Garven wrote:

Sorry, so busy. ;_;

[Normal]
00:05:493 (1,2,3,4) - They're distance snapped, but they don't read the way I initially thought they would. Please find a better arrangement of these.　
maybe fix.If it is not good, the rhythm is changed.
00:48:021 (1) - This is really soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty of the set.　Fix
03:05:493 - This is an awkward break erased
03:12:086 - ^　erased

In general it felt kind of slow, and some of the beats that were not really timed well with the music like 01:57:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - and such made it feel like it was just way too dumbed down. Try to make things a bit more interesting - and maybe simplify some of the rhythms so you can afford to make something more fitting to the music without having to deal with the star rating as much.

fmm... some point try to arrangement.

[Hard]
00:25:933 (1) - Some of these really short combos aren't really needed. Just keep them as one. Fix
01:18:185 (4) - Feels better with one less repeat and add a circle for the last hit Fix
01:50:163 (2) - This doesn't really work since it has a hit during silence. Just do hit circles instead. Changing to spinner
03:14:229 (1) - Same as before Fix

The maps are starting to feel really similar. As in lots of copy/paste rhythms at least, though I think some patterns are also doing this too. Too lazy to double check the hunch, but either way, the map almost feels like you could have ended it in 2 minutes instead of 4 and you would have gotten the same experience.
I do not like to change the rhythm of map in the place of the same rhythm.
However, I try that.There was no major alteration though the subtle change was added this time.
It is taken care not to get tired of the same pattern when Full map will be made from next time.


[Insane]
Wow, this feels like a big jump up of difficulty from the Hard.
Okay, that black combo color really sucks when it's up top with this AR. Please try a different color (dark grey would work, probably)
01:08:295 (8,9,10) - Kind of a strange spot for a slowdown. Might work better with short sliders.
I did not feel it strangely.
01:50:164 (6) - Why does this keep going after 01:50:658 - ? Fix
02:08:130 (2,3,4) - Why the sudden spacing increase?
It is because space's increasing here when my playing felt that there is a dash feeling.
02:11:592 (8,9,10) - Same as earlier I did not feel it strangely.
03:30:548 - Strange spot for kiai
03:33:515 - ^
The deletion had been forgotten. orz

Yeah, this one was very obvious with the copy/paste. Why bother mapping so much of the song if you're going to copy/paste and make very small alterations to the pattern? I really recommend that you give this set a critical look and see if you want to try and improve the set's fun factor or maybe consider cutting the MP3 and ending the map early.

The place of the pattern that looked like use three times changed arrangement.
Do you think that you are good when I do in arrangement where?

Because I am a making side, the fault is not found any further.
I want to improve the place pointed out.

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:966 (1) - Remove new combo Fix
00:25:438 (1) - ^ Fix
00:45:053 (1) - Maybe end this at 00:46:867 - ? Fix
00:52:966 (4) - New combo Fix
00:54:284 (1) - Remove new combo Fix
00:55:438 (4) - New combo Fix
etc. Try to follow this patter of new combos for the map. They're make a lot more sense that way.
01:16:702 (5) - Maybe like this? Fix

02:19:998 (5) - ^ Fix
02:30:547 (5) - I suppose the instances you use this might benefit from that slight reduction too, though maybe just doing a normal hit at 02:30:548 - and a slider from 02:31:043 - to 02:31:702 - would be best
That a nice idea.Fix
03:05:493 - Now this empty space is just kind of awkward. Map through it. maped here
03:12:086 - ^ maped here

[Hard]
00:37:141 - Add a note? add note and use finishCS2
01:26:592 (1) - Remove new combo fix
01:37:471 (1) - ^ fix
02:21:482 (4) - Reduce one repeat and end with a circle instead fix and small changing map
02:29:889 (1) - Remove new combo etc fix
02:40:768 (1) - ^ etc fix
03:03:515 (3) - Kind of boring. Maybe a rhythm like this? use small change this rhythm and use slider

03:10:108 (1,2,1) - The spacing is weird here from 2 -> 1fix

[Insane]
Similar combo change suggestions from the Hard in this diff too.Fix
00:37:141 - Add a note? same to hard diff
01:07:801 (7,8,9,10) - I dunno, I still feel that something like this decelerated spacing might feel a bit better, but oh well. ok changed.
01:57:581 (5,6,7) - Spacing big miss orz
02:11:592 (8,9,10) - Same as earlier fix
02:37:307 (1,2,3,4) - You know, every time I come up to this stack in each chorus, I kind of sigh. It could be so much cooler with jumps instead of just a stack. maybe fix
03:05:163 - Awkward break. I'd just map through it. maped here