1. Futsuu (2,12 stars, 227 notes)
2. Kantan (1,74 stars, 140 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2,73 stars, 297 notes)
4. Oni (3,16 stars, 404 notes)

Sodawea wrote:

Mod por IRC da diff Oni, qualquer coisa a mais edito o post.

SPOILER

2018-01-07 15:51 Igor Sprite: modda meu mapo
2018-01-07 15:51 Sodawea: eu n sei modar mapes
2018-01-07 15:51 Sodawea: eu olho o mapa
2018-01-07 15:51 Sodawea: e digo po ta bacana
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: serio
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: hueahueahu
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: mas manda
2018-01-07 15:52 Igor Sprite: afis :<
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: ah, parabens pelo qualified
2018-01-07 15:52 Igor Sprite: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1120906 AZALEA - GALAXY HidE and SeeK]
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: requalified
2018-01-07 15:52 Sodawea: rerequalified
2018-01-07 15:53 Igor Sprite: vlw :v
2018-01-07 15:56 Sodawea: so uma coisinha
2018-01-07 15:56 Sodawea: 01:01:565 (235,236,237) - 
2018-01-07 15:56 Sodawea: tu não acha que isso como kkd ficava mais legal não?
2018-01-07 15:56 Igor Sprite: nn da
2018-01-07 15:56 Sodawea: aí ficaria dk dk kkd
2018-01-07 15:57 Igor Sprite: essa pattern ai é ctrl c ctrl v
2018-01-07 15:57 Sodawea: ?
2018-01-07 15:57 Igor Sprite: eu ach
2018-01-07 15:57 Igor Sprite: pera
2018-01-07 15:58 Igor Sprite: só se eu fizer a mesma coisa aqui
2018-01-07 15:58 Igor Sprite: 01:15:182 (305,306,307) -
2018-01-07 15:58 Sodawea: eu ia surgerir isso tbm
2018-01-07 15:58 Sodawea: sugerir
2018-01-07 15:58 Igor Sprite: krl mt bom
2018-01-07 15:58 Igor Sprite: vlw ai
2018-01-07 15:58 Igor Sprite: e ainda ficou diferente dessa parte 01:28:799 (370,371,372) -
2018-01-07 15:59 Sodawea:  e ainda
2018-01-07 15:59 Sodawea: 01:33:267 (391,392,393,394) - 
2018-01-07 15:59 Sodawea: pra ficar combinando
2018-01-07 15:59 Sodawea: deixava dk k d
2018-01-07 15:59 Sodawea: ve se tu gosta
2018-01-07 16:01 Igor Sprite: ss
2018-01-07 16:01 Igor Sprite: agora ta pika :v
2018-01-07 16:02 Sodawea: aee
2018-01-07 16:03 Sodawea: eu pego o log e jogo lá na thread?
2018-01-07 16:03 Igor Sprite: ss

Kantan wrote:

