david
DavidEd wrote:
Combo colors is hard to differentiate. I mean, the target audience probably can read without it anyways buuuut... idk actually. Perhaps you could make the brighter color a bit brighter and the darker one a bit more darker. yea sure why not
00:22:740 - Missing beat
00:23:340 - ^
The sudden rhythm change doesn't make sense as you seem to only follow the piano at this part . Also seems undermapped to me. supposed to be undermapped, the two missing beats would feel out of place if i did map them
00:48:540 (1) - Just for more comfortable movement, make it the same shape as 00:47:640 (1) - this should be comfortable enough as is honestly
00:56:940 (1) - Could also use a bit more comfortable movement just for better flow. So you can bend it? same as above, don't really see a need to change jump patterns here since it's high sr and all of them flow fine to me and others so
02:20:640 (4,5,6,7,1) - Rotate 3 degrees anti-clockwise to fix the straight line with 02:21:090 (2) - done and fixed overlaps
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Can't find anything more. Everything looks consistent to me. Nice that you did some slider art for Brad's little Tom Morello solo there.
Good luck! ty!