1. EZ - 4Key (1.46 stars, 306 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (3.2 stars, 885 notes)
3. HXJ's NM - 4Key (2.19 stars, 494 notes)
4. MX - 4Key (4.25 stars, 1260 notes)
5. Nightmare - 4Key (5.29 stars, 1484 notes)

"Nominators"

Shima Rin | Critical_Star

"Diffs"

EZ | me
NM | HXJ_Crafter
HD | me
MX | me
Nightmare | me

"Modders"

Really thx you guys
CommandoBlack / Regraz / ExNeko / Wonki / -[Apple]- / Lenfried- / Kuro Izaya / Raveille / Murumoo / JesusMD24 / Janko / Shiro-neechan / DustMoon / [Crz]Makii / pocket-Gao / Litharrale / Evening / LordTimeWaste / frolica / Protastic101 / Sarahkuai / OwenF04 / Incendent / Civilization / Tofu1222 / chouyaa / Critical_Star / Etsu

CommandoBlack wrote:

Marked. M4M from you queue: t/461498

SC

00:01:303 make this one an LN like similar sounds before | I do not here a sound here
00:06:443 (6443|3) - Make this a double once it has similar sounds like that | ok
00:07:538 (7538|0) - Remove. Doubles are used for this sound | u r right
00:12:005 add a note | ok
00:12:089 (12089|3) - remove. (Rearrange the note beside it to your liking.) | ok
00:13:185 (13185|2,13185|3,13522|1,13522|0,13690|2,13690|3,13690|1,13774|2,13774|3,13774|1,13859|1,13859|0,14027|3,14027|1,14027|2,14364|3,14364|1,14364|2,14533|0,14533|1,14617|3,14701|0,14701|1,14701|2,14786|2,14786|3) - Suggestion: | really nice and I like it
00:17:482 is missing a note (earlier section prove this) | yes
00:18:578 (18578|0) - If the above suggestion had the starting LN aplied as shown then make this alike it. Cut it to half the size | ok
00:27:679 Add a LN or a SV to support the sound here | keep
01:15:544 instead of having a 1x SV here make it a 0.8x to literally make it a "Nightmare" as the lyrics suggests. (Don't forget to add the 1x SV at the first note that comes up after) | nice idea, I'll do it in another way
Compare these: 00:53:634 (53634|0,53676|1,53718|2,53760|3,53803|0,53971|2,53971|3) - & 00:54:982 (54982|3,54982|0,55024|1,55067|2,55109|3,55151|0,55319|2,55319|1) - & 00:56:162 (56162|1,56162|2,56162|0,56331|3,56373|2,56415|1,56457|0,56499|3,56499|2,56583|2,56583|3) - & 00:57:005 (57005|3,57047|2,57089|0,57131|1,57173|3,57194|2,57215|0,57237|1,57258|3,57279|2,57300|0,57321|1) - & 00:57:679 (57679|0,57721|1,57763|3,57805|2,57847|0,57869|1,57890|3,57911|2,57932|0,57953|1,57974|3,57995|2) - They have the same sounds except mapped fairly differently. This comes up on other difficulties too. Keep an eye out for the consistency. | u r right and I fixed the first 3 but last 2 I do it in design

MX

00:28:353 (28353|0,28353|1) - move to column 1|2 instead of 0|1 | it will make a jack here but I do not wanna make so keep
00:45:207 (45207|3,45207|0) - make this a triple | totally right

I hope this helps lots.
~pew pew Kudo. gl

thank you so much and it's really helpful

Regraz wrote:

M4M.
0|1|2|3
[EZ]
00:09:814 (9814|3,9982|2,10151|1,10319|2) - Consider this for pitch relevancy? https://puu.sh/sJCq7/f0a6b4a1ff.png | 00:10:151 (10151|1) - this note obvious is higher tone than 00:10:488 (10488|0) - , keep
00:11:836 (11836) - Add a note here on (2) to keep consistency with 00:14:533 (14533|0) - | ok
00:16:387 (16387|1) - Same as above. | ok
01:35:769 (95769|1) - Why not map the 1/2 rhythms? | ok
[HD]
00:11:836 (11836|1) - Remove. 00:12:005 (12005|1,12005|0) - Sound at here is even stronger. | but here is same with 00:11:331 -
00:14:027 (14027|1) - Remove as well | same with 00:14:701 -
01:43:437 (103437|3) - End at 01:45:207? As with NM. | fine
Cool! Good luck!

感谢瓜子dalao摸摸

ExNeko wrote:

开坑开坑
4K= 0|1|2|3

SC

00:20:769 (20769|2,20853|1,20937|2,20937|0,20937|3) - 做个叠？| 好
00:25:825 (25825|0,25994|0) - 提前一个1/8拍 | 这里没错的
00:50:095 (50095|0,50095|3,50095|1,50179|2,50263|1,50263|0,50347|3,50347|2,50432|1,50432|0) - 做成1/8的楼梯 | 还是算了吧 这里鼓的打击还是满爽的
00:52:791 (52791|3,52791|1,52791|0,52876|2,52960|1,52960|3,53044|0,53128|1,53128|3) - 同上 | ^
01:01:724 (61724|3,61724|2,61836|3,61836|2,61949|2,61949|3,62061|1,62061|2) - 同上？ | 我考虑一下
01:41:246 (101246|2,101246|3,101331|1,101331|2,101415|1,101415|2,101499|0,101499|1,101583|1,101583|0,101668|1,101668|2,101752|2,101752|1,101836|2,101836|3,101921|3,101921|2,102005|0,102005|3,102089|0,102089|3,102173|2,102173|0,102258|2,102258|0,102342|1,102342|2,102426|1,102426|2,102510|1,102510|3,102595|3,102595|1,102679|0,102679|3,102763|3,102763|0,102847|1,102847|2,102932|1,102932|2) - 做成左边两个右边两个的那种吧、这个太难打了 | 确实 重新map了这段