IRC

remap some to Kantan and Futsuu
minor improve to Muzu
nothing to Oni

mainly rhythm fix

2018-01-09 19:48 Kantan: I can do irc mod
2018-01-09 19:48 Kantan: wanna do irc mod ?
2018-01-09 19:48 Igor Sprite: yeah, i like irc
2018-01-09 19:49 Kantan: 00:10:076 - move to 00:10:289 - 
2018-01-09 19:50 Igor Sprite: i'm following the piano
2018-01-09 19:50 Kantan: but it has stronger beat
2018-01-09 19:52 Kantan: 00:13:267 - add note here
2018-01-09 19:52 Kantan: i dont think it will be too hard for kantan player
2018-01-09 19:52 Kantan: since there is the beat anyway
2018-01-09 19:53 Igor Sprite: hmm
2018-01-09 19:54 Kantan: I think your kantan note here is too hard for kantan player
2018-01-09 19:54 Kantan: it does follows beat nicely
2018-01-09 19:54 Kantan: but
2018-01-09 19:54 Igor Sprite: it's because i did the same thing here 01:27:309 -
2018-01-09 19:54 Kantan: it's too complex
2018-01-09 19:57 Kantan: hmmmmm
2018-01-09 19:57 Kantan: can you remap in most part ?
2018-01-09 19:58 Kantan: I'll try to help you with most part
2018-01-09 19:58 Igor Sprite: all the map?
2018-01-09 19:58 Kantan: only kantan
2018-01-09 19:59 Igor Sprite: what is the problem with kantan? D:
2018-01-09 19:59 Kantan: most pattern is too complex
2018-01-09 20:00 Igor Sprite: hard?
2018-01-09 20:00 Kantan: yes
2018-01-09 20:00 Kantan: it is very little complex
2018-01-09 20:00 Kantan: but it's hard for newplayer
2018-01-09 20:01 Igor Sprite: okay
2018-01-09 20:02 Kantan: please fix this 00:10:076 - one first
2018-01-09 20:02 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 20:02 Igor Sprite: aaaa
2018-01-09 20:02 Kantan: yes there is piano 
2018-01-09 20:03 Kantan: but this pattern is similar to https://puu.sh/yXyB3/dd80d57537.png
2018-01-09 20:04 Igor Sprite: 1/4? ( ° °)
2018-01-09 20:04 Kantan: no no no
2018-01-09 20:04 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 20:04 Kantan: I'll try to use simple english then
2018-01-09 20:05 Kantan: beat on red line < beat on white line\
2018-01-09 20:05 Kantan: just move this note 00:10:076 -  to 00:10:289 - 
2018-01-09 20:05 Kantan: it's easier
2018-01-09 20:05 Igor Sprite: ok >.>
2018-01-09 20:06 Kantan: there is drum on white line too
2018-01-09 20:06 Kantan: cuz we play drum game
2018-01-09 20:06 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 20:06 Kantan: not mania
2018-01-09 20:06 Igor Sprite: taikia
2018-01-09 20:07 Kantan: 4K drum
2018-01-09 20:07 Kantan: >_>
2018-01-09 20:07 Kantan: 00:18:161 - you can remove this
2018-01-09 20:07 Kantan: because 00:17:523 - player hit this note and remember the rhythm on here
2018-01-09 20:08 Kantan: they expect to see same similar rhyhtm like 00:19:012 - 
2018-01-09 20:08 Kantan: they expect to hit similar rhythm like*
2018-01-09 20:08 Kantan: baka me
2018-01-09 20:08 Kantan: @_@
2018-01-09 20:09 Igor Sprite: same similiar xd
2018-01-09 20:09 Igor Sprite: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/404353
2018-01-09 20:09 Kantan: o
2018-01-09 20:09 Kantan: this is nice
2018-01-09 20:10 Kantan: 00:24:757 - remove this 
2018-01-09 20:11 Kantan: 00:24:331 - to make this note stronger
2018-01-09 20:11 Kantan: and this part is very clam
2018-01-09 20:11 Igor Sprite: okay
2018-01-09 20:11 Kantan: i think use few note is better
2018-01-09 20:11 Kantan: same goes for 00:33:906 - 
2018-01-09 20:12 Kantan: 00:35:608 - 
2018-01-09 20:12 Igor Sprite: 00:18:161 - i can move to 00:18:374 - ? it will be so different if i remove this note compared with futsuu
2018-01-09 20:13 Kantan: oh no
2018-01-09 20:13 Kantan: I'll try to help with that later
2018-01-09 20:13 Kantan: lets focus on Kantan
2018-01-09 20:13 Igor Sprite: D:
2018-01-09 20:14 Kantan: i dont think it will be any problem
2018-01-09 20:14 Kantan: most part of map still look simillar
2018-01-09 20:14 Igor Sprite: i'm focusing on you ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
2018-01-09 20:14 Kantan: ok
