Normal people
[quote="Ponchiwi"][notice][[img]http://w.ppy.sh/e/ee/Expert-f.png[/img] [size=150][color=#8000FF][b] Verethragna[/b][/color][/size]]
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[*]01:37:241 (3) - Add hdash
[*]01:37:755 (6) - Delete it here cause i don't guess that this sound is strong enough to deserve dash, and the previous one I think if it's more notorious. [url=https://puu.sh/xjCLT/13616ee1e5.jpg]This[/url] picture shows my first and second sugeration
[*]You should add a hdash here 01:41:012 (3) - [url=https://puu.sh/xjCXB/f858158ef7.jpg]like this[/url] and then, would be nice if we put it a bit far the next slider, cruz there is another strong beat 01:41:355 (4) - but now just the player need a dash, for not to abuse the hashes
[*]01:47:527 (1) - If you used a finish, why not add a hdash? x.x I think it would be important to remarked it, apart from not feeling so forced because the end of the section merits the hdash
[*]02:14:611 (2,3,4) - It feels strange first , follow the voice and after the background music, try to reduce this slider and add another here 02:15:126 (3) -
And you could do something like [url=https://puu.sh/xjC4B/ba402c09ea.png]this[/url] 02:15:126 (3) - x=172, leave a little far, to emphasize the last word that says waifu
[*]02:35:869 (3,1) - I think you could get more out of in this part with other bosses. You have to get all the juice to the song! I know you can do it, my suggestion is to look for other patterns
[*]04:05:697 (1) - Reduce the end of this slider here and why not add a note and hdash in the benning of this new section?[/list][/notice][/quote]
Nelly
[quote="Nelly"]Since I had 3 misses on my livestream I'll make some suggestions that I personally disliked. [url=https://puu.sh/xlqKR/9d87676e06.jpg]My play[/url]
[notice][list][img]https://i.ppy.sh/852f485a9d84af70dd4c7bd62146852c49f99d0d/687474703a2f2f772e7070792e73682f652f65652f4578706572742d662e706e67[/img] [b]Verethragna[/b] [*]00:15:298 (2) - That's kinda simple. Make 1/4 slider and use Ctrl+G. [*]00:57:812 (4) - I don't like this note where the catcher dosen't me at all. x:304 [*]01:09:127 (3) - How about making a 1/2 slider like [url=https://puu.sh/xlqYr/cac72dcacc.jpg]this[/url] and move it a bit, for example at x:224. For intensity it works really well. [*]01:23:698 (4) - A bit shorter I guess. x:216 [*]01:26:784 (4) - Since the singer using some high sounds then I guess this slider should be hyperdashed. x:264 [*]02:49:926 (5,6,7,8) - Personally I don't think this pattern after this short stream should look like this. [url=https://puu.sh/xlr9F/cc2051655d.jpg]Personally, this should look okay for these ending streams[/url]. [*]03:53:354 (1,1) - Not a suggestion. Just saying that you have a good taste of slider art [size=50][spoiler]huehuexd[/spoiler][/size] [*]06:55:583 (4) - Ctrl+G to make this section harder.[/list][/notice]
That's all for me! Good luck![/quote]
i hope you get im just messing with you for making it hard to see where to put my mod replies LOL