MX

00:44:701 (44701|0,44701|1,45038|1,45038|0) - 右移一格 | 好
00:45:207 (45207|1) - 加个note | 和00:45:207 (45207|1) - 一样 所以都用三个
01:10:067 (70067|1,70151|0,70151|3,70151|2) - ctrl+h | 先保留，音乐一样 如果换了会有点卡手
01:10:825 (70825|0,70994|0,71162|0,71331|0,71499|0,71668|0,71836|0) - 弄出jack了 | 好
01:33:999 (93999|3) - 加个note | 好
01:36:274 (96274|1) - to 3 | 这里是根据音调放在这里的
01:43:437 (103437|2) - 这个LN应该中止在01:45:544 | 和NM一样了

HD

00:12:005 (12005|1) - to 3 | 直接左手打会简单一点
00:20:263 (20263|3,20347|1,20516|3,20600|1) - 穿插点LN | 好
00:30:038 (30038|3,30151|2,30263|1,30376|0,30376|3,30881|2,31555|3) - ctrl+h | 好

EZ太简单摸不摸都一样了

感谢感谢

Regraz wrote:

[HXJ's NM]
00:20:937 (20937|0) - Jack here too?
(I)Each of this will cause some trouble with col 0/3, like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6771506
(II)Ctrl+H for some part like the left one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6771574
00:43:185 (43185|3,43353|2,43522|0,43690|1) - 1/4? lol I forgot.. LN instead
01:14:196 (74196|1,74364|0,74533|3,74701|1,74870|2,75038|0,75207|3) - Jack? 饶命啊热瓜子
Cool! Good luck! 然后就死了

ExNeko wrote:

[HXJ's NM]00:13:774 (13774|3,13859|2) - 左移两格 Re-arrange了一下
00:14:027 (14027|0,14027|1) - ctrl+h 同上
00:14:364 (14364|3) - to 2 同上
00:20:095 (20095|0) - to 1 同热瓜子
00:21:106 (21106|3) - to 0 同瓜子热
00:30:881 (30881|0) - 做LN
(I)00:30:881 -前是下降的，00:30:881 - 后面是上升的，加LN不妥当
(II)分成两个LN也不妥，看这里01:12:173 - 所以保留
01:37:623 (97623|2,97791|2,97960|3,98128|3) - 这地方jack不好吧？01:37:791 (97791|2) -挪了，另一个保留

1. Check ur diff's hp and od
2. Make ur map's BG size to 1366x768

SC

00:09:308 (9308|3,9350|2,9392|1,9435|0) - 6snap

00:09:814 (9814|2,9814|1,9982|1,9982|0,10151|2,10151|1,10319|3,10319|2) - ,00:10:488 - it's ok to change 3note

00:23:971 (23971|0,24055|1,24140|2,24224|3) - easier than mx change 2note

00:49:842 (49842|1,49842|0,49926|3,49926|2) - http://puu.sh/sUDj5/cd31c98443.jpg

00:50:600 - 3note

01:12:173 (72173|3,72173|0,72286|0,72286|3,72398|0,72398|3,72510|2,72510|1,72623|2,72623|1,72735|2,72735|1) - also 3note

01:28:803 (88803|0) - hmm i dont know this is good

01:31:724 (91724|3) - http://puu.sh/sUDvh/50fa6502af.jpg try new pattern

Wonki wrote:

hello im late sry

1. Check ur diff's hp and od | okii
2. Make ur map's BG size to 1366x768 | okii

HD

00:04:526 (4526|1,4631|0,4758|3,4863|1,4968|0,5095|3,5200|1,5305|0) - change to 6snap | okii

00:04:863 (4863|1) - move to 3 better to express song | keep

00:08:044 (8044|0) - wrong snap 00:08:002 - 1/8 snap | okii

00:11:668 (11668|0,11836|2) - change this is better to play | keep it

00:19:758 (19758|0,19842|3,19926|2,20010|3) - http://puu.sh/sUCnm/35ebf37a3f.jpg expressing this part like 00:19:083 (19083|2,19168|0,19252|2,19336|0) - | good idea

00:20:263 (20263|3,20516|3) - It sounds too short so I don't think it needs to be LN. change normal note | yeah

00:24:477 (24477|3) - change to LN until 00:24:814 - | okii

01:03:767 (63767|0) - this note actually 01:03:788 - here more big sound | okii

01:14:870 (74870|3,74870|1,74870|2,75038|2,75038|1,75038|3,75207|1,75207|2,75207|0) - 2note. Main synth is going to more bigger, not drum. So it couldn't be 3 notes | okii

SC

00:09:308 (9308|3,9350|2,9392|1,9435|0) - 6snap | okii

00:09:814 (9814|2,9814|1,9982|1,9982|0,10151|2,10151|1,10319|3,10319|2) - ,00:10:488 - it's ok to change 3note | considering

00:23:971 (23971|0,24055|1,24140|2,24224|3) - easier than mx change 2note | fixed

00:49:842 (49842|1,49842|0,49926|3,49926|2) - http://puu.sh/sUDj5/cd31c98443.jpg | nice

00:50:600 - 3note | there have no heavy sounds so keep it

01:12:173 (72173|3,72173|0,72286|0,72286|3,72398|0,72398|3,72510|2,72510|1,72623|2,72623|1,72735|2,72735|1) - also 3note | ok, but then will make more jacks, but I try it

01:28:803 (88803|0) - hmm i dont know this is good | okii

01:31:724 (91724|3) - http://puu.sh/sUDvh/50fa6502af.jpg try new pattern | yes

-[Apple]- wrote:

Hi, here's mod you've requested then.