2018-01-09 20:14 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 20:15 Kantan: hentai
2018-01-09 20:15 Igor Sprite: xd
2018-01-09 20:15 Kantan: 00:44:757 - 
2018-01-09 20:16 Kantan: change to d k k d k k d ?
2018-01-09 20:16 Kantan: I think is more easy
2018-01-09 20:16 Kantan: and simple
2018-01-09 20:18 Kantan: 00:49:012 - move this to 00:48:587 - look more simple this way
2018-01-09 20:18 Igor Sprite: it's the same thing in this session, the difference is because this is k k  d not k d  d x.x
2018-01-09 20:19 Kantan: https://puu.sh/yXyZ4/735de0b584.png
2018-01-09 20:19 Kantan: .
2018-01-09 20:20 Kantan: aaa
2018-01-09 20:20 Kantan: 00:55:395 - move this note to 00:54:119 - 
2018-01-09 20:20 Kantan: because strong beat
2018-01-09 20:20 Kantan: on here 00:54:119 - 
2018-01-09 20:22 Kantan: i think use k k d here 00:47:097- is nice https://puu.sh/yXz2v/8d1c74965f.png
2018-01-09 20:23 Kantan: 01:07:948 - move this note to 01:07:736 - 
2018-01-09 20:23 Kantan: place on first 1/4 drum
2018-01-09 20:23 Kantan: strong beat
2018-01-09 20:23 Kantan: \:D/
2018-01-09 20:23 Igor Sprite: i will keep the ctrl c ctrl v session xd
2018-01-09 20:24 Kantan: hmm ?
2018-01-09 20:24 Kantan: what do you mean
2018-01-09 20:24 Kantan: by the copy pasta
2018-01-09 20:24 Igor Sprite: 00:37:948 - to 00:48:161 -
2018-01-09 20:25 Kantan: ah
2018-01-09 20:25 Kantan: it's nice this way too k k d d k
2018-01-09 20:27 Kantan: you can ctrl+c this kiai sesion 00:54:970 - 
2018-01-09 20:27 Kantan: and ctrl+v here 01:08:587 - 
2018-01-09 20:27 Kantan: rhythm still the same
2018-01-09 20:28 Kantan: most of it still same*
2018-01-09 20:29 Igor Sprite: i'm following the vocal and i ctrl c ctrl v some things
2018-01-09 20:30 Kantan: after that 01:22:629 - remove this one to emphasize the beat on 01:22:204 - 
2018-01-09 20:30 Kantan: 01:24:970 - move to 01:25:182 - 
2018-01-09 20:30 Igor Sprite: fixed
2018-01-09 20:31 Igor Sprite: fixed
2018-01-09 20:31 Kantan: ctrl+c is love ctrl+v is life
2018-01-09 20:31 Kantan: that's all for kantan i guess
2018-01-09 20:31 Kantan: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1514221 AZALEA - GALAXY HidE and SeeK [Futsuu]]
2018-01-09 20:32 Kantan: 00:06:459 - change to k d k
2018-01-09 20:32 Igor Sprite: k d k? ( ° °)
2018-01-09 20:32 Kantan: yes
2018-01-09 20:33 Kantan: because you start to follow most drum at begining
2018-01-09 20:33 Kantan: make it fit drum pitch
2018-01-09 20:33 Igor Sprite: i did d d d in muzukashii
2018-01-09 20:33 Kantan: I'll remind you on that later
2018-01-09 20:33 Kantan: after mod futsuu
2018-01-09 20:36 Kantan: .
2018-01-09 20:36 Kantan: 00:19:225 - remove this
2018-01-09 20:37 Kantan: 00:18:799 - change this to d
2018-01-09 20:37 Igor Sprite: ok
2018-01-09 20:39 Kantan: 01:00:076 - add note here
2018-01-09 20:39 Kantan: it's not hard 
2018-01-09 20:39 Kantan: or too dense
2018-01-09 20:39 Igor Sprite: but i'm following the vocal
2018-01-09 20:40 Kantan: there is vocal there
2018-01-09 20:40 Igor Sprite: 00:58:587 - same thing here
2018-01-09 20:41 Kantan: doesnt matter
2018-01-09 20:41 Igor Sprite: ok :o
2018-01-09 20:41 Kantan: dont worry
2018-01-09 20:41 Kantan: it's fine
2018-01-09 20:42 Kantan: i think you worried about space between all these pattern
2018-01-09 20:43 Kantan: i think it's better to map and what you wanted to and dont worry about things much
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: cuz modder gonna find the way to nerf it anyway
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 20:44 Igor Sprite: D:
2018-01-09 20:44 Igor Sprite: i like play and replay my map 200 times
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: o wait
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: baka me
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: im sorry
2018-01-09 20:44 Kantan: make it like this or simillar this
2018-01-09 20:45 Kantan: https://puu.sh/yXzCY/65ebac6ffe.png
