:27:329 - Maybe add a circle stacked with 00:27:443 (1) -
00:29:843 (4,5,6,7) - This stream looks starting in 00:29:672 -, if you hear the song with more attention
This map have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:41:243 - 01:41:072 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object
01:49:900 (2,3) - This looks a bit 1/6, i can be wrong, not sure
Nice map

The last difficulty and the metadata looks ok, nice mapset
Logic Agent
483 posts
Joined April 2015
Logic Agent
i got bored

[HOS' Normal]
  1. 00:51:443 (3) - remove whistle? having one here makes your hitsound scheme inconsistent (though I would kinda rather see more whistles used on the heads of things)
  2. 00:56:243 (3) - I kinda would have rather seen this as a 2/1 reverse slider, because playing all of these interesting sounds with a passive slider body isn't engaging at all
  3. 01:08:243 - If the sound here was clickable, it'd close out the section much nicer
  4. 01:16:815 (1) - this slider should end 01:16:986 because there's no sound where the slider currently ends. I know this is like a 1/2 thing but I think it should be fine since this section is very sparse rhythmically
  5. 01:20:929 (2) - this isn't really mapped to anything at all
  6. 01:22:300 (1,2) - I feel like this rhythm could be made more fun to play, like this maybe?
    d
  7. 01:27:786 (1,2) - again, just because this is a low diff you shouldn't just ignore the music. try this rhythm instead?
    d
  8. 02:06:872 (2) - this slider follows nothing again


[Thievley's Advanced]
  1. 00:35:329 (5,1) - don't reccomend doing stacks like this, they're pretty difficult to understand for new players and the rhythm hasn't changed so I don't think the spacing should either
  2. 00:46:643 (1,1) - I think it works here though because there was a gap in the music which gives the player time to read the rhythm better
  3. 00:52:129 (1,2) - not a fan of it here though
  4. 00:57:615 (1,2,3,4) - same stacks visually being played different rhythmically, i'd just get rid of the first stack
  5. 01:06:872 (2,3) - ya
  6. 01:18:872 (4) - don't like this because you start this reverse on essentially nothing and then it ends where the sound actually begins
  7. 01:30:529 (1) - end this spinner 01:32:586 -
  8. 01:36:015 (1) - pretty sure you have to delete this circle, as there's not adequate delay between the end of the spinner and a clickable object (unrankable)
  9. 01:46:300 (4) - what do you think about making this a 1/2 reverse slider (since it's the diffspike at the end of the map) and making ths tail of it clickable instead
  10. 01:56:072 (2,3) - i would just stack them honestly
  11. 02:15:786 (2) - this slider starts on nothing and ends on the music


[Hard]
  1. ok i can't really mod this well considering i mapped one of these myself but i'll just give thoughts
  2. 00:19:215 (1) - any reason not to do increasing spacing here? i think it's a nice element to introduct into gameplay and it fits musically
  3. 01:15:443 (1) - ew pls bring the red node out more
  4. 01:17:500 (3) - this wave could look better >>
  5. 01:34:643 (7,8) - what do you think about maybe doing this instead
    d
  6. 02:00:700 (1) - this sliders snapping is kinda weird. it kinda makes sense buuut i dunno. i think this fits better imo
    d


[Hyper]
  1. 00:34:986 (3,4) - maybe put a smallish jump here? would be cool for the music imo


[Feb's Another]
  1. 00:27:443 (1) - mute slider end?
  2. 00:57:786 - this would fit nicely as a 1/4 slider imo
  3. 01:11:329 - how come you ignored the sounds after this circle?

    cool diff.


merry christmas
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb
[feb]
  1. 00:06:872 (1,2) - that can be made into something more creative? xd it fits the piano tone imo
  2. 01:13:386 (1) - mute the sliderend sure
  3. 00:29:672 - 00:29:757 - 00:32:072 - 00:29:329 - the reason for skipping this 2 beats ? mainly because of overemphasizes undermapping here seemed a good idea to me.
  4. 00:38:243 (1,1,2,1) - there is need to restructure the nc, they come out of the general concept and hard to read that here 1\2 but not 1\1 rhythm actually they are correct how they are, basically the stronger beats have longer combos than the weaker beats who have only 1 combo at a time. I don't see how they are hard to read uhh.
  5. 00:48:357 (2) - ctrl+g...? nah i like the antiflow i used in the map
  6. 01:02:757 (1,1) - i don't like this xd
  7. 01:27:615 (5,2) - the sound is very similar to the whistle put one there.
  8. 01:49:900 (2,3) - return 1/8 please undermapped on purpose - the general idea here was to put no 1/8's and foremost 1/4 give better emphasizes on the slider.