General

1. Hitsound missing | 之后加！

SC

1. 00:07:117 (7117|1,7117|0) - 感觉可以和 00:07:033 (7033|2,7033|3) - jack一下 | 先暂时这样，我觉得手感上还是可以
2. 00:20:095 - 00:20:263 - 感觉可以拉一个ln，因为好像有1/8kick的样子 | 试过 不过谱面不太好看了 暂时保留
3. 00:20:600 - 00:20:769 - 同理，感觉这边也可拉一个 | ^
4. 00:22:286 (22286|3) - 可以把这个拉长? | 如果这个拉长 后面的长音也需要LN表示 这样后面的谱面就没法摆了 所以这里就不做LN了
5. 00:23:971 (23971|0,24055|1,24140|2,24224|3) - 左右拍走起？| 可以
6. 00:56:499 (56499|3,56499|2,56583|3,56583|2,56668|1,56668|0) - 感觉可以像后面一样统一成1/16 | 考虑一下
7. 01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - 感觉要和 01:17:398 (77398|3) - 这个ln换一下位置，会好一点 | 好

MX

1. 00:23:971 -
   img

   
   为何这一段是左右拍，而SC不是阿 | 改了
2. 00:25:909 (25909|1) - 移到3 | 好
3. 00:27:426 (27426|0,27468|1,27510|2,27553|3,27595|0,27637|1) - 这一坨全部用ln代替了吧。SC都没有用1/8 | 好
4. 00:48:241 (48241|0,48283|1,48325|2,48367|3,48409|0,48451|1,48494|2,48536|3) - ^ | ok
5. 00:57:173 (57173|0,57215|1,57258|2,57300|3) - 和 00:57:847 (57847|3,57890|2,57932|1,57974|0) - 这两个都可以用ln代替，因为后者1/16用ln更带感，后面都可以这样 | ok

好，就水摸一下， GL!

Lenfried- wrote:

mmm old music

general

kiai where? | will add after

sc

wont go too in-depth cause im not very capable of playing this. Really suggesting to get mods from someone who can play this really well.
either ctrl+h 00:27:005 (27005|3,27005|1,27005|2,27047|0,27089|1,27131|2,27173|3,27258|1,27258|0,27342|3,27342|2,27426|1,27426|0,27679|3,27679|2) - or 00:26:836 (26836|3,26836|2,26921|1,26921|0) - because 00:26:921 (26921|0,26921|1,27005|1,27047|0,27089|1) - is just really bad | ok
00:49:252 (49252|2) - move to 2 so that it is the triple that breaks the flow + comfy and w/e or 00:49:421 (49421|2) - to 4 | ok
00:54:308 (54308|2) - if you did the move to 2 from ^, move this to 2 also | ok
01:03:746 - this bit feels inadequately charted | ok
while 01:12:173 (72173|3,72173|0,72286|0,72286|3,72398|3,72398|0) - can be excused, 01:12:510 (72510|1,72510|2,72623|2,72623|1,72735|1,72735|2) - has more distinct changes in pitch so this kinda needs some lane changes in a few notes
01:17:904 - would prefer doubles over a single staccato but idk | considering
01:28:803 (88803|0,88859|0) - this is REALLY rough though idk how it can be fixed | considering
01:35:179 (95179|3,95263|2,95284|3,95305|0,95326|1,95347|2) - would prefer this to go in the order of 341234 | ok

im kinda short on time so ill get back on this with the lower diff

Lenfried- wrote:

ok im back for round 2
no kd for this post

general

having the same HP/OD in all diffs is most likely unacceptable for ranking. There must be a increasing curve of HP/OD values starting from the lowest diff | already ok from modder Wonki~

MX

00:55:488 (55488|0,55488|1,55488|2,55572|3,55572|2) - for cases like this its a more humane and a more difficulty appropriate move to just go for a double jumpjack on one hand (not a triple but an actual physical hand) (example [12][12] or [34][34]). In application, 00:55:488 (55488|1) - move to 4 | ok
Well that's pretty much it. The map has the perfect density and the layering is mostly good. After a mod from a more experienced 4k modder probably for the second kiai, im sure this diff is good for ranking.

Kuro Izaya wrote:

考完试元旦假期终于有空摸图了（

Total：背景图的尺寸比例有点不对劲，建议改1366*768 | 下次就update了

EZ

• 
  01:03:409 (63409|3) - LN的收尾抓错了 | fixed

HXJ's NM

• 
  01:03:409 (63409|0) - 也是这个LN | fixed

HD

• 
  01:03:409 (63409|3) - 呃。这个LN还是延长半拍吧，和上面两个难度有一样的感觉 | fixed
  01:36:864 (96864|0) - 这个放置的有点唐突 | fixed

MX

• 
  00:20:937 (20937|1,20937|0,20937|3,21106|1,21106|3,21106|0,21274|1,21274|3,21274|0,21443|1,21443|3,21443|0,21612|1,21612|0,21612|3,21780|1,21780|0,21780|3) - 打乱点也许效果更好 | 不打乱

SC

• 
  00:12:089 (12089|3) - 改LN吧 | 想突出段落感，所以这里短暂的停顿挺好的
  00:14:786 (14786|1) - 同上 | same
  00:17:482 (17482|2) - ↑ | same
  00:20:937 (20937|2,20937|0,20937|3,21106|0,21106|3,21106|2,21274|0,21274|2,21274|3,21443|0,21443|2,21443|3,21612|0,21612|2,21612|3,21780|0,21780|3,21780|2) - MX难度可以不打乱但是SC的话还是打乱增加点难度试试吧 | ok

