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seiya-murai feat.ALT - Sumidagawa Karenka

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kiddly
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年7月9日 at 22:33:27

Artist: seiya-murai feat.ALT
Title: Sumidagawa Karenka
Source: Jubeat Ripple
Tags: ignorethis
BPM: 178
Filesize: 3613kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4.77 stars, 315 notes)
  2. Basic (2.43 stars, 122 notes)
  3. Extra (4.9 stars, 467 notes)
  4. Extreme (5 stars, 526 notes)
  5. Standard (4.01 stars, 171 notes)
Download: seiya-murai feat.ALT - Sumidagawa Karenka
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jubeat yeah.
mp3 is from Ozouni's version.

All conpleted,move to pending!

Basic,Advanced,Extreme - me
Extra - ignorethis
Axey
这个背景...这个歌声... :!:
Rex
my fav
DeeN
我能为地球上的这首歌做个GD吗(yo
m i z u k i
:oops:
ignorethis
DeeN
Asagiri Mai
我去你大爷的ex
TW-KUMA01
:) :) :)
可以要個Taiko GD嗎?
rustbell

Asagiri Mai wrote:

我去你大爷的ex
你太叒 ex碉堡了
star for extra
Topic Starter
kiddly

TW-KUMA01 wrote:

:) :) :)
可以要個Taiko GD嗎?
我个人习惯不加taiko diff :<
ignorethis
4I 大丈夫?
Topic Starter
kiddly
看看做完能不能压成H
vivicat
☆ミ
DeeN
Muya
:oops:
Gottwald
goodmap :)
Napoleona
>w</
Shiki
:D 给点个人意见

[General]
前两个难度的kiai太长了,差不多有60%~70%了
Extra和Extreme也比较长,不过没有前面的多
我感觉玩的时候可能会瞎

[Basic]
00:12:165 (5,6,7,8) - 这4个不知道要排成什么形状,如果是正方形就歪了

[Advanced]
00:36:165~00:46:165 我觉得这一段的kiai可以去掉
00:57:165 (1) - 这里和00:46:499 (1)一样都有一个鼓声,再喷一次星星吧

[Extra]
00:48:166 (1) - 没有和00:48:499 (4)的尾部完全叠好,改为 x 389 y 295


[Extreme]
01:48:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个全部new combo怎么样,也算是给人一种提醒

[Extra]
00:29:582 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这几个形状歪了
SPOILER
336,64,29499,1,0
336,64,29582,1,0
336,64,29666,1,8
424,143,29832,1,8
343,232,29999,1,0
255,152,30166,1,12
用这个代码可能会好点
00:31:166 (1) - 去掉这个clap
00:45:499 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这四个加whistle会比较有感觉
01:13:166 (10,11,12) - 去掉11的clap,在10和12加上clap会好听点
01:28:166 (3) - 这个slider实在难看,歪了
304,160,88166,2,2,B|272:200|284:240|308:264|344:264|376:264|400:228|412:196|360:144,1,240,4|0
用这个代码,看起来会好点
01:47:416 (8) - 去掉clap

:D star
Topic Starter
kiddly

Shiki wrote:

:D 给点个人意见

[General]
前两个难度的kiai太长了,差不多有60%~70%了
Extra和Extreme也比较长,不过没有前面的多
我感觉玩的时候可能会瞎 删除了前两段的kiai

[Basic]
00:12:165 (5,6,7,8) - 这4个不知道要排成什么形状,如果是正方形就歪了 稍微动了下,现在应该比较正了

[Advanced]
00:36:165~00:46:165 我觉得这一段的kiai可以去掉 去掉了
00:57:165 (1) - 这里和00:46:499 (1)一样都有一个鼓声,再喷一次星星吧 由于前面都去掉了 在这感觉没有什么必要了

[Extra]
00:48:166 (1) - 没有和00:48:499 (4)的尾部完全叠好,改为 x 389 y 295 done


[Extreme]
01:48:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个全部new combo怎么样,也算是给人一种提醒 done

[Extra]
00:29:582 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这几个形状歪了 done
SPOILER
336,64,29499,1,0
336,64,29582,1,0
336,64,29666,1,8
424,143,29832,1,8
343,232,29999,1,0
255,152,30166,1,12
用这个代码可能会好点 我就稍微动了下00:29:832 (8),看起来应该差不多了
00:31:166 (1) - 去掉这个clap 这边明显是每拍加clap的下法,去掉感觉不妥
00:45:499 (1,2,3,4) - 我感觉这四个加whistle会比较有感觉
01:13:166 (10,11,12) - 去掉11的clap,在10和12加上clap会好听点
01:28:166 (3) - 这个slider实在难看,歪了
304,160,88166,2,2,B|272:200|284:240|308:264|344:264|376:264|400:228|412:196|360:144,1,240,4|0
用这个代码,看起来会好点
01:47:416 (8) - 去掉clap

:D star
其他的等本人来看o.o
thx for modding~
DeeN
DeeN
Apricot
<3
AisamaDX
:)
xierbaliti
-General-
+preview point.
for approved? 要不3I不行啊

-门禁哥-
disable countdown.
吗的这kiai 00:46:832~01:08:165 和01:18:832~01:42:832 用这两段就行啊 (其实我的想法是第一段只要一个喷泉效果就行 第2段再瞎眼)
00:11:832 (1,2,3) - 往上移一点
00:29:499 (2) - 有1个想法是把这个往左边放一些(3格左右?)
00:43:666 (1) - 个人感觉没啥必要做成小跳
00:51:332 (4) - newcombo好一些

-DEEN-
offset:166 为啥和其他难度不一样
啪啪啪音效听着好难受 不能像总队长看齐吗
01:46:166 (3,4) - 调整下位置

-Advanced-
换成lv4的格子或者不用格子重新排一下? 用这种间距总能发现几个连续的note有时候压上点边

-脑爷-
disable countdown.