Feb's Another

00:27:329 - Maybe add a circle stacked with 00:27:443 (1) - this plays ultra weird tho.
00:29:843 (4,5,6,7) - This stream looks starting in 00:29:672 -, if you hear the song with more attention see post above.
This map have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:41:243 - 01:41:072 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object nah they aren't unrankable issues no clue who u told u that, but thats not true.
01:49:900 (2,3) - This looks a bit 1/6, i can be wrong, not sure same, however for playability 1/2 shud be alright.
Nice map

[Feb's Another]
  1. 00:27:443 (1) - mute slider end? sure, did the same afterwards at the same objects.
  2. 00:57:786 - this would fit nicely as a 1/4 slider imo but i wud lose the flow I've intented unless i didn't get what u meant lel
  3. 01:11:329 - how come you ignored the sounds after this circle? white tick is stronger and i wanted to have the stop there, with a pause, so uhh ya
thanks for modding.

dfdfdf
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Stjpa
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Stjpa
waji

wajinshu wrote:

hi im gay
[camelo]
  1. 00:13:729 (1,2) - b..blanket :v wat
  2. 00:48:357 (5) - imo ctrl+g would be better did something there
  3. 01:57:443 (6) - new combo? it's a new stream ok
[hyper]
  1. 00:56:586 (5) - without white dot would-be better doesnt really make any difference, but i prefer it my way because idk
  2. 00:17:843 (1,2) - I would prefer here the sound claps they dont have the needed background sound for that though
  3. 00:21:957 (1) - the sound of the finish pls added this one and the one at 00:19:215 -
  4. 00:56:929 (6) - nc? sure
  5. 01:18:700 - you lost triplet i prefer not to map them as the focus is completely on the singletaps here, and since i use some other overlapping stuff it would be too complicated with a triplet
[hard]
  1. 01:17:500 (3) - i know you can make a better wave :v i tried lol
  2. 00:24:015 (5) - nc? also added a nc at the end of second kiai
kill me stjpa no

LA

Logic Agent wrote:

i got bored

[Hard]
  1. ok i can't really mod this well considering i mapped one of these myself but i'll just give thoughts
  2. 00:19:215 (1) - any reason not to do increasing spacing here? i think it's a nice element to introduct into gameplay and it fits musically instead of increasing the spacing i increase the density
  3. 01:15:443 (1) - ew pls bring the red node out more jesus christ what have i done
  4. 01:17:500 (3) - this wave could look better >> was mentioned in previous mod already, i hope it looks better now lol
  5. 01:34:643 (7,8) - what do you think about maybe doing this instead nice idea
  6. 02:00:700 (1) - this sliders snapping is kinda weird. it kinda makes sense buuut i dunno. i think this fits better imo that was just a placeholder and i was too lazy to change it, using a 1/2 reverse slider + circle now instead of a long slider because it fits better into the concept


[Hyper]
  1. 00:34:986 (3,4) - maybe put a smallish jump here? would be cool for the music imo i think the 3/4 slider is already weird enough, let alone that i dont even use any jumps in the whole diff except in the kiai, and i honestly wanna keep it like that for consistency


merry christmas

Tarrasky

Tarrasky wrote:

m4m

Hard

00:06:872 (1,2,3) - (really nazi alert) for aesthetic? i placed it like this on purpose, i dislike when something doesnt show to the next object in lower diffs :<
00:32:757 (2) - maybe this spacing is a bit strange 00:32:757 (2,1) -, isn't a 2/1 spacing but looks like, maybe move 00:32:757 (2) - down can be good, more example done
00:57:272 (7) - Maybe using a 1/4 reversearrow slider can avoid a bit the ignored sound a bit (00:57:357 -), but the acctual map doesn't looks so bad u are not wrong but it would kinda hurt the spread so i prefer to introduce 1/4s in the hyper since hard is using a quite larger 1/2 spacing already
02:11:329 (3) - NC? looks a long time without one theres no nc because the sounds are related to each other
This map have a lot of unecessary inherited points, like 01:40:986 - 01:41:329 - etc, and isn't rankeable a inherited without using, recommend you remove all inherited that isn't in any object or in the middle of the slider (you're not using slidertick hitsounds) they are there because i copied the hitsounding and removing them all might destroy hitsounding plus it would be a lot of work
nothing much to say, nice difficulty

Hyper

00:52:129 (1) - This NC is proposital? if yes maybe you should add in 00:49:386 (8,9) - 00:54:872 (8) - 00:57:272 (8) -, They are also somewhat controversial (the moment in the song), and be more consistent the only purpose of this nc is to indicate the sv change, the other ones u mentioned are just simple 1/4 patterns that are not unique anymore, so i dont see a reason to nc them
In here you add a break 00:25:043 - but not in 01:08:929 - and has the same duration, i recommend you add a break in 01:08:757 - maybe i misunderstood what u meant but i have a break exactly where u posted it, maybe u broke the break somehow?
01:18:700 (1) - Maybe a 1/6 slider with reversearrow can be good here, becuase i think this song is important 01:18:872 - but have any object as mentioned in the previous mod, the focus here is on the singletaps and having a triplet here with all the overlaps would make everything even more complicated than it already is
01:41:500 (9) - 01:52:472 (9) - NC for consistency with the Hard? both diffs have completely different nc structures because hyper focuses on other sounds hard doesnt

The last difficulty and the metadata looks ok, nice mapset

thanks for the mod guys!
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
yo i heard you like mods

[some galaxy or star name idk]
  1. 00:57:786 - maybe add a 1/4 slider here, to give more of a kick-feeling to 00:57:786 (6,1) -
  2. 01:27:786 (1,3) - maybe give these a bit more emphasis? Im not against focusing on the piano only, but ignoring the drumbeats feels kinda empty to me
  3. 01:36:357 (1) - consider silencing these sliderends, especially since you already did so with the 1/4 ones.
  4. cant really say much about this diff sorry. i dont really thing all those extended sliders in the second half are necessary, but ofcourse, thats just me.
[feb]
  1. 00:37:900 (2) - this should have more emphasis, with the same here 00:38:415 (1,2) - , compared to 00:35:672 (1,2,1,2) -
  2. 00:40:643 (2,1,2) - same for these
  3. 00:40:643 (2,1,2) - this is more intense than 00:57:615 (6,7,8) - in the song, yet you swapped that intensity when mapping it. maybe adjust that a bit. strong jump on 00:57:786 (8) - is absolutely fine in my book tho.
  4. 01:37:300 - please silence the sliderends here as well :)
[hyper]
  1. 00:11:500 - maybe have that hittable
  2. 01:19:215 (3) - maybe change this to 2 1/4 sliders so you catch the 1/2 in the music
  3. 01:16:815 (1,2) - this is the same ds as 01:22:300 (1,2) - with one having drums to back it, while the other doesnt
  4. 01:53:672 (4,5,6) - triangle for ocd people like me?
[hard]
  1. 00:09:272 (3,1) - maybe sliiiiightly adjust that blanket if you intended it to be one
  2. 00:45:957 (3) - not sure if this ones even necessary, maybe just make 00:45:615 (2) - a 1/2 repeat or just leave it even.
  3. 01:56:929 (6,7,8) - :)
[thievley]
  1. 00:35:329 (5,1) - not sure if this isnt to hard to read, since you defined a similar distance as 1/2 before
  2. 00:57:615 (1,2) - similar here, especially with 00:58:472 (3,4) - rtight after (same visual spacing, different timing)
  3. 01:30:529 (1) - maybe end this on 01:32:929 - (drum) or silence the spinnerend.
[hoot]
  1. Cant find anything, perfect in my eyes
Good Luck man, take my kudosu
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Stjpa