闲置了很久很抱歉（
提前祝元旦快乐√

Murumoo wrote:

halo
my opinion = suggest
You do not have to accept it. [because your map is good ]

MX

00:11:331 - suggest | ok
00:58:353 - suggest | keep
hm good this level

good luck

JesusMD24 wrote:

Hi Hi Amigo~
Your map is very good, but it needs more LNs :3
Suggestion >:D

only accept 2nd suggestions, and I think it's not need to much LNs

Good Luck!! :'D

Janko wrote:

I found this map by chance in someone's queue :v Btw nice song

mod

|1|2|3|4|
[HXJ's NM]
00:43:859 (43859|3,44701|2) - hmm maybe move one column to the left | not necessary

[MX]
00:07:707 (7707|1) - move to column 3 | right
[SC]
00:16:724 (16724|2) - move to column 4 for convenience and better arrangement of notes | right
00:19:589 (19589|2) - the same as above | ok
00:26:078 (26078|3,26162|2) - I propose ctrl+G I think it is more comfortable | ok
00:40:151 (40151|2) - to column 4 because in column 3 is too many notes (you know 00:39:814 (39814|2,39982|2,40151|2,40319|2,40488|2) - ) | ok
00:41:162 (41162|1) - move to column 1 for ballance. | ok
00:47:230 (47230|2) - I think that you can move this note to column 4. If you did it 00:47:567 (47567|1) - move to column 3 and move this 00:48:072 (48072|2) - to column 2. All for ballance. | on purpose
01:09:140 (69140|2) - to column 4 | ok
01:12:286 (72286|1) - maybe move to column 3 | ok
01:23:465 (83465|1) - move to column 1 | ok
01:24:055 - holy shit xDD |

I think thats all. GL o/

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: 00:53:297 - just click the note in column 3 to fix the AiMod in Expert Diff.
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

1. 00:00:713 (713|2,881|3) - Ctrl + G for consistency
2. 00:39:308 (39308|3) - move to column 3
3. 00:56:668 (56668|0,56836|1,57342|2,57510|3,58016|1,58185|0,58690|3,58859|2) - i think much better if you change these notes into jacks
4. 01:17:567 (77567|1,77735|1) - in this part you using jack but 01:20:600 (80600|1,80769|2) - 01:23:297 (83297|2,83465|3) - these one is not a jack note (well it's these notes have similar sound and i think you need to reconsider this in that part)

1. 00:13:690 (13690|2,13774|1,13859|0) - try this parttern (well you using many stairs in all parts and i think you need to add some new pattern for fun to play) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7078924
2. 00:24:055 (24055|2,24140|3) - Ctrl + G (as i said about new pattern)
3. 00:29:814 (29814|2,29926|1) - Ctrl + G (^^)
4. 00:43:269 (43269|2,43353|3) - Ctrl + G (^^)
5. 00:48:999 (48999|1,49083|2) - Ctrl + G (^^)
6. 00:55:235 (55235|1) - move to column 4

1. 00:16:218 - i think you need to add one note here. Similar sound like these one 00:16:724 - 00:17:061 - 00:17:398 -
2. 00:18:915 - this one too
3. 00:31:218 - try to add LN in column 2 for the "uwaah" sound.
4. 01:18:072 (78072|2) - move this to column 3. Well 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) - this one is not similar sound to use jack. 01:18:241 (78241|2,78409|2) - this one is acceptable but not this one 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) -
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2) - i think much better to use stair than this pattern.

Thanks again for mod my map..I will apply your mod if the net is back in my house because the net has been disconnected since last Sunday and I was modding your map in the internet shop. (Well uploading is restricted in the internet shop). Good luck to your map

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Mod for Mod Request

[General]

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: 00:53:297 - just click the note in column 3 to fix the AiMod in Expert Diff.
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[EZ]

1. 00:00:713 (713|2,881|3) - Ctrl + G for consistency | keep
2. 00:39:308 (39308|3) - move to column 3 | keep
3. 00:56:668 (56668|0,56836|1,57342|2,57510|3,58016|1,58185|0,58690|3,58859|2) - i think much better if you changeese notes into jacks | ok
4. 01:17:567 (77567|1,77735|1) - in this part you using jack but 01:20:600 (80600|1,80769|2) - 01:23:297 (83297|2,83465|3) - these one is not a jack note (well it's these notes have similar sound and i think you need to reconsider this in that part) | ok

[HD]

1. 00:13:690 (13690|2,13774|1,13859|0) - try this parttern (well you using many stairs in all parts and i think you need to add some new pattern for fun to play) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7078924 | ok
2. 00:24:055 (24055|2,24140|3) - Ctrl + G (as i said about new pattern) | keep
3. 00:29:814 (29814|2,29926|1) - Ctrl + G (^^) | ok
4. 00:43:269 (43269|2,43353|3) - Ctrl + G (^^) | keep
5. 00:48:999 (48999|1,49083|2) - Ctrl + G (^^) | keep
6. 00:55:235 (55235|1) - move to column 4 | keep

[MX]

1. 00:16:218 - i think you need to add one note here. Similar sound like these one 00:16:724 - 00:17:061 - 00:17:398 - | it's same with before
2. 00:18:915 - this one too | ^
3. 00:31:218 - try to add LN in column 2 for the "uwaah" sound. | ok
4. 01:18:072 (78072|2) - move this to column 3. Well 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) - this one is not similar sound to use jack. 01:18:241 (78241|2,78409|2) - this one is acceptable but not this one 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) - | cuz music tone here is down
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2) - i think much better to use stair than this pattern. | ok