2018-01-09 20:45 Igor Sprite: (?° °)
2018-01-09 20:45 Kantan: start from here 00:58:587 - 
2018-01-09 20:46 Igor Sprite: ok
2018-01-09 20:46 Kantan: 01:02:204 - https://puu.sh/yXzF5/fbd4efb528.png
2018-01-09 20:47 Kantan: 01:05:821 - remove this one
2018-01-09 20:47 Igor Sprite: ;_;
2018-01-09 20:47 Kantan: nerf
2018-01-09 20:48 Kantan: you can copy 00:54:970 - session
2018-01-09 20:48 Kantan: to use 01:08:587 - 
2018-01-09 20:48 Kantan: xd
2018-01-09 20:49 Igor Sprite: pro mapper
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: 00:07:310 - copy
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: paste to
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: 01:22:204 - 
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: ez
2018-01-09 20:50 Igor Sprite: i did this xd
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: i want to know
2018-01-09 20:50 Kantan: 01:23:906 - 
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: why k d d k
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: i dont really get what you trying to map to
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: k: paino, drum
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: d: ?
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: d: drum
2018-01-09 20:51 Kantan: k: paino, drum
2018-01-09 20:52 Igor Sprite: k: piano d: drum
2018-01-09 20:52 Igor Sprite: kiano
2018-01-09 20:52 Kantan: 01:24:119 - this one
2018-01-09 20:52 Kantan: i think you follow that 1/4 beat
2018-01-09 20:52 Kantan: it's too hard to notice when playing
2018-01-09 20:52 Kantan: idk
2018-01-09 20:53 Kantan: just suggest to use something else
2018-01-09 20:53 Kantan: or you can just remove 01:24:119 - 
2018-01-09 20:53 Kantan: \:D/
2018-01-09 20:53 Kantan: 01:27:948 - this one too
2018-01-09 20:54 Igor Sprite: i will keep xd
2018-01-09 20:54 Kantan: i think you follow same sound like other red line sound
2018-01-09 20:54 Kantan: it's hard to notice whn playing as i said
2018-01-09 20:54 Kantan: x.x
2018-01-09 20:55 Kantan: i meant like
2018-01-09 20:55 Kantan: in futsuu or kantan you dont need to follow little noise that much
2018-01-09 20:56 Igor Sprite: i like dense low diffs and ez high diffs
2018-01-09 20:56 Kantan: only follow beat that can distinguish easily
2018-01-09 20:56 Kantan: easy*
2018-01-09 20:56 Kantan: easy to distinguish
2018-01-09 20:56 Igor Sprite: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/541897
2018-01-09 20:56 Kantan: that is correct
2018-01-09 20:57 Kantan: it's personally matter
2018-01-09 20:57 Kantan: :I
2018-01-09 20:57 Igor Sprite: look the spread x.x
2018-01-09 20:57 Igor Sprite: N H H H
2018-01-09 20:57 Kantan: taiko star is broken
2018-01-09 20:58 Kantan: I think it has big issue with dense map in low diffs
2018-01-09 20:59 Kantan: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1513666 AZALEA - GALAXY HidE and SeeK [Muzukashii]]
2018-01-09 20:59 Kantan: Muzu Muzu
2018-01-09 20:59 Kantan: 00:06:459 - k d k
2018-01-09 20:59 Igor Sprite: ok
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: why 00:55:395 - 00:57:523 - 
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: the dd
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: why
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: 00:55:289 - dd here is ok to have
2018-01-09 21:00 Kantan: 00:57:523 - but this 
2018-01-09 21:01 Kantan: if to just mirror 00:55:395 - 
2018-01-09 21:01 Kantan: i sugesst to remove 00:57:629 - 
2018-01-09 21:02 Igor Sprite: follow better the vocal i guess x.x
2018-01-09 21:03 Kantan: arghghghgh
2018-01-09 21:03 Kantan: most dd are problem
2018-01-09 21:03 Kantan: i think you try to gimmick
2018-01-09 21:04 Kantan: i you want to keep it's ok i guess 
2018-01-09 21:04 Kantan: but i still think it is problem
2018-01-09 21:04 Kantan: lol
2018-01-09 21:06 Kantan: yes
2018-01-09 21:06 Kantan: i only think most dd is problem
2018-01-09 21:06 Kantan: but you can keep it this way