Asonate wrote:

yo i heard you like mods

[some galaxy or star name idk]
  1. 00:57:786 - maybe add a 1/4 slider here, to give more of a kick-feeling to 00:57:786 (6,1) - cool
  2. 01:27:786 (1,3) - maybe give these a bit more emphasis? Im not against focusing on the piano only, but ignoring the drumbeats feels kinda empty to me i highlighted it by stacking them with the previous circles, making a special pattern feels super weird because the drums are not even expected there
  3. 01:36:357 (1) - consider silencing these sliderends, especially since you already did so with the 1/4 ones. done bby
  4. cant really say much about this diff sorry. i dont really thing all those extended sliders in the second half are necessary, but ofcourse, thats just me.
[hyper]
  1. 00:11:500 - maybe have that hittable patterns are focused on something else
  2. 01:19:215 (3) - maybe change this to 2 1/4 sliders so you catch the 1/2 in the music i never used any kicksliders in this diff though, only 1/4 repeats so it would be too much imo
  3. 01:16:815 (1,2) - this is the same ds as 01:22:300 (1,2) - with one having drums to back it, while the other doesnt im wondering why u are complaining about the ds about those two but not about the ds about all the other ones afterwards
  4. 01:53:672 (4,5,6) - triangle for ocd people like me? but it is already ?_?
[hard]
  1. 00:09:272 (3,1) - maybe sliiiiightly adjust that blanket if you intended it to be one ww
  2. 00:45:957 (3) - not sure if this ones even necessary, maybe just make 00:45:615 (2) - a 1/2 repeat or just leave it even. leaving it blank annoys me and feels really empty, a repeat would give an emphasis to the sound the circle is mapped to which i find important
  3. 01:56:929 (6,7,8) - :) same
Good Luck man, take my kudosu
will update the map with later changes because updating tages ages (whoa rhymes)
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate

Stjpa wrote:

[hyper]
  1. 01:16:815 (1,2) - this is the same ds as 01:22:300 (1,2) - with one having drums to back it, while the other doesnt im wondering why u are complaining about the ds about those two but not about the ds about all the other ones afterwards Because i'd assume you prefer a short remark to a wall with 10 columns that just have the same written on them :) Also i assumed you to apply things to follow-up instances of the same thing in the song.
Feb
1,027 posts
Joined June 2014
Feb

Asonate wrote:

yo i heard you like mods

[feb]
  1. 00:37:900 (2) - this should have more emphasis, with the same here 00:38:415 (1,2) - , compared to 00:35:672 (1,2,1,2) - speaking of intensity ur technically right, but im aiming here most and for all at the visuals, as the pattern makes no sense otherwise.
  2. 00:40:643 (2,1,2) - same for these ^
  3. 00:40:643 (2,1,2) - this is more intense than 00:57:615 (6,7,8) - in the song, yet you swapped that intensity when mapping it. maybe adjust that a bit. strong jump on 00:57:786 (8) - is absolutely fine in my book tho. how are these alike? o.O
  4. 01:37:300 - please silence the sliderends here as well :) ok
thank

will sent update if more comes up as changes aren't as heavy.
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
m4m

HOS' Normal

* 00:18:186 - 00:18:529 - Why did you ignore those sounds? They are clearly mappable and thus should be mapped, even in a Normal, especially because those are pretty strong sounds aswell.
* 00:24:015 (3) - Why not curvy like (2). Looks better imo. Like you did here 01:42:872 (3,4) -
* 01:07:557 - 01:07:900 - I think those should be mapped, pretty strong beats there.
* 01:20:929 (2) - A 2/1 slider would fit more tbh, because right now it is repeating on nothing which makes it kinda weird imo.