Thanks again for mod my map..I will apply your mod if the net is back in my house because the net has been disconnected since last Sunday and I was modding your map in the internet shop. (Well uploading is restricted in the internet shop). Good luck to your map

DustMoon wrote:

Nightmare - Dream to Nightmare [OsuMania]
1|2|3|4

MX

00:23:465 (23465|3,23465|0) - 添加一个note在2号键位 参照00:23:803 (23803|1,23803|2,23803|3) - | ok
00:28:353 - 建议:osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197217 | keep
00:47:061 (47061|0,47145|3,47230|0,47230|1) - 你仔细听会发现这三个鼓点是一样的。 | ok
00:52:791 (52791|2,52791|3,52791|1,52876|0) - 这两个鼓点是一样的。 | 这里是考虑难度和打击手感
01:03:788 (63788|0) - 这个键出现得太突兀了。 | drum确实在这个位置
01:27:510 (87510|0) - 这个长键应该开始于01:27:595 - 这个时间点 | 跟的drum

DustMoon wrote:

Nightmare - Dream to Nightmare [OsuMania]
1|2|3|4
General
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
Audio: OK
Background: OK
Preview Point: OK

HXJ's NM

00:35:263 (35263|1) - 应该结束于00:35:937 - 并在此处再添加一个LN
00:36:612 (36612|2) - 应该结束于00:37:286 - 并在此处再添加一个LN
00:40:488 (40488|0) - 移动到3
01:03:409 (63409|0) - ^

1. 00:05:685 - 这重音呀，这里是3/2的鼓，蓝线双键白线单键好一些
2. 00:25:741 - 。这个为什么要双键，鼓的话是1/2，那个whistle好像每个1/4都有，只抓蓝线打起来有点奇怪
3. 01:16:892 - 00:17:398 - 其实这两个地方音差不多，前面那个时间轴完全可以扔三键上去强调音的

1. 00:12:089 - 我觉得到mx了你扔个LN也没什么问题。。。这里音是长音的 后面有类似地方不提了 都建议LN搞个LN然后0.7-0.2x的渐减速绿线，会很有感觉
2. 00:23:465 - 音不是太重，建议双键就够
3. 00:33:072 - personal suggestion:每个1/2加渐加速绿线，虽然没什么用但线在加速，挺适合这里的音乐
4. 01:24:898 - 感觉可以继续变速，类似于00:20:937 - 你加过SV那么后面又不加就有点奇怪
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2,101162|0,101162|1) - MX我建议你全往一边偏向，不管是硬打还是馅密都舒服，类似于 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7221350 现在有些不好打(对于低pp玩家

[Crz]Sword wrote:

m4m
column: 1|2|3|4
[HD]

1. 00:05:685 - 这重音呀，这里是3/2的鼓，蓝线双键白线单键好一些 | 我MX也没抓
2. 00:25:741 - 。这个为什么要双键，鼓的话是1/2，那个whistle好像每个1/4都有，只抓蓝线打起来有点奇怪 | FX音
3. 01:16:892 - 00:17:398 - 其实这两个地方音差不多，前面那个时间轴完全可以扔三键上去强调音的 | 好

[MX]

1. 00:12:089 - 我觉得到mx了你扔个LN也没什么问题。。。这里音是长音的 后面有类似地方不提了 都建议LN搞个LN然后0.7-0.2x的渐减速绿线，会很有感觉 | 我先保留
2. 00:23:465 - 音不是太重，建议双键就够 | 好
3. 00:33:072 - personal suggestion:每个1/2加渐加速绿线，虽然没什么用但线在加速，挺适合这里的音乐 | 好
4. 01:24:898 - 感觉可以继续变速，类似于00:20:937 - 你加过SV那么后面又不加就有点奇怪 | 好
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2,101162|0,101162|1) - MX我建议你全往一边偏向，不管是硬打还是馅密都舒服，类似于 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7221350 现在有些不好打(对于低pp玩家 | 好

没什么硬伤，都是建议。。。GL 早飞呀

pocket-Gao wrote:

Hi

NM

01:30:376 - LN并不是抓鼓点 建议加个note

加油 good luck

Litharrale wrote:

Uncheck widescreen support
Your BG is a weird ass resolution, try and find a higher res one in a 16:9 or 16:10 ratio | ok

Since this is from In The Groove, you need to change your difficulty names according to this page t/178700 | to be honest, its weird so I wanna keep

EZ

I don't know how I feel about SV changes in a sub 1.5 star. It'll trip beginners up a tonne, especially since you have no idea it happens because it happens in the middle of a LN
01:18:578 (78578|0,79083|0,79336|0,79505|0) - Too hard for an EZ | ok

SC

imo there's nothing actually wrong with the map. Anything would just be nitpicking. But I had a couple of high level players play it and they all said the SV was too much so consider at least toning it down a bit. | considering

All I could find! Starred

Evening wrote:

MX

00:37:791 (37791|1,37791|2) - Feels more climatic if you did 3 notes here | it's reasonable, fixed

01:34:421 (94421|0) - Thinking of something like this for a change as the intensity of the instrumentals increase, the denser the section: | right

Image

01:41:162 (101162|1) - Kinda was expecting some sort of minijack at the end here since it was the hardest part in SC, seemingly quite an easy part for MX though | I'm thinking how to change

not much here i guess lol

01:03:788 (63788|0) - pretty sure this is 1/1 though | ok


SC

00:32:735 (32735|1,32819|1,32904|2,32988|2) - didn't really like how this pattern was played w.r.t. to the music itself, the track explicitly emphasized on the 1/2s (on 00:32:735 (32735|1,32904|2) - ) and the minijacks +the awkward trills on each hand (on 00:32:735 (32735|1,32798|0,32819|1,32946|0,32967|1) - ) doesn't really add up to.
Suggesting to do the following instead, the minijacks are still there but feel that it's more comfortable and emphasizes the 1/2s better: | yes

