Thanks for modding, wasn't in the applying mindset for this one so quality is probably affected.Nokashi wrote:
Hello there! - Sup
[ Magic Girl's Salad]
- 00:00:562 (1) - You can make this fully horizontal, kinda like 00:01:214 (2) -, and place it on x:256 for extra movement retention, since they are similar sounds and should be expressed in a similar manner- I prefer keeping this as it is, since they aren't the exact same sound I don't see why I should have the exact same pattern to it. I like to emphasize the higher pitch of the (2) slider by making it horizontal.
- 00:05:127 (3) - Could have been a 1/2 slider instead to better express this beat 00:05:453 - here. Up to this point you took advantage of all these melodies so it feels a bit off to have this one unmapped - Fair enough, fixed
- 00:08:388 (1,2) - I feel like this should be toned down as spacing is a bit too much here for a dash so early into the map, maybe something like 3.60x DS or something similar. The dash will still be apparent but easier to catch
- 00:09:693 (3,4) - You could make this a walk so the player can cool off after the intense dash. Instead, 00:10:345 (4,1) - this could be made into a dash, since the downbeat here 00:10:997 (1) - is pretty strong - I'd rather not make it a walk, the piano sounds are very audible and strong here and I don't want to blandly ignore them. I'll keep everything as it is on this one.
- 00:15:888 - Circle here and create a dash here to here 00:16:214 (1) - ? There hasnt been a dash for a while so it would be a bit fitting here - Eh it's not a matter of dashing, but more of density to me. I don't wanna keep adding notes where I purposefully left them blank and make the salad denser than it should be.
- 00:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - Salads are meant to introduce the dashing mechanic to the player in logical measures. Here having 4 dashes in a row, so early into the song, in a non-kiai section is too much for a salad in my eyes. I would drop the 1/2 dash structure here and have a 1/1 dash structure instead, making some of these jumps walkable and some of them dashable, not all of them dashable. Similar point here 01:52:736 (1,2,3,4) - - I understand, but again, I don't wanna ignore very clear and audible sounds. So I brought (4) closer to (3) to make it walkable since the sounds there is a lot lless powerful. I also decreased the distance of the jumps because 4x distance wtf
- 00:24:040 (1,1) - You could try to give them a 1.50x DS with previous object instead since the sound isnt that strong to imply a dash and you have shown that you place dashes on snares here 00:25:019 (2,3) - for example. 00:29:258 (1) - Were there to have been a 2.00x DS 1/1 gap in this rhythm you are making, it should have been this cause of the stronger flute note.- Changed the first, kept the second. Mainly because it's kind of difficult for me to do this while still keeping the pattern I want, another reason is that the second one has a clear piano in the back too.
- 00:30:236 (2,3) - compared to the graduality of the spacing the dashes in this section have, this is way too spiky on its spacing. all the previous jumps have a ~0.30x DS difference or even less ( 00:25:019 (2,3) - compared to 00:27:627 (2,3) - ) this one spikes 0.50x DS spacing increase. Should be decreased a bit to be consistent - Gotcha
- 00:31:866 (1,2,1,2,3) - I Wouldnt really drop the nice rhythm i had going in previous measures. This new rhythm kills all the emphasis that you had on the snares ( to the point that the snares are on a slider end here 00:35:780 - , meaning almost no movement to get to it even though in the previous measure it was a clear dash, like all snares) and the overall dash consistency. The song doesnt really call for such a drastic underwhelming rhythm switch.- o k f r i e n d o
- 00:40:997 (3,4) - Would play better as 2 1/2 sliders instead of 2 1/1 circles and, if positioned correctly, they can make the transition to the kiai really noticable and neat - "Positioned correctly" you're talking to the shittiest salad mapper placement wise but I tried.
- 00:43:606 - Since you played so much around these snares in the previous sections it feels weird to me that you didnt take advantage of this snare beat here. Similar point here 00:54:040 - - ok
- 00:46:866 (4,5) - Maybe lower this spacing so the walk is more apparent, and the following dash here 00:47:193 (5,1) - more noticable - :thumbsup:
- 00:52:573 (2,1) - Make this jump more noticable, the music really calls for it - fixed
- 01:05:780 (1,2,3) - theres graduality in the instrument pitch going from highter to lower pitch, however the spacing goes the other way around, ranging from lower to higher spacing. 01:06:269 (2,3) - this sudden 0.50x DS spacing spike isnt so justified and it should be made consistent with the previous similar rhythms. It would be for the best since placing dashes on such irregular rhythms might be off-putting for newer players. 01:16:214 (1,2,3) - Similar point here - o true fixed
- 01:12:953 (6,1) - maybe a 0.20x DS decrease here for consistency - fixed
Good Luck~
Magic Girl's Shit
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