Noffy wrote:

I tried to mod but didnt have anything to say
here's a small star

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

Hi~ so organized @-@
From My Queue

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General : Not put spinner at end? or 01:34:119 - I think good if add spinner here no
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[Kantan]
00:57:097 - maybe add k? add some note for compare with Futsuu note ok
01:03:906 (18) - move to 01:03:480 - ? sounds vocal high here no
01:16:672 (40) - k ? sounds high, and for emphasize with 00:12:416 (20,21,22,23) - it's 2 different things x.x

[Futsuu]
00:06:459 (15,16,17) - kdk? sound heard nice if use it, and you use it too at Muzu and Oni yeah
00:35:821 (84) - delete? ok
00:36:246 (85) - move to 00:36:459 - no, it's the same sound here 00:36:884 -
00:55:395 (6) - change to k? I think sounds high here no
01:07:948 (44) - move to 01:08:161 - and add d at 01:08:374 - to follow drum sound at song ok

[Muzukashii]
00:11:353 (37) - delete? for compare with Futsuu (not many note at Futsuu). Also cause this is slow song, I think this too many note for muzu used
00:17:948 - add d here? have beat sound here, and I think to make triplet here no triplets xd
00:18:480 (64) - I dont know what this xD you may to not follow that vocal sound here. move to 00:18:587 - but have sound here ;_:
00:27:310 - add d? follow vocal sound i'm not follow vocal here
00:31:565 - same^ but this k ^
00:40:076 - same^ ^
00:46:884 - same^ ^

00:36:246 (109) - same with Futsuu no

01:02:204 (34) - k? follow vocal sound from high to low will remap
01:03:267 (39,40) - Ctrl + G. 01:03:480 - is high (you do it at Kantan and Futsuu) ^
01:05:182 (46) - k? sound vocal high ^
01:07:736 (57) - ^ ^
01:08:161 - add d? Make triplet here, because just doublet heard strange here ^
01:17:097 (96) - k for variation? same with 01:03:055 (38,39,40) - ^ ^

01:35:608 - add k? Oni is triplet, so just made 1/2 here ok

[Oni]
00:27:310 - same with Muzu^ I think for this part you just same it with Muzu i'm not following the vocal
00:28:587 - add d? For follow vocal sound i'm not following the vocal
00:31:565 - here too. I think add 1/2 k d ^

00:31:778 (94) - add d for vocal sound ^
00:34:331 (101) - same^^

00:36:246 (152) - same with Futsuu and Muzu no
00:38:374 - add note here? Make this part Oni different with other diff. And I think this good to make 1/2 tap no
00:39:970 - add note? emphasize with 00:43:055 (167,168,169) - . Also make this too at 00:46:459 (177,178) - no

00:40:076 - same with Muzu no
00:41:778 - add note too no
01:02:204 (247) - same with Muzu too. For vocal sound I think this is high ok
01:05:182 (261) - ^ no
01:07:736 (274) - ^ ^

01:12:629 (301,302) - I not sure this is k d or d k, but I think you must made this note emphasize with Muzu? changed to k d @-@


Nice map
Good Luck for ranked

Zetera wrote:

Hi! Thank you for your mod on Wirtshaus Gaudi. We agreed on a M4M, so here I am!

[General]

Just a suggestion: what about changing the HP for the highest difficulty to 6.5? HP scales by 1 for each diff, but I think going back up to 7 is a bit too much and while 6 works, I just thought it looked kind of dull to have the same hp for the muzu and the oni. You absolutely don't have to change this. okay xd

[Kantan]

This is bias, and I don't know whether this is too relevant, but I personally really don't like Kantans that break beats up into thirds. I feel like beginners will have a much easier time when there are no patterns snapped with 3/2 circles. The part that made me sick, therefore, was the second kiai. I felt like the other few instances were justified, but the patterns just before and in this kiai are just unsatisfying to me, I reckon. You might want to try some simpler snappings/patterns! made some changes xD

[Futsuu]

01:11:140 - I think this downbeat right here is very important and should be emphasized with a d! yeah

Since this one is very close to the vocals, there's not much I can say about this one anyways.

[Muzukashii]

Interesting doublet theme. I think some of those doubles are inadequate (especially 01:11:140 - ), namely 00:58:693 - , 01:08:267 -. You're better off following the vocals, here. I think that's all! made some changes

[Oni]

00:15:182 (76,77) - You got your piano on the latter of the two, so that one should be a k. Try using Ctrl+G! ok
00:19:012 (95,96,97,98,99) - you might want to change this to ddk d k or kkk d k, since I think that alternating between k and d before the drumroll seems like a nice thing to be had.changed to ddk d k
Also, I advise you to use kkd/ddk for every triplet that's supposed to have it strngest hit at the end (instead of kdd/dkk).