Image

00:43:016 (43016|1,43058|0) - Don't really dig the 12 21 rolling here, feels kinda awkward on slowjam, 12 12 would feel more comfy but it's really up to you lol, it'll look more plain. Side Note: I'm fine with 00:46:640 (46640|2,46682|3,46808|3,46850|2,46977|2) - though | ok

00:53:297 (53297|0,53381|0,53465|1,53550|1,53634|0,53676|1) - Don't really like the transition from minijacks to roll here, suggesting to move 00:53:550 (53550|1) - to the right by 1. The LN + minijack might look kinda nasty but since the LN is short, it shouldn't really matter (?) idk. Played fine for me | delete the LN and make them left right hand

01:00:291 (60291|0) - feel that it'd be more comfy if you moved this to the right by 1 or added another note on column 2. The whole section here revolves around jumptrills, the sudden change in pattern like 12 34 12 34 12 34 1 34 12 34 12 34 can trip players up. I suggested moving to column 2 maybe because I feel that it's more comfortable to transition 12 -> 2 instead of 12 -> 1 | okii, fixed

01:00:825 (60825|1) - Feel that it's more comfy if you didn't anchor on column 3, like so: | sure

Image

01:02:061 (62061|3) - Not sure about leaving this heavy kick with 1 note, might be a bit underwhelming | added

01:03:788 (63788|0) - I think this should be 1/1

01:17:904 (77904|1,78241|1,78409|1) - Kinda conflicted on what's the idea behind the LN here, feels a bit inconsistent once you start shifting it to the 3rd column on 01:21:527 (81527|2) - and 01:23:128 (83128|2) - . Otherwise I think this is a pretty nice emphasis on the bass when coupled with the SVs | thank~ I did it to col [3] to emphasis the feeling of rhythm, I think it's fine, friend and I play it

01:35:516 (95516|3) - Feels more comfy on the 3rd column, the 4th column there is already quite packed | ok

01:41:246 (101246|2) - kinda annoyed by the 2 2 12 12 mainly but i'm suggesting a whole new pattern if you're stuck on removing that 2 2 12 12 (I really don't like that 2->12 transition | ok

Image

01:43:437 - Might want to do a 0.9 or 0.8 instead of a plain 1.0 to signify the ending of the map | ok

SVs for MX and SC seems a o k for me | thx a lot

LordTimeWaste wrote:

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

SC

00:06:274 Note missing | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:07:960 I'd add a 3-note stream here | nope
00:09:814 (9814|3,9814|2,9982|1,9982|0,10151|1,10151|2,10319|2,10319|3) I'd move this part since 00:09:814 (9814|3,9814|2) is the beginning sound of 00:10:488 (10488|1,10488|0) | ok
00:11:668 Insert tripple here | idk
00:12:089 (12089|3) There is no sound for a jack | yes, it's have
00:14:786 (14786|2) No sound for a tripple | ^
00:21:106 (21106|1,21106|0,21106|2,21274|2,21274|1,21274|3,21443|2,21443|0,21443|1,21612|3,21612|2,21612|1,21780|0,21780|2,21780|1) I'd suggest switching between 0/2/3 and 0/1/3 tripples here because of the first one | done
00:23:044 (23044|1,23128|0,23213|2,23297|1,23381|0) These sound like 1/3th notes for me | it's 1/4
00:24:603 (24603|1) Ghostnote | it's penta-drums
00:32:398 Would suggest something like 0/2, 1, 0/2 here (because the sound changes) | considering
00:40:319 let it jack, my friend (same sound) | yeah
01:03:746 Double | nope
01:17:230 1/16th stream i think | no

MX

00:16:303 Would add a note | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:18:999 ^^ | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:24:814 Double | if I do, I'll make 00:24:982 - to 3 notes to emphasize, keep for now
00:24:898 ^^ | ^
00:55:656 Would add 2 more doubles for consistancy | ok
01:03:746 Double | not necessary

HD

01:03:746 I don't know, i get the point of emphazicing the down-sound, but i'd still would add a double | nope

EZ

00:23:971 (23971|0) I don't get this LN | it's continuous drums
00:30:376 (30376|3) Would split this LN into another one at 00:30:881 | ok
01:42:847 (102847|0) Starts at 01:42:932 | no, cuz here have mini jack sounds, I make this at 01:42:87 cuz it's 1/4 and easy to hit, then, through this LN to make a transition for 1/4

Wow, hardest mod i ever done so far... This map is pretty damn good, hope i could help you out a bit.

frolica wrote:

Hi~ From Cottony Cloud Modding Queue!

Here is modding!

SC

00:08:128 - Placing a note there seems good. | have no sounds here

00:12:089 (12089|3,14786|2,17482|2) - There certainly are sounds for notes, but removing them feels better for me (since they are not strong as others.) | it's fine

00:32:735 (32735|1,32735|0,32904|2,32904|3) - Are you sure that 2 notes fit there? Then 00:32:398 (32398|0,32567|0) - should apply the same rule. These are not different. | It's a little heavy really and this can make hit-feeling stronger

00:50:095 (50095|3,50095|1,50095|0,50179|2,50263|0,50263|3,50347|1,50432|2,50432|3) - Well, I think here these could be more better, such as http://puu.sh/uWwBU/4ecf8219e8.png Same opinion on the following one. | nope

01:00:291 (60291|1,60628|1) - Line 2 is too dense. How about moving one of them to Line 1. | nope

01:10:067 (70067|1,70067|0,70151|1,70151|3,70151|2) - I prefer this one : http://puu.sh/uWvPO/e1ee404b78.png | ok

01:13:522 (73522|3) - As you already used 32nd(1/8 snap) on MX, it could be changed to a 32nd one. | ok

01:41:162 - Well, though this is playable, it was not fun to play. There must be a better placement. | considering

SVs were fine for me.