Thievley's Advanced

* 00:02:757 (1,2) - 00:04:129 (3,4) - The distance they have is inconsistent with the following objects, you should fix that.
* 00:16:472 (1) - I think you should move the slidertail too 80/296, looks weird otherwise.
* 00:21:957 - I think this sound should be clickable because its a pretty strong one, kinda weird to have a sliderend there.
* 00:23:329 (4) - The shape of this slider disturbs me imo. Looks really weird and random
* 00:35:329 (5,1) - Yeah, this ds change is kinda weird tbh and doesnt fit in an advanced. No newer player will be able to read this, you should seriously fix this. This is not supposed to be in an advanced.
* 00:45:272 (5,6,7) - All those stacked objects kill the movement you had before. Maybe (5,6) should be a slider too.
* 00:46:643 (1,1) - Im really opposed to the idea of this spacing-changes in an advanced, most wont be able to read it. Same here 00:52:129 (1,2) -. 00:57:615 (1,2) - this is how you could do it instead.
* 01:06:872 (2,3) - Okay, let me tell you why I think that this spacing is just stupid. 01:06:186 (1,2) - What we have here is the spacing for 1/2 objects, and what we have here is the spacing for 1/1 objects 01:05:500 (6,1) -. So what will a newer player think when he sees this 01:06:872 (2,3) - ? Right, he will think that you have to click sooner, players able to this diff arent able to read sudden spacing changes. Please consider fixing it.
* 01:13:386 (3,1) - Spacing is inconsistent, its 1,6 instead of 1,5
* 01:33:272 (1,1) -Not enough recovery-time for an advanced. I think you should just remove 01:36:015 (1) -
* 01:53:500 (4,6) - I dont like this overlap tbh
* 02:04:815 (3) - How about you move the slidertail too 104/112? Looks better imo

Hard

* 00:07:557 (3) - How about you ctrl+h this one and place it at the same spot? Looks better to me somehow because it looks like the movement of the objects before will go into the slider. (Weird explanation I know)
* 00:16:986 (3,4) - How about something like THIS here? The flow will keep going into the same direction which is nice to play.
* 00:23:329 (1,2,3,4,1) - You could make it like THIS. I think it is more fun to play and emphasizes the beats more.
* 00:50:243 (2,3) - This blank can be clearly improved.
* 00:55:900 (3) - How about you ctrl+h this one? Will go better with the flow of the objects before.
* 01:07:557 (4,5,6,7,8) - Like THIS maybe? Its more fun to play
* 01:32:929 (8) - This one is touching the hp-bar, and to be safe you could move this one a bit lower aswell 01:33:272 (1) -
* There are many unused inherited points, just saying.

Hyper

* 00:02:415 (1,1) - I would stack them, looks cooler somehow.
* 00:23:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should make a curvy movement here aswell, would fit so much better than a straight line imo. How about you do it like THIS?
* 00:32:415 (1) - You should silence the sliderend because there is no sound. Same here 00:35:329 (4) -
* 00:45:272 (1,2,3,4) - Curvy movement aswell here?
* 00:49:557 (9) - I dont really know if this is acceptable in an Hyper hmmm...
* 01:19:215 (3,1) - Why is the spacing here so much higher than here 01:10:986 (1,2) - 01:14:415 (1,2) - ? Doesnt really make sense imo
* 01:30:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is cool
* 01:35:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, those jumps are a bit too hard for an Hyper, you should reduce the the spacing a bit.

Feb's Another

* 00:07:900 - The sound here should be mapped with a slider tbh, letting it be on a repeat seems kinda wrong and unfitting because the sound is kinda strong.
* 00:17:843 (1,1,1) - How about you silence the sliderends because there is no sound on them?
* 00:32:929 (2) - The sounds this slider is covering up should be clickable imo, they are pretty strong.
* 00:45:957 (1,2) - This is really hard to read, I dont know if you should use this in an Another, try to think of something please.
* 01:02:757 (1,1) - This is unrankable because you can't see the sliderend of 01:03:100 (1) - And the slider itself is very fast making it hard to even follow it when you realize that there is a slider hidden beneath the slider.

Z Camelopardalis

* 00:30:100 (4,1) - This is really hard to hit and kinda unexpected. Nothing wrong with it though, just thought I should point it out.
* 01:18:700 (3,4) - This looks really weird tbh
* 01:40:815 (1,2,3,4) - I think that you should replace the sliders with 1/2 circles. It will fit so much better with the music and the melodics there tbh. Same here 01:49:386 (1,2,3) -. It emphasizes the melodics so much better. Same here 01:53:500 (2,3,4) -

Awesome diff


I really like the song and the mapset~
Good luck with it!
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