That's it. Didn't have to say much, did I? zetera, you are so cute ><

Good luck!

kiminokokoro wrote:

from komodo chan's queue cute xd

Oni

00:14:012 (70) - delete it ? better sound and follow the 00:12:416 (60,61,62,63,64) no, i think it's more fun to play with ddk
00:14:119 (71) - add finisher? no, sounds bad
the part from 00:37:948 to 00:48:161 - add some notes to make difference between the Oni and Muzukashii . If you don't want to add too many notes , just add some in the part from 00:44:757 to 00:47:736. used
01:01:672 (236) - delete it ? better sound already mentioned
01:01:778 (237) - add finisher? ^
01:15:289 (306) - delete it ? ^
01:15:395 (307) - finisher? ^
01:25:182 (352) - move to 01:25:289 to make 01:24:969 (350,351) clear but it's the same sound here 00:10:289 - @-@
01:28:906 (371) - delete it ? already mentioned
01:29:012 (372) - finisher? ^

Good luck

ensan71714 wrote:

Hi from my queue (● ω ●) (● ω ●)

Kantan

-A lot of timing sections are unnecessary. If you are not using SV changes just delete them :c
00:08:587(14,15) ctrl+g? To follow the pitch of piano ok
00:49:863 I don't see why this place doesn't deserve a note, it has the same drum as the notes around it
01:02:629 - 01:05:182(17,18,19,20,21) This is a weird way to split the notes... there is no complex rhythm here, just 1/1 vocal. It would be much more intuitive if you put a note at 01:03:480 and 01:04:757 and delete the note at 01:03:906 to make this two 1/1 triplets. good xd
01:16:246 - 01:18:799(39,40,41,42,43) ^, same in the 2nd kiai ^

Futsuu

-Same issue with Kantan, please delete the unnecessary timing sections :c
00:14:119(37) change to d? there is a pitch drop in piano yeah, but it's still higher than other parts
01:29:012(107) ^ ^
00:56:246(9,10) ctrl+g? Both the drum and vocal pitch suggests so. ok
01:29:438 add a d here? To keep the same rhythm as the intro yeah

Muzukashii

00:56:246(11,12) Same as Futsuu so if you changed that also change this ok
01:30:608(147,148) Judging by your previous patterns it is best to move these two notes 1/4 beat earlier. ok

Oni

01:05:714(255) This pattern of a triplet followed by two doublets is not seen anywhere else in the map, and I was a bit caught off when I first played it. I feel that it would be better to follow the same pattern as you did at the end of the second kiai, or move this note to 01:05:502, but it's really your call i like these patterns, makes more fun to play
01:07:736 Judging by the drum I think you can put a longer stream like ddddkkkkd here, since long streams are present elsewhere in this map my intention here is make a transition kiai1 --> kiai2 more easy than any kiai pattern

Solid upper difficulties, can't find issues to mod^ _ ^
Good luck(> v <)

[R] wrote:

yo

[General]
00:19:863 - i guess slider should start in 00:20:076 - as the drum stream here ok
00:50:714 - put note instead, it's have beat sound. Not clear enough to follow the drum stream it's only to fit with the other slider 00:20:076 -
the second kiai can end in 01:22:204 - and delete 3rd kiai shortened the 3rd kiai

[Kantan]
start 00:37:948 - this mixed snapping confused beginer player to read, i suggest to delete note like 00:40:927 - | 00:44:331 - | 00:47:736 - for break. isn't mixed, the 1/1 makes pattern with the note in 1/2 line, but i deleted the last suggestion
00:56:459 - i prefer to move white tick backward and delete 00:55:395 - it will expand density and more readable sounds bad and the actual is playable
01:06:033 - | 01:07:097 - this can delete to give 4/1 break deleted the second suggestion

[Futsuu]
00:03:267 - maybe delete no
00:05:821 - move 00:05:608 - to maintain flow ok
00:43:480 - add kat for build up pattern no
00:54:970 - this kiai lack of 2/1 break, i suggest to add at least 1-2 break. 00:58:374 - | 01:02:204 - | 01:05:608 - these spot good to put it ok

[Muzukashii]
00:18:480 - can move 00:19:225 - instead for better sound no, this is a muzukashii without triplets

maybe just that from me
good luck thanks :3

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[General]
Why the last short KIAI ? i'm following the vocal and and want make pattern with the kiais. kiai|short break|kiai|short break|kiai so... i can't delete the last kiai

[Kantan]
01:06:033 (23) - This could be a k to match the previous sound no, i'm following the drums, same here 01:19:650 (45) -
01:07:736 (25,26) - k_D sounds better to me and matches the first Kiai. no
01:18:799 (44,45) - If ^ yes, then maybe match these with k's as well ^

[Futsuu]
00:19:438 - Would put a d here since you have one at 00:18:799 (49) - too but it's two different things O.o, this note 00:18:799 (49) - is only to give emphasis to 00:19:012 (50) -
00:30:289 - You could put a d here no
00:35:821 - And a k here (or is it too hard now?) it's only to differentiate from muzukashii
01:08:374 (43) - You could move this to 01:07:948 - to keep the 4plets with the vocals going, probably kddk tho okay

[Muzukashii]
00:11:459 - Could add a k here too no, i like this 1/1 break
00:11:991 (39,40) - Ctrl-g and 00:13:055 (42) - k sounds better to me? no, i'm giving emphasis to piano with k notes
00:30:182 (88) - I'd prefere this at 00:30:289 - such a calm part and the doublets are better saved for more intense spots i deleted this note
00:43:374 - I mean you map every other drum here so might as well map this too. it's only to differentiate from oni and to be more next to futsuu
01:12:310 (77) - This seems too much, would move to 01:12:416 - and k. ok
01:26:353 - Same as 00:11 ^ same ^

[Oni]
00:30:289 - Would add note nah
00:56:565 (208,211) - You could Ctrl-g these and follow through in the other 3 similar spots, but probably just my personal preference. hmm... no, i didn't used any kkd if isn't a piano or important parts(01:01:565 (234,235,236) - or 01:15:182 (304,305,306) - for example)
Nice diff! >.<


Best of luck mate! thanks

1. 00:36:033 (104,105) - Swap? having 00:36:246 (105) different to 00:36:884 (106) would be nice as 00:36:246 (105) is higher pitched (with both the piano and drums).
2. 01:35:608 (164) - subjective but this? similar reasons as stated in oni https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10169995

1. A lot fo the SV changes from the kiai to the end of the map didn't really seem to match the song. for example at 01:26:033 - the change to 1x SV didn't seem natural because there wasn't a change of intensity within the music at all. I think a having the same SV throughout the kiai and ending would be ideal
2. The finishes on 1/4 beat patterns didn't really suit this kind of map imho and does play quite awkward with DT mod.
3. 00:06:459 (32) - if you're following the drums shouldn't this be a k?
4. 00:30:289 - add k for the piano? you mapped the piano with 00:30:076 (125,126) but missed this beat
5. 00:36:033 (104,105) - same as oni
6. 01:07:097 (261,262,263,264,265) - this doesn't really play along to the music to me. It doesn't seem to follow the vocals or drums.
7. 01:35:608 (397,398,399) - I think kdk or kkk would be better because the piano last piano note is higher pitched and a k would reflect that.

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Muzu

1. 00:36:033 (104,105) - Swap? having 00:36:246 (105) different to 00:36:884 (106) would be nice as 00:36:246 (105) is higher pitched (with both the piano and drums). used, i changed 00:36:884 (106) - to k because is higher pitched than 00:36:246 (105) - and i'm giving emphasis to 00:36:246 (105) - with the 00:36:033 (104) -
2. 01:35:608 (164) - subjective but this? similar reasons as stated in oni https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10169995 nah, i don't want triplets

Oni

1. A lot fo the SV changes from the kiai to the end of the map didn't really seem to match the song. for example at 01:26:033 - the change to 1x SV didn't seem natural because there wasn't a change of intensity within the music at all. I think a having the same SV throughout the kiai and ending would be ideal i'm following the vocal with the SV and it's for create a effect when played
2. The finishes on 1/4 beat patterns didn't really suit this kind of map imho and does play quite awkward with DT mod. nah
3. 00:06:459 (32) - if you're following the drums shouldn't this be a k? yeah, changed to dk because kk sounds bad
4. 00:30:289 - add k for the piano? you mapped the piano with 00:30:076 (125,126) but missed this beat i think it's the mp3 quality xd
5. 00:36:033 (104,105) - same as oni same as muzu*
6. 01:07:097 (261,262,263,264,265) - this doesn't really play along to the music to me. It doesn't seem to follow the vocals or drums. changed to d d kkd
7. 01:35:608 (397,398,399) - I think kdk or kkk would be better because the piano last piano note is higher pitched and a k would reflect that. sounds bad

[] I hope this helps ~ ><