Good Luck!

Protastic101 wrote:

*late boop*

[EZ]
00:00:376 (376|0,544|1,713|2,881|3) - I'd probably trill these so that it represents the repetition of the sound, kind of like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732610 | ok
00:01:387 (1387|0) - Assuming the above is followed, I would consider moving this to 4 to be a complementary chord type to the [1][3] notes | ok
00:20:347 (20347|2,20600|1) - I would suggest flipping the notes here with control H to avoid making the 3/4 rhythm work in the same direction as that hinders readability at this level imo. Instead, it'd look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732641 | ok
00:29:701 (29701|1) - Consider extending this to 00:30:376 - so that it lasts for the entirety of the 1/3 burst | keep
00:33:072 - Since this is an easy, I would really recommend you set this to 0.9x instead so that the player is better able to get accustomed to the small slowjam here. I feel that at the moment, 0.8x is too slow and hinders readability too much for a target audience that is literally just getting into the game. | right
00:37:791 (37791|2,38128|1) - 00:40:488 (40488|2,40825|1) - I would consider stacking these notes in the same column to represent the 1/1 kick at the beginning of each measure. | ok
00:56:162 (56162|0) - Consider moving this to 3 for hand balance since column 3 isn't used from 00:53:971 - to 00:58:690 - | reasonable
00:56:668 - Here, I would highly recommend against using 1/2 mini stacks in an easy difficulty. Rather, I'd suggest you just give it a very similar hand movement, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732744 | changed in another way
01:04:589 - I'd recommend adding a note here in 2 to cap the LN off and give the player a physical cue for when to release the LN | no change
01:03:409 (63409|3) - I'd also suggest that you start this LN at 01:03:746 - where the last kick from the music is, so it'd look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732760 | I remove the LN and a drum note, change in another way
01:17:567 (77567|1,77735|1) - Similar to what I mentioned above, I don't recommend using 1/2 stacks at this BPM for an easy diff, so consider moving the second highlighted note to 3? | ok
01:33:746 (93746|3,93831|2) - Fam no, you are not using 1/4 in an Easy at 178 bpm. At this level, players just aren't used to using any higher snaps, and 1/4 tend to be introduced in the normal diff where the player is more accustomed to slightly faster snaps. At this point, they're only grasping basic rhythms and mostly 1/1 snaps with some 1/2. Anyways, I'd just recommend removing 01:33:831 (93831|2) - | done

[HD]
00:29:701 - Would be nice to try a trill here imo since the sound kind of goes back and forth a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733075 | yes, and I Ctrl+H the last 3 notes to change hit of hand I'll think will better
00:56:331 (56331|1,56331|0,56499|3) - I'm pretty sure you could make this similar to the LNs like at 00:57:005 (57005|3,57173|0) - for consistency https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733082 | keep, it's similar with before
01:03:746 (63746|0) - Might be nice to turn this into an LN and extend it to 01:04:589 - to represent the decay of the sound | not necessary
01:12:005 (72005|1,72089|2,72173|3,72286|2,72398|1) - this is a bit difficult to read since you switch the snap in between these bursts but it could easily be mistaken for a uniform 1/4 snap. Instead, I'd try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733097 | yes
01:35:769 - This whole thing is kind of difficult to execute properly due to the 4 note long stacks at 01:35:937 (95937|2,96106|2,96274|2,96443|2) - or | 01:37:454 (97454|1,97623|1,97791|1,97960|1) - for example, plus the single note on the same hand in 1 or 4 which makes coordinating hands even more difficult. I would try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733112 | ok
01:42:426 (102426|0,102510|1,102595|0) - kind of a nasty and random turn to try and hit midway through the burst. I would suggest this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733100 | right

Nice map, best of luck =w=)b

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

Sarahkuai wrote:

FROM THIS THREAD

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

MX

01:02:567 (62567|1) - move to 3 | nope, it's accordingto the tone
01:02:567 (62567|1) - add 1 note | ???
01:42:089 (102089|1) - move to 1 | fixed
01:42:173 (102173|0) - move to 2 | fixed
01:42:258 (102258|2) - move to 4 | fixed

Nightmare

00:00:376 - add 1 LN at 2 | no need to emphasize
00:00:544 - add 1 LN at 3 | ^
00:00:713 - add 1 LN at 2 | ^
00:00:881 - add 1 LN at 3 | ^
01:01:724 - consider to changes it into a stairs/roll like 3-2-1 column until 01:02:005 - like this for example http://prntscr.com/fcm8gb | wanna keep same
00:21:949 (21949|2) - this LN should stop here 00:22:033 - then.. add LN here 00:22:117 - to 00:22:286 - | no, it's right at here
01:00:825 (60825|1,60825|0,60937|2,60937|3,61050|1,61050|3,61162|2,61162|1,61274|2,61274|3,61387|3,61387|1,61499|2,61499|1,61612|2,61612|3) - why you don't put all these to column 3&4? the sound are same here http://prntscr.com/fcmbah
01:04:252 (64252|0) - add 1 at 3 column | it's just a sound, not nessary make 3
01:04:252 (64252|0) - add 1 at 2 column | it's just a sound, not nessary make 3
01:04:252 - add 1 LN at column 1 to 1 01:04:589 - | ok
01:05:600 (65600|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:08:297 (68297|1) - move to 1 | ok
01:10:488 (70488|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:11:836 (71836|1) - move to 1 | ok
01:14:196 - add 2 note at column 3&4 | with the tone
01:20:263 (80263|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:26:668 (86668|0) - move to 3 | ok
01:27:173 (87173|0) - ^

