Whip it good ! Oh wait... wrong DDR and wrong song! Okay... so
- Good song choice... actually fun and the beatmaps make it enjoyable for the length of the song.
[Beginner]General
- For some reason, your hitnotes placement seems to be off centered... whatever is suppose to be in the middle usually is all misplaced to the right by a small margin. You easily notice such thing by pressing play in the editor and just watching where the notes appears. I would suggest to bring back things in center. There's a grid for that.
- Please restrain from using square combos! They are hated by many people (including myself) and it gives beatmaps that lazy feeling to mapping. Make things diagonal, in irregular squares, or etc., be creative!!! By all means, get away from squaring!
- Empty spaces left by lack of lyrics shouldn't really exist in easy. Try to focus on the beat of the song. My modding will mostly concentrate on that aspect.
- Don't be afraid to use 2/1 sometimes... Many people are allergic to this and just throws a bunch of 1/1s, but having 2/1 greatly increases the quality of an easy when well timed. Take this as a challenge from me to you. Hint, try this for yourself : 00:21:423 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stays 1/1, but as for 00:24:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to delete 2 4 and 6. Hoping you'll see what I mean.
00:26:623 (1) - I would rather make a long slider till (5) than using a 1/2 tick in easy. It still looks as good while being more adapted for easy players, so I suggest slider till 00:43:023.
00:39:423 (4) - ^ Similar
00:52:623 (6) - I would replace the (6) with a note and then place 2 long sliders (4/1 long) to fill the empty space. Empty space makes my heart empty too ._.. Try to use a slider shape that doesn't go over your previous notes as well.
00:57:823 (4,5,6) - Not really a mod but hey, I liked that part
. Would probably suggest to do 2 4/1 long sliders here as well... or a slight variation.
01:04:623 (3) - Making that slider bounce would be nice.
01:31:423 (4) - Making that slider bounce too would be nice and removing 5.
01:36:223 (3,4,5) - Replacing this by a slider similar to the bouncing one previously mentionned would be nice.
[Light]General
- Like in Beginner, restrain from using square combos like : 00:40:823 (3,1,2) - . Try to find a more round pattern instead if you want to fancy the go-with-the-flow kind of pattern.
- Song flow is in great need of improvement. Some parts sounds chunky and out of place, so please, make an effort to revise this song so it's more smooth, stable, following the beat, meaning NOT only applying my mods and then not touching anything. Mods are tools to enlighten your path and make you a better mapper, but you should be almost exclusively responsible of the quality of your map in the end.
00:14:223 (4) - This slider is unnecessary, replace with a note.
00:15:423 (5) - I think to get the desired effect you're trying to get here, it should start at 00:14:632 and bounce until 00:16:223. Not sure though if it's something like that you want. That's the prettiest I could get.
00:17:823 (1) - This slider is kinda nowhere... try to relate it more to the following notes.
00:23:423 (5) - Either center that slider to the (4) or make sure the (5) is directly under the (4), then align the beginning of the following slider with the end of this one... Furthermore, I'd suggest replacing that slider with the following : 2 notes and a normal slider or a normal slider and 2 notes. Would be more challenging for your normal difficulty
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00:26:823 (3) - If you want to put a slider around there, I'd suggest to replace the note with a slider that goes from 00:26:823 to 00:27:423 and removing (4) completely.
00:34:223 - This space should be filled with something.
00:46:623 (1) - Extend that slider 'till 00:49:423
00:52:823 (1) - to 00:52:823 (1) - You should remap this to follow the music while it accompanies the music vs. strictly following lyrics. Otherwise it's painfully not good looking.
01:04:223 (6) - I would make that slider bounce once more and delete the following note.
01:06:223 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:06:223 - to 01:22:223 - Not a mod, but I wanted to tell you that this is BEAUTIFUL Lizzy, that's a part of the song that really follows the flow of the beat and feels amazing.
01:12:223 (1) - When you make a slider like this, between the first white square and the red square, make sure you arranged your points in a symmetrical way. Otherwise, your slider looks deformed, and it's not pretty.
01:15:823 (4) - Might I suggest to replace this with a slider that bounces 3 times on 1/1 ticks... or 4 notes. Try to embrace the "De-pin-side-my-heart" more.
01:22:623 (1) - Oh My GOD THE SPACING !!!! Seriously, this is scary! You just need a note here in my opinion instead of a slider... and please fix the spacing.
01:35:223 (3,4,5) - I would suggest to replace this with a slider of the same length as 01:32:023 (5) -
[Standard]General
- Awesome! Nothing really to say since it's quite decent.
00:14:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The overlap is hard to read. Not that it's not legal to use such pattern, just that it's not really consistent with the rest of the song's difficulty.
00:57:223 (4,5,6) - If you want to follow the lyrics here, I would suggest to arrange this in another way. I know there's gotta be a pattern that could sound better here.
[Heavy]General
- Awesome as well! Although I couldn't quite make it because I'm not skilled to that extent lol.
00:58:423 (4) - Is it meant to be that way? For some reason, my player's logical thinking would think it positioned reverse... Otherwise I don't know... that jump seems unnecessary.
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Well that's about it =). Here's a star !
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