-Basic-
disable countdown.
tsuka
门禁哥就是虎逼 god mapper
Mercurius
8-)
MisakaMikoto
more more
NatsumeRin
只有俩问题:
1、这BG是啥
2、这么抄tobebuta没关系吗

Edit:
00:23:832 (5) - new combo不加吗
01:18:499 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里不觉得别扭吗,前两个音根本不在小节内却用了同样的排列,而只顾了把前面4组放好后,最后的12在排版上被硬塞了进下一个小节,这是对着音乐做的还是只顾了抄排版忘记自己在做什么了。
01:34:499 (1) - 起, 类似。

第一kiai就那么点时间,连续换四个某张图的排版(其中个人觉得第二第四还不怎么合),这到底有什么意义,一张好图套到另首歌上一定还是好图吗,快醒醒。
S o r d a
nice map<3
_Kiva
:3 favorite song in JUbeat
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. The first few notes are off. Try using this timing:
    offset 1506 --- BPM 178
    offset 2832 --- BPM 180,000
  2. Countdown isn't enabled in the Extreme diff, but it doesn't have time to display on the other ones. Either add an audio lead-in, ether remove it.
Basic
  1. After the timing fix in PM, this still had the wrong timing and unsnapped notes. :/
  2. Ar being so different from OD feels weird. Maybe use OD+1 ?
  3. Tick rate 0.5 sounds weird. For long sliders, it creates unwanted ticks like 00:05:498 (3) - that really sound weird.
  4. Using lower spacing for 1/2s might prove too confusing. Remember this is an Easy. I understand why you did that, but I think it would be better not to (or better to remove the 1/2s at all, at 180 BPM, that's really fast).
  5. 00:12:165 (5) - Add a new combo to match the lyrics sentences
  6. 00:17:498 (5,6,1,2) - I suggest using this comboing: new combo on (5), remove the new combo on (1), and new combo on (2). It makes more sense with the lyrics imo and makes more even combos
  7. 00:22:831 (4) - New combo to match the lyrics ?
  8. 00:27:665 (1,2,3,4) - At 180 BPM, 4 1/2 seems rather harsh in an Easy
  9. 00:40:165 (4) - New combo to be consistent with 00:33:498 (4,1,2,3,4) -
  10. 00:57:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I find this pattern very difficult for an Easy. First of all, the long stream of 1/1 notes at 180 BPM might be too hard to catch. Then, the sharp angle between (4) and (5) might be a bit much for new players.
  11. 01:29:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same
  12. 01:48:498 (1) - This note appears really too soon after the spinner.
Advanced
  1. After the timing fix, this still had the wrong timing and unsnapped notes. :/
  2. Why are OD and AR so different ? D:
  3. The difficulty is rather uneven. The beginning plays like a very decent Hard, then the kiai times play more like a Normal. Also, the beginning needs more hitsounds. Maybe use whistles for the drums ?
  4. 00:23:165 (1,1,1) - Remove these new combos as they make little sense with the song.
  5. 01:06:165 (1,1,1) - Same.
  6. 01:18:831 (2) - I bet this slider isn't supposed to end on the blue tick.
  7. 01:40:831 (1,1) - Remove these new combos as they make little sense with the song.
Extra
  1. Evil diff. =( I don't understand why you used all these double under sliders.
Extreme
  1. 00:16:332 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nice pattern =o I like it
  2. 00:23:831 (5) - Add a new combo on this note. Otherwise, the spacing becomes completely wrong and the pattern very difficult to read.
  3. 00:38:331 (5,6,7) - This triple has a weird shape. I hesitated when testplaying, so I think you should stack them.
  4. 00:57:498 (2,3,3,2,3) - Add new combos to stay consisntent in your comboing.
  5. 01:02:832 (3,2,2) - Same.
  6. 01:29:498 (3,4,2,2,3) - Same.
  7. 01:33:998 (3,4,5) - If you fixed the first triple I pointed out, I think you could as well stack these to stay consistent with the patterns you use =o
  8. 01:34:498 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Do the same comboing as you used to for these notes as well.
  9. 01:42:331 (1,1) - Likewise, remove these new combos.
  10. 01:43:498 (1,1) - Same
  11. 01:46:165 (1,1) - Same
  12. 01:48:498 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove these. I don't think they are needed - it is easy enough to see the spacing progressively decreases.
Nice map =o except for the timing that was wrong, there were some very sweet ideas there. I'm looking forward to seeing this ranked ! Good luck with it. Have a star =p
Mayochan
I love this map.
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