GL

OwenF04 wrote:

Hello! From my queue

Nightmare

00:53:381 - i think you should make this a jack with the one below | ok

00:53:550 - ^^ like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542194 | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - i don't think the sound is clear enough for these, and should all be a LN. Up to you | change LN to 4 notes stairs

01:26:499 (86499|0,86583|2,86668|2) - as they are the same sound and pitch i think these 3 should jack | ok

01:27:005 (87005|0,87089|2,87173|2) - ^^ | ok

01:30:038 (90038|0) - i think the sound behind this note isn't loud enough. even at full speed. i recommend deleting it and rearranging the remaining 3 notes for a better layout | keep

01:30:881 (90881|2,90923|3,90965|1,91008|0) - can barely hear these 4 notes | ok

01:32:735 (92735|3) - i can imagine this note being painful to play, with a 1/8 gap from the slider. but ya know i'm not a top player. If you were to change it, probably just delete it and stick with a double no

MX

why is 00:53:634 (53634|0,53676|1,53718|2,53760|3) different to 00:54:982 (54982|0,54982|2,55067|3,55067|1) ? they should be the same | keep, same part is here 00:56:331 -

01:01:499 (61499|2,61499|3,61612|2,61612|3,61724|1,61724|0,61836|1,61836|0) - why the sudden change to jacks? either make the whole section jacks, or make them all alternate. | music change and it's ok to play

01:12:173 (72173|1,72173|0,72286|1,72286|0,72398|2,72398|3,72510|0,72510|1,72623|0,72623|1,72735|3,72735|2) - it works, but maybe an arrangement like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542342 works better..? it just fits evenly, that's all | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - like in "nightmare", i don't think the sound it clear enough | but it exist really

HD

00:08:213 (8213|3,8297|2,8381|1,8465|0) - what are these representing? i can hear a faint sound, but it's not hear-able at full speed and the second note is't there. | have sound here, it's drum

00:28:606 (28606|1,28606|0,28774|2,28774|3,28943|0,28943|1,29027|2,29112|0,29112|3,29196|1,29280|3,29280|2,29364|0,29364|1) - control+h these? because the space between the doubles at the start is weird | ok

Not many problems that i could see.
Good luck!

Incendent wrote:

EZ

00:16:387 Why didn't you put a note here? To avoid repetition? Or no drum? Tone changes here. | ok
00:19:589 I'm sure that this note placement was intentional, but I feel that it would be better served at 00:19:758 because not only is it a drum sound, but it changes tone there as well. | it's on the white line so I think it's ok
00:28:353 Why not something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545333
I feel that the doubles are awkward, so I changed it. Doesn't change star rating as well. | keep
00:59:364 I like what you did here, but are you sure that the lower ranking will feel the same? (Talking about the stack) I suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545840 | I think it's ok
01:12:847 are you sure that this stack is good? it's small. (Honestly with the stacks, I'm just swinging at air right now. I don't mind them, but I'm trying to think that it would be a lower ranking 100K~ player playing this. Although it's hard to do that when you aren't one, you know?) | It's not a big deal
01:22:454 I'm just pointing out that you didn't do these with the others before it. Changed up your style? or? | This LN means 2 fast-beats

HD

00:33:072 why is this less dense then the NM? | I do not want add anything here, so..
Don't have much else to say about this difficulty. (Nothing I could see anyways)

Mx

00:11:668 are you sure you want this LN to be a Shield LN? | yeah~
00:11:836 I don't think this should be a hand. | nope
00:12:005 I think this should be a hand. | ^
00:12:089 Ghost note? (I went back over it and played the song without notes. I can barely hear that tone, you sure you want a note there? It's not a ghost note, but it might as well be.) | actually it has sound but so soft. so I'm considering...
00:13:582 Should also be a hand I think.
A little self modding could go for the rest of that section (Similar parts as 00:11:668)
00:20:937 These Hand hammers are something else. | nope
01:17:904 Whats with the stack bruh? (Column |2|) | it's beat
(The rest of the part had "Some" stacking, but not as long as that one, so I figured I'd point it out)

Nightmare is it's own monster. I don't really have any experience modding anything greater than 4.8*'s So I think I'll pass on that one.
It's a good map in general, honestly, most of the things I pointed out are just small minor inconsistancies or something along those lines. Good luck on getting ranked!

Civilization wrote:

Hiya Here is your mod

Nightmare

00:12:089 (12089|3) - Remove this, cuz theres no sound | nope
00:14:786 (14786|2) - ^ | nope
00:17:482 (17482|2) - ^ | nope
00:53:803 (53803|0) - This should be a second roll, maybe a bit faster than the last one. | nope
00:55:151 (55151|0) - ^ | nope
01:00:376 (60376|2) - wew too fast | ok

MX

00:07:033 (7033|1) - remove this | nope
00:07:117 (7117|0) - Place a note on second column | nope
00:12:089 (12089|1) - eee no sound here | nope
00:14:786 (14786|3) - ^ | nope

Also here is a different BG if you wanna use it | thank you~ but the resolution of it is low,
GL

AJIekceu wrote:

How about adding in tags "Pump It Up 2013 Fiesta 2" ?
Since